Holt Educational Consultant
Mar 28, 2024
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Annual Pay of Doctors and Other Workers [2]
An accurate summary overview would include a listing of the 7 countries in the line graph. It would also reference the complete identifier of the image as a line graph, rather than just a graph. Additionally, it would not be a run-on sentence that comprises several thoughts into one sentence. That would lead to GRA deductions since the single sentence per idea format for the presentation was not used by the writer. The summary overview section will actually meet with several point deductions prior to the actual scoring of the essay. By the way, it is not the number of money, rather it is the amount of salary that is referenced in the chart.
An accurate summary overview would include a listing of the 7 countries in the line graph. It would also reference the complete identifier of the image as a line graph, rather than just a graph. Additionally, it would not be a run-on sentence that comprises several thoughts into one sentence. That would lead to GRA deductions since the single sentence per idea format for the presentation was not used by the writer. The summary overview section will actually meet with several point deductions prior to the actual scoring of the essay. By the way, it is not the number of money, rather it is the amount of salary that is referenced in the chart.