Holt Educational Consultant
Jan 28, 2024
Scholarship / 'I have a dream' - Why this major and university (scholarship essay) [3]
The opening paragraph is unnecessary. It does not help the essay move along. When writing a character limited essay, every paragraph should move the essay forward. You can opt to start with the second paragraph instead and have a more effective effect on the reviewer than if you included the first paragraph. It will also help you meet the character count since the presentation will become more information efficient to the reader.
Which parts of their curriculum are those? Show a familiarity with the program. These vague references need to actually be discussed in a proper comparison format. Your ideas in comparison to the school offering.
Why does this stand out to you? Please develop that paragraph further.
The opening paragraph is unnecessary. It does not help the essay move along. When writing a character limited essay, every paragraph should move the essay forward. You can opt to start with the second paragraph instead and have a more effective effect on the reviewer than if you included the first paragraph. It will also help you meet the character count since the presentation will become more information efficient to the reader.
is a perfect fit for me due to its detailed curriculum aligning with my vision of uplifting the educational system
Which parts of their curriculum are those? Show a familiarity with the program. These vague references need to actually be discussed in a proper comparison format. Your ideas in comparison to the school offering.
they provide field trips
Why does this stand out to you? Please develop that paragraph further.