| "my first stock at the age of thirteen" - Business Transfer Essay (UIUC)
Undergraduatekev946red - Nov 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "A Family, drugs and alcohol - who has shaped my dreams and aspirations"
Undergraduatejessielee707 - Nov 3, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 9, 2010
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| "A Changing nation, living in Indonesia"; I am of an Indian descent
Undergraduateh207 - Nov 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "Born in Mexico City, I came to the United States" - UC prompt 1: Plastic Life
Undergraduatemacbookpro - Nov 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "it is about ski" - the commonapp 150words short answer
UndergraduateJeromeM - Nov 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| Most appealing about Columbia = it fits the mold of my expectations
Undergraduate85142cc - Nov 3, 2010 / pao - Nov 5, 2010
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| ("Princeton in the Nation's Service") How to Improve Princeton Supplement Essay?
UndergraduateiPerception - Nov 3, 2010 / alexis brandon - Jan 2, 2011
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| "Time to get up! We're going hiking!" - UC prompt #1: The Hike Ahead
UndergraduateGrace322 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2010
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| UC Prompt #1 - My life changed by my Chinese parents
UndergraduateDDH35 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "The influence my father has had in my life" - Texas common application topic A
Undergraduatejas2011 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "The Karate Dojo, we felt like black belts." (working as part of a group essay)
Undergraduateneoreader - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "My relationship with my mother" - Common- Person that has influenced your life.
Undergraduatedaisiekae - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "From biology teacher to biology major" - a college that ask me why i chose my major
UndergraduateMohamed123 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "Christianity and Religion" experience/concept that intellectually excites you...
Undergraduatesonnofali - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 7, 2010
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| Pitzer App: Organic Farming (respect for soil and its benefits)
Undergraduateshloop - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "Art: Silent Poetry" - (personal quality, talent) - UC Personal Statement
Undergraduateyoromori - Nov 2, 2010 / imclovis404 - Nov 28, 2010
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| Common App Essay- A creative work (film) that influenced me
Undergraduatesilkwood22 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "the photography editor" - Common App- One of your activites
Undergraduatejmoff2323 - Nov 2, 2010 / ExplodingDonuts - Nov 13, 2010
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| Personal statement from sophomore in high school - small town (Vallejo)
Undergraduatekamishaww - Oct 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2010
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| "what the street was" - neighborhood you grew up in and how it shaped you as person.
UndergraduateMargieJeanPierr - Nov 2, 2010 / shloop - Nov 2, 2010
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| Utilizing critical thinking skills to resolve an issue
Undergraduatesungkyu1988 - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "my classes were no longer difficult" - 250 word essays on academic performance
Undergraduatekikiallen - Nov 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2010
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| "academic standards and international ties" - cmc admission essay suplimental
Undergraduatejhbrendle - Nov 2, 2010 / ericad - Nov 3, 2010
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| ""Who here will be the best band section?" - UC Prompt #2 A brighter future
UndergraduateDDH35 - Nov 2, 2010 / sungkyu1988 - Nov 2, 2010
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| "maybe basketball wasn't for me" - MIT Challenge/Adversity Essay
UndergraduateJake776 - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 12, 2010
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| "I am drawn to physics" - Common Application Essay
Undergraduatecartur - Nov 1, 2010 / nabid777 - Nov 12, 2010
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| "my educational desire to answer what I don't know" - Early Decision to Brown
UndergraduateBrownBound - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| Speech & Debate - Common App EC's Short Essay
UndergraduateKelpieKelsie - Nov 1, 2010 / lizziem - Nov 1, 2010
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| "Building is my passion" - Penn supplemental essay - Is it specific enough?
Undergraduatelizziem - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "I have no clue who I am" - Admission Essay Topic of Choice
Undergraduateneoreader - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "The clock ticks" - MIT Personality Essay, thoughts, suggestions
UndergraduateJake776 - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| I Can and I Will... KU Essay
Undergraduaterynne92 - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "capable of making my own decisions" - appropriate essay? it is about drugs.
Undergraduateneoreader - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "my dad is still in my life" - Influential Person
Undergraduatewalleyefishing - Nov 1, 2010 / cornelia - Nov 6, 2010
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| "the scientific mind of my step-father Rob" - Commonapp personal essay
Undergraduateoliviaglazner - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| Essay on how you work with peers in math
Undergraduatejonsharkfin - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "NIKE Baseball Camp at Jackals Stadium" - Baseball Camp
Undergraduatechrispigs - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| Optional, open topic essay: "My first concert and it's signifigance" Feedback?
UndergraduateGreenbeans - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 6, 2010
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| "Chemistry through Cooking" UIUC Academic interests essay
Undergraduateiwantcollege - Nov 1, 2010 / iwantcollege - Nov 7, 2010
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| "a career in music" - Berklee College of Music Undergrad essay
UndergraduateKerline - Nov 1, 2010 / chrispark77 - Nov 11, 2010
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| The Appalachia Service Project - Does this essay explain how ASP impacted me?
Undergraduatelizziem - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 5, 2010
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| "professional journey by majoring in Civil Engineering" - Purdue admissions essay
UndergraduateZenoa - Nov 1, 2010 / Zenoa - Nov 18, 2010
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| Baseball - Giving Back to the Club (Critique needed) Common App
Undergraduatechrispigs - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| Brown "Everything that I do not know" essay response
Undergraduatestarfire - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "I accomplish whatever I put my mind to" - accurate school record, MSU essay topic
Undergraduateleetaniau - Nov 1, 2010 / mariumi57 - Nov 11, 2010
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| Back to the Roots, my Common App short answer
Undergraduatephil_hah - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "The Nature of Travel" my Common App Essay
Undergraduatephil_hah - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 11, 2010
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| "Go to the head of the class!" - essay help- UF application
Undergraduatemykai21 - Nov 1, 2010 / Super - Nov 2, 2010
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| MSU Biographical Statement for Graphics Design Portfolio
UndergraduateLlrosso89 - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Susan - Nov 4, 2010
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| "my determination and my creativity" - UCF ESSAY
Undergraduateloveremains - Nov 1, 2010 / pao - Nov 1, 2010
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| "My sister (I was mean)" -Essay about someone who has made an impact on my life.
Undergraduateswirllambm - Nov 1, 2010 / swirllambm - Nov 2, 2010
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| " Life with a handicapped mother..." COMMON APP ESSAY
Undergraduatesalibut2020 - Nov 1, 2010 / ivyeyesediting - Nov 2, 2010
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| Cancer -- To live life by my mother's daily words of wisdom.
Undergraduateleahleah - Nov 1, 2010 / ishfish82 - Nov 11, 2010
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| Both Sides of the Gap: A Princeton Supplement Essay (Option 3)
Undergraduateswimmer400 - Nov 1, 2010 / lizziem - Nov 1, 2010
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| Stanford Supplements: Necropsy, My Ears are My Soul, Freedom - EA
Undergraduatelittlechef - Nov 1, 2010 / yang - Nov 11, 2010
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| Should personal essay on Common App be less than 150 words??
Undergraduatelizziem - Nov 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2010
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| "what I'm capable of" - Brown supp - "What Don't you know?"
Undergraduatekmerry - Oct 31, 2010 / kdboadu - Nov 11, 2010
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| "sharing a space with Austin's nerd" - Stanford -Roommate and Intellectual vitality
Undergraduategracedrift - Oct 31, 2010 / mariatateno - Nov 11, 2010
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| "Basketball, enjoy a little of everything" - Why Upenn- Upenn Supplement, Feedback
UndergraduatePollorojo - Oct 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2010
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| Integrity and Honesty -Common app essay
UndergraduateNeo_LiuSJ - Oct 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Nov 10, 2010
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