"Life's challenges are not supposed to paralyze you" -Personal Statement on major
Undergraduategabshel - Oct 2, 2010 / Priyanka3 - Oct 11, 2010
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"to bring my ideals to fruition" -Academic and extracurricular pursuits - UPenn
UndergraduateMarleyWH - Oct 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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"joining the tennis club" briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities
Undergraduatexiaoluv - Oct 2, 2010 / gabshel - Oct 4, 2010
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"Connections of a language nerd" - Why The Ohio State University? Undergrad Essay
Undergraduateiculafn33 - Oct 2, 2010 / Yayz - Oct 2, 2010
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Essay on my personal goal ( which is to be a doctor)- feedback
Undergraduatenami55 - Oct 2, 2010 / cpm - Oct 7, 2010
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Henry Ford's lesson- COMMON APP ESSAY
Undergraduateamndtng - Oct 2, 2010 / theTalkingRice - Oct 2, 2010
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common app essay - math is an art form
Undergraduatetensplyr4eva - Oct 2, 2010 / theTalkingRice - Oct 2, 2010
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"the suburbs of Detroit" - MIT undergrad - Describe the world you come from
UndergraduatetheTalkingRice - Oct 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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Rutgers: volunteering diversity
UndergraduatePriyanka3 - Oct 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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"High school swim practice" - University of Illinois under grad admission essay
Undergraduatemagnum542 - Oct 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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School that challenges me + Soccer motto: UCF Admissions Essays
Undergraduatehannah16 - Oct 2, 2010 / donrocks - Oct 2, 2010
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Given your desired major and why- Prison Ministry
UndergraduateRyanVi16 - Oct 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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Help/Suggestions for CA Prompt 1 - "I killed a Bird"
Undergraduatesingcarcom - Oct 2, 2010 / cacagenkaku - Oct 16, 2010
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Manga, the Japanese comic - Intellectual engagement
UndergraduateWarrenhuang - Oct 2, 2010 / Warrenhuang - Oct 3, 2010
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"A Step Forward"--An Essay on the Appreciation of Diversity
Undergraduateswimmer400 - Oct 1, 2010 / simbamaxxed - Oct 3, 2010
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Self-Founded Book Bridge Club: 150 word
Undergraduatetensplyr4eva - Oct 1, 2010 / gmt_snail - Oct 6, 2010
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"The Oak Tree"-Evaluating a risk I have taken and its impact on me.
Undergraduateswimmer400 - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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My life changing epiphany, volunteering _ UF Essay
Undergraduateionutalbu25 - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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"Find X, the missing element" - University of Chicago Essay
Undergraduateams1121 - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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"An Extended Complaint" - Evaluate an Experience and its Impact on you
Undergraduatecleary21 - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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Love for art + Chinese heritage - UPenn Supplemental Essay.
Undergraduatetensplyr4eva - Oct 1, 2010 / ekim226 - Oct 9, 2010
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"Good/bad advice" - Any on my NYU Tisch dramatic essay?
Undergraduatesmithvs1 - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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"A muslim family that celebrates Christmas" - Response to an essay question
Undergraduatesabs - Oct 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 4, 2010
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There is no doubt that human beings are not omniscient or omnipotent, authorities also make mistakes
Undergraduatelinying - Oct 1, 2010 / mea505 - Oct 1, 2010
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"underprivileged Egyptian children" - an extracurricular activity or work experience.
Undergraduatesabs - Oct 1, 2010 / mea505 - Oct 1, 2010
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"meet the challenges in Northeastern" - response to reasons why you want to transfer.
Undergraduatesabs - Oct 1, 2010 / mea505 - Oct 1, 2010
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"Growth Through Astronomy" - Common App essay review
Undergraduaterezzydemption - Sep 30, 2010 / mea505 - Oct 1, 2010
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"Alessia for the world" - ESSAY ABOUT MY NAME.
Undergraduatealicepozzi - Sep 30, 2010 / alicepozzi - Oct 12, 2010
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"my suburban town" - a life lesson learned that you can bring to the villanova campus
Undergraduatenicmont93 - Sep 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 5, 2010
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My family and a big cat - my environment
Undergraduatesonik293 - Sep 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 4, 2010
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An inscription to help a person I may be sharing an abode with know me better
UndergraduateYayz - Sep 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 4, 2010
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"a rational thinker" - Biographical Essay.
Undergraduatevannyman - Sep 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 12, 2010
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Runnins, values, experiences and goals - Samford Essay Corrections/ Recommendations?
Undergraduatesls61 - Sep 30, 2010 / donrocks - Oct 1, 2010
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"being the outsider" - Essay about diversity
Undergraduatevannyman - Sep 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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FSU prompt-essay about Grandmother and how I grew from that experience-feedback?
UndergraduateDragonsxxBears - Sep 30, 2010 / DragonsxxBears - Oct 2, 2010
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"don't be upset about what you don't get." (best piece of advice essay)
Undergraduatebovienkid - Sep 30, 2010 / bovienkid - Oct 1, 2010
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Purdue Essay - Professional and Personal Goals ("engineering is challenging")
Undergraduatehgielj - Sep 29, 2010 / hgielj - Sep 30, 2010
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Intellectually Exiting experience? (started a fundraiser at my school)
Undergraduatelynne1312 - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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Intellectually Exciting - Kaleidoscopes
Undergraduatekellykat99 - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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UC Prompt1: "The Greatest Lesson Learned: Determination"
Undergraduatekurriboh - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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FSU Essay - how personal should you really get?
UndergraduateLorraineT - Sep 29, 2010 / hannah16 - Oct 2, 2010
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"Soccer is my teacher"-does my essay convey this for Common App Short
Undergraduatekamron2011 - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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"focus on communication and the arts" - Emerson College Supplement Essay
Undergraduateheyyyem - Sep 29, 2010 / radwa - Oct 3, 2010
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"the humanitarian aspects of medicine" - UTexas Statement of Purpose
UndergraduateChelseabdonahue - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 3, 2010
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"hoof beats" - TWO COMMON APP SHORT ANSWER ESSAYS
Undergraduatetiffy - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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Interest, experiences and suitability of engineering - Princeton essay
Undergraduatejonb - Sep 29, 2010 / jonb - Oct 3, 2010
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"Yes, I will move"- significant experience, achievement, risk you've taken (OU Essay)
Undergraduatesweetsown - Sep 29, 2010 / mea505 - Oct 4, 2010
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"experiences with Autism" - UF essay
Undergraduatejnnystvns - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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Intellectual experiences + Mexico City - Peace Corps essays.
Undergraduatervh - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Susan - Oct 2, 2010
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Junior Encounter: personal narrative for freshman in college
Undergraduatexiecong - Sep 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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"I found out I passed the exam" (Vires, Artes, Mores) - FSU Essay
Undergraduateshelbyvillevoll - Sep 29, 2010 / mea505 - Sep 29, 2010
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Dear Jack (Common Application Essay A)
Undergraduatethunder_two - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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Gymnastics + a successful elementary teacher: statement of purpose paper.
Undergraduatecarlton_caitlin - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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From Venezuela to the USA - A new perspective
UndergraduateMaina - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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how my grandfathers death affected me - prompt was to remember and reflect
Undergraduateklinhwilson - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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A week at Warrenville Paint and Hardware - experience, achievement, risk, dilemma
Undergraduateishfish82 - Sep 28, 2010 / ishfish82 - Oct 6, 2010
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Climbing, clouds, rocks: Describe an activity, experience, achievement in your life
Undergraduatekbod - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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"The importance of the Spanish Language in my Life" - CU Boulder Diversity Essay
Undergraduateoldmanbootzz - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 2, 2010
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Extracurricular experience: evolving through soccer
Undergraduatecarlynnross - Sep 28, 2010 / hannah16 - Oct 2, 2010
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"hard study and commitment" - Personal Statement - Highschool Years
UndergraduateGrimRippah - Sep 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Oct 1, 2010
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