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IELTS TASK II suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food

2 - hi reza, it's very nice to read your essay but i'd like to give you some suggestions Junk...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 15, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 15, 2016
What it means to be a teacher? The Myth and the Reality.

2 - Hello Shadels! I am trying to give you some advices. When I read your first paragraph, I am...

Writing Feedbackshadels27 - Aug 14, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 15, 2016
Summary an article III: First wearable brain scanner to probe people with amazing gifts

2 - Hi Fadhylah. I am delighted to read your writing. In my perspective, you have shown the better progress. I...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 15, 2016
Brits spent much more money than other Europeans on some consumer goods

3 - Hello llmy! In an attempt to give feedback that already has not been given before, I'll keep my...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 14, 2016 / shadels27 - Aug 14, 2016
'put limitations on the internet' - IELTS task 2: solutions for reducing internet potential risks

2 - Hello, rockprincess! First and foremost, I believe this is a great start to a good, enthralling essay. I...

Writing Feedbackrockprincess - Aug 14, 2016 / shadels27 - Aug 14, 2016
Working parents, leaving their children in order to keep up with their needs - (pros and cons)

2 - In this busy world, this is full of problems (...) ,consequently, parents have to stay hours ... ......

Writing FeedbackMohammad88 - Aug 14, 2016 / rockprincess - Aug 14, 2016
I accept as true that studying history and literature are needed by students

5 - Hai halim... I have read your essay. These are some corrections from me. 1. However, others reasonother reasons...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 12, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 14, 2016
Business, tourism or another reason for travel and which destinations were chosen? (1994-1998)

2 - Hai Ifrosa! Here is my advise for you! I think it's better for you to usetraveled with UK...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 14, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 14, 2016
TASK 1: the percentage of common vehicles used by holidaymakers during their vacation in New Zealand

3 - Hi, Sofi :) Firstly, it seem that your writing is too short. I doubt that it include 150 words,...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 14, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 14, 2016
Continuing Study to University Contrasted to Working or Traveling

2 - Hi, hirani, I tried to correct your essay but after reviewing, I think i should give you some advice...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 14, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 14, 2016
TASK 1 The first chart below shows the result of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 p

3 - Hi Halim, The first paragraph If you find multiple table, it is better not to write the introduction...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 14, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 14, 2016
Writing Task 1: Source of table by IELTS Cambridge, Test 1 - travel destinations

2 - Greetings Mr / Mrs fadilah, Just let you know what came up in my mind. I still don't understand...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 14, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS Task 2 "Unemployment should be made to work"

2 - Hi risty... This is my correction for you. Please re-correct if there are some mistake. others believe...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 14, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS Task 1 Cambridge 8 The Reasons and Destinations of Visit Abroad

3 - Farida, you need to complete the way that you present the information in the overview / introduction of your...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS Task 2: tax for junk food and education to consume healthy products

5 - halo Halim15, thank you for your correction, but I would like to explain my essay "most people" is...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 13, 2016 / bung ilham - Aug 14, 2016
Consumer expenditures in Europe / Traditional skills in the era of technology

3 - hi,, this is my correction for your task II worldwide have many bigmuch changes for all the...

Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 14, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 14, 2016
Is it true that the technological improvement will devastate the conventional abilities and habits?

NEW - When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 14, 2016 / — -
An essay about the argument of whether people spend too much time on enjoying themselves

3 - Any feedback is very appreciated! Thanks for all your help....

Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 13, 2016 / Lansium - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS Task 2 Cambridge 8 : The Benefits And Drawbacks of Youth People Who Postpone Their Education

2 - Hi Farida. I am delighted to read your writing. Actually, this is a good job. I will give you...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 14, 2016
Task 1 IELTS : International Visitors to New Zealand :Transport Used During visit

3 - hii ida, generally you have good writting. Here some comment from me to enhance yours. more tha than...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 14, 2016
Activities and positive thinking; people over the age of 65 can improve health and extend their life

2 - Hello Molly :) your essay is good, and I love it This is only suggestion : ...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 13, 2016 / Halim15 - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS TASK 1: Practice test - purpose and destination of visit abroad by UK residents

2 - Hi Eka, I think you should do grouping more and use comparative sentence so people who read your...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 14, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 14, 2016
Working or traveling before starting the studying has pluses and minuses to be considered by youths

2 - hi eka, somethng something don't it is better when we avoid use apostrophe in academic sriting. for...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 14, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 14, 2016
The most Bulgarian aged 15-60 planned to stay in their country with no intentions of emigration

3 - Hello ramzi, thank you for your comment. The horizontal bar chart illustrates the percentage of Bulgarian people aged...

Writing Feedbackintana28 - Aug 13, 2016 / intana28 - Aug 14, 2016
Analisys of the chart - transport used by visitors during travel in New Zealand

3 - Hi Ella, The percentage of holidaymakers using train is 20 ... Train has lower percentage than coach but higher...

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 13, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 14, 2016
High taxes on fast food to solve the problem people who suffers health diseases from it

NEW - Consuming too much fast food made people suffers from health diseases in some countries. Upon this problem, there...

Writing FeedbackKhatarizNS - Aug 14, 2016 / — -
Gaining any jobs are pivotal aspect due the fact that people need money for living

2 - Here my corrections: - it will decreasingdecrease the poverty. Modals (will, might, should, must,,, ) + V1 - they...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 14, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 14, 2016
The death rate is projected to incline and reach over 0.7 percent in Scotland from 2016 to 2020

2 - Hi Ramzi... I am very keen on reading this writing. I will give you a few suggestions to improve...

Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 14, 2016
The privately owned houses overtook leading position in the British housing market.

2 - Hello adip... your essay is good,.. there is a little correction from me,.. In 1985, privately owned...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 14, 2016 / intana28 - Aug 14, 2016
Living in a small community allows to build a common bond and safe neighbourhood

4 - I am sorry to say you should under surveillance your spelling and the article after OF and please be...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 13, 2016 / adip - Aug 14, 2016
IELTS Task 2 : Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people

2 - hallo Mr. Mahdi it's nice to read your essay and here some suggestions fo you Sustaining to live...

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 14, 2016
A work that can give minimum salary should be obtained by people who remain jobless

2 - Hi kobayakawa07, here are some advice I would like to give you. If you have any question, feel free...

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 13, 2016 / lucas xavier - Aug 14, 2016
Need some help in Ielts writing task 1: Essay of bar graph (about sales of digital games)

2 - hallo lucas... i'd try to correct your essay As can be seen from the graph... in this sentence...

Writing Feedbacklucas xavier - Aug 14, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 14, 2016
The number of people with higher education level who planned to leave Bulgaria increased every year

2 - Hi Intan. These are my correction to improve your score. The vertical bar chart describes the percentages of three...

Writing Feedbackintana28 - Aug 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
Many people in urban society have unhealthy lifestyle while others always try to keep their body fit

2 - Hi Intana! You did it well, but I am trying to give you a different way to write it....

Writing Feedbackintana28 - Aug 13, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 13, 2016
International Visitors to New Zealand : Reason for visit

4 - This is the chart image of the essay. I hope you can help me to give a different way...

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 13, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 13, 2016
In 1985, privately owned housing stood at more than a half in the total of 22 million homes in U.K.

2 - Hi, Fadhil, I have to say you have great skill in grouping the data, yet you are not qualified...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 13, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 13, 2016
IELTS TASK 1 : Travelled Abroad, Why Travelled Abroad and Destinations Over the Same Period

2 - Hello dina, here is my comment, I hope you can avoid 'we' from writing task 1 to make...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016 / intana28 - Aug 13, 2016
Task 1 "Percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK"

2 - Hi Risty, one of the most important skills in writing task 1 is the outstanding ability to group the...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 13, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 13, 2016
In 2005, there were 27 million homes in United Kingdom, and most of them in private hands

2 - Hi Mahdi.. I have read your writing closely. Your creation is good, but it needs development. I hope you...

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
In the modern era, internet has become one of the greatest things in the world

3 - Hai Halim, you did it well! I am trying to add some feedbacks, here we go. ......., internet...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 13, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 13, 2016
Task 1 - The percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1985 and 2005

2 - Hello molly,.. It is clear that while the number of housing (...) highest position in 2005. The proportion...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 13, 2016 / intana28 - Aug 13, 2016
There are three advantages and disadvantages of being person who lives in a small village.

2 - Hi dinar, you have a lot of idea in your essay. I like it very much. Here is my...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016 / kobayakawa07 - Aug 13, 2016
Hiring jobless people develop their living standards, give practical skills and integrate in society

2 - Hi Mekar, it is rather silly to comment your essay without seeing the question as this will lead the...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 13, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 13, 2016
Most people use a private transport to enjoy their vacation in New Zealand

4 - Hi, here are my introduction for u : - The provided bar chart show what transport ......

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 12, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 13, 2016
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : WORK OR TRAVEL BETWEEN FINISHING HIGH SCHOOL AND STARTING UNIVERSITY STUDIES

NEW - Topic : In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016 / — -
Summarize Task : Itzhak Perlman, The Greatest Violinist in the World

3 - Itzhak Perlman is the greatest violinist in the world because with his inadequacy, he still can play violin very...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Aug 12, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016
People can strive some efforts to maintain their health, by changing their routines. IELTS 2

4 - I suggest you not to use the typical opening as "in modern era". the opening is too typical and...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 12, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 13, 2016
The magic ingredient that brings Pixar movies to life

3 - the most influencer => superlative : the most influencive using simple past there are many part that you...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 12, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016
Longer life spans. Cutting edge of technology has driven advanced facilities in health sector.

2 - People' life tends to be longer than even before and it argued that -> compound sentence people's life...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 13, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016
The world today tends to consume junk food instead of preparing food at home

2 - Behaviour of people in today's world tendspeople = plural Ironically, the consumer of this kind of food getting...

Writing FeedbackMarzukimaros - Aug 13, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016
Most visitors who go to New Zealand like to use car as transportation, at more than sixty percent.

2 - Hi Atikah.. I cannot help you to give the suggestion as you have not attached the picture. I hope...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
Demographic trend in Scotland measured in proportion of birth rate, population growth and death rate

2 - A change of Demographic trendS in Scotland is illustrated in the line graph in aN 8-decade period from 1940...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
Gradual decrease between the birth rate and the population growth in Scotland

2 - Hei there..., you have shown us a good report writing, but some improvement are needed in order to pass...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 12, 2016 / eddies - Aug 13, 2016
Harry Potter and the Cursed Child Has Already Sold 4 Million Copies

2 - Hi Muhammad.. I am delighted to read your writing. However, I will give you a few suggestions to enhance...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
Wired Summary: Think Explosions Are the Only Way to Form Calderas? Think Again

2 - Here my suggestions: - Recent study pointing that there are. A recent study found that ,,, The two most...

Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 12, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 13, 2016
The statistic characterizing of human population trends in Scotland from 1940 to 2020

2 - Well done. You have successfully written your report essay, but some changes in particular Vocabulary need more improvement in...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 12, 2016 / eddies - Aug 13, 2016
Time : Rainbow cake mountains show stunning slices of colour

2 - Hi Mahdi.. I have read your writing closely. In my vantage point, you need to improve your English more...

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 13, 2016
The line figure presents three kinds of demographic trends in Scotland from 1940 onwards

2 - Adi, here are some additional insights for your analysis :) A breakdown of three demographic trends proportion in...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 13, 2016
Polio back in Nigeria two years after being wiped out in Africa

4 - Hi, Eka. I have a few comments of your summary. Nigeria has faced polio (spelling, polio is uncountable...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 13, 2016

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