The number of cars is growing along with the economic growth of a country
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Business and money; big budgets for marketing and promoting.
Writing Feedbackaviniwirastri - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 6, 2016
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Empowering the societies with the most effective-functional policies to maintain their advance
Writing Feedbackbehieli - Apr 6, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 6, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2 - Traveling to many different places makes you more sophisticated
Writing FeedbackEster Napitupulu - Apr 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 6, 2016
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Education and health service cost should be paid by people in prosperity for a country' extra income
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 6, 2016
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A breakdown of information about holiday maker percentage visiting England in Brighton; 1980 to 2010
Writing Feedbackbastian20 - Apr 6, 2016 / tiraatira11 - Apr 6, 2016
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EILTS Task 2: Pupils' Concentrating Hurdle in The Class
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The cause of lack of information for children at school ( TASK 2)
Writing Feedbackbastian20 - Apr 6, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Apr 6, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2: THE PEOPLE GET GOOD JOB BY EDUCATION
Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 5, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 6, 2016
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2002-2011 timeframe VHS and DVD's. The number of sales and rentals of films in a store.
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 6, 2016 / bastian20 - Apr 6, 2016
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Decrease number of overweight needs further solutions by educating the importance of nutrients
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 5, 2016 / angga93 - Apr 6, 2016
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'electricity cost increase' - Some alteration in Australian monthly expenditure in 1991 and 2001
Writing FeedbackEster Napitupulu - Apr 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Apr 6, 2016
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People take some pictures using photo booths. Below is described how such machines works.
Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 5, 2016 / SpecialOne - Apr 6, 2016
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Task 2: is it necessary for both parents go out to work ?
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016 / luoyusi - Apr 6, 2016
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Task 2 - Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Ester Napitupulu - Apr 6, 2016
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Nowadays social media and society all encourage people to do what they like
Writing Feedbackcathylan - Apr 5, 2016 / Ester Napitupulu - Apr 5, 2016
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Economic progress or other factors should be used to measure a country's success - IELTS task 2
Writing Feedbackluoyusi - Apr 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 5, 2016
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In regard to negative effects emerged by obesity, individuals should take a significant action
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 5, 2016 / Desty22 - Apr 5, 2016
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For last few decades, the extreme gap has been recorded between wealthy and poorer countries.
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 2, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 5, 2016
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The photograph is automatically created in a short-time using an automatic photo booth
Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 5, 2016 / cathylan - Apr 5, 2016
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IELTS TASK II : work-family together and children development
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 4, 2016 / Lita27 - Apr 5, 2016
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Freshgraduate and work experience; it is not an obligation anymore to have an academic degree
Writing FeedbackDiandin16 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2. The parents work to have the better income but do not support children
Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 4, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 5, 2016
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The main feature of an operated photo booth machine. It allows an user to take two types of pictures
Writing FeedbackDiandin16 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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IELTS TASK I: the diagram illustrates the operation of automatic photo both for passport
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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Education is a crucial part to reach bright future of horizons
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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Different views in terms to the idea that the best way to get a job is to graduate a decent school
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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Economic inequality is increasing in many countries. Unequal distribution of income.
Writing FeedbackDiandin16 - Apr 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 5, 2016
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Closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities
Writing Feedbackaviniwirastri - Apr 3, 2016 / Diandin16 - Apr 5, 2016
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Are there more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places?
Writing FeedbackLa Baso - Apr 4, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 5, 2016
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The proportion of British people who saw the film in forth age groups on two decades after 1990
Writing Feedbackwahyu - Apr 4, 2016 / Peter_Tim - Apr 5, 2016
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IELTS 1: the percentage of public community and prosperity in 8 different areas in the worldwide
Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 4, 2016 / ANSOR99 - Apr 5, 2016
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Several museums have regulated a policy that the visitors are supposed to pay money for museum entra
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Apr 4, 2016 / ANSOR99 - Apr 5, 2016
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The increase of population causes humanity problem
Writing Feedbacktiraatira11 - Mar 29, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 5, 2016
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Writing IELTS 1: Cinema attendance pattern which occured amidst the four of age groups in the UK
Writing FeedbackHadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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The cycle's life of salmon which is species of large fish
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The table illustrated the comparison of the budget output of Australian households (1991-2001)
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China has the greatest number of population in the world, while United States is the richest country
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016 / wahyu - Apr 4, 2016
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People needs to change their daily routine, habits, because obesity is now a major global epidemic.
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IELTS TASK 1 - Global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.
Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 4, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
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The cycle of the salmon in diverse habitats and stages
Writing Feedbacktiraatira11 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The Criminals Lead People To Stay At Home...___...IELTS Task 2
Writing FeedbackANSOR99 - Apr 4, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS 1: the wealth in a country versus population proportions in various regions of the world
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 1: Cinema visitors description in the Great Britain in 2 decades
Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2 e-book as an additional format and it can not replace the presence of a printed book
Writing FeedbackDiandin16 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The best alernative to prevent crime - 'apply a stringent penalties'
Writing FeedbackHadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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To solve the fear of crime problem. What official has done is not sufficient to restrict it.
Writing Feedbackbastian20 - Apr 4, 2016 / suxiaojing - Apr 4, 2016
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Salmon put their eggs in the upper river which has slow moving currents - facts from this fish life
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The statistics data about cinema visitors based on different age groups in the United Kingdom
Writing Feedbackbastian20 - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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After 4 years in Lower River, salmons fry will grow into smolts which have size roughly 12-15 cm
Writing FeedbackYusri31 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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CHARTS the age and gender of single-occupant households as well as how many bedrooms in their houses
Writing Feedbackcl50803 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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This species originally hatch in fresh water, then live in the sea when it grows. The life of salmon
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The growth of salmon begin when eggs from adult salmon laid out at small stones under the reeds
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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Salmon Life Cycle. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months.
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK I: the satisfaction of spending money - in shops, restaurants, and design (New Zealand)
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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Taks 1 : the employees according to their gender in the Great Britain
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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Does Charging Tourist For Admission Has More Merits Than Demerits?
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016
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From the chart: Native Australia experienced the largest number entering Movie Theater at 70%
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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Many citizens should pay admission to visit museum. Money is spent eg. for rebuilding the facility.
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 4, 2016 / rahmat248 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2: Whether crime prevention should be done or not.
Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016 / La Baso - Apr 4, 2016
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