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|General debate whether the environment damage is serious or acceptable to the international laws
NEW - WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:...
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|IELTS - Writing Task 2 Foreign language at elementary school
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|What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and how to minimize the bad effects?
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|Nowadays, every piece of business conducted by humans is easier because of the advanced technology
4 - Hello! Just a little feedback for you, hope this helps. Nowadays, every business conducted by humans communication is...
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|Nowadays, private car is one of the essential needs for people lives. But there's too many of them.
5 - Hi Heru, - Some of them buy car in order to encourage their professionalprofessionalism or only to improve...
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|The addiction to the Internet seems to be a concerning issue, and many people suffer from it
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 31, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 31, 2016
|It is true that the Internet affects the way people live. Our life is much more easier now.
2 - This idea comes nowhere. Also, you need to write this present tense, not the past one. Let me...
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|Human activity is more pleasure due to the sophisticated existence of Internet
3 - If I were you, then I would develop my paragraph with at least three sentences. This way helps...
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|'simple touch of fingers' - People's daily activities have been simplified by connecting online
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 31, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Sep 1, 2016
|Many people has acknowledged that internet makes their daily business more accessible
3 - Sony, I must admit that I like the way you write. Your introductory paragraph has a strong hook and...
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|Nowadays, most people rely on driving cars for their daily activities.
6 - One of the main issue caused by ... For instance, we cancould make a comparison (...) in big cities...
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|There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family
NEW - There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. Where...
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|People's lives are much more comfortable since the introduction of cutting-edge the internet
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|At the present time, car become one of the most important goods (instruments) in human life
2 - Hi aidafitria, let me you a hand, this is my suggestions for you. I hope it will develop your...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Aug 31, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 31, 2016
|What can be done to reduce the use of cars? SEVERAL EXAMPLES OF INTRODUCTION
NEW - Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social, and working needs. However, unlimited use of cars causes...
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|People who decide to have kids should better cogitate on how they can meet their children's needs
3 - Hi Bung Ilham. Here are my suggestions to improve your score in the writing section. In this moment, I...
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|Maintaining repeated customers is a prevalent aim within a business. My summary about Brand Loyalty
2 - Hi Aris. In this moment, let me help you to finalize your writing grammatically. Make you sure to meet...
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|Beneficial relaxation. Learning vacation is a new kind of holiday
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|In this consumer driven economy, owning redundant possessions is a commonly practiced custom
7 - Hi Mehbub, we appreciate you words of acknowledging our work here on EF, we definitely aim at providing you...
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|Japan and Malaysia in 2010 - Average household spendings by major categories; IELTS TASK 1
2 - Hi Fahad, I have read through your essay. The following are some suggestions for you, hope you can follow...
Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Aug 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 12, 2016
|Natural deterioration has became a major concern in any part across the globe.
3 - Hi Jomul.. I'd like to give you a hand... Natural deterioration has becamebecome a major concern in ......
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|TED Talks : How to Make Stress Your Friend
2 - These are my corrections for you. Please, you provide your time to review those so that you fall the...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 30, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 30, 2016
|We pay too much attention to actors and other celebrities, and the media sometimes sensationalize it
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|The changes at West park School since 1950 - after the demand for personal vehicles increased
2 - Hai Ziad. I have some constructive feedbacks for you. ... Secondary School at West Park first was constructed...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 30, 2016 / Aris05 - Aug 30, 2016
|Malte Spitz: Your phone company is watching
4 - hi,,, Though Mobile phone makes people ... Malte has an experience which asking his data ... He...
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|Individuals vs. environment - PRACTICE IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : ESSAY TYPE AGREE OR DISAGREE
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|There has been a significant rise in the number of private cars since the past three decades
4 - Hi again, Mi! Be careful with minor errors as follows: It is different withfrom few years before,...
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|Celebrity Life or Inspiring Personal Life?
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 30, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 30, 2016
|West Park Secondary School map. The building experienced a significant change from 1950 to 2010.
2 - Ilmi_03..., it is good to see you again here with a very good report writing. However, some changes are...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 30, 2016 / eddies - Aug 30, 2016
|Facts about celebrities are always interesting to follow, and the lives of ordinary people?
2 - Hi ashelarisa, let me you a hand, this is my suggestions for you. I hope it will develop your...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 30, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 30, 2016
|Environmental issues are caused by human's activities. Task 2 (practice): "improving environment"
3 - Environmental issues are caused by human's activities. As a consequence, every person (i think it is better to change...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 30, 2016 / aidafitria18 - Aug 31, 2016
|Citizens obligation and business cooperation - "Only large companies can improve environment"
2 - Hi Erpin92 The firms could maintain the employees' life ... Therefore, the waste of factory could not flow...
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|The Design of a Wave-Energy Machine and Its Best Location
3 - There are two diagrams about the design of ... => you are supposed to use a paraphrase in introduction...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 30, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 30, 2016
|The mass media has been more interesting to show well known people's way of life
2 - hi! i catch some grammatical errors. hope you can follow through ... to report people who live usuallynormally...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 30, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 30, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 ( Full essay regarding environment in type of agree or disagree)
2 - Hi Fazlur..^^ I have read your writing, I think you haven't given the task response with the question...
Writing FeedbackFazlur27 - Aug 30, 2016 / hailun11 - Aug 30, 2016
|It is certain that the clear water resource became a rarity in the several countries.
Writing FeedbackPermata992 - Aug 30, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 30, 2016
|Reducing emission production, processing waste, planting the number of plants - all for environment
2 - Hello there^^ There are differentdifferences of perspectives that (...) and businesses be able to develop the surrounding, meanwhile...
Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 30, 2016 / hailun11 - Aug 30, 2016
|On Women's Equality Day, More Tech Companies Promise Change
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|Summary Article How to Eat More Vegetables And Less Meat in Three Weeks
6 - Hi Farida, Your essay gives us precious message for stay healthy with nutritious meals. However, I found dome mistakes....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|"Big can more" - possible ways to better the environement.
NEW - Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only large companies and businesses can make a difference. To what...
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|Big companies could improve environment rather than people because they have big impact on society.
3 - Hi, Heru22 Check the amendment below. However, there are a number of reasons why not only ... ......
Writing FeedbackHeru22 - Aug 30, 2016 / Naoki28 - Aug 30, 2016
|Large companies and individuals are no difference in maintaining the environment
4 - hi... Environmental damage is alarm. Some people said that is pressing issue can only be solved by...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Aug 30, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 30, 2016
|The machine for generating electricity consist of two main parts : steel tower and a computer room
3 - Atikah, it is a nice thread. I can easily follow the process of this machine. However, there are some...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 30, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 30, 2016
|IELTS Essay Writing Test 3 About Agree and Disagree
3 - Hello Aida, two thumbs for your efforts in attempts to achieve a high score on IELTS. I have read...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Aug 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 30, 2016
|The environment improvement depends only on large companies since individuals can't do much alone
4 - Hello Maulida! Nice to see you in essay forum! Here a little feedback for you. The improvement of...
Writing Feedbackmaulida07 - Aug 30, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 30, 2016
|Individuals are too limited to make a difference in the environmental development
2 - Hi Ilham, I find in reading your essay. It's a well-written essay; the flow of your ideas is good...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 30, 2016
|It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people su
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|A wind turbine works by wind power, producing electricity efficiently when located on a high surface
NEW - The diagram illustrates about how to produce electricity by a wind turbine and the best place for wind turbines...
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|Writing IELTS task 1 : the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed
2 - Hi there...., including the original prompt of this diagram is a must, as to know that you are being...
Writing Feedbackhailun11 - Aug 30, 2016 / eddies - Aug 30, 2016
|A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer.
5 - A wind turbine consistS of A tower, A generator, A wind sensor, and blades ... The best locations for...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 30, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 31, 2016
|These days, many entertainment news report celebrities activities and their private lives.
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 30, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 Wind Turbine Design and The Optimum Location
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / aidafitria18 - Aug 30, 2016
|Radio, television, and Internet shows over and over gossips stories and entertainment news
2 - hi,, dinar Radio, television, and the internet go overgives stories about gossips ... As a result, many...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 30, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 30, 2016
|How a wind turbine will be built and where it is located
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 30, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 31, 2016
|Should the media report ordinary people lives more than celebrities' lives? IELTS WRITING TASK 1
2 - Hello, Eka. It's nice to read your essay. To enhance your writing better, you may consider my contributions as...
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|Writing Task 2 "Some kind of paid work work children in many countries"
4 - hi ziad, i would like to focus on your introduction paragraph ... involve their children forin some...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 30, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 2, 2016
|BOARDING SCHOOL FOR CHILDREN - good option for the contemporary parents who doesn't have enough time
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|The number of participants in education and science program in 1980 and 1990 based on a survey.
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 30, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 30, 2016
|A phenomenon of social networking is rapidly increase in 21st century. SUMMARY TASK 7
2 - Hai occa. I have some interesting feedback for you ... social networking is rapidly increaseincreasing in 21st century....
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|IELTS Task 1 & Task 2 : Participation Levels in Science and Education
3 - tyar32, you are not allowed to post two writings in one thread. Stop doing this, otherwise, your account will...
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