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|Birds abilities to navigate through very long distance has fascinating observers for centuries
2 - hi yonathan, here are my suggestions keep writing ! ==>from cold to warmer place ==>bird migration areis...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 14, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|The most longest migration in our galaxy is observed among birds.
2 - aloha, let me give you my thoughts: What the indomitable animal in this world?(I think it is not...
Writing FeedbackLalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 14, 2016 / bung ilham - Sep 14, 2016
|We must be able to listen to the signal of body, because it is better than any doctors.
3 - Lissa Rankin, founder of (...) and mental illness, comes up [past simple is suggested since this event had fully...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 14, 2016
|Some birds migrate from the breeding ground to the other area for the rest of the remained season.
7 - hi dils ,there is some advices of me to you such as like a grammatical error correction : body...
Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 14, 2016 / mawahi bussalam - Sep 19, 2016
|How to raise successful kids - without over-parenting by Julie Lythcott-Haims
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016 / dils - Sep 15, 2016
|Walking around in the country comes to the top list of the reason for visiting the New Zealand
2 - hi mem77, here are my suggestions. keep writing ! ==> It they hashavea five reasons for coming to...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 14, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Al Gore stressed the importance of being aware of the climate change
2 - Hello Kiki, nice writing but you need some feedbacks Al Gore points are to stressed the importance of...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 14, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016
|TED Summary:The Shocking Truth About Your Health by Lissa Rankin (TEDxFiDiWomen)
NEW - The most important part of life is always being healthy. As a proverb said an apple a day keeps...
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|Five reasons of journey to New Zealand by foreign tourists, measured in percentage
2 - Hi Rian,this is my suggestion for your essay: 1."Journey in New Zealand and is measured.." .Better if use "Journey...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 14, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 14, 2016
|Populus euphratica, Tamarix ramosissima, and Alhagi sparsifolia - these plants grow on desert
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016
|How many people of both gender registered in a fitness center between year 1970 and 2000
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 14, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|National Geographic to save the Animals Rhinos in Africa
2 - Dear Mita i have a few advice to your essay population of Africa's and white rhino specie have...
Writing FeedbackMita22 - Sep 14, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016
|The Information shows of two membership in fitness a five-year period, from year 1970 to 2000
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary Article : Oil Pipeline Construction Halted After Native American Protests
2 - Hi! I have some advice for you! Your writing is quite comprehensive but missing the strong statement of...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 14, 2016
|To prevent and overcome chilhood obesity
2 - Hello Your text is a bit awkward (stylistically). I suggest you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|There are five common activities for tourist in New Zealand
3 - Hi! Here some advices for you; Do not forget to put the chart measurement on your writing: The...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 14, 2016
|Reason For Visit New Zealand: sightseeing, walking, boating, volcanoes, museums
2 - hi andhika08 The bar chart show Shows the percentage of reason for visitvisiting / to Visit New Zealand. The...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary of TED HOW DO CARBOHYDRATE IMPACT YOUR HEALT, (Richard .J wood)
2 - Hello Ifan, Nice essay therefore I have some suggestion to your writing. according on to Richard [who ]...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 14, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016
|An annual large scale-movement of birds called migration
3 - dear rosadesiana i have a few advice to your essay ... distances of migration have to changes to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016
|The relationship between sovereignty and the law is relatively straightforward. When it comes to pol
2 - Dear kiki23, here are some of advices for your summary: Issue appeared in Britain politics these days is...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 14, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016
|I am in favour of an overseas university degree rather than in home country school
Writing Feedbackany577 - Sep 14, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 14, 2016
|The result of adult education survey - Cambridge 1 Practice 1 - Correct if Found Some Wrong
2 - Hi @faizunaa17 I like the idea in the first paragraph. However, it should be more engaging whenever you...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Sep 14, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 14, 2016
|Top Takeaways from presidential candidates's views on Science - Laura Parker - Articles Summary
2 - Hi Fadhil.. I am delighted to read your summary. Honestly, it is good enough because this is free of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging industry has many negative effects on the life in our planet.
2 - Hello Bams, I'm pleased to read your writing since it provides valuable information about illegal logging. some of your...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 13, 2016
|The result from a recent survey revealed the lack of geopolitical skills among American youth
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Is damaged tropical rainforest caused by Logging industry?
5 - Hello PHA, It's incredible simple text, these following correction for your writing : Now days (Nowadays or at present...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 14, 2016
|The climate crisis in United States - significant increase of heat
3 - ...there was a significant increase in U.Sheat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit ... >>>> i suggest to replace "heat" with...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016 / angga93 - Sep 14, 2016
|AMERICA DREAM - SUMMARY TED VIDEO
2 - Hi Riandi. Let me help you to finalize this summary. Riandi, based on the grammar, you can handle...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 13, 2016
|What can you do about the climate crisis? Al Gore talk about the climate
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|Fiction and non-fiction books - which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read?
Writing FeedbackHthmn - Sep 13, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|The amounts of meat, salt, and fish consumed in China, starting from 1985 to 2010
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 13, 2016 / eddies - Sep 15, 2016
|The proportion of the nationalities among the tourists in New Zealand from around the world
2 - Let me lend you some help to improve your introduction: ... information about the proportion/percentageof the homeland of...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 13, 2016 / zul2805_es - Sep 14, 2016
|The interesting Al Gore speech on ecosystem
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 13, 2016
|Most Young American Can't Pass a Test on Global Affairs -- Can You? Summery for an Article
3 - I do appreciate your writing, i see in your writing, simple sentence but every single sentence has coherence. ...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016
|10 Things Not to Say to a Mom Who Puts Her Kids in Day Care (Claire Zulkey) - Summary for article
5 - Hallo Ifan, nice essay but I have some Suggestion for you: you can describe your essay on more...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 13, 2016 / Lalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging impact. A great deal of the industries commit the activities of cutting down trees.
3 - Hello Your text could be improved (stylistically) if you apply the following adjustments to it: A great...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 13, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|TED: How Childhood trauma affects health across a lifetime
2 - Hi David, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Heart disease and lung cancer are several of...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|A 3D-printed jumbo jet? A resume of a talk given by Bastian Schaefer
2 - Hi Eka, below are a few suggestions to enhance your essay. - People cannot know about thewill never...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals; real change at government level.
2 - Dear Mahesh, there are some of advices from me for your essay: ... on impact of air pollution...
Writing Feedbackmahesh27 - Sep 13, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016
|The Spammy Pokemon Go Apps Being Pushed to Millions of iPhones
2 - Eka, there are a number of misinformation in your current summary article. Most of them are quite serious because...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 13, 2016 / Holt - Dec 12, 2016
|The range of nationality of people, who has journeyed to New Zealand
2 - Hi Gian, below are my thoughts on your analysis. The linking verbs are seen as very crucial detail that...
Writing FeedbackGian16 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|Just in the last two days there has been a temperature record in January for America.
2 - In the early for this topic explain about climate crisis. => you have no subject in this sentence. ...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 13, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 13, 2016
|Have Three Weeks for a Vacation? There Are Trips for You (Summary of article)
3 - Hello classmate I have some suggestions for you I hope it helps first ensure for your source, I...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 13, 2016
|"Trauma Still Fresh for Rwandan Genocide Survivors" Summary
3 - Hi Gian16, This is little suggestion for you : 1. "... raised in Kinyanya 20 years ago, still give...
Writing FeedbackGian16 - Sep 13, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 15, 2016
|Oceans Given Boost as Nations Agree to Protect a Third Worldwide - Summary Article
4 - Hello,, these are my suggestion which focus on grammar and structure ... many things that must be protect...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 13, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016
|Dinner makes a difference - summary
3 - Hi.. Please allow me to help you by giving some suggestions of your writing Your topic is quite...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|This Teenager Just Came Out to Her Family at Disneyland in the Most Amazing Way - Summary Article
5 - hello ibal, thak you very much for your really interesting essay and i appreciate for your effort to do...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 13, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 14, 2016
|A single father from San Diego establishing a close bond with his little daughters
2 - Hii Fitry, your writing already get the structure, but lemme give you some advises. As shown (what information?) by...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 13, 2016 / Gian16 - Sep 13, 2016
|Dad Sings Disney Song With His Daughters, Your heart explodes with cuteness. Article summary
2 - Hello I think your text will win in value if you apply the following stylistic touches to it:...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 13, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 13, 2016
|Logging is a series of activities in the field of forestry which damage the environment
Writing FeedbackM Fajerianoor - Sep 13, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 13, 2016
|IELTS task 1 The diagram illustrates the change of food consumption in China in quarter century
4 - Hi arisandy14, Can I offer you a little suggestion " fish was the most popular (what popular?) with...
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 13, 2016 / VK WSSH - Sep 15, 2016
|Summarize TED video : Taylor Wilson, who built a nuclear fusion reactor
3 - Hello mem77. I've read your writing and I find it that you are understanding the video well. However, this...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 13, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016
|The difference three foods in China people consumes in year 1985-2010
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Great increase of fish consumption in China from 600 grams/person/week in 1995 to 850 grams in 2010
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|The untold harm of logging to the environment by distracting both terrestrial and aquatic life forms
NEW - The logging industry, which supplies the raw materials for a large number of products, potentially has untold harm to...
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|Summary: More Young Americans Live with Parents Than With Lovers
4 - Hello bung ilham, here i left the comment for you In the meantime, many young generation prefer...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging can damage the environmental life in forests - it brings deforestation
2 - hello lalu, it is nice to see your essay and also i am totally appreciate with your effort to...
Writing FeedbackLalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 13, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 13, 2016
|Oil pipelines project has been protested by Native American
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 13, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016
|EILTS Writing Taks 1 : Summeries' Environment Impacts of Loging
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections The disanvantage disadvantage of loging is which are...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 13, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|It is witnessed that the largest proportion of New Zealand's visitors come from Australia
2 - Hi Eva, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope you find this website to be helpful and even...
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