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|The main concept of ecotourism are make good environment and get income without injuring it
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Aug 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 26, 2016
|Sumary of Hiking the Inca Trail in The Andes Mountains
11 - hi.... Macchu Pichu is the ancient site in the Andes Mountains .... Mountains and ttwhichwas discoverddiscovered by archeologist...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Aug 25, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 30, 2016
|PRACTISING IELTS WRITING TASK 2 INTRODUCTIONS.. - three examples
2 - Hi, your English is very good! Here are my suggestions. ... through borders and it makes [it]...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Aug 25, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 25, 2016
|MAKING INTRODUCTION; discussing benefits and drawbacks, giving opinions on issues. IELTS TASK 2
3 - ... goods that we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries. ... become ineffective which spend...
Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 25, 2016 / Heru22 - Sep 1, 2016
|INTRODUCTIONS FOR ESSAYS ABOUT DIFFERENT ISSUES - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - halo gempii welcome to essay forum. it nice to read your introductions.. here some corrections from me.. One...
Writing FeedbackPermata992 - Aug 25, 2016 / Beauty17 - Aug 25, 2016
|Resume - New National Monument Created in Maine's North Woods
2 - Hi Aida.. Welcome to EF. You have been a right medium to enhance your writing skill. I have read...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Aug 25, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 25, 2016
|Advice for my exercise - FOR INTRODUCTION - IELTS WRITING PART 2
5 - NowadaysIt's too common you can use other words like recently or these days or directly mention the year ,...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Aug 25, 2016 / Iforsa - Sep 1, 2016
|Here is my exercises of introduction in IELTS writing task 2 - are these appropriate responses?
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 25, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 25, 2016
|Trying to paraphrase it to write introduction paragraphs (IELTS writing practice)
3 - Hi there..., let me give some valuable insight as per your short opening paragraphs. It is always good to...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 25, 2016 / eddies - Aug 26, 2016
|Question one, two and three - several introduction of IELTS task 2
2 - Hi Erpin, welcome to EssayForum I can see that you still experience some difficulties in composing a well-developed...
Writing FeedbackErpin92 - Aug 25, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 25, 2016
|CHECKING INTRODUCTION PART OF IELTS WRITING TASK 2
Writing Feedbackfikni05 - Aug 25, 2016 / Heru22 - Aug 25, 2016
|Examples how to make good introduction for writing task 2
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 25, 2016 / saskia98 - Aug 25, 2016
|Hiking The Inca Trail, Machu Picchu in Peru
4 - Hi Rosa Desiana ! My apology, my previous comment is not finish yet actually, accidentally i click the "post...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Aug 25, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 25, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 SEVERAL POINTS OF INTRODUCTION
2 - Hello Fazlur27 I rewrote some sentences for you so that they sound better (stylistically): 1. Increasing world...
Writing FeedbackFazlur27 - Aug 25, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 25, 2016
|Three questions - checking Introductions for IELTS Task 2
Writing FeedbackHeru22 - Aug 25, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 25, 2016
|Couple questions to answer - global trade, kids at work, unpaid community service
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18 - Aug 25, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 25, 2016
|Several Introductions of Writing Task 2
Writing Feedbacksaskia98 - Aug 25, 2016 / saskia98 - Aug 25, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK2 SEVERAL EXAMPLE OF INTRODUCTION
2 - aloha Naoki, below are my suggestions for you: 1st answer ... we can take many goods(products) which are...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Aug 25, 2016 / bung ilham - Aug 25, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 The Problems Which People Will Get When Live Abroad
3 - hi! i'd like to give you some corrections, hope you can follow through. happy writing! Overall, the group...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 25, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 25, 2016
|Life in foreign countries brings a lot of difficulties.
4 - Hello, I will offer you a new form of introduction. Here is the following. The provided bar chart reveals...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 25, 2016 / Naoki28 - Aug 25, 2016
|Some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends.
4 - hi.... ... pay high salaries but require employeerequire employees to leave their family and ... The reason is...
Writing Feedbackffhikaru - Aug 25, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 27, 2016
|Who loves his boss? Relationships level at work - IELTS - Writing Task 1
2 - Hi Nurul, 1st paragraph: - ..there was a slightlyslight change in the proportion of ... 2nd paragraph:...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 25, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 25, 2016
|Introductions for IELTS Writing Test Task 2
2 - Hi ria, - Today, when international market is booming growing, people (...) more familiar toin commodities which come...
Writing Feedbackriaerizal11 - Aug 25, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 25, 2016
|Learning a country by visiting it (IELTS task 2); "the only source of knowledge is experience"
3 - Consequently , However some people argue that it's not a result but it's a contrast In my opinion,...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 25, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 25, 2016
|The money is the main reason to make a business, and the owners goal is to multiple their profits.
2 - many think most people create ... many people desire to create their own business for supporting humans'...
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08 - Aug 25, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 25, 2016
|If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would that be?
NEW - Most of the people consider at least one person as their legend and hero, who lived in the past....
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|Most people assume nowadays that living in a tower block has less community spirit.
2 - Hi, to me, this essay did not seem to focus on the specific prompt closely enough and it also...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 24, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 25, 2016
|Producing electricity using two methods: hydroelectric dam and wave air generator
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 24, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 26, 2016
|Most of businesses' objective now is gaining highly profitability with only concern for the money
2 - Hi Ziad I'm trying to give you some suggestions just for sharing, perhaps you can put hook in...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 24, 2016 / LimLim15 - Aug 24, 2016
|IELTS 1: hydroelectric dam and wave-air generator generate electricity from renewable resources
2 - aloha Eka, below are my suggestions for you The diagram below shows two methods of using water to...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 24, 2016 / bung ilham - Aug 24, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : Living in the High-Rise Apartment : Lonely Experience or Better Sense of Community
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|People rather choose sitting in the sofa, watch the show, and get information about other countries
3 - Hello Dinar. I give you some corrections. Hopefully it helps. For many, this has been changed when they...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 24, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 26, 2016
|In the modern era, most people argue if impressive constructions are essential for a city
3 - Hello Fadhilahumar91 Most people argue ifthat impressive construction are ... ... government should be spent of much...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 29, 2016
|Living in a high-rise flat is the new lifestyle. As the consequence, the occupant will feel lonely.
3 - Hi Hirani, let me you a hand, this is my correction This because usually it have little space...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 24, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 24, 2016
|Some benefits of watching TV like info on tourist destinations, the variety of world culinary, etc.
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 24, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 24, 2016
|Lonely experience. Small land in the city center causes urban community to live in the flat.
3 - in my opinion that people who live in the houses have ... you should compare similar things in my...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 24, 2016
|The Way People Enjoy Their Leisure Time
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 24, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 24, 2016
|There a different systems to produce electricity - by water's power and air pressure.
2 - Hi Fadhilahumar91. This is some corrections for your writing above. .. electricity distributed ininto the power of line...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 24, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 The Methods To Produce Energy Using Water
2 - ... two different methods of producing electricity byusing water as the main substance. First method using water to rotates...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 24, 2016
|We can learn by watching television program or films, but culture is too complex to for this
4 - Nowadays, Information is easier to spread ... Because, according to psychologist in multicultural approach, ... ... understand china's culture...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016 / Hary01 - Aug 24, 2016
|Time Summary: Why Buying the Latest Apple Gadget Can Feel Like a Religious Experience
3 - Hi Fadhilahumar91, please excuse my temerity, but I disagree with a couple of your corrections: This action triggers...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 24, 2016 / TJLuschen - Aug 24, 2016
|Powerful earthquake shakes central Myanmar
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 24, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 24, 2016
|Is a flat is more comfortable than a house? What is better to live? IELTS2
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 24, 2016
|Better chances to learn an another country: from television or a personal visit?
2 - Hi Farida, here's another help from my end. - Sophisticated technology help inhabitantpeople in many ways - television...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 24, 2016
|Students create a tool that turns cigarette smoke into oxygen
2 - Hi Azmi! This notion might be describedescribed ... Afdi, high school students HeThey came with the...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 24, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 24, 2016
|The Donation of a City Council to Book Clubs
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 24, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016
|Tourism can give negative impact especially on the local cultures and environments.
2 - So many tour and travel agencies offer the serve for tourism destination. there are so many tour and travel...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 24, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 24, 2016
|Gadget or electronic media are important but they also harm our direct comunication
4 - ... bring us into some interpersonal relation problems . (some > plural ) ... which connected to internet...
Writing Feedbackdaya23 - Aug 24, 2016 / Hary01 - Aug 24, 2016
|Hi-Tech epoch; Life today is better than it was when your grandparents were children
2 - Hello Lansium, Nice to meet your writing here. There are some corrections for you. ... in poor living...
Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 24, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 24, 2016
|Constructing a high skyscraper or improving schools and hospitals is more essential for metropoly?
4 - hi... Others argue that the authority must focus on ... However, in my view, improving schools ...... need...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 23, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016
|Number of people who are content in the USA by the age group, maritial status, and having kids
3 - Hi Ziad, Let me help you to rewrite your introductory paragraph, The charts report the survey of...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 23, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016
|Most citizens claim that spectacular landmarks are essential for a town
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 23, 2016 / eddies - Aug 24, 2016
|KPU urges govt to speed up e-KTP for Feb. elections
3 - Hello Yusuf05 These are my corrections Despite the instruction to use e-KTP for voting, however, there are approximately...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 23, 2016 / hailun11 - Aug 28, 2016
|Interesting information about two traditional methods used to collect water in the past
3 - hi... The diagrams give usgives information about two ... Two people will hold he ropes and get...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 23, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 24, 2016
|Some information about general feeling of happiness among citizens in the United States of America
4 - Hi Nurul, right off the bat, I noticed your linking verbs are missing, this are very minor details ...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 24, 2016
|The two conventional techniques to take the water to be flowed into the farmlands.
2 - A good paragraph consists of at least three sentences. I suggest rewriting this paragraph above. A brief...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 23, 2016 / eddies - Aug 24, 2016
|According to the survey the married couples that doesn't have any children are happier
3 - Hi Aziz, you forgot to add the chart on this analysis, for future writing reference, mind this posting, as...
Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 23, 2016
|What is the most reasonable choice: to build impressive buildings or improving schools and hospitals
2 - Hello ekalamarsyari11 Your text will sound much more refined (stylistically) if you apply the following adjustments to it:...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 23, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 23, 2016
|Using human labour or an animal to collect water from the river
2 - Hi faridadwi18 I have some suggestions for you. I hope it will help you to develop your writing skill....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016 / tyar32 - Aug 23, 2016
|Summary TED Try Monotasking To Be Successful In The Multitasking World
2 - Hi Farida.. These are my corrections. Multitasking is doing many jobs in AT one time. There are only...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 23, 2016
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