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|Facebook and Google Will Stretch Internet Cable from LA to Hong Kong (Article Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - TheThis two internet colossal - collaboratecollaboration to build advance...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|The ubiquitous fast-paced development in many technological areas
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|How many books have been read at Burnley by men and women?
6 - hi lola ^,^ i would give you some feedback >>>put picture graph that you explain then readers...
Writing FeedbackLola12 - Oct 16, 2016 / eve01 - Oct 21, 2016
|The report show that toursim has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
3 - Hello Nguyen Anh, this is some correction from me and feel free to correct me too! Tourism is...
Writing Feedbackdaunguyen2910 - Oct 16, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 22, 2016
|A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions
2 - Hi Luu, below are my thoughts for your essay; - FromOver the last century, - the technology has...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|The UK'S Ageing Population In 1985 and Prediction for 2035
2 - Hi Muhammad, I hope my remarks and corrections for your analysis essay is not too late. First stop,...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|People's reasons for using the car in city
4 - Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ... Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!!...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 18, 2016
|Negative impacts of tourism and suggestions to improve it better
2 - Hi Emily, WELCOME to this very helpful and valuable website, Essay Forum has helped a lot of students and...
Writing FeedbackEmily Tran - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000
2 - The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / Thuy Trang - Oct 17, 2016
|One of the worst effects of tourism is environmental destruction
3 - Hi Ngo, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, please find a few suggestions below; - Tourism ofin many...
Writing Feedbackanhngo - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Caring for people and spreading happiness
4 - Hi Annie, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to assist you in your writing by providing you...
Writing Feedbackanniele01 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|A bucket and pulley system
2 - Hi Linh, first of all, I would like to say that you are very fortunate in discovering this website,...
Writing FeedbackLinhArs - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|A difference between tourism now and in the past.
Writing FeedbackHong Na - Oct 15, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 22, 2016
|Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible
3 - Hi Tuyet, below are my thoughts on your essay. - In the modern world, the technology has developing...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Topic: According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holi
6 - Hi Linh, Let's start small as i suggested in previous post. You could start with short writings (around...
Writing Feedbacklinhenglish - Oct 15, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 15, 2016
|Describe some jobs positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem
2 - Hi Huynh Anh. your explanation is good and interesting either. here is my suggestion for you ... (AI)...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Motorways reduce time and distance of arriving to other cities, but they are also dangerous
8 - Oh that's great to hear, Danial! There's nothing more than a word of approval and appreciation of our inputs...
Writing Feedbackpluskid - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|A Walk to Margaret Falls. (Due Monday) Proof Read + Editing for Descriptive Essay
5 - Hi JC, thank you for writing back and acknowledging our assistance here on EF, I hope your revision is...
Writing FeedbackPewPew - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|TASK 1 - downward and upward trend concerning value of fuel exports.
2 - Hi Timur_Ergashev, Check the amendment below. Overall,there werewas at highest amount in 2005 ... However,this trend which was...
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 14, 2016 / Naoki28 - Oct 14, 2016
|Discuss about computers are replacing more and more jobs nowadays.
2 - Hi nguyeneze7496. here are my suggestions for you: ... believed to bring a more modern and convenient life...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Based on the previous question, what do you think XX's business will be like in the next ten years?
6 - Hi Yunyi, thanks for your feedback and for appreciating what we do here on EF, well, I changed "have"...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|What effects will these birth rate predictions have on developed countries
2 - Hallo Naoki28, I'll give you my opinion about your essay. Introduction: I think it will be good enough,...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Oct 14, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|What happened that people replace their work by use computer?
2 - Hi Trang I suppose that this essay is not for scholarship purpose but for IELTS one. Please kindly...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 14, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 14, 2016
|Happy partners were significantly more likely to report better health
4 - Hi Eva, I believe this is my first review of your essay and I hope my suggestions are helpful....
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|Cuba's Underwater Jewels Are in Tourism's Path
3 - Hallo Ryan31, I will give you my opinions about your article summarize ..., marine life in Cuba was(because...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Summarize article : Extremely Dangerous' Hurricane Nicole to Pummel Bermuda
4 - Hi Andika, here's my take on your essay; - Hurricane N icole makemade anthe - effect forto the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers?
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 13, 2016 / randompenguin - Oct 14, 2016
|Problem Solving About Pedestrian Areas with polluted air
4 - Hi! I have some feedback for you! Solution for those problems, the big cities must have... should be...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiki23 - Nov 17, 2016
|A Questionnaire essay : What values do you share with XX's "Pleasant Life" philosophy?
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|The government must make choices about how to spend money from taxes
Writing Feedbackzhdw1128 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The more people travel, the more rubbish are thrown away.
6 - Hi Nguyen. please find additional suggestions below; - I thinkbelieve this statement is true - because the number...
Writing Feedbackalvisphantom - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers
2 - Hi Patta, please find a few additional suggestions for your analysis essay. - Many people have personal goals...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi
7 - Hi Kiki, Below some feedback from me: It IS UNDENIABLEcannot be denied that famous people IS surrounded...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiev - Oct 17, 2016
|The Public Transportation and The Fundamental Part of Modern City
2 - Hallo Abdel I want to leave a comment about your article The fact shows that there areis three...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 13, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 13, 2016
|The urban areas should have good traits of rural areas. Issues of living in a large community
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... gradually replaced by the crowded...
Writing FeedbackHangPham287 - Oct 13, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|Should we let ex-prisoners, who have become good people, talk to youngster about committing a crime?
4 - Hello nguyendo, I will give you some opinions about your essay Introduction : "It is true that a...
Writing Feedbacknguyendo - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|10 things we need to apply in the way we talk to other people without feeling bored
2 - Hi Russell. In this moment, I do not suggest about your summary because the basic rule for creating the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, tourists return home with no experience of the local culture
Writing FeedbackQuetquet103 - Oct 12, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 13, 2016
|"Mentor is not always those one who still alive" - TED Summary by Tai Lopez (The law of 33%)
2 - Hi Russell.. These below are my thoughts about your summary. Hopefully, those can help you greatly and finalize yours...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|TED SUMMARY : OCEAN LIFE IN THE SEA FLOOR
2 - Hi Riandi.. These are my thoughts towards your summary. I hope you review my notes and deal with them....
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|Every country should develop tourism more, as well as enhance management
3 - Hi Yuh would like to give some opinions about your writing ... may cause the lack of accomodations...
Writing FeedbackYuh - Oct 12, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 13, 2016
|The Key to Family Happiness is Really Simple
3 - Hi Muhamad, before I give you a few suggestion in enhancing your essay, I must say that I agree,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|PTE - Essay writing practise : Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts.
6 - Hi Venkat, no worries at all, we are here to support you in all the endeavors you may have.We...
Writing Feedbackvenkat_v - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|Almost all families at present are small - not as the same as in the past, when families were larger
2 - Hello Your text is understandable, but some of the sentences sound little awkward. Check the applied corrections below:...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 12, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 12, 2016
|How the film industry portrays women and men in a particular role ( Genre Movie)
Writing Feedbacke76971072 - Oct 12, 2016 / e76971072 - Oct 13, 2016
|TED Talk "How Fear of Nuclear Power is Hurting The Environment"
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 15, 2016
|Give me some advice about How to introduce yourself?
4 - Hi Bambang, below are additional thoughts for your revision. - Speaker TED-xTED speaker X talked about - how...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|Why the letter X represents undefined or an unknown?
2 - Hi Patta, please find a few suggestions the will hopefully be helpful to your revision. - Letter 'X'...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|John McWhorter described why we -as human- have to learn different languages
2 - English is taking over the world, everybody is speaking English, the language of internet, language ... >>this is spoken...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 12, 2016 / angga93 - Oct 12, 2016
|Hundreds of crisscrossing tracks offer a glimpse of life in Africa around 19,000 years ago
2 - Hello PHA, Here some inputs for you. A hundred mile away from the volcano (...) scientist have cataloged...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 12, 2016 / fauzankrn - Oct 12, 2016
|Paraphrising Writing: Uses of Leisure Time
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 12, 2016 / oktoberlin12 - Oct 12, 2016
|An Article Summary: A Scottish Noblewoman and Her Palace
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|It attained 200.000 spectators? History of Circus as The Amusement Show
2 - Hello Afdhel, In the history,in the last century , Circus was watched by ... Commonly, Circusthese was held...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Oct 12, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 12, 2016
|How Build Creativeness and Confidence
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 12, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 12, 2016
|Resume From Nat Geo Article "Hurricane Matthew's Destructive Storm Surges Hint at New Normal"
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 12, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 12, 2016
|TOEFL Integrated Essay (Q: Summarize the points made in the lecture, ...)
2 - Hey There ..... These following correction are suggested to you : ... lecture offer two opposing viewsopposed views on...
Writing FeedbackShahab_A - Oct 11, 2016 / Ifan21 - Oct 12, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2. It is generally agreed today that when a country develop its technologies, the long-es
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Oct 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|Admission policy of museums - charging entry fees does not create more benefits
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you We wanted to find a balancedifferent...
Writing Feedbackzzzfly - Oct 11, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|Choosing between living in a small village and a larger city.
3 - Hi Vjnhnguyen, your essay is pretty good, only slightly mistakes I found: I think (for formal writing, it...
Writing FeedbackVjnhnguyen - Oct 11, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 12, 2016
|Draw your future and control your life - TEDx
2 - Bambang, the way you express your idea in the above writing is good and well-written. The flow of the...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 11, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 11, 2016
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