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|Article Summary : TED's Secret to Great Public Speaking by Chris Anderson
7 - Hello, I've read your summary and now I will give you some suggestions. 1. Well, I remember about...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 12, 2016
|HOW TO FIX A BROKEN EDUCATION SYSTEM WITHOUT ANY MORE MONEY
3 - when you make summary you don't need to give your own opinion, just make summary from the article/other website...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Do you ever heard about Superfood?
5 - hi... Having a healthy body is not an easy thing. Many people believetrust(believe is a general...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
|Stem cell brain injections let people walk again after stroke
4 - hii thank you for your feedback but actually i found the same pattern of this sentence "According to recent...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
|Summary article: Anxiety on China
3 - The official forecast is predicting of a very small number growth that is incontrovertible inflated for Political reasons. ...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
|A chronicle Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp
2 - Your mistakes corrected: The confidential files revealed a massive reports of sexual abuse The victims , who...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
|Plan to Replant Millions of Trees in Central England Slows Down
2 - hiii eris after read your summary here some suggestion from me 1. it is better for you to pay...
Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 10, 2016
|New Invention Which Gives Hope to Pancreatic Cancer Patient
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 11, 2016
|Why photo should be more beautiful?
Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016
|La Nina Could Affect the Spread of Virus !
2 - El Nino and La Nina (have) affected weather and health ... La Nina is the counterpart of El Nino(,)...
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 10, 2016 / Davidg021 - Aug 10, 2016
|Disscussion of documents 'Describe Serious Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp.
2 - - This island is a place were immigrantshousing on it. Double verb - Nauru has first housed a detention...
Writing FeedbackCitradipuss22 - Aug 10, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 10, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side
8 - Hi riandi, The government says that there are several species ... in 2003, government said that the number...
Writing FeedbackRiandi31 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side - article from National Geographic
9 - Hello azmi23, Giant panda population have(has) declined and labelled endangered since 1990. The China still have (subject is...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016
|Promising test for pancreatic cancer from a teenager
2 - - He is interested - are the main principal procedures - He attempts or attempted - he concludes...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 10, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 10, 2016
|I need comments for my IELTS Task 1 about Burnaby Public Library (my first writing)
4 - Hi Yoga, indeed, WELCOME to the forum, we hope,like a family, you can trust us with your writing projects...
Writing FeedbackKusumaningtyas - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
|Some people argue that teaching students to behave well and to assess right and wrong is important.
2 - Hi Rere, WELCOME back! I'm not sure if it's just me but it seems that you've been busy lately...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
|The things that has affected me the most were how my mom helped me overcome difficulties.
Writing FeedbackChenqui - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|Family has a bigger influence on young teens than friends. Present your agreement or disagreement.
7 - Your essay so good, but i think you must explain the reason, go deep "why the family give significant...
Writing FeedbackVips - Aug 9, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
|CBEST prompt- Restriction on how many years a teacher may teach the same subject or grade level?
6 - Thank you Justivy03 for your advice. I will try to write at least one essay everyday. Hope I could...
Writing FeedbackPkyra - Aug 8, 2016 / Pkyra - Aug 11, 2016
|Students although focused on their main major, also have enough time to learn history and literature
Writing Feedbacklamnt - Aug 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 9, 2016
|Some individuals believe that its parent's responsibility to make minors a good society's member.
5 - Hi Kumar, below are the additional remarks for the second leg of your essay; - start interacting with...
Writing FeedbackDr kumar281 - Aug 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 9, 2016
|First thing every newborn becomes familiar with is family. Are parents the best teachers? TOEFL
3 - First thing every newborn is getting familiar with its Family. For everybody, mothers and fathers are the most important...
Writing FeedbackAshkan123 - Aug 7, 2016 / Ashkan123 - Aug 8, 2016
|Importance of Artworks and Museums - will always be vital for the success and prosperity of a nation
3 - Hi Jade, as I go through the essay, I must say the ideas are quiet confusing, confusing because you...
Writing FeedbackJadeOrero - Aug 7, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 8, 2016
|TOEFL practice 1 - sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries
2 - Hello Your text is easily understandable, but you could still consider applying some stylistic adjustments to it. Some...
Writing FeedbackCindyliu - Aug 6, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 6, 2016
|Write a report for a university lecturer about the information on popularity of two new music sites
Writing FeedbackXimon - Aug 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 7, 2016
|The desire of corporations to maximize profits makes conflict with the general welfare of the nation
5 - Hello ichanpants89, Thank for your feedback. I will work on these things and will consider these points from...
Writing Feedbackvrustagi29 - Aug 5, 2016 / vrustagi29 - Aug 7, 2016
|There is this an old saying: opposite poles attract. The same applies to relationships. Test 3 TOEFL
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Core curriculum seek students that are both good at their career and other important disciplines
2 - Hi Gabriel, though it is true that, to post the passage for this project will be a question of...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Some people think that holding parties, wedding parties, birthday parties are waste of money
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Aug 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Students at school and universities learn more from lessons with teacher
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016 / quynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016
|This essay will give an answer on why we are in need of music (historical vs cosmopolitan)
6 - Hi. First of all, thank you for reading my feedback and paying enough attention to correct some mistakes. As...
Writing Feedbackrodiwo - Aug 4, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Aug 5, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: Many species close to endangered and we should protect only the beneficial animals
3 - Hi Mahdi, below are my take on your essay; 3rd paragraph - However, some people disagree about thatwith...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : Problem and solution about homecoming in Eid al-Fitri celebration
3 - Hi Mahdi, as much as I liked reading your essay, I must say, personally, I don't consider Eid al...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|The Heart-Breaking Truth about Exotic Pets and the Painful Journey They Take
Writing FeedbackTheHam - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|10 MOST EFFECTIVE STRATEGIES TO READ AND REMEMBER
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|IELTS Task 2:The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide.
4 - Hi Nguyen, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope that you will be able to participate more in...
Writing Feedbacklilykarry2109 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
2 - Hi Mahdi, below are my thoughts for your essay. Indeed, a growing number of people are buying cars...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|The benefit of safety in driving
5 - Hi Celestine, - Safe driving is very important for prevention ... Safety drive very important to prevent an...
Writing FeedbackCelestine - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
|TOFEL writing practice - Can teachers be both popular(students like them) and helpful to students?
Writing FeedbackChuyun - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|Students going to college - essay correction; I am trying to improve my writting skills.
2 - Hi Ashkan, first of all, I don't see anything wrong with how you approach your first paragraph, however, in...
Writing FeedbackAshkan123 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Students to attend schools to learn or not?
5 - Hi adip, - Some people make an assumption that teaching children at home - whereas the other peoples...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|If we use cell phones in the right way, they will become the most efficient tool in this modern life
3 - Hello. First of all, I really enjoyed reading you essay. I think you have a good basis in terms...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 1, 2016 / rodiwo - Aug 2, 2016
|Students who only learn from books and never practice, in reality hardly find any jobs.
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 31, 2016 / p_leighton - Aug 1, 2016
|Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree..
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Jul 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 1, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 Three categories of crimes in a particular city, 1984-2009.
5 - Hello Risty, I am very glad to see you again in EF. Otherwise, I see your essay become better...
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 31, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|The problems that appear if using personal vehicle and the best way to solve it
2 - Hi Puja, nice to meet you here. This is my some corrections: - Transport facilities is basic need...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jul 31, 2016 / Risty01 - Jul 31, 2016
|To the Office of Student Financial Aid: writing to appeal the loss of my Gold Scholarship
Writing FeedbackDevo7 - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Sweatshop about clothing and a child does not have education, workers very poor and get low wages
3 - Hi Wendy, first of all, in this essay, I can definitely feel that you are somehow furious, furious of...
Writing FeedbackWendy Li - Jul 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|IELTS: TASK 1 ACADEMIC MODULE DEGREES GRANTED IN DIFFERENT FIELDS AT THE NATIONAL UNIVERSITY
5 - Hello Daniel, I am very glad to see other person who has same interest about IELTS. More over, your...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|People face far greater risks in our modern way of life than they did in the past
3 - The correction you made is just about grammar and linking ideas. However, the topic requires you to show "any...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 30, 2016 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 31, 2016
|Cars, apart of the private transportation, has recently sold to many people in developing countries.
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 30, 2016
|The public transportation overflow in modern countries is causing number of negative effects
3 - Hi Adip. Here is my feedback. It is very sensible of you to have written two paragraphs in the...
Writing Feedbackadip - Jul 30, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Jul 30, 2016
|Lofty tax and significant improvement of public transportation as a solution for too many cars
2 - Greetings Mr. Defry, Just share something that come up in my mind, don't forget to correct me if I...
Writing FeedbackDefryerwinsyah13 - Jul 30, 2016 / ramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : People in poorer countries are buying cars. What are the problems? Any solutions?
3 - Hi grintdevereaux30, I have some suggestions, and please correct me when I make some mistakes. this is your...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Jul 29, 2016 / adip - Jul 30, 2016
|Too many cars create problems and the State, also even society should work to solve this
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 29, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 29, 2016
|More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?
4 - Hi molly, Therefore, I believe collaboration governmentgovernment's collaboration with the ... Moreover, the direct impact of this is...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Jul 29, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|Essay about Four elements of good writing
Writing Feedbackhuyennd - Jul 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Having an outstanding career and satisfying family life are the main desires of all human beings
3 - Hi Mahdi, here's my take on your essay; - Enjoying life is our principal intentionTo enjoy life is...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Jul 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|The younger children need some help from their parents to complete their homework efficiently; IELTS
5 - I would like to say thank you for appreciating my feedback above. It is nice to see the fighting...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 29, 2016
|In my opinion, managing and maintaining interpersonal relations is the most important skill nowadays
2 - Hi Payal, here's my analysis of your essay. 1st paragraph: - To some, success means earning huge amounts...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
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