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|Genetically modified crops are potentially dangerous. to what extent do you agree?
3 - Spring, I would like to try convey my ideas relating to your score, which is based on Writing IELTS...
Writing Feedbackspring1986 - Apr 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 30, 2016
|Discuss the advantages of team sports and individual sports, indicate which you prefer?
2 - Hi Youe, you write quite well. Please allow me to give some suggestions to you. they might encounter...
Writing Feedbackyoue - Apr 29, 2016 / Maya29 - Apr 29, 2016
|Scientist and tourists now able to travel to remote environment. Advantages vs Disadvantages IELTS
2 - Hi mate, I would like to say that your essay is quite understandable even though you separated it into...
Writing Feedbackthebest2016 - Apr 29, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 29, 2016
|The societies shouldn't be pliant and ought to select what kind of information they want in media
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 29, 2016 / ainirere - May 1, 2016
|Students shall be free to study what they want, but schools should give priority to practical majors
2 - Hi there， here are my suggestions in regards to the first paragraph： ... the main role of university...
Writing Feedbackmersad - Apr 29, 2016 / Brandon_G - Apr 29, 2016
|Number of trainees for obtaining teacher qualifications and the percentage of male qualifiers in UK
4 - hallo Ainirere, you get improvement in your writing. However, let me help you correcting some parts. It is better...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 29, 2016 / tria25 - May 1, 2016
|IELTS Academic - Task 1 - review my writing relating to fast food consumption in Australia
7 - I think it's 7 points essay.Your sentences and ideas are in a logical order , the use of cohesive...
Writing FeedbackRajatSharma1 - Apr 28, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 3, 2016
|Change is necessary because it brings creativity as well as progress in life
Writing Feedbackad_ei - Apr 28, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 29, 2016
|A practicing essay on "Talents can be trained or not".
3 - Hi Bingbing, that's a very warm WELCOME there from our EF contributors and we really hope we can be...
Writing FeedbackBrandon_G - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Is talent gifted or not? - IELTS Writing Task 2
3 - Hi Nabila, what I like about this essay is that you were able to incorporate scientific facts with your...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Should the amount of noise people make be controlled strictly or not? IELTS
4 - You're most welcome Thebest2016, indeed this website is not just a website, one of our goals is to make...
Writing Feedbackthebest2016 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Psychologist's statement that parents and teachers hold a paramount role to control children. IELTS
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|The Chart and information about global population, where China is the most densely populated state
5 - Hi Rere, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. To answer your question, "of which "...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 29, 2016
|Individuals can do nothing to change society
3 - On the other hand, a revolution started by minor or poor people who were recognized to be powerless ...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 27, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 27, 2016
|GRE prompt: Any information referred to be mistrusted, since it may prove false in the future.
Writing FeedbackROBINPHILIP - Apr 27, 2016 / ROBINPHILIP - Apr 29, 2016
|Email is a fast and convenient way to communicate, and written letters aren't needed anymore.
3 - the benefits of using emails outweigh TO THE drawbacks. THE more emails have sent, THE more trees would be...
Writing Feedbackspring1986 - Apr 27, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 29, 2016
|Our society has a growing trend of violent media which trigger people to act aggressively
4 - HI Nabila, I would like to share additional insights on your essay. I would like to focus on the...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 27, 2016
|Supporting artists and funding money on arts is not a waste and it's also very essential for society
2 - Hi Mostafa, I can see that you have received a comprehensive modification here on EF and I hope you...
Writing Feedbackm_kmp - Apr 27, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Home is defined as house and family together.
3 - My lovely family holds great ARE importance ENT TO in my life and IT consists of four members -...
Writing Feedbackchetan2010 - Apr 26, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 27, 2016
|IELTS ESSAY - alternative energy sources are too expensive
3 - Sorry justivy, I am finding some difficulties in understanding your suggestions. Raise and rise: aren't they synonyms? When...
Writing Feedbackmormontre - Apr 26, 2016 / mormontre - Apr 26, 2016
|The market sales of international mobile phone companies between 2005 and 2006
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 26, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 26, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work
5 - Well, ichan thank you for your clear explanations. In terms of 'both parent' I know that parent is consisted...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 26, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 27, 2016
|Pie chart - water used for different purposes in six wide territories all over the world.
Writing Feedbackdiepduong - Apr 25, 2016 / akmalnov - May 15, 2016
|Generating electricity from sea waves. IELTS Writing task 1- The process chart
Writing FeedbackKiraArus - Apr 24, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 26, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1:The diagrams below show the various kinds of water found on the earth...
3 - Hi Su, below are some additional insights to your analysis. - The pie charts gives athe detailed -...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 24, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent...
4 - Additionally, due to the proliferation and popularity of democratic ideology, dictatorship are IS no longer advocated and encouraged by...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 23, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 "Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world"
5 - hi Zizou, happy to read a good writing like yours. your grammar is very good, yet it is better...
Writing FeedbackZizou88 - Apr 22, 2016 / tria25 - May 1, 2016
|Intelligence is inborn or develop by learning? This essay will discuss both points of view.
2 - Hi Mimi, I probably think that the first 2 sentences are grammatically incorrect. (Talking about intelligence is showed the...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - Apr 22, 2016 / luseveiogo - Apr 23, 2016
|Task 2: Violence in Media Upgrade Hardness in Society?
5 - Hi Mimi, thanks for appreciating our work here on EF and I hope you continue to post your work...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|There is sufficient evidence to conclude that media promote violence to the society.
5 - Dear writer, I would say that your writing is really well done. It is someway between 7.5 and ...
Writing Feedbacktria25 - Apr 22, 2016 / mormontre - Apr 26, 2016
|Some people argue that intellectuality is given and cannot be changed
2 - So maybe it is my Brain not getting it but are you saying you agree with The Idea that..........
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - Apr 22, 2016 / GIjoefan1976 - Apr 22, 2016
|Is intelligence influenced by nature or learning?
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 22, 2016 / mormontre - Apr 26, 2016
|Cognitive ability is inbred brought by parents' genetic. Intelligence is innate or can be improved?
2 - Hi Nurtria, after reading your essay, I must say that it is fairly written, you were able to answer...
Writing Feedbacktria25 - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 22, 2016
|Task 2: Violence in the media promotes violence in society. To what extent do you agree?
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 22, 2016
|Opinion Editorial - The Rise of a Phoenix
9 - Wow, those are all great points. Some of those grammatical errors I didn't even notice. I'm taking everything suggested...
Writing FeedbackLlamaGod - Apr 22, 2016 / LlamaGod - May 21, 2016
|Majority of people are unaware that they are monitored by advancement of technology. IELTS TASK 2
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 23, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas
Writing Feedbackainirere - Apr 22, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 22, 2016
|There are 17 main stages invoked in the frozen fish pies manufacturing process; IELTS
7 - Thanks @Maya29, But, about the sentence "To remove skin and bones to garbage disposal, the salmons isthen entered to...
Writing FeedbackKiraArus - Apr 22, 2016 / KiraArus - Apr 22, 2016
|Ethnography Help for Anthropology- I wrote a Review and Need Help with Content and Editing
Writing Feedbackinkiepie - Apr 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 22, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army? ...
4 - HI Su, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I hope to review you revision soon. While...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|Trying to get into my dream school - essay on importance of having clean water
Writing FeedbackiSasha - Apr 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|Describe charts which give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women
4 - Hi unbreakable I feel difficult to understand your essay completely. I would like to give you some advices, and...
Writing Feedbackunbreakable - Apr 21, 2016 / Mimi07 - Apr 22, 2016
|Working as a volunteer after school time could be beneficial and mandatory.
3 - Hello Tran, here's some additional insights towards your essay. - Working as a volunteer after school time -...
Writing Feedbackantran1995 - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|When people are young, then parents education is the most important for them
4 - Hi Chang, You have given some valuable comments above. Please allow me to give you some suggestions to your...
Writing FeedbackB10204028 - Apr 20, 2016 / Maya29 - Apr 22, 2016
|In some places in the world, young people are not only richer but also safer... Ielts
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 20, 2016 / suxiaojing - Apr 21, 2016
|IELTS - land degradation problem. Some causes which negatively affect the fertility of lands
5 - Hi Mochtar, Thank you for your suggestion. I also found some words were repeated after reading it again....
Writing Feedbackyoyolot - Apr 20, 2016 / yoyolot - Apr 21, 2016
|Whether or not a factory should be built? New influence on your community.
NEW - A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and...
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|International communication online. Distance is not a main problem in connecting people anymore.
Writing Feedbackaviniwirastri - Apr 19, 2016 / ismawan - May 17, 2016
|"What is your greatest strength?" - it is not only a tough question, but also philosophy question.
5 - but for long meditation and journey of my thought I realized THAT it is not only a tough question,...
Writing FeedbackAlviusTinambunan - Apr 19, 2016 / ainirere - Apr 22, 2016
|Obesity due to high processed wheat
4 - hello writer, I notice that your writing is very good, yet there are some parts should be corrected as...
Writing Feedbackmormontre - Apr 19, 2016 / tria25 - Apr 22, 2016
|An introductory part of my essay writing practice.
6 - Hi Akbar, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, we definitely strive to provide accurate criticisms towards...
Writing Feedbackakbartaufiq25 - Apr 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|IELTS TASK2:Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success...
3 - Hi suxiaojing, your writing seems good. Here there are some suggestions to improve your score: Instead of saying: I...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - Apr 19, 2016 / mormontre - Apr 19, 2016
|Essay about learning languages - English precisely - which is the primary language in many countries
3 - I agree with the above that you have some issues in your writing. I recommend you to simplify your...
Writing FeedbackArej - Apr 19, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Apr 19, 2016
|The percentage of young people in the UK who choose to eat vegetarian diet over the past fifty years
2 - Hi Nabila, as seen in this analysis, you received a very comprehensive modification from our EF contributor and I...
Writing Feedbacknabila05 - Apr 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2016
|Ielts T2 - space programmes. Is funding those activities a wise choice?
4 - Hi,Mormontre: I would like to offer you some ideas: 1.exploring the universe satisfies the curiosities and interests...
Writing Feedbackmormontre - Apr 18, 2016 / suxiaojing - Apr 19, 2016
|IELTS T2 on birth rate and predominance of aging people in the demographics
2 - Hello mormontre I applied some adjustments to the text so that it sounds better: According [...] According...
Writing Feedbackmormontre - Apr 18, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Apr 19, 2016
|GRE Argument essay: Recall on pet food
Writing Feedbackjustooridoori - Apr 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2016
|Modern technology is now very common in most work places. What do you think about it?
Writing FeedbackBlackpain - Apr 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2016
|Free - tuition policy by University for luring new professors - argument response
3 - Hi Robin, as I read through your essay, I found out that there are some words that are either...
Writing FeedbackROBINPHILIP - Apr 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2016
|The impacts of technology in today's education system
3 - HI Xavier, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website essential to your essay writing...
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