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|Some people think that holding parties, wedding parties, birthday parties are waste of money
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Aug 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Students at school and universities learn more from lessons with teacher
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016 / quynh_12 - Aug 4, 2016
|This essay will give an answer on why we are in need of music (historical vs cosmopolitan)
6 - Hi. First of all, thank you for reading my feedback and paying enough attention to correct some mistakes. As...
Writing Feedbackrodiwo - Aug 4, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Aug 5, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: Many species close to endangered and we should protect only the beneficial animals
2 - Hi Mahdi, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph (introduction paragraph): - ...more funds have been allocated...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : Problem and solution about homecoming in Eid al-Fitri celebration
2 - Hi Mahdi, I think that your prompt is quite rare. This is my first time seeing Eid al-Fitri as...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 3, 2016
|The Heart-Breaking Truth about Exotic Pets and the Painful Journey They Take
Writing FeedbackTheHam - Aug 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|10 MOST EFFECTIVE STRATEGIES TO READ AND REMEMBER
Writing FeedbackBeatrice96 - Aug 2, 2016 / Beatrice96 - Aug 6, 2016
|IELTS Task 2:The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide.
4 - Hi Nguyen, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope that you will be able to participate more in...
Writing Feedbacklilykarry2109 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|IELTS Task 2: More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
2 - Hi Mahdi, below are my thoughts for your essay. Indeed, a growing number of people are buying cars...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|The benefit of safety in driving
5 - Hi Celestine, - Safe driving is very important for prevention ... Safety drive very important to prevent an...
Writing FeedbackCelestine - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
|TOFEL writing practice - Can teachers be both popular(students like them) and helpful to students?
Writing FeedbackChuyun - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 3, 2016
|Students going to college - essay correction; I am trying to improve my writting skills.
2 - Hi Ashkan, first of all, I don't see anything wrong with how you approach your first paragraph, however, in...
Writing FeedbackAshkan123 - Aug 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|Students to attend schools to learn or not?
5 - Hi adip, - Some people make an assumption that teaching children at home - whereas the other peoples...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 2, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 12, 2016
|If we use cell phones in the right way, they will become the most efficient tool in this modern life
3 - Hello. First of all, I really enjoyed reading you essay. I think you have a good basis in terms...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Aug 1, 2016 / rodiwo - Aug 2, 2016
|Students who only learn from books and never practice, in reality hardly find any jobs.
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 31, 2016 / p_leighton - Aug 1, 2016
|Some people believe that governments should pay for healthcare and education, but others disagree..
Writing Feedbackbestjery - Jul 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 1, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 Three categories of crimes in a particular city, 1984-2009.
5 - Hello Risty, I am very glad to see you again in EF. Otherwise, I see your essay become better...
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 31, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|The problems that appear if using personal vehicle and the best way to solve it
2 - Hi Puja, nice to meet you here. This is my some corrections: - Transport facilities is basic need...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jul 31, 2016 / Risty01 - Jul 31, 2016
|To the Office of Student Financial Aid: writing to appeal the loss of my Gold Scholarship
Writing FeedbackDevo7 - Jul 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Sweatshop about clothing and a child does not have education, workers very poor and get low wages
3 - Hi Wendy, first of all, in this essay, I can definitely feel that you are somehow furious, furious of...
Writing FeedbackWendy Li - Jul 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 2, 2016
|IELTS: TASK 1 ACADEMIC MODULE DEGREES GRANTED IN DIFFERENT FIELDS AT THE NATIONAL UNIVERSITY
5 - Hello Daniel, I am very glad to see other person who has same interest about IELTS. More over, your...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 3, 2016
|People face far greater risks in our modern way of life than they did in the past
3 - The correction you made is just about grammar and linking ideas. However, the topic requires you to show "any...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12 - Jul 30, 2016 / nguyendinhtuong - Jul 31, 2016
|Cars, apart of the private transportation, has recently sold to many people in developing countries.
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 30, 2016
|The public transportation overflow in modern countries is causing number of negative effects
3 - Hi Adip. Here is my feedback. It is very sensible of you to have written two paragraphs in the...
Writing Feedbackadip - Jul 30, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Jul 30, 2016
|Lofty tax and significant improvement of public transportation as a solution for too many cars
2 - Greetings Mr. Defry, Just share something that come up in my mind, don't forget to correct me if I...
Writing FeedbackDefryerwinsyah13 - Jul 30, 2016 / ramzi06 - Jul 30, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : People in poorer countries are buying cars. What are the problems? Any solutions?
3 - Hi grintdevereaux30, I have some suggestions, and please correct me when I make some mistakes. this is your...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Jul 29, 2016 / adip - Jul 30, 2016
|Too many cars create problems and the State, also even society should work to solve this
Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Jul 29, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Jul 29, 2016
|More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?
4 - Hi molly, Therefore, I believe collaboration governmentgovernment's collaboration with the ... Moreover, the direct impact of this is...
Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Jul 29, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
|Essay about Four elements of good writing
Writing Feedbackhuyennd - Jul 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 4, 2016
|Having an outstanding career and satisfying family life are the main desires of all human beings
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|The younger children need some help from their parents to complete their homework efficiently; IELTS
5 - I would like to say thank you for appreciating my feedback above. It is nice to see the fighting...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 29, 2016
|In my opinion, managing and maintaining interpersonal relations is the most important skill nowadays
2 - Hi Payal, here's my analysis of your essay. 1st paragraph: - To some, success means earning huge amounts...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jul 28, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|An essay about how to write a good paragraph
Writing Feedbackhuyennd - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?
4 - -In an enterprise, everybody has the desire offor a promotion; itwhich is every employee's dream. -Therefore, most organizations have...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL. Summarize a reading and listening passage.
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 29, 2016
|Whether it should be compulsory for high school students to wear uniforms or not - it's the question
5 - Hi Minh, I'm glad to help you edit some mistakes in your essay: [b]beneficial for their performance not beneficial...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99 - Jul 27, 2016 / quynh_12 - Jul 31, 2016
|The table shows the the demand for bananas and coffee in 5 countries over a 6 year period
Writing FeedbackKaterina0686 - Jul 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening ,and what
8 - Hi, Rudi Thanks for your suggestion on my essay, I really appreciate it, So, Here my some corrections: ...
Writing Feedbackrodiwo - Jul 27, 2016 / Risty01 - Jul 30, 2016
|IELTS: People do unhealthy activities. Why and give solutions.
3 - Hi Keely, it is really nice to see that finally the moderator in this forum release your account from...
Writing Feedbackkantyjang - Jul 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 29, 2016
|IELTS Task2: Children are forced to study even their leisure time. Is that a good practice?
5 - Hi. Here is my opinion Pressure is a noun. You should say:may parents put pressure on their children to...
Writing FeedbackFreeman_ps1983 - Jul 27, 2016 / huynhngocminh99 - Jul 31, 2016
|In many countries of the world few people earn extremely high salary
8 - Furthermore, we should ensure that money doesn't does not lie in hands of ... In academic writing...
Writing Feedbacksinchana - Jul 27, 2016 / Iforsa - Sep 4, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2.Q.INCREASE AIR TICKET PRICE TO REDUCE AIR TRAFFIC
4 - The salad days of third millennium has seen Although there are few arguments in favour , I am of...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Jul 26, 2016 / eddies - Jul 28, 2016
|First trial of IELTS writing test sample (Task 1) before the real IELTS
6 - You got a point there, Ivy. My biggest obstacle is to transfer the concept from my mind into the...
Writing Feedbackabstracism - Jul 26, 2016 / abstracism - Jul 29, 2016
|IELTS: SHOULD PARENTS HELP CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOMEWORK OR NOT?
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 26, 2016 / Daniel1998 - Jul 28, 2016
|Everyone should receive education on a field which is totally interested, without any gender barrier
3 - Hi View, well, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website to be helpful as...
Writing FeedbackWeevil - Jul 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 26, 2016
|Immigrants from rural to urban areas: Effects and Solutions.
3 - Hi Nguyen, I would like to try to assess you based on IELTS writing band descriptor of task 2....
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248 - Jul 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 28, 2016
|Essay about work/life balance IELTS TASK 2
4 - Hai timea I think you didn't spend enough time to analyze and understand the question. The question clearly asks...
Writing FeedbackTimeaL - Jul 25, 2016 / jobymonpj - Jul 26, 2016
|COLLEGEAPP: Assume that 're in a position of leadership in your country and write an academic Essay
3 - Hi Mark, I can see that you have the most comprehensive feedback here from one of our EF contributors...
Writing Feedbackmarkcho0106 - Jul 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 25, 2016
|The protection for endangered animal species and your opinions.
7 - Hi Nguyen, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and you can be rest assured that we...
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248 - Jul 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Do you agree with the saying: "Traveling broadens your minds" ?
4 - No Worries at all Ho and thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, rest assured that we...
Writing Feedbackthphuong1911 - Jul 25, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 26, 2016
|The Internet provides us many valuable things but also cause some problems; IELTS task
4 - Hi Yingying, welcome to EF! :) To avoid confusion, I reckon that for the next practice you need...
Writing Feedbackmessityy - Jul 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 3, 2016
|Fresh tea leaves picking is the first step of manufacturing black tea; IELTS diagram
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Jul 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 25, 2016
|IELTS Task 1 essay practice - Population Distribution in two different countries, two different year
4 - Both forecast and forecasted are correct. I think it is more appropriate to use either elderly people or simply...
Writing Feedbackfatmajanna - Jul 24, 2016 / Daniel1998 - Jul 24, 2016
|IELTS Academic Writing task 2 - The Person Who Should Teach Children
Writing FeedbackRadhiyahFahra - Jul 23, 2016 / Laraib - Jul 25, 2016
|IELTS: VIOLENCE SHOWN ON TV AND IN THE CINEMA MIGHT EXPLAIN YOUNG PEOPLE'S VIOLENT BEHAVIOUR
4 - ... this unpleasant phenomenon ought to be taken so that to reduce the amount of violence faced by our...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 23, 2016 / giangnt248 - Jul 24, 2016
|[ielts Task 2] Increasing global demand of oil and gas, should continue explore?
2 - Hi yon959, your essay is very well for both skeleton and supporting ideas. However, I have some minor comments...
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Jul 23, 2016 / Freeman_ps1983 - Jul 23, 2016
|IELTS; To read or not to read: That is a question - can we learn that way about a foreign country?
2 - but this approach is really suitable for everyone : However is this the best way for... yet for someone...
Writing FeedbackVictoria1015 - Jul 23, 2016 / madmoiselle - Jul 24, 2016
|GRE Argument:"WWAC radio station..."
2 - ... likely to choose the Internet rather than the radio station to meet their needs. ... radio station which...
Writing Feedbacksunshinelyb - Jul 23, 2016 / Victoria1015 - Jul 23, 2016
|It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm the friendship. Do you agree?
3 - Hi, Payal, I think you did not directly answer the question properly (maybe I am wrong). The question...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jul 22, 2016 / yon959 - Jul 23, 2016
|IELTS: WHETHER TRAVELLING AND WORKING ABROAD ARE THE ONLY REASONS TO LEARN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE OR NOT
2 - Hi, Here is my feedback: Consequently, it significantly increases their chances of getting a well-paying----. well paid and...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998 - Jul 22, 2016 / payal1982 - Jul 22, 2016
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