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|The problem of gender equality in universities admissions has recently raised the public's awareness
Writing Feedbackeilychow - May 9, 2016 / justivy03 - May 9, 2016
|"Wealthy nations should maintain the wealth of poorer nations by supplying them food"
2 - Maxim, at first, you need to write your title clearly. This will help us to check whether this is...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 8, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 10, 2016
|In the recent years, children behavioural problems have dramatically propelled.
8 - @justivy03 Thank you for your kind advice and views. I will continue to post essays and provide helpful feedbacks...
Writing FeedbackTheodore - May 8, 2016 / Theodore - May 15, 2016
|Disadvantage of working until late and then sleep very late night.
2 - Hi Kritsada, let me share my suggestions to your writing here.. Firstly, I appreciate your idea that has been...
Writing Feedbackkritsada_sim - May 8, 2016 / pebzna12 - May 15, 2016
|The maps indicate the changes of the village in Stokeford in two specific year of 1930 and 2010.
Writing Feedbackdama - May 8, 2016 / justivy03 - May 14, 2016
|Energy usage in Australia; proportion of House Equipment Category / greenhouse gas emissions
4 - Hi Furqanda, a warm welcome to you from essay from. Actually, im interested in your title, so I come...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11 - May 8, 2016 / patricrioo - May 17, 2016
|TOEFL: The earth has witnessed drastic changes since human springs into existence. Our harmed planet
3 - Hi Tran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, you are one lucky student who have found this website, it...
Writing FeedbackAngeloApollo - May 8, 2016 / justivy03 - May 9, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems
6 - Hi madmoiselle ,, thank you for ur feedback Majority of the cities have been developingflourishingrapidly recently. This growing, leads...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 8, 2016 / radhiyah_fahra - May 9, 2016
|Some historical events caused many effects on my country and forced people to change their behavior
3 - Hi MaximKlopunov99, Thanks for your help, which is very useful for me :) the words "occupying the legislature"...
Writing Feedbackyoue - May 8, 2016 / youe - May 8, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - A hundred years ago, people thought that the human race was steadily improving
5 - Hi Rere, I think your idea has been developed well and understandable. I just suggest you to do...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 8, 2016 / pebzna12 - May 15, 2016
|The distribution of population in three areas of the Northwest region - IELTS 1
Writing FeedbackNourNour - May 7, 2016 / justivy03 - May 9, 2016
|Growing numbers of people tend to buy things in supermarkets rather than at small, local stores.
4 - hello writer, you have done well in this writing. please allow me to give my insights here. it...
Writing FeedbackMike Wong - May 7, 2016 / tria25 - May 10, 2016
|'knowledge, entertainment, skills' - Watching television by kids may be profitable for them.
2 - Hi Kritsada, here's my take on the first two paragraph of your essay. - Some people believe that...
Writing Feedbackkritsada_sim - May 7, 2016 / justivy03 - May 11, 2016
|IELTS 2: young people are more creative than older people in business or in the workplace
4 - hello Hain, your writing is really good in grammar and you present many less common words in it. It...
Writing Feedbackhain3dessay - May 7, 2016 / tria25 - May 10, 2016
|TOEFL- Young people today are independent on their parents?
3 - they always ask for their friends' advice first,for they have the same life style I think this sentence...
Writing FeedbackVictoria1015 - May 7, 2016 / Minh Chau - May 10, 2016
|TV programmes Australian viewers charts - IELTS (Task 1)
3 - Hi Mochtar, Concerning the introduction, I have checked several ielts books and youtube videos even the ielts website,...
Writing FeedbackNourNour - May 6, 2016 / NourNour - May 7, 2016
|The percentage of non-working females in England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland - IELTS 1
2 - Nour, if you keep doing this, I am afraid that it will be harmful towards your band score. You...
Writing FeedbackNourNour - May 6, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 6, 2016
|The pie charts compare the percentages of different age groups in the population of Yemen and Italy,
9 - Hy, Tyler. The first part should present the introduction obviously. There are two parts of introduction: 1. What...
Writing Feedbacktyler1234 - May 6, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 15, 2016
|Solving the environmental problem can positively influence people's health
2 - Hi Victoria,first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we do hope that this is the start of...
Writing FeedbackVictoria1015 - May 6, 2016 / justivy03 - May 6, 2016
|If sports facilities can contribute to people's health or not, has always been a controversial issue
5 - Hello, I would like to share some of my thoughts about your essay. 1.(From a religious point of...
Writing Feedbacktyler1234 - May 6, 2016 / Theodore - May 10, 2016
|Many people think it is important to protect environment, but they make no effort on it themselves
3 - Hi Rere, here's another take on your essay. -is a humaneverybody's obligation, - yet itthis is absolutely important...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / justivy03 - May 6, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The hierarchical structure in a marketing company
5 - 1. Then, the third is who fills the position of anas advertising executive , he is Mr. Gartner. ...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / NourNour - May 7, 2016
|The Disappearance of Nurses. Nursing Essay as to why nurses are fleeing from the medical field
2 - Hi Daylin, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website useful to...
Writing FeedbackDaylin - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|Task 2: Limited water resources in the woldwide
2 - Hi Maya, you have a good essay, however i have some corrections for this. I firmly believe that...
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 5, 2016 / madmoiselle - May 6, 2016
|Classes in Education - who should do the talking? Edit my TOEFL writing
3 - Hi Qin, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope that you find this website credible...
Writing Feedbackqinwei0515 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|In my way of thinking, children attending to private schools is reasonable idea. IELTS 2
4 - Xiao, I notice that there is no thesis statement in your essay. This is dangerous, and therefore you will...
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 27, 2016
|Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach young persons how to be a good parent
3 - Hi,Azi: I'd like to give you some suggestions. Firstly--Nowadays learning process mostly occur at schools so it...
Writing Feedbackad_ei - May 5, 2016 / suxiaojing - May 5, 2016
|'substantial growth in both Petrol and Oil, and Coal'; Comparison of four different types of fuels
Writing Feedbacknana77 - May 5, 2016 / Maya29 - May 5, 2016
|To have several careers and then further education will be something that continues throughout life?
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - Nowadays, a lot of charities and organizations have set up a number of days name
3 - Hi Rere, with this particular essay, I must say that I enjoyed reading it, aside from the very minor...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The earth's atmosphere level and its relevant data are illustrated in the diagram.
6 - Hi Rere, As you can see, your essay is adequately understandable. There are few words in introductory...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 5, 2016 / akmalnov - May 14, 2016
|IELTS TASK2 essay: Should animals be treated equally as human because they have the rights?
2 - Dear nana77, I really liked your essay and I think you will ace your IELTS examination. You've respected 4...
Writing Feedbacknana77 - May 5, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016
|IELTS TASK 1 - The annual rainfall in Victoria and Washington
6 - Hy amour, Here are some suggestions The charts compares annual rainfall in two different cities in North...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 4, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - May 14, 2016
|IELTS; Youngsters have got little spare time and they are much under of pressure to study hard.
2 - youngsters have [got] little spare time don't use got in formal writing just say have instead are much...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 4, 2016 / ad_ei - May 4, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - An American film actor once said: "tomorrow is the most important thing in life"
2 - Hi Helene, after reading and understanding your essay, I must say it's quiet weak, the introduction for instance, it's...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 4, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|Yes, we need money to have a more comfortable life, but it is also the root of all evil.
Writing Feedbackmeral - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|Eight stages process of consumer goods manufacturing.
Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|IETLS 2: Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackLinhTinh - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|The hiring process of a company is depicted in the flow chart - five steps
2 - Hi Helene, this analysis is one of the most comprehensive ones I read so far today, I believe the...
Writing Feedbackamour - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|The body weight Bob and John, IELTS TASK 1
Writing Feedbackamour - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 4, 2016
|This is report to describe the process of collecting information for the weather forecast
5 - Hi Maxim, it is our pleasure to be able to help you with all your writing article, there's nothing...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 3, 2016 / justivy03 - May 4, 2016
|Advertisement (being volunteer to take part in expedition)
3 - Dear sir or madame, I'm writing this letterto volunteer to take part by volunteering in the conversation expedition...
Writing Feedbacklearn english34 - May 3, 2016 / amour - May 3, 2016
|In the UK teaching personnel continues to be female-dominated at children's schools.
3 - Sorry about that mate, here is the necessary image. I would appreciate if you could give me a rough...
Writing Feedbacktyler1234 - May 2, 2016 / tyler1234 - May 3, 2016
|What are the reasons of poverty? It influences hundreds of millions of people around the world.
2 - Hi Jurny, I hope you are finding this website to be helpful in your essay and writing projects. We...
Writing Feedbackjurny - May 2, 2016 / justivy03 - May 2, 2016
|Task 2 -IELTS- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong..
3 - They are strongly requested to instill confidence and self-respect to them whereas (,) physical punishment completely damages their self-esteem....
Writing Feedbackmersad - May 2, 2016 / amour - May 3, 2016
|What I want to change in my university is to expand the library
Writing FeedbackYoki - May 2, 2016 / youe - May 3, 2016
|Reasons why adults decide to study and why such education should be shared
4 - Hi Maxim Thank you for your helpful feedback for my essay which was TASK2 of IELTS. I suppose...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 2, 2016 / nana77 - May 5, 2016
|Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Playing games teaches us about life.
Writing FeedbackNahid87 - May 1, 2016 / Nahid87 - May 6, 2016
|The principal function of state is to give a good education and healthcare to everyone in country
NEW - Q: All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do...
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|"Big Cat or Tall Story?" - A newspaper article for the local newspaper based on visit to the moor.
Writing Feedbacksamuelchangjian - May 1, 2016 / TJLuschen - May 2, 2016
|English is no longer a foreign language; it is now a global language. IELTS TASK 2.
7 - hi bottles, let me give you some comments. to answer agree / disagree question, like many comments above,...
Writing Feedbackbottles - May 1, 2016 / aviniwirastri - May 12, 2016
|The high cost of leaving belongs to the largest drawbacks of Fairmont Island. IELTS
3 - Hi Mimi, I'd like to share additional insights to your analysis. - ofin Fairmont Island, - according to...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|The cost of schooling and healthcare should be paid by the government - free access for all people
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / Mimi07 - May 1, 2016
|Task 2: Education and healthcare should be funded by the government
NEW - Question : All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent...
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|Task 1 IELTS: the comparison of common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 1, 2016
|The percentage of visitors in an Australian zoo, library, theater, and cinema
2 - Hi Nurtria, I would like to help you out with your analysis. Overall,it is a good analysis, you...
Writing Feedbacktria25 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|The number of places visited by three types different people living in Australia
3 - - by three types different people - It is noticeable that the cinema - favourite places by - places...
Writing FeedbackMimi07 - May 1, 2016 / justivy03 - May 3, 2016
|Task 1: The proportion of the advantages and disadvatages of Fairmont Island
2 - Maya, I would like to try to assess you based on writing band descriptors of IELTS task 1. Firstly,...
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 1, 2016
|Task 1: The comparison of Australian residents who visit four different public places
Writing FeedbackMaya29 - May 1, 2016 / akmalnov - May 15, 2016
|Some individuals believe that the primary goal of universities is to provide information and skills
NEW - Some individuals believe that the primary goal of universities should be to provide information and skills for needed for...
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