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The percentage of kinds of transport used and the reasoning behind the use of a vehicle in Edmonton

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IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - The Ratio of the Highest Education Level of Women in 1945 and 1995

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IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - The Comparison of Montly Expenditures in Australia between 1991 and 2001

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IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - The Comparison of Number of Visitors between 2 New Music Wesites

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IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - How many people used 3 major airports in NYC during their travel?

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Nowadays computers are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes...

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The number of user who access differently to the two new music sites - IELTS Writing Task 1

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The bar chart illustrates the figure for tourists travelling through three major airports in NYC

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The number of visits to two new music sites on the web

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IELTS Task 1 (Practice) - The Proportion of Tourists Visited Four Different Attractions in Brighton

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Some attractions in England - which were the most popular?

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The ratio of holidaymaker who visit Brighton attractions in England - IELTS Writing Task 1

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Some people believe that it is impossible to help all people in need around

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TOEFL- reading newspapers and magazines is the best way to learn a foreign country?

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IELTS (ESSAY) - Education topic (universal and special education)

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Books? Knowledge gained from experiences is more practical, effective and fun.

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. WRITING TASK 1.

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I have several reasons to agree that the car-using will decrease in the future. TOEFL essay

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Task 2: The increase on crime rate and how to tackle it

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Task 2: Alternative energy installation is more expensive than conventional energy

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Children after-school activities are becoming a source of debate amongst educationalists nowadays

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Task 2: Obesity is a major health problem in the world

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The crime rate can be minimalised if government and individuals find the solution.

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IELTS TASK 2: People think that the news media has influenced people's lives nowadays...

Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 11, 2016
Replacing the fossil fuel energy for other - ecological sources is too expensive undertaking

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Obesity problem should be tackled by applying health diet and doing exercise regularly.

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Is modern life better for human?

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TASK 2-IELTS CAMBRIDGE 9- Some experts believe that it is better for children

Writing Feedbackmersad - May 9, 2016 / justivy03 - May 9, 2016
The problem of gender equality in universities admissions has recently raised the public's awareness

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"Wealthy nations should maintain the wealth of poorer nations by supplying them food"

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In the recent years, children behavioural problems have dramatically propelled.

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Disadvantage of working until late and then sleep very late night.

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The maps indicate the changes of the village in Stokeford in two specific year of 1930 and 2010.

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Energy usage in Australia; proportion of House Equipment Category / greenhouse gas emissions

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TOEFL: The earth has witnessed drastic changes since human springs into existence. Our harmed planet

Writing FeedbackAngeloApollo - May 8, 2016 / justivy03 - May 9, 2016
IELTS TASK 2 - The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems

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Some historical events caused many effects on my country and forced people to change their behavior

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IELTS TASK 2 - A hundred years ago, people thought that the human race was steadily improving

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The distribution of population in three areas of the Northwest region - IELTS 1

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Growing numbers of people tend to buy things in supermarkets rather than at small, local stores.

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'knowledge, entertainment, skills' - Watching television by kids may be profitable for them.

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IELTS 2: young people are more creative than older people in business or in the workplace

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TOEFL- Young people today are independent on their parents?

Writing FeedbackVictoria1015 - May 7, 2016 / Minh Chau - May 10, 2016
TV programmes Australian viewers charts - IELTS (Task 1)

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The percentage of non-working females in England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland - IELTS 1

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The pie charts compare the percentages of different age groups in the population of Yemen and Italy,

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Solving the environmental problem can positively influence people's health

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If sports facilities can contribute to people's health or not, has always been a controversial issue

Writing Feedbacktyler1234 - May 6, 2016 / Theodore - May 10, 2016
Many people think it is important to protect environment, but they make no effort on it themselves

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / justivy03 - May 6, 2016
IELTS TASK 1 - The hierarchical structure in a marketing company

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 6, 2016 / NourNour - May 7, 2016
The Disappearance of Nurses. Nursing Essay as to why nurses are fleeing from the medical field

Writing FeedbackDaylin - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
Task 2: Limited water resources in the woldwide

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Classes in Education - who should do the talking? Edit my TOEFL writing

Writing Feedbackqinwei0515 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
In my way of thinking, children attending to private schools is reasonable idea. IELTS 2

Writing Feedbacksuxiaojing - May 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - May 27, 2016
Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach young persons how to be a good parent

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'substantial growth in both Petrol and Oil, and Coal'; Comparison of four different types of fuels

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To have several careers and then further education will be something that continues throughout life?

Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016 / justivy03 - May 20, 2016
IELTS TASK 2 - Nowadays, a lot of charities and organizations have set up a number of days name

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IELTS TASK 1 - The earth's atmosphere level and its relevant data are illustrated in the diagram.

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - May 5, 2016 / akmalnov - May 14, 2016
IELTS TASK2 essay: Should animals be treated equally as human because they have the rights?

Writing Feedbacknana77 - May 5, 2016 / MaximKlopunov99 - May 5, 2016

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