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|The elusive demographic bonus - boon or bust?
2 - Hi Yusuf. These are my corrections to develop your summary better. the future boomingpopulution POPULATION? What sort of...
Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 19, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 20, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 : People can Only be Happy if They Have a Job They Really Enjoy
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|Having a job that you love doing make you happier - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
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|Can people be happy only if they have a passionate job?
2 - Hi hirani03 I have some suggestions for you. I hope it will help you to develop your writing skill....
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 19, 2016 / tyar32 - Aug 20, 2016
|Indonesia marks Independence Day by sinking illegal ships
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|Writing essay - Television advertising brings considerable problems for children
Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 Make A Hobby Become A Job
3 - Hi Farida, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Many people maketurn their hobbies - become theirinto...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|e-Commerce of Retail Sectors in Canada - IELTS Task 1
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 19, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 19, 2016
|Growth in number of Indonesia businesses slowing down in last decade
6 - Hi Harry, - Business is pivotal sector for the developing country like Indonesia. - ... there were 9.3...
Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 19, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016
|Task 1 Trends of Reader Boys And Girls in Starmouth School
2 - Hallo farida, i will give you several feedbacks. I hope that it will useful for you to make a...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 19, 2016
|Education in India: Are students failing or the system?
2 - Hello Eka, here some suggestions for you : - Sonam Wangchuk, is an engineer, he went to Ladakh...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016 / dinafayna04 - Aug 19, 2016
|Technology in education: Disadvantages (people rely too much on computers)
2 - Hi Siti, the detailed descriptions below are my remarks toward your essay development. I hope you can follow through...
Writing Feedbackonji09 - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|Emissions if Cows Keep Cutting the Cheese?
2 - Hi Eka, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph: - Amount of methane come from respiration and...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|Writing----should TV advertising directed towards young children be allowed?
2 - Hi Lansium, - The speaker put forward a firm statement that that no advertising (...) age ranging from...
Writing FeedbackLansium - Aug 19, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016
|History of the Circus (Summarize)
2 - Hello I applied some stylistic adjustments to your text so that it sounds better: There has [...]...
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Aug 19, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 19, 2016
|The percentage of individuals holding on science categories in Malaysia and Singapore
3 - Let me rewrite the introduction ... A breakdown of the the number of people who are holding science...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 19, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 19, 2016
|Malaysia and Singapore - there are resemblances in the percentage of people's science qualifications
4 - Hi Khatar, Let me help you to rewrite your introduction : The bar chart gives information about the...
Writing FeedbackKhatarizNS - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 22, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Agreement or Disagreement of Saving Money Rather Than Paying Tax
4 - Hi Faiza, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be...
Writing FeedbackFaizatin Nadya R - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2016
|How can we speak powerfully to make change in the world?
6 - Hi ramzi, - The speaker believeS that - ... to serious introspection on ourself.ourselves. -He argueS that there...
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 24, 2016
|TOEFL Independent Task - Should children be allowed to have smartphones.
Writing Feedbacktung2011 - Aug 18, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 19, 2016
|TED : How tress talk each other
3 - Hi , maybe i'd like to give a try to give some suggestion. Suzanne has investigated forest for...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 19, 2016
|Time Summary: Russia and Iran Fly Across a Key Threshold in the Middle East
3 - Hello Sony. I am very keen on reading your summary. This has been free of the major errors grammatically....
Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|It is irrefutable that there's a difference between living in a small town and in a large city
3 - hi.. This is true in certain in some ways,whereas in other ways,it is similarly. it shoul be better...
Writing Feedbacktuyetanh134 - Aug 18, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016
|TED talks: My underwater robot for ocean exploration.
Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 19, 2016
|Summary TED Chinese Zodiac by Shao Lan
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|"8 Beauty Products Safe to Share" - Summary Article
2 - Hi Hikuma. I have seen your writing. Actually, you show the better result for the writing skill. You are...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Racial Inequality in U.K. Is Getting Worse, Report Finds
2 - Hi Azmi, I would like to go straightforward to check and give my best feedback in this article summary....
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|Recently, a wide range of television talent programs become renowned in general community.
2 - hi miss sofi i found that you have problems with noun phrase a rigorous selection process succeed a...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 19, 2016
|Several televised talent shows have their own purpose to reach. IELTS WRITING TASK 2
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
|Summary an Article Best Trails to People Who Do Not Like Hiking
2 - Hi Farida. I appreciate your effort because you wanna provide your time to improve your English. Let me give...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|The talent show is one of shows that get many enthusiasm of spectators.
3 - Television programs in this day have become more varied. ... but in my view, talent shows has most influenced...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 20, 2016
|Exhibiting ability in front of television becomed popular among citizens all around the world
2 - Hi Atikah, below are thoughts on your essay, I hope the corrections will enhance your essay and be ready...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Science Qualification in Malaysia and Singapore - IELTS Task 1
5 - aloha Dyna, here is my suggestion for you 1st paragraph ... the qualifications of people who hold(you'd...
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 18, 2016 / bung ilham - Aug 19, 2016
|At the present time, the televised talent show are famous programs in many countries.
2 - Hi, fadhilah ! here are several my suggestions Television show needs more interesting program to entertain every person.(in...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / jomul01 - Aug 18, 2016
|SUMMARY : How Netted Birds Can Actually Help Conservation
3 - Hi Sofi, below are my thoughts and enhancements on your summary. - elaborates relating to how netted birds...
Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Summary TED's : art make unusual stuff
4 - HI Adi.. this is one of the good summaries because I get the information clearly. However, I am going...
Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|The breakdown of the number of dwellers who are elderly people in Great Britain (1985-2035)
2 - Hi Reza, here's my analysis towards your essay. 1st paragraph: - TheA breakdown of the information about the...
Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 18, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 19, 2016
|The Proportion of Population Aged 65 and over in the United Kingdom - IELTS Task 1
3 - Hi. you wrote writing task 1 IELTS properly, however,I have some advice to enhance you score... here...
Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 18, 2016 / andika_soppeng - Aug 18, 2016
|Why More People Than Ever Are Donating Their Bodies to Science
4 - hai hary this some suggestions from me : Recently, donating the body after deathdeath body to science...
Writing FeedbackHary01 - Aug 18, 2016 / Riandi31 - Aug 19, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 Talent show : Best way to find Talented People Or Just Entertainment?
4 - Many people enjoyto watching talent shows and that is the reason why it has becomes more popular right now....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 20, 2016
|The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions
4 - Hi Ilham, Let me help you to make an introductory paragraph, The bar graph illustrates data on people...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 18, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 18, 2016
|The road was by far the most popular of four means of transport; delivery goods by pipeline was rare
4 - Hi Jenlisa, below are additional suggestions to enhance your analysis. First of all, when writing, don't forget the minor...
Writing Feedbackjenlisa - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|How to improve photography skills on your phone
2 - dear @bbcheesecake14, here are some corrections for your essay. let me start from the first paragraph, i think...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / riaerizal11 - Aug 18, 2016
|Nowadays, information and communication technology are really important in education
3 - Hi Cheese! facilitate the to study => I'm sorry, I can't understand the meaning of this phrase. :(...
Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 18, 2016
|Is it an appropriate way to learn foreign language by children at an early age, or not?
2 - hi brano, i'll give you some correction for your essay a tendency of receiving informlationinformation thisthese period children...
Writing FeedbackBRANOO - Aug 18, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2- Write an essay on environment conservation and challenges.
3 - hiii smith i love your summary, here some suggestion for you to strengthen your summary... In the recent Paris...
Writing Feedbacktwid - Aug 18, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 - More and more works is done by the machines.
2 - Hi Rere, upon reviewing the essay, I must say is is written comprehensively thorough, it has all the necessary...
Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 18, 2016
|TED talk: Non-violence struggle by Jamila Raqiib.
2 - Hi Fadhillah.. Please, you meet these corrections, and those make you sure to be better. in the world....
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|Summary: Herpes infections are worse if contracted at the end of the day
2 - Hello Fadhilahumar91 I've read your summary. These are some corrections for you :) First Paragraph Herpes is a...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 21, 2016
|Podcast Summary: Educate The Young Women To Be Brave Than To Be Perfect
2 - This podcast is from Rashma Saujani, 2016 who started their story fromthat based on her true story. she was...
Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 18, 2016 / madmoiselle - Aug 18, 2016
|We need to recognize problems in this technological era to minimize bad influence on our social life
3 - Hi Fadhilahumar91, I try to correct your writing. Feeling free to discuss :) First Paragraph. TechnologyTechnological era has...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
|Most argue that the advance of electronic communication is harmful towards human interpersonal skill
3 - Halo, Miss Ilmi Your Introduction: The way how people interact each other ... Basically, I have another...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016 / nida26 - Aug 18, 2016
|Writing Task 1 (unit 3 Workbook CECI) Survey about the essential of communication skill for job
4 - Hello, Ziad. Here some suggestions for your writing. From(you can use with regards to or to begin with)...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016
|The Panama Pepers exposed a huge global problem
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 18, 2016
|Why genetic research must be more diserve (Ted Talks by Keolu Fox) - Summary
2 - Hi Ashela.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am very keen on reading your writing. Actually, it is a good...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
|What skill does everyone need? According to the speaker, it should be addressed to listening skill.
Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016
|Scientific research revealed that there is an abnormal leisure time situation
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Aug 17, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 17, 2016
|Writing Task 2 (unit 2 Workbook CECI) Healthy lifestyle for some people in modern world
2 - Hello ZiadRasyid24 You should consider doing a bit more reading in English - this should help you to...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
|"One Second Everyday" - Summary TED talks
2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied some adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written. They are...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
|Honey-bee Colonies and The Production of Honey - IELTS Task 1
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