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|Essay about recording keeping through video or witing
Writing FeedbackDinesh123 - Jul 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 6, 2016
|Being a celebrity: a dream or a nightmare?
9 - Hi Majd, I hope to provide you further enhancement for your essay. - Generally, fame is usually( yo...
Writing FeedbackNarelS - Jun 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 5, 2016
|[ielts Task 2 ] International Travel and Mass Media ease people learning other countries
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Jun 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 1, 2016
|Many people think that regions affect successful person. State your opinion.
5 - Hi! I personally think that you could give more examples in this article. It is very good that you...
Writing Feedbacktwid - Jun 30, 2016 / Titus14 - Jul 6, 2016
|Environment; Let me know if this issue essay of GRE is proper or not and rate on the scale of 1 to 6
3 - HI Divya, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we aim to provide you with helpful and...
Writing Feedbackbldivya5 - Jun 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2016
|Eating at home has many advantages; it's safer for us because we know what we are going to cook
4 - Hi Quan, WLECOME to the Essay Forum Team, I'm glad every time we welcome new members of this wonderful...
Writing FeedbackSlimeTim - Jun 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2016
|'console games became the least popular': The global sales of different types of digital games IELTS
3 - Hi Chou, here's another take for your essay. - The bar chart illustrates the four different - All...
Writing Feedbackcc71268 - Jun 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|Differences in the universal trend in using water for 3 distinct purposes over a period of 100 years
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2016
|(TOEFL) Are people earning a lot of money qualified as a successful person?
3 - Hi Elisa, here's another take on your essay. By the way, before I get started, I just want to...
Writing Feedbackelisa27 - Jun 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|IELTS: Social Networking Good or Bad to children? The high rate of internet usage concerns people.
5 - Thanks for your guidance! I will take care of my careless mistakes on both spelling and grammatical error...
Writing Feedbackahfish - Jun 27, 2016 / ahfish - Jul 13, 2016
|More studying means a better education. IELTS Writing #2 - Boarding schools vs Day schools
2 - Naomi, I would like to try to asses your writing based on IELTS writing task 2 band descriptors. There...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 29, 2016
|Some people concede that life was superior in major avenues 100 years ago.
4 - Hi Azamat, I can see that you have posted several essays in this forum. I think that you've already...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98 - Jun 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jul 2, 2016
|A good leader needs to have clearly defined principles and should not change his beliefs
Writing Feedbackyoue - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|People in the UK above the age of 4, who chose either listen to the radio or watch TV during one day
4 - Hi Naomi, aside from knowing the difference between task 1 and task 2, you also have to know the...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|Mankind hinges today on the advancement of technology and most people are lost without it
3 - Hi Virel, indeed, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope this is just the beginning of a great...
Writing Feedbackvirel - Jun 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Youngsters with lower artistic skill aren't mandatory to engage in art syllabus
3 - HI Aulia, below is another take on your essay. - lower artistic skills are not - mandatorymandated to...
Writing Feedbackculprit23 - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Solutions to low birth rate in developed countries
3 - @ichanpants89 I really appreciate your helpful suggestions! But I still have two questions. 1.How do I replace FANBOYS? Especially...
Writing FeedbackTitus14 - Jun 26, 2016 / Titus14 - Jun 27, 2016
|Fewer languages in the world has its merits; How to write an opinion essay about languages?
3 - Hi Mansurbek, I would like to help by adding a few suggestions to the other half of your essay....
Writing FeedbackMansurbek19 - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Healthy lifestyle and state budget. IELST writing task 2 - update question 25 June 2016
Writing Feedbackpriscaoktav - Jun 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Happy Moonlight Festival- create your own festival
2 - Hi Maibellinenguyen, I highly appreciate your description of the festival, but I think you should use vocabulary more carefully....
Writing FeedbackMaibellinenguyen - Jun 26, 2016 / knhusone - Jun 26, 2016
|I strongly support the idea of charging the foreign tourists higher
3 - Hi! I would like to suggest you to replace some of the 'historical' with 'ancient', this will make your...
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 25, 2016 / Titus14 - Jun 27, 2016
|Characteristic of business models.
4 - Hi Yuan, I would like to share my thoughts on your writing project. First of all, the presentation of...
Writing Feedbackcylimitless - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 5, 2016
|People may do different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health?
2 - Hi Huy, here's another take on your essay with the focus on the first and second paragraph of the...
Writing Feedbacktruongquanghuy - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|Admission to a school should not depend from a person's gender - task 2 writing ielts
Writing FeedbackThewhisha - Jun 24, 2016 / mahamansoor - Jul 5, 2016
|GRE: "Humans in Kaliko islands" Argument
3 - Hi Brian, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website not only...
Writing Feedbackhanbrianlee - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 27, 2016
|What a strategies you have to adopt to be a good listener? Someone correct me this paragraph.
Writing FeedbackAtchane - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 5, 2016
|GRE: "Educational institutions should not dissuade students from pursuing unlikely academic careers"
3 - Hi Cj, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, this website aims to provide you with the most credible and...
Writing Feedbackmrcjthedj - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2016
|Should government invest more money in a city infrastructure instead of public transportation?
2 - Matt, I would like to deliver my feedback in the detailed descriptions below. I hope this would be helpful...
Writing Feedbackable_Person - Jun 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 24, 2016
|A COMPARISON OF TRIPS UNDERTAKEN BY CARS BASED ON GENDER - WRITING IELTS TASK 1
3 - Hi Ilham, it is nice to read another IELTS essay practice of yours. I would like to point out...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jun 24, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 24, 2016
|Debate about whether to teach children competitiveness or create a spirit of cooperation in them
4 - HI Tran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website credible, useful as well as...
Writing Feedbackknhusone - Jun 24, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2016
|The FAMILY. As a beginner, I need your help so much. More importantly, my examination is coming
2 - Hello thanhlac98 Overall, your text is nicely written, but a few things could be improved. The suggested adjustments...
Writing Feedbackthanhlac98 - Jun 23, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Jun 23, 2016
|"teaching children at home is best for a child's development" - do you agree with this statement?
3 - Hi Vadim, below are my observations on your essay; - the length and physical presentation of the essay...
Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenko - Jun 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 23, 2016
|It is not necessary to attach the teacher's payment to the student's learning capacity
3 - Hi Bidhan, I would like to contribute in the enhancement of your essay. I focused on the last 2...
Writing Feedbackbidhan - Jun 23, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 23, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2 THE POSSIBLE CHANGE AMONG SOCIETIES DUE TO THE SOPHISTICATED COMMUNICATION TOOLS
5 - Hi Muhammad, Overall your essay is well-qualified I think you should change Taking a smart phone as an...
Writing Feedbackilankelo21 - Jun 23, 2016 / KarunaTruong - Jun 24, 2016
|Writing task 2: Modern technology in work place. Disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
5 - paragraph 2, "a computer" change to" the computer" paragraph 3, "work to" change to "work with" . "a problem"...
Writing FeedbackKarunaTruong - Jun 22, 2016 / Wendy Li - Jun 22, 2016
|Football World Cup and other sports allows people to release their patriotic emotions in a safe way.
3 - Hi Maxim, below are additional help that will hopefully enhance your essay. I will focus on the first 2...
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The Process of Produce Cement and Concentrate
3 - Hi Puja, thank you for making sure that you have included the diagram in your analysis. Below are my...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Mining is tearing up our environment!
4 - Hi Katelyn, I can see that you have gathered a very comprehensive feedback from one of EssayForum contributors. I...
Writing Feedbackih8writing100 - Jun 21, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 23, 2016
|Technological dependence - Social Science final exam
Writing FeedbackWendy Li - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Learning foreign language as early as possible for children future - ielts Task 2 Writing
3 - Hi Yon, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I am happy to WELCOME yet another member...
Writing Feedbackyon959 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Writing task 2: using disciplinary in school to solve problems. Teachers or parents responsibility ?
2 - HI Truong, I would like to share a few insights to enhance your essay. - bullied unbelievably increased...
Writing FeedbackKarunaTruong - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|Movies and TV have a cumulative impact by unconsciously shape people's insights and behaviors
3 - HI Phoenix, first of all, thank you adding this website as your credible source of feedback in your writing...
Writing Feedbackzyber2222 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|Some causes of adults to get education and comparison of courses costs - in the charts
3 - Hi Nora, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website truly helpful...
Writing Feedbacknoura88 - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|IELTS TASK1 percentages of students' attendance in four different secondary school categories
3 - Hi Huang, its good to have yet another member of the Essay Forum Family. In this analysis, we would...
Writing Feedbackyoucandoit - Jun 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment
3 - Hi Natasha, I would like to provide additional insights on the first two paragraphs of your essay. -...
Writing Feedbacknatasha_139 - Jun 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Computer can easily do basic math. Should children spend their time to learn advanced calculations?
3 - Hi Jaff, indeed WELCOME to the forum, it's always good to welcome yet another member of this very valuable...
Writing Feedbackmjafarpk - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Here's brief summary about me. I have lots of habits such as reading books, hang out with friends.
Writing Feedbackvyvyy_sfnr - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|The amount of hardness on television can be a worrying concern of people who care about children
2 - Hi Rahmi, here's additional help from my end. - Television has a negative impact on childrens growth. -...
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Cement making: limestone and clay are included in crusher and then pass through into three stages
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|Cement manufacturing process and produce concrete from cement
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 19, 2016 / souhail123 - Jun 22, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 The internet makes human lives more convenient
7 - Human/Daily activities become easier more comfortable due to the existence of the cutting-edge internet. While the internet tend /...
Writing FeedbackLahfah Afifah - Jun 19, 2016 / KarunaTruong - Jun 24, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2: THE SHOWING OF VIOLENCE ON TELEVISION HAS BAD INFLUENCE ON CHILDREN
2 - Grahyta, with regards to your essay, I would like to point out some of weaknesses that can possibly be...
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Jun 19, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 19, 2016
|'To make concrete. First, we make an amalgam of materials' - IELTS Task 1 Process
Writing Feedbackfaisalrachmn - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|The historic (1985) and projected data (2035) of the population age in the United Kingdom
4 - Hi Rahmi, I would like to add a few modifications on your analysis. Before anything else, I would like...
Writing Feedbackkurniarahmi - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 20, 2016
|What shows statistics about people aged over 64 years old in the United Kingdom?
2 - Hi Puja, below are additional help from my end. - The chart illustrates the proportion - It comparesabout...
Writing Feedbackpujakurniawan19 - Jun 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|Elderly people in the British society - bar chart info.
5 - Hello Faisalrachmn In the bar chart shows the information about UK population prediction in 2035 and compared with...
Writing Feedbackfaisalrachmn - Jun 19, 2016 / pujakurniawan19 - Jun 19, 2016
|I strongly advocate that it is more preferable for students to study together, instead of alone
4 - Thanks for the compliment, justivy03. However, I think my vocabulary is not so strong and far from enough. ...
Writing Feedbackable_Person - Jun 18, 2016 / able_Person - Jun 23, 2016
|Nowadays, both the government and citizens are laying more emphasis on public health
5 - Thanks a lot for your quick reply. I understand your suggestion now. Hope to communicate with you soon....
Writing FeedbackAclily - Jun 18, 2016 / Aclily - Jun 19, 2016
|The number of elderly people in several different states in the United Kingdom between 1985 and 2035
3 - Hi Adi, please find the corrections below and oh before I forget, for future writing reference, please post the...
Writing Feedbackadip - Jun 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 21, 2016
|The graph applicates the gathered statistics of children born by women aged from 40-44 years old
2 - Hi zaki, these are some of my suggestions; The graph applicates() the gathered statis In 1981, four...
Writing Feedbackzakitauhid25 - Jun 18, 2016 / Nahid87 - Jun 18, 2016
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