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|IELTS: The Table and The Bar - forms of transportation used for journeys in some countries
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 18, 2015 / Furkan - Dec 21, 2015
|Global warming has an impact on world stability. How to reduce carbon footprint?
2 - Furkan, I wish that you had provided us with the actual prompt you are trying to answer along with...
Writing FeedbackFurkan - Dec 18, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 18, 2015
|IELTS-TASK2 internet contains information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong
3 - vangiespen your comments is precious to me and I appreciate your effort to show me my errors, so...
Writing Feedbackrasam11 - Dec 18, 2015 / rasam11 - Dec 18, 2015
|[IELST TASK 1] The average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing houseworks
NEW - The bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing activities around...
Writing FeedbackCruella - Dec 18, 2015 / — -
|The skills that we can improve from Facebook
Writing FeedbackFia0910 - Dec 17, 2015 / Fia0910 - Dec 19, 2015
|Percentage of Yemen and Italy population - IELTS 1 writing that I did for 1.5 hours
5 - The pie charts given compare the percentage of YemenI and Italy ITALIAN population based on the ages in 2000...
Writing FeedbackMaulinaDChem - Dec 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 18, 2015
|A varieties of clothes change people - correct my essay for TOEFL practice
2 - Some people from past until now spend BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT TO SPEND A high amount of money...
Writing FeedbackBayan - Dec 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 17, 2015
|Luis Riel led two rebellions against his government, killing many in the process - guilty of treason
Writing Feedbackaria12345678 - Dec 16, 2015 / aria12345678 - Dec 17, 2015
|SPORT FOR CHILDREN INSTEAD OF COMPUTER GAMES
2 - Anna, this is a personal opinion essay. Therefore, you have to present your personal opinion in the introductory statement...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 16, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 16, 2015
|Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society.
4 - You write good. Yet, you need to improve the way you write the introduction, especially the thesis. As...
Writing Feedbackjaysmile4 - Dec 16, 2015 / eddies - Dec 17, 2015
|IELTS Task 2 : Government's Subsidy For Education And Healthcare
Writing Feedbackaniani - Dec 15, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 15, 2015
|ALLOCATING UNIVERSITY DEGREE TO EDUCATION JOB OR GIVING PEOPLE GENERAL KNOWLEDGE ABOUT IT
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 15, 2015 / Riiskacha03 - Jan 8, 2016
|Some persons claim that competition sense among children is important and need to be strenghtened
Writing Feedbackafsarazizi - Dec 15, 2015 / afsarazizi - Dec 15, 2015
|Why people choose to go to a college or university more than the past time?
Writing FeedbackRosaKar - Dec 15, 2015 / RosaKar - Dec 15, 2015
|The growing number of high school leavers choose to obtain their bachelor degree in a foreign school
2 - Hi hollanda, Nice essay. A few suggestion about it. school leavers choose to obtain their bachelor degree...
Writing Feedbackhollanda - Dec 14, 2015 / Guang - Dec 14, 2015
|We can not function without doctors because they are more important than inventors.. A/D?
Writing Feedbackpikul - Dec 14, 2015 / pikul - Dec 14, 2015
|Online sales for retail area of travel, film/music, books, and clothes in New Zealand
NEW - The pie charts give information about kinds of online sales for retail area which consist of travel, film/music, books,...
Writing Feedbackpikul - Dec 14, 2015 / — -
|FOCUSING ONE SUBJECT IN UNIVERSITY OR NOT
2 - Hi annahatef, nice to see you here. Now, let me give some corrections on your passage. Here it goes....
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 13, 2015 / aniani - Dec 13, 2015
|The idea of earning money by working for just a single job is not popular already; Cambridge IELTS-1
3 - You should write the question to make the task clear and easier to correct, is the essay fulfill all...
Writing FeedbackSunitha1213 - Dec 13, 2015 / Riiskacha03 - Jan 8, 2016
|To reduce accidents number the council of Balmer Island should limit renting of mopeds; GRE argument
2 - The main problem that I see in your argument essay is that you have a hard time structuring your...
Writing FeedbackKYR8533 - Dec 13, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 13, 2015
|TOEFL Task - The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by individuals.
4 - ThingsProblems like global warming, air pollution, and energy crisis, these kinds of problems can be barely solved by one'san...
Writing Feedbackbruce5658 - Dec 13, 2015 / Olivia33 - Jan 4, 2016
|International experience and more precious opportunity. Statement of Purpose For Enrollment at KAUST
4 - Hi Ani, I believe that this essay already has all the elements that make it a very good statement...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Dec 13, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|FEELING UNSAFE AT HOME AND OUT - WRITING IELTS TASK 2 - CAUSES & SOLUTIONS
5 - Thank you so much for your detailed reply Madam. Your feedback is really helpful, it clear many of my...
Writing Feedbackhollanda - Dec 12, 2015 / hollanda - Dec 13, 2015
|Health is indeed wealth! IGCSE ESL - How to Improve for the Exam
Writing FeedbackNada9210 - Dec 12, 2015 / Nada9210 - Dec 12, 2015
|Multi cultural societies - IELTS Writing Task 2 - Agree or Disagree?
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 11, 2015 / ainirere - Dec 18, 2015
|The figure give information about smoking habits of the UK population by age. (Writing Task 1 IELTS)
10 - I see. I got new knowledge here, thank you so much vangiespen. I'll look another essays to improve my...
Writing Feedbackainirere - Dec 11, 2015 / ainirere - Dec 18, 2015
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : The Number of Books Read by Different Genders At Burnay Public LIbrary
Writing Feedbackandrisaputra3 - Dec 11, 2015 / eddies - Dec 11, 2015
|The Function of Tax reflects in two aspects: in a country and individuals.
2 - ...we need strong armyarmies/the military to protect us, and armyarmies and weapons cost a lot... I think in...
Writing Feedbackmayjiang - Dec 11, 2015 / Charlottefang - Dec 11, 2015
|Redreacing the fee of air traveling is it good or not?
2 - Anna, in your essay, you only indicate the restated prompt and a declaration that you will be discussing both...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways...
2 - Lithfia, do not use the term issue when you are not discussing a topic that has many sides or...
Writing FeedbackLuthfia Dewi - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|People are never satisfied with what they have. They always want something different.
4 - Adil, when writing an opinion statement, you cannot say that you support one side in your introduction and then...
Writing Feedbackmushaithir - Dec 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 11, 2015
|How geography played a role in shaping the different "personalities" of Sumerians, Egyptians, and Ch
2 - ... the Mesopotamian area by the Persian Gulf, where the weather was always different. While egyptians had their nation...
Writing Feedbacksantima570 - Dec 10, 2015 / eegii0123 - Dec 10, 2015
|Writing about a successful person, Vincent Van Gogh example
Writing Feedbackalamedaboy - Dec 9, 2015 / alamedaboy - Dec 9, 2015
|We can't live without doctors as well as without inventors, so we must appreciate their efforts.
4 - ... technology and health sector are the most essential fields. The word "essential" is non-gradable. ... so when people...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 9, 2015 / eegii0123 - Dec 10, 2015
|TASK 1- TOOTH DECAY - dental problem illustrated on the line chart
NEW - The line chart illustrates the dental problem with time elapsed after consumptions of fruit sugar, cane sugar, and honey....
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 9, 2015 / — -
|Effectiveness through divided assignments in a group study vs comfort of learning alone at home
3 - I think you should definetely focus a little bit more on expanding your analysis by integrating more solid evidence...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 9, 2015 / brayan1996 - Jan 4, 2016
|Global sale of fuel and electricity-based hybrid vehicles - IELTS TASK 1
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 9, 2015 / bonboncase - Dec 9, 2015
|Cause and Effect of stress on college student
3 - The American Institute of Stress explains that ' stress is not a useful term for scientists becausesince it is...
Writing Feedbackalexish - Dec 8, 2015 / sharfina - Dec 9, 2015
|TASK 2. Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done?
Writing FeedbackRa_fhli - Dec 8, 2015 / dina1979 - Jan 4, 2016
|Which corrupts more, power or powerlessness?
Writing Feedbackmarinaibrahim19 - Dec 8, 2015 / marinaibrahim19 - Dec 9, 2015
|IELTS TASK 1 - Percentage of online shopping for retail sectors in New Zealand
2 - ... percentage of online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand and are were measured in 2003 and...
Writing Feedbackdynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015 / annahatef - Dec 10, 2015
|My half in my school - information about a classmate - we are close eachother
Writing FeedbackMimuska - Dec 8, 2015 / Mimuska - Dec 10, 2015
|IN GROUPS or ALONE? The way of study depends on students and the lessons. Task 2
3 - Moreover, study in group teachES student about moral values ... There is no doubt that study in groups...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 8, 2015 / pikul - Dec 13, 2015
|HYBRID VEHICLE SALES. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
NEW - The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicle between 2006 and 2009. Summarize the information...
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 8, 2015 / — -
|TASK 1- Online shopping sales in New Zealand enggaged in four distinct retail sectors
Writing Feedbacksharfina - Dec 8, 2015 / dynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015
|IELTS-TASK2 : The causes and solutions of criminal activity.
3 - Hello nofrinorman. You have such brilliant ideas ! Well.. I notice some mistakes that are commented by Lucy....
Writing FeedbackNofrinorman - Dec 7, 2015 / dynaranjani - Dec 8, 2015
|TITLE YOUR STORY - Emerson College essay
Writing Feedbackm16kikano - Dec 7, 2015 / ECalv001 - Dec 8, 2015
|Toefl essay: Independent Task- the rules for young adults are too strict
NEW - Can you please grade my essay out of 30? Urgent!!! I would appreciate any advice. Thanks. Do you...
Writing Feedbackarielyiyitou108 - Dec 7, 2015 / — -
|IELTS task 2 - The rise of crime rate and how to prevent it.
NEW - Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime what could be done to prevent this...
Writing FeedbackM3L1 - Dec 7, 2015 / — -
|There is a lot of remedial steps that can be done to reduce crime rate - IELTS2
2 - This is caused by economic factors and unemployment. Therefore, job vacancies should be increased and the efficiency and performance...
Writing Feedbackbroibra - Dec 7, 2015 / ab0m1nat10n - Dec 7, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Nowadays, the crime level experiences a rise
2 - Nowadays, the crime level experiences a rise. The opening sentence feels a little redundant to the prompt. It should...
Writing Feedbackakbarmappiare - Dec 7, 2015 / iSasha - Dec 7, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: The Crime Rate That Always Rises Gradually Every Year
3 - Hi fahmisadja, I think your essay offers an insightful commentary on the prevalence of crime rates. However, it...
Writing Feedbackfahmisadja - Dec 7, 2015 / brayan1996 - Jan 5, 2016
|How do cars affect our life and what can we do to address the problems cars caused
Writing Feedbackxdx24 - Dec 7, 2015 / justivy03 - Dec 7, 2015
|ACAD IELTS TASK 2 - Many people worry about the growing number of obese children
4 - In many countries, many people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think...
Writing FeedbackLizScarlet - Dec 7, 2015 / Ra_fhli - Dec 7, 2015
|An explanation regarding developing populations in the Chorleywood village near London - ielts 1
2 - Hi Arundyna. Let me give you some polishes feedback... An explanation regarding developing populations in the Chorleywood village...
Writing FeedbackArundyna - Dec 6, 2015 / Nofrinorman - Dec 7, 2015
|It is a highly debated issue whether video games have bad effects on young generation
NEW - Some people think that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that they are useful. Discuss the...
Writing Feedbackannahatef - Dec 6, 2015 / — -
|The multi-stage process of creating a coffee (Task 2)
2 - @irfan727 Hello. Your description is fair enough but i would querry your grammatical construction. There are so many of...
Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Dec 6, 2015 / BigBoy - Oct 12, 2017
|Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products
2 - Hello Ursulawu, Your Body paragraph shows you have a good writing skills, however, you introduction lack of one sentences....
Writing Feedbackursulawu - Dec 6, 2015 / Bayuwibowo - Dec 6, 2015
|The diagram shows the process of coffee production and preparation before packaging it for sale
NEW - The diagram shows the process of coffee production and how to package it for sale to the market. What...
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|The Australian children's free time activities (IELTS)
6 - I personally think we should not add information that is not included in the graph, such as " they...
Writing Feedbackxchan - Dec 6, 2015 / hollanda - Dec 14, 2015
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