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Worldwide Mobile Phone Sales ( % share of market)

Writing Feedbackanggicaroot - Sep 30, 2015 / irhame - Sep 30, 2015
Global Mobile Phone Sales in a 2-year period

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Violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18

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Market share of the well-known mobile phone brands between 2005 and 2006

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IELTS TASK 2 - High crime rate in youngster is parents and teachers responsibility

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Sep 30, 2015 / irfan727 - Sep 30, 2015
TED talk regarding nuclear power - the nuclear fusion reactor is built.

Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Sep 30, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 30, 2015
Basic factor of the violent crime increase among teens is less learning from parents and teachers

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The chart gives information about the proportion of rail transport in four different states in 2007

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What is the life in a media-rich society?

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IELTS TASK 2 - Big Influence of media-rich society

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The table about Rail transport in five different countries

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Selecting an employees based on age - how this development is seen?

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TOEFL: Should students have longer vacations than before?

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The TEDTalk summary regarding education. Writing flows and checking grammar.

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Write a story that happens in a mysterious place.

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People in America vs Asian and European dwellers - Rail transport table usage in four countries

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Sep 29, 2015 / Bayuwibowo - Oct 1, 2015
The table chart describes the use of trail, categorized by how many people use it

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In this era, the media have held the prominent thing in almost all aspects

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TASK II : difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives

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Observation of rail transport in 4 developed countries in 2007

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In this essay, I would argue that media has positive and negative impact for people's live.

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Rail transport in four countries (UK, US, Japan and Italy) in 2007

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We won't go far away from media influence - advantage and disadvantage living in full-media society

Writing Feedbackirhame - Sep 28, 2015 / Bayuwibowo - Sep 28, 2015
Essay on George Hewes from the American Revolution

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued -IELTS

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The inclination between social activities and studying at school

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Living in a big city - means more robbers and criminals around

Writing FeedbackARCHTECT - Sep 28, 2015 / ARCHTECT - Sep 29, 2015
Buying things online is very convenient. Simple trade brings some demerits though.

Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Sep 27, 2015 / anggicaroot - Sep 28, 2015
TASK II : own business instead of working for a company or organisation

Writing FeedbackAbraham22 - Sep 27, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 28, 2015
Task 2 IELTS - Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly.

Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Sep 27, 2015 / hayaalqasem - Sep 28, 2015
Many awesome inventions in many aspects has been increased technology, education and transportation

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I decided to start college straight out of high school. Great parenting of both - my mom and dad.

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Talking about myself - environment, culture, or family history helped to shape my identity

Writing Feedbackcpham7780 - Sep 26, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 26, 2015
Today people are not polite to each other, but why to blame; the world if full of fierce competition

Writing FeedbackClare - Sep 26, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 26, 2015
Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art.

Writing Feedbackmarydan84 - Sep 26, 2015 / echo5016 - Sep 26, 2015
Professionalism of an organisation requires the introduction of an proper dress code

Writing FeedbackAbraham22 - Sep 25, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 25, 2015
IELTS TASK 2: The best way to solve the environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.

Writing Feedbackdb723 - Sep 25, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 25, 2015
Education is a critical element to prosperity of any nation. Justify.

Writing Feedbackamicalrahul - Sep 25, 2015 / amicalrahul - Sep 25, 2015
The question: does the adverts have a major impact on people's favor as well as their lifestyle?

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The graph shows the number of West Indians and Indians and Pakistanis Immigrating to the UK

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"A Walk". Creative writing personal essay on a storm (descriptive) i need help making it longer

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Cbest - At some point in our lives, all of us have focused some sort of rejection or defeat

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Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Justifiable?

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There is nothing that technology can't reach - it make children less creative (toefl writing)

Writing Feedbackbeat_toefl - Sep 24, 2015 / billyabbot - Sep 24, 2015
Books or computers for learning? Most students who use technology are more engaged with their study

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Salary imbalance between entertainment profession and profession like doctor and teacher.

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The appropriate punishment of children to teach right and wrong

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A summarize from TED Talk from Bill Gates who reveals how to improve teaching quality

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Summary from TED's video. Writing flows and grammar.

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The clothes indicate what kind of persons we are - IELTS TASK 2

Writing FeedbackAbraham22 - Sep 21, 2015 / aseprudi - Sep 22, 2015
Should same-sex marriage be legalized? Argumentative essay

Writing FeedbackHungHung - Sep 21, 2015 / vangiespen - Sep 21, 2015
Age limits of people to drive are an essential step in reducing traffic accidents.

Writing Feedbackanky_bhatt - Sep 21, 2015 / lcturn87 - Sep 21, 2015
The personal and work-related challenges that young people face today - TOEFL Writing

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Task 2 - The clothes people wear are the most indication of what they are like

Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Sep 21, 2015 / billyabbot - Sep 24, 2015
The programs as a charity or helping neighbourhood have a lot of advantages for students

Writing FeedbackDiqon - Sep 21, 2015 / db723 - Oct 1, 2015
IELTS TASK 2 - Clothes are the most important indication of your identity

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Sep 21, 2015 / eddies - Sep 22, 2015
Discuss time when your ETHNIC background (or ASPECT OF YOUR IDENTITY) SIGNIFICANTLY affected ur life

Writing Feedbackagonzalez16 - Sep 20, 2015 / lcturn87 - Sep 20, 2015
The US always supported others who lost everything in natural disasters or to help build democracy

Writing Feedbackpbhutiani - Sep 20, 2015 / pbhutiani - Sep 21, 2015
Task 1 IELTS - the results of surveys in 2005 and 2009 asking workers about their relationships

Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Sep 20, 2015 / eddies - Sep 20, 2015
The pros and cons of working remotely

Writing FeedbackNguyendiep - Sep 20, 2015 / EF_Carol - Sep 20, 2015

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