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|The percentage of Bulgarian having intention to move into another country for 3 levels of studying
Writing FeedbackHoang Ha ktl - Jul 5, 2015 / Hoang Ha ktl - Jul 5, 2015
|To be successful in education, it is important to be a good student also to have good teachers.
2 - Some people say that to be successful in education, being a good student is more important than having good...
Writing Feedbackthuynhu - Jul 5, 2015 / Hoang Ha ktl - Jul 5, 2015
|"Does money lead to selfishness?" SAT May 2012 Essay
5 - Thanks lisa_severus I really appreciate your help !! Any other grade out of 6 ? Any other recommendation?...
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 5, 2015 / Dawn01 - Jul 6, 2015
|Toefl: professors should spend more time educating rather than researching
2 - - As for a professor, who works for university, he should follow the university mottovision and contribute to the...
Writing Feedbacklisa_severus - Jul 5, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 7, 2015
|TOEFL: Sometimes it is acceptable not to tell the truth - not all lies are wrong
4 - I have a few suggestions for your essay. There are three main reasons to support my opinion. This transition...
Writing FeedbackJake Do - Jul 4, 2015 / Vns9x - Jul 5, 2015
|[IELTS] writing: Being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
5 - Thanks Shinta! For the word count, the requirement is more than 250 words, and it's impossible for me to...
Writing FeedbackTide Wang - Jul 4, 2015 / Tide Wang - Jul 5, 2015
|Young people must be encouraged and inculcated about the importance of a long-term, realistic goals.
2 - - If one starts their business or any activity after proper planning then they may achieve their goals or...
Writing Feedbackrocky79 - Jul 4, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 6, 2015
|Poor decision makers are depending on their emotions the most
2 - Emotion and logic are two different aspect(1) in the decision making. In the recommended lines, authors suggested that decision...
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jul 4, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 4, 2015
|"Can stress cause diabetes?" - essay for Newcastle University Partners
3 - Emotional stress - Firstly , a group of sS wedish researchers collected a population sample consisting of life...
Writing FeedbackPaul786 - Jul 4, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 7, 2015
|Parents are just parents and they are not the best teachers. They are not up to date...
2 - Parenthood(1) have been considered resemble(2) to teacher's duties by some people.(3) 1. As far as I am concern, we...
Writing FeedbackLinda44 - Jul 4, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 4, 2015
|Parents are crucial in the upbringing of child as good member of society.
NEW - Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that...
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|Diarrhea and methods to prevent and cure it!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Jul 3, 2015 / lacusclyne - Jul 8, 2015
|Waste is created all over the world. What are the causes and solutions?
2 - There is no denial that the world itself has been facing many environmental problems in which overloaded rubbish has...
Writing Feedbackkatelinhoang - Jul 3, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 3, 2015
|Internet is a good way to communicate or a bad place of information source
2 - Online communication is the main issue in society these days. As such, it dues to the improvement of modern...
Writing Feedbackfaarasyad - Jul 3, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 3, 2015
|Is talking the most effective and satisfying way of communicating with others? SAT
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jul 3, 2015 / Dawn01 - Jul 3, 2015
|The relevant features summarisation of the information about UK phone calls.
Writing FeedbackHung - Jul 3, 2015 / Hung - Jul 3, 2015
|Knowledge can be either a blessing or a curse for us; how it impacts our actions?
2 - Although few might lookview this idea in dismay To begin with, before the French revolution, the French regime...
Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Jul 2, 2015 / lisa_severus - Jul 2, 2015
|Toefl: In the past people ate food that was better for their health than people today.
2 - fast developmentrapid development Even without these problems, the additives contained in the processed food is no good to...
Writing Feedbacklisa_severus - Jul 2, 2015 / Eric2750230 - Jul 2, 2015
|Technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing; IELTS essay
3 - Your summary or conclusion seems to be short. It is because you have not summarized your body paragraphs. Conclusion...
Writing Feedbackjojoman - Jul 2, 2015 / Vns9x - Jul 3, 2015
|Affects of media on people lives. Danger of losing nation identity, negative influences on kids.
2 - I'd consider this essay average because it's introduction seems to be dull but was fine though. There are other...
Writing FeedbackJaggi7921 - Jul 2, 2015 / Eric2750230 - Jul 2, 2015
|It has been suggested that an educational institute is the better judge of students career
2 - - Consider with your subject, plural or singular. If you start to write with plural form, be consistent with...
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jul 1, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 1, 2015
|CREATING PELLETS - the sawdust passes three physical process and two temperature treatments
3 - Paddoo, WELCOME to EssayForum, you are yet another member of the ever- growing EF Family. Now, I'll make...
Writing Feedbackpaddoo - Jul 1, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 2, 2015
|Proper measures must be taken to stop obesity and encourage people to physical activity
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jul 1, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 1, 2015
|The table: India has the greatest number of cinema viewings, the smallest figure belongs to Japan.
3 - According to the figures table, India has the highest figurerate of total viewed films (24.5 million views) thenthan(Sorry I...
Writing FeedbackHeilia - Jun 30, 2015 / shintacandrade - Jul 1, 2015
|IT IS MORE IMPORTANT TO WORK AT A JOB THAT YOU ENJOY THAN IT IS TO EARN A LOT OF MONEY.
4 - @paddoo: thank you so much. it definitely helped me. @junisha111: I really liked your version. Its better then what...
Writing Feedbacksally_922 - Jun 30, 2015 / sally_922 - Jul 1, 2015
|"Why do we not value the creative arts more than we do?" SAT October 2010: Essay
6 - Thanks lightfox !!! Your insights are straightforward and suitable for me. I will take them into consideration....
Writing FeedbackDawn01 - Jun 30, 2015 / Dawn01 - Jul 5, 2015
|It is more beneficial to complete independent study than to attend college.
4 - Please check your introduction. main idea should be convey properly in introduction and in conclusion. Keep writing...
Writing FeedbackKUP - Jun 30, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 9, 2015
|Technology has both benefits and side effects on people's way of interacting.
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 30, 2015 / tuananh - Jul 3, 2015
|To understand the primary characteristics of a society, it is important to learn the village areas.
3 - Hi Heilia, thanks for the feedback. Could you please, highlight the paragraph where you are finding difficulties?...
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jun 30, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jul 1, 2015
|Criminal record has actually increased in recent years
4 - Although you have successfully created the solid thesis, the outline did not form a line one another. What...
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jun 30, 2015 / eddies - Jun 30, 2015
|Life now and furtherback - living in recent years is better than 100 years ago. IELTS TASK 2.
3 - I can help assist you with improving your writing. I will focus on just a few paragraphs. Here are...
Writing Feedbackpaddoo - Jun 30, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 30, 2015
|Increasing crime rate can be solved by a government role.
2 - I want to focus on some minor issues to help you with your essay. There are many good transition...
Writing Feedbackalif - Jun 30, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 30, 2015
|Social well-being could be reached by removing the charge for education and healthcare
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Jun 30, 2015 / tuananh - Jul 9, 2015
|Could alternative energy sources replace fossil-fuel energy?
2 - I can help you with some of your writing. First, I would like to know the meaning behind this...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 30, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 30, 2015
|Are alternative energy resources too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas?
2 - I can help you again with this essay. I think you are really improving with your writing. I am...
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Jun 30, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 30, 2015
|The governments have a responsibility to provide welfare services
3 - - The governments have a responsibility to provide welfare services such as healthcare and education for all theirit's citizens....
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jun 30, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2015
|Criminal activity performs a crucial impact in societies. What can be do to minimize this phenomenon
Writing Feedbackaseprudi - Jun 30, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 30, 2015
|The government should take control of education and healthcare - IELTS TASK
2 - This sentence did not bring any value, since it sounds too generic. You need to mention briefly what...
Writing Feedbackalif - Jun 30, 2015 / eddies - Jul 1, 2015
|Parents are responsible to shape their children habits and attitudes, also in regard to the money.
4 - thank you for reading my essay. your correction is so rational and I will notice all of them. I...
Writing Feedbackmarned - Jun 30, 2015 / marned - Jul 1, 2015
|Alternative energy sources basically require more money
3 - Admittedly,a cleaner and greener alternative power consumes more money, since it is inexpensive to run, but high-priced due to...
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jun 30, 2015 / EssaywritingCai - Jul 6, 2015
|youth unemployment. Consequences? suggestion?
4 - I have only one suggestion: 'never in mankind history have we experienced such decline in youth unemployment ' =>...
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 29, 2015 / tuananh - Jun 30, 2015
|RE: Regents Scholarship Appeal Statement
3 - - However, I would ask that you re- consider the following points, and especially note my strong recovery this...
Writing Feedbackscholarappeals - Jun 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2015
|The cause and measurement in solving the rise of crime rate
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 29, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 29, 2015
|Technology is not an obstacle for a human being in thinking, and doesn't reduce intellectual skills
Writing FeedbackKUP - Jun 29, 2015 / alif - Jun 30, 2015
|Overweight now is becoming a serious health threat globally
2 - - Then, another an important factor for weight loss is exercising efficiently andwith high-intensity. - Again, this pattern...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 30, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: Students choose to study English independently
2 - If I am asked to write the introductory statement for this essay, then I'd start constructing my paragraph...
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Jun 29, 2015 / eddies - Jun 29, 2015
|Should we save and restore some languages?
2 - I would be happy to assist you with this essay. I have suggested some changes in grammar and meaning....
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 29, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 29, 2015
|Do movies or TV influence people's behaviour? Use specific reasons and examples in your answer.
Writing Feedbackalinatsoy12 - Jun 29, 2015 / alinatsoy12 - Jun 29, 2015
|Nature and nurture on human's intelligence - innate inheritance and personal experiences influence
2 - - In my opinion, neither of these two factors alone is enough for individuals'one's development. - SecondlyNow ,...
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2015
|Having more than one job. Possible causes and suggestions for future working.
3 - Firstly, due to the demand of having more exciting working environments, workers today are no longer expecting to spend...
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015 / Adhisti - Jun 29, 2015
|Should all education and healthcare be funded by the government and free for everyone?
2 - There should be 'services' instead of 'cervices' in the last paragraph. You should also give more arguments about:...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Jun 28, 2015 / Rich Monte - Jun 28, 2015
|Responsibility of problems - People or Governments
3 - Eric27, WELCOME to the EssayForum Family, it's a pleasure to have yet another member of the ever-growing EF...
Writing FeedbackEric2750230 - Jun 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 29, 2015
|Why is sport is important at school?
4 - Hello M19, I read your essay. I think you have got sufficient description about your grammar and style...
Writing FeedbackM19O09F11 - Jun 28, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jun 29, 2015
|GRE ISSUE - evaluation of the most effective teaching methods.
7 - Thank you very much for your help and useful instructions. I will follow the same. I will keep writing...
Writing FeedbackJunisha111p - Jun 28, 2015 / Junisha111p - Jun 28, 2015
|Are testing and examinations justified? The current system needs some improvements.
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 28, 2015 / tuananh - Jun 28, 2015
|Financial penalties in traffic. Should fines be mainly applied rather than some other policies?
6 - As far as I am concerned, more scholars, who focus on formal writing, will write the first paragraph with...
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Jun 29, 2015
|Are examinations good selectors off the classrooms?
3 - Tuananh, WELCOME to EssayForum Family, we're growing and we're thrilled to have you as part of the family. ...
Writing Feedbacktuananh - Jun 28, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2015
|Insecure feelings in people. Causes and suggestions.
3 - - There is a large number of number(make sure to proof read) of people who experience the sense of...
Writing Feedbacklacusclyne - Jun 27, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2015
|The intrinsic value of doing homework. Is it necessary for students?
2 - Kuroneko, WELCOME to EssayForum, we're an ever - growing family and we're happy to have you!!! Now, I...
Writing FeedbackKuroNeko - Jun 27, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 28, 2015
|Students broad spectrum of knowledge? It would be an important step to improve their personality.
Writing Feedbackanamikam_vns - Jun 27, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 27, 2015
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