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|Life now is better than it was 100 year ago. Agree or disagree?
3 - Over the last century, people's lives are better than before. While some people think that life, now, has brought...
Writing FeedbackFirda Umairoh - Apr 7, 2015 / EF_Carol - Apr 7, 2015
|In the past, people lived in the same places since they just born until died.
5 - On the other hand, people today always move to other places for living. This is the best way for...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - Apr 7, 2015 / irhame - Apr 9, 2015
|Alternative methods of the world exploring
Writing Feedbackmohjawahir - Apr 7, 2015 / eddies - Apr 15, 2015
|Once people grew up in one place, now it is changing. Staying in one place or moving around oftenly?
3 - Hi cwang, your writing is excellent, but I have some suggest for your writing. ... staying in the...
Writing Feedbackririchwang - Apr 7, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 8, 2015
|Risks and Benefits of Single-Sex Class
2 - Paragraph 1: The first sentence I would just change to "will be deprived of learning" and "they will have...
Writing Feedbackashleyvaldez - Apr 6, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 8, 2015
|The current phenomenon of purchasing books online
3 - Nowadays, the life is busier. This sentence is too short! Nowadays, the life is busier and more bustling in...
Writing Feedbackkulina - Apr 6, 2015 / Vns9x - Apr 7, 2015
|Human is responsible for the global warming and governments should fix this problem any way possible
NEW - Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today what are the causes...
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|Developing public transportation or making a new type of car? What should be goverment's priority?
Writing Feedbackfarhan110991 - Apr 6, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 7, 2015
|Some personal data about me, my family and plans for the future - Introducing myself
Writing FeedbackSeven_Daly - Apr 6, 2015 / Seven_Daly - Apr 10, 2015
|SAT Essay - Does everyone see a thing from the same perspective?
2 - There was a impoverished man--> There was an impoverished man I think your essay is too weak, without...
Writing FeedbackFTfT - Apr 6, 2015 / amytsai - Apr 15, 2015
|Are human beings by nature primarily selfish or unselfish? SAT Essay.
3 - The major principle...on order to overcome an invorn tendency --->The major principle...in order to overcome an invorn tendency ...
Writing Feedbackmilamiller - Apr 6, 2015 / amytsai - Apr 15, 2015
|Some green-heart people might oppose the factory, since it can bring some damage.
NEW - A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and...
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|Getting a book nowadays becomed an easy task. It's enough to buy it online, being at home.
2 - You should've written that even our everyday routine can be simplified by technology progress. And then present online...
Writing Feedbackppcrm - Apr 5, 2015 / milamiller - Apr 6, 2015
|Nuclear technology is an inexpensive and unpolluted power source; energy at a relative low cost
Writing Feedbackhoney21 - Apr 5, 2015 / honey21 - Apr 7, 2015
|Horse Therapy for People with Limitations
2 - You have very good writing. Please read your paper again so you can see how the changes help. ...
Writing FeedbackStamas - Apr 5, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 7, 2015
|Local culture and visitors from other countries - should they obey cultural customs?
2 - Traveling abroad has beenbecomingbecome one of the most popular activitiesforamong people worldwide in the last fewrecent decades. For this...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Apr 5, 2015 / ah_zafari - Apr 7, 2015
|Opinion Essay : Online shopping for books is increasingly popular - it's more convenient
NEW - Hello everybody, I'm Whale. Sorry for my poor English because English is my second language so I have difficulty...
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|I have many plans for the future but my greatest goal is to be an English teacher.
Writing Feedbacklinhmonnn - Apr 4, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 5, 2015
|Nowadays internet courses are more and more popular - how it impact on the traditional education?
NEW - Hi, everybody I would be appreciated anyone helps me to correct and revise my essay. These days...
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|The bad effects of deforestation on the environment
5 - First of all, deforestation is the causebetter than you use the predominant reason of the global warming. We...
Writing FeedbackMiastasia - Apr 4, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 7, 2015
|We can name some drawbacks of modern communication, but it still won't outshine its benefits
2 - Your opening paragraph could improve by identifying the problem in a clearer way. For instance in your first...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 4, 2015 / JoshN - Apr 4, 2015
|The merits outweigh demerits of living in small community and in small village (IELTS Task 2)
2 - Living in a pretty village is more favorite for many people in the past(why?). However, in this day and...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 3, 2015 / Vns9x - Apr 4, 2015
|Is the criminality among youngsters caused by the lack of the social and emotional learning?
2 - A few words should be omitted so as to present succinct introduction More attention should be paid on how...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Apr 3, 2015 / eddies - Apr 3, 2015
|Young officials recruited from prestigious colleges are needed to be a part of the government
4 - Beware to break down your prompt. I am afraid that the essential about younger people are not suitable for...
Writing FeedbackPrasanthkasturi - Apr 3, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 3, 2015
|The percentage of degrees granted in at the National University in 1990, 2000 and 2010
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Apr 3, 2015 / mlk1987 - Apr 3, 2015
|People are hypnotized by advertising to buy goods which they even really don't need
2 - Not too long ago advertising was not nearly as popular as at the moment. - Consider taking this sentence...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Apr 3, 2015 / mlk1987 - Apr 3, 2015
|Gaining knowledge through watching TV and reading books
2 - Reading books and watching TV are two main ways that help us achieve a wide range of knowledge. While...
Writing FeedbackLamVu - Apr 2, 2015 / EF_Carol - Apr 13, 2015
|Saving earth from enviromental damages caused by over using air to support exporting (IELTS Task 2)
3 - The Guardian reports,in 2014, that coffee take distributive advantage around 34% and 26 % of Ethiopia and Burundi...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 1, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 2, 2015
|Friendship essay; As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend
4 - What's the definition of friends? As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend, In addition, friends...
Writing Feedbackjenny0103 - Apr 1, 2015 / EF_Carol - Apr 2, 2015
|Mobile Phone's Market Share; BenQ fell significantly from 4.9% in 2005 to 2.4% in 2006
2 - Corrections have been marked in bold, Additions in italics and Omissions in strike. The table gives information about...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Apr 1, 2015 / abhayarathore - Apr 1, 2015
|As global trade increases, many goods are produced in other countries, transported long distances.
2 - Buying in China is, in fact, buying American. The phenomenon of notable companies which tend to outsource their...
Writing Feedbackmohjawahir - Apr 1, 2015 / SHanafi - Apr 2, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences
2 - Hi Anfalia, These are several suggestions for your writing, Crime is an issue that deserves public attention....
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Apr 1, 2015 / mumtazdinar - Apr 1, 2015
|Some learners need a structured course from high qualified teacher to know materials in a depth.
2 - One's success(Success in what?) determines on how(what do you mean by how?.) people are studying. For this reason(this sentence...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 31, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 31, 2015
|Persuasive essay on the negatives of excessive technology use
2 - The first sentence is an uninteresting statement of the obvious, so the reader might stop paying attention. It might...
Writing Feedbacknatashanicola - Mar 30, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2015
|Improving skills to get into an undergraduate program.
3 - And last but not less important, ( Third) they talk abou the composition of the bones, where ... (This...
Writing Feedbackmonisol - Mar 30, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Apr 1, 2015
|Medical Side of Bud - "Can marijuana become medical?"
2 - As many states begin to accept marijuana for recreational use, others are noticing the power it has in healing....
Writing Feedbackjackie828 - Mar 28, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Apr 1, 2015
|The question is if countries should cooperate with other countries instead of isolating themselves
Writing Feedbacksandrinka - Mar 28, 2015 / sandrinka - Mar 30, 2015
|A fear of censure in Indian society; our conversation often turns to criticizing what we see lacking
2 - Hi Rajiv.. I'd want to simplify this part: ... that we should have taken instead from their, that...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 28, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Mar 28, 2015
|Once people experience puberty they are potentially be able to produce children.
2 - Once people experience puberty they are potentially be able to produce children However, the body condition that allows...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Mar 27, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 31, 2015
|One of the most intensely debated topics in education is the types of subjects need to be studied
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Mar 27, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 30, 2015
|To look after the elderly - responsibility of families or the government?
3 - There is a lot of discussion on how to look after elderly people. While some people suggest that the...
Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 27, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 31, 2015
|'the history, tradition and way of life will vanish as well' - An essay on language extinction
Writing FeedbackYanxu - Mar 26, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 27, 2015
|Students from the age of 16 should be encouraged to have a part time job
2 - Hello! My edits and suggestions are below, Financial issues are most of the time the reasons why...
Writing FeedbackIkrame - Mar 26, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 26, 2015
|Advertisements lead people to spend money lavishly without further thinking. Ads effects on people.
3 - Hi Tia, thank you for you correction on my writing. I have proofread my writing several times but I...
Writing FeedbackMarsya_EF - Mar 25, 2015 / Marsya_EF - Mar 26, 2015
|Happiness has different meanings for different people, but everyone wants to be happy.
2 - In my opinion, You should know how to paraphrase the topic before you write, for example, "There is no...
Writing FeedbackRafiq25 - Mar 25, 2015 / vanduongnv - Mar 25, 2015
|"Two head is better than one head" - studying with other people provide an extra ideas or knowledge
3 - overall you explain everything and give examples. however you need to fix some grammar issues. and you can also...
Writing Feedbackantun - Mar 25, 2015 / nazmarta - Mar 25, 2015
|Develop countries have created many environmental problems in the world; global warming (IELTS)
2 - Environmental problems would always be a unique topic in this world. For this reason, global warming is estimated to...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 25, 2015 / nazmarta - Mar 25, 2015
|Fear and Loathing in Society - respond to an article
3 - Thank you... I guess it makes a little more sense when you read the actual article I was given...
Writing Feedbackrxcc - Mar 24, 2015 / rxcc - Mar 24, 2015
|Nowadays people get married and have children after the age 30. Is it good or bad?
3 - Today it has become popular among people to make a family and have kids after the age 30. This...
Writing FeedbackAbIk - Mar 24, 2015 / Vns9x - Mar 24, 2015
|It's easy to turn into a dictator but it's difficult to preserve as a good leader - leadership essay
2 - Hello, First, you need to organize your paper better. Your first topic is what makes a good leader good....
Writing FeedbackYoss - Mar 24, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 24, 2015
|Heirs to ancient knowledge; consensus is possible, but the issues must be put to test.
NEW - In a world connected as we are consensus is possible. But to arrive there the issues must be put...
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|Family - a root of happiness in human life; children and their parents seem to be less close nowaday
2 - Hello, Your English grammar needs improvement. I have made some suggestions, but please read over your essay again and...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 23, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 23, 2015
|On a changing social order in India -- a perception
2 - This is interesting as an introduction. Some people might criticize it because it's not clear. Some things indeed...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 23, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2015
|"What would you do if I died?" Questbridge Prep Scholarship Personal Statement
2 - Happiness and safety are but an afterthought when bills need to be paid but no one is able to....
Writing FeedbackRunsForCookies - Mar 22, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 24, 2015
|Kids who are not born with some sort of abilities and skills can be as successful as talented one
4 - Believing(it is true using gerund here, but it could be better that do not put verb as a noun...
Writing Feedbackmaryla - Mar 22, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 23, 2015
|My beloved mother! Good housewife and cook.
3 - hello, good start. I have made some grammatical corrections below About my beloved mother,- her name is Duc,...
Writing FeedbackPinkii - Mar 22, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 23, 2015
|Flow in The Necessity of Affirmative Action - reasons and concessions.
3 - Ok, I am actually working with that. But do you have any suggestions on the problem I posted about?...
Writing FeedbackennedroC - Mar 21, 2015 / ennedroC - Mar 21, 2015
|Damage of the environment in terms of improving human living standard
2 - It is argued that the development of human living standard(s) will certainly damage the environment. ... is the most...
Writing FeedbackMinhNguyen1996 - Mar 21, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 21, 2015
|Adults education and the reasons why grown-up people continue studying - IELTS
5 - in introduction, you have to mention about what the graph stands out? and it should be clear. also,...
Writing Feedbackminhloc - Mar 21, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 23, 2015
|I remember my father's existence in our house since I was born. Describe a person essay.
4 - Thank you very much for your corrections and notifications. These are making me better. Thank you so much....
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