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|Countries are becoming similar. What is an effect of this situation? IELTS TASK 2
2 - Isabelle, this is a pretty impressive piece of work. Your opinion is based upon well known facts about the...
Writing Feedbackdb723 - Oct 15, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 15, 2015
|Describe benefits of owning a home and renting. ielts task2
3 - However, for overseas students living in a house off campus, owning a home is better than renting because of...
Writing Feedbackphuong0296 - Oct 14, 2015 / db723 - Oct 14, 2015
|The Key of life is Success and a happy person have a great chance to be truely succesful
Writing FeedbackSaputra - Oct 14, 2015 / Abraham22 - Oct 14, 2015
|Reflection Paper about heroes - everybody wants to be a hero
Writing FeedbackYoussri - Oct 13, 2015 / AR2100 - Oct 13, 2015
|Do Charter Schools hurt Public Schools?
2 - Of the many offerings that a Charter school makes available isare differing education models and curriculum. [one question:...
Writing Feedbackbro2143328 - Oct 13, 2015 / bonboncase - Oct 15, 2015
|The table presents data related to subway systems located in six large cities - Ielts Task 1
3 - Hai Gandi, I'm Luthfia. I think you are able to use your time more effective since 26 minutes are...
Writing FeedbackGandi - Oct 13, 2015 / Luthfia Dewi - Oct 14, 2015
|Smoking is injurious for human health and the cause of a number of dangerous diseases
2 - It is unnecessary to say "discuss my view points in the following paragraph's, followed by a reasoned conclusion." ...
Writing FeedbackJaggi7921 - Oct 13, 2015 / js0116 - Oct 13, 2015
|I agree that young people prefer not spending time to help their communities.
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|School paper about My Weekend
2 - Hey, so there are some couple of mistakes which I have corrected so check it out, My weekend starts...
Writing Feedbackk3ne - Oct 12, 2015 / Hargun003 - Oct 21, 2015
|Pathos, logos, ethos related to the article "A good man in Rwanda"
Writing FeedbackYoussri - Oct 12, 2015 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2015
|University should make an easier access for poor students (IELTS Writing task 2)
Writing Feedbackmargeary - Oct 12, 2015 / db723 - Oct 15, 2015
|There are more benefits of moving around than just staying in a city throughout human life
2 - Dita, I can understand what you are trying to say in your essay. That is a good thing because...
Writing FeedbackPramudita - Oct 12, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 12, 2015
|To make extraordinary efforts to save endangered animal or plant species
3 - Thank you so much for taking your time to write such a valuable analysis, @vangiespen. I agree with you...
Writing FeedbackTakeiteasy - Oct 12, 2015 / Takeiteasy - Oct 12, 2015
|(help to review) 'The way that we dress reveals who we are.' What are your views?
Writing FeedbackLittlethoughts - Oct 12, 2015 / Littlethoughts - Oct 12, 2015
|Swing basket in the river or a bucket tied with ropes connected to a pulley - collecting water
3 - Rosyidah, Your report overview is incomplete. As a summary, it should have at least 3 sentences in it. The...
Writing Feedbackochio - Oct 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|Social Life in Apartment Buildings - IELTS Writing Task 2
6 - This is good. However, you need to show that you have very strong argument(s). To do so, presenting...
Writing Feedbackochio - Oct 11, 2015 / eddies - Nov 7, 2015
|The Best Eco-Friendly Form of Mode Transportation
2 - Hi Fadli, 1. 'employee' is categorized as a countable noun. Here, you have some options to write...
Writing Feedbackmujahid_fadli - Oct 11, 2015 / shintacandrade - Oct 11, 2015
|We may fail to find out that just a few people make new friends through internet
5 - Mengyuan, the structure of your essay is very good. I think the TOEFL reader will be happy with that....
Writing Feedbackakiraaa - Oct 11, 2015 / Takeiteasy - Oct 18, 2015
|Fiction Writing - adventure with an unexpected but happy ending
4 - Here is a sample of a simple adventure story: The hot September summer was making Sam feel like...
Writing FeedbackSamuelsam123 - Oct 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|Ielts task 2: Purchasing a house or business, which one do you prefer?
Writing FeedbackBNTien - Oct 11, 2015 / pdeep37 - Oct 11, 2015
|IELTS Taks 1 : The Two Methods of Collecting Water For Irrigation
3 - This way is involved by two persons and they keepholding and pulling the basket... the fourtwo sides of...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Oct 11, 2015 / BNTien - Oct 11, 2015
|GRE argument task : Altering news content for late-night show
2 - Hi, I have just finished a GRE test and might give you some advice. As for the essay content,...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Oct 11, 2015 / liying - Oct 28, 2015
|The main causes of the inequality between poor and wealthy countries - how this gap can be reduced?
2 - Hii.. Irfan, guessing you forget to brainstorm before do writing. I am not intend to harsh, but this work...
Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Oct 11, 2015 / SHanafi - Oct 11, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 : The Most Preferred Transportation For Workers in Houston, Texas
2 - There is something missing here. The table also shows about average age of travelers, yet you just give...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Oct 11, 2015 / Pramudita - Oct 11, 2015
|In my opinion, schools and hospitals are more important than impressive buildings
2 - Dita, your introduction is quite short. As such, it does not offer a concrete overview of the discussion. The...
Writing FeedbackPramudita - Oct 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|Two Methods of Irrigating Field (IELTS Task I)
2 - Hi Muhajid :-) Your report is quite complete and offers a complete description of the irrigation methods used by...
Writing Feedbackmujahid_fadli - Oct 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 10, 2015
|GRE issue task : Nation should operate similar curriculum for its schoolchildren
2 - Sekar, I think that you should rethink your response to the essay. Specifically, I would like you to reconsider...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Oct 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|"Individualism in a society that focuses on branding in young people."
3 - Hi Michael! As I read your essay, I came to the realization that you really feel quite strongly about...
Writing Feedbackscotmi - Oct 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|TOEFL essay: open discussions in class vs. lectures - any way to study is okay as long as it works
2 - Not bad at all dveri. The essay is well developed and discussed. It is simple and easy to follow....
Writing Feedbackdveri - Oct 10, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 11, 2015
|Visiting another country is always better than only watching it on television
2 - Hello, Pramudita! I like that your essay has a definite structure, however there are some sentences I'd have written...
Writing FeedbackPramudita - Oct 10, 2015 / dveri - Oct 10, 2015
|Required activities for high schoolers: charity, neighbourhood improving, teaching sports to kids
4 - This kind of work need to enhance reader impression by taking space(s) among the paragraph. With this way, examiner,...
Writing FeedbackHaru - Oct 10, 2015 / SHanafi - Oct 11, 2015
|In your letter explain why and for how long you want to take time off from work
Writing Feedbackpdeep37 - Oct 10, 2015 / pdeep37 - Oct 11, 2015
|TASK 2: how the feeling of staying in the apartment?
Writing FeedbackJIDA - Oct 9, 2015 / aniani - Oct 10, 2015
|I would argue that mankind can learn much about another countries when visiting them directly
2 - Hi Jida.. Nice to see you again here. Let me give some correction on your essay. Here it goes....
Writing FeedbackJIDA - Oct 9, 2015 / aniani - Oct 10, 2015
|IELTS Task 1: The vehicles are favored by workers in Houston, Texas
3 - Private car produces the highest amount of carbon dioxide, roughly 0.32 kilograms per person while anotherother car results approximately...
Writing FeedbackPramudita - Oct 9, 2015 / db723 - Oct 15, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 : The different ways of collecting water to fulfill the irrigation
2 - Overall, it can be seen that both of thisthese techniques use a different equipment but same aim. The...
Writing FeedbackClark Kent - Oct 9, 2015 / Pramudita - Oct 9, 2015
|The Advantages of a Computer for Student: social networking, learning media, computer skills
Writing Feedbacksharahma - Oct 9, 2015 / sharahma - Oct 9, 2015
|Comparing two traditional techniques to accumulate water for irrigation.
Writing FeedbackPramudita - Oct 9, 2015 / Pramudita - Oct 9, 2015
|Isolation from the world is not a good idea for any country "Toefl"
Writing Feedbacktaranehrezaee - Oct 9, 2015 / taranehrezaee - Oct 13, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 : The most favorite conveyance for employees in Houston, Texas
3 - Muflih, aside from some grammatical errors in this report, it is quite efficient and conveys the contents of the...
Writing FeedbackClark Kent - Oct 9, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2015
|The graph compares the changes in the number of people using railways transportation in G.Britain
2 - Bayu! You should really be so proud of yourself. This is one of the best reports that you have...
Writing FeedbackBayuwibowo - Oct 9, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2015
|The process of Active Study contains both individual and group work.
2 - Heida, while the essay that you wrote is quite direct to the point and instantly answers the prompt, you...
Writing Feedbackheidarvandm - Oct 9, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2015
|The main reasons and several ways to tackle the inequality between developed and developing country
Writing Feedbackhasbi - Oct 9, 2015 / justivy03 - Oct 9, 2015
|Dissimilarity between developed and less developed countries
2 - Irham, while you make a compelling argument showing that foreign government intervention is the reason that there is a...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Oct 9, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 9, 2015
|Social Bond in The High Rise Apartment
2 - This is certainly a very interesting discussion Muhajid. Your line of reasoning obviously comes from personal experience, first hand...
Writing Feedbackmujahid_fadli - Oct 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|People around the world pursue the internet as sophisticated media to do anything such info and data
2 - Diqon, there is still a lot of confusion in your essay. Most of the thoughts remain unclear because of...
Writing FeedbackDiqon - Oct 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|"Culture an Inescapable Thing" - synthesis essay
2 - One way or other culturalcultures will somehow influence a( a what?) , throughout their life, it might cloud their...
Writing FeedbackRedGod - Oct 8, 2015 / irhame - Oct 8, 2015
|Gain a better experience by traveling to another country - IELTS Task 2
2 - A closer look at how I develop my introductory paragraph. TV and films as the best entertainment...
Writing Feedbackochio - Oct 8, 2015 / eddies - Oct 8, 2015
|Abortion: Help Before and Beyond - Great Awareness
Writing FeedbackProverbs31 - Oct 8, 2015 / preota - Oct 9, 2015
|The ways to achieve an knowledge. Visiting is Always Better Than Watching
4 - I have read your comments, Mister. Thanks a lot for you due to taking time to proofread and give...
Writing Feedbackmujahid_fadli - Oct 8, 2015 / mujahid_fadli - Oct 10, 2015
|Studying at a small university helps promote the interaction among students and learning efficiency
3 - Hi Long! Why are you taking note of the word count? Were you writing with a word limitation? Was...
Writing Feedbackryanta - Oct 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|TOEFL Writing Independent Task: Should children be required to perform household tasks?
Writing Feedbackryanta - Oct 8, 2015 / smartyp - Oct 8, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Loneliness or Better Sense of Community
3 - Muflih, you are contradicting yourself in your statements. In your introduction, you indicate that you believe that people living...
Writing FeedbackClark Kent - Oct 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|IELTS Task 2 : Do You Feel Lonely When You Live In An Apartment?
5 - Hello aniani, I'm Luthfia. Actually, I like your idea, it is simple but acceptable. First of all, I suggest...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Oct 8, 2015 / Luthfia Dewi - Oct 11, 2015
|Both schools and parents should be responsible for solving eating problems of children.
Writing FeedbackDiqon - Oct 8, 2015 / Diqon - Oct 8, 2015
|Gaining the proper education is very prominent particularly when looking for a good job
Writing Feedbackirfan727 - Oct 8, 2015 / irfan727 - Oct 11, 2015
|Essay about the daily activities of my mother
2 - Lina, the way you write in such a careless manner will definitely affect your grade. The first rule of...
Writing Feedbacklinbud - Oct 8, 2015 / vangiespen - Oct 8, 2015
|Apology Letter - missed attendance at the birthday celebration (Ielts Task 1)
3 - Thanks vangiespen, I will try to incorporate your ideas in next letter. Your ideas really help me a lot...
Writing Feedbackpdeep37 - Oct 8, 2015 / pdeep37 - Oct 8, 2015
|The Internet mania; a dependency, needs, or destruction
Writing FeedbackEjepe - Oct 8, 2015 / JIDA - Oct 8, 2015
|How to be happy? I strongly believe that there are many factors to be cheerful.
2 - Hi Pramudita. Nice essay, you have made it very well. All the ideas you explain very clearly and you...
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