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|Humans are the most clever and talented creature across the world
2 - Humans are veryclever and talented . One thing that separates humans from from other living beings is their ability...
Writing Feedbacknaghmeh_ms - Jan 20, 2015 / Enchantress07 - Jan 20, 2015
|Most people have watched a comedy show on TV with their families at least once in their lives; TOEFL
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Jan 20, 2015 / ah_zafari - Jan 20, 2015
|Countless student at universities causes comptetion. Do you agree or disagree? Is it a good or bad?
10 - I guess my TOEFL experience is way different from that of the IELTS. Thanks for letting me know about...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 21, 2015
|Lately, many high school students try to search for a job instead of going to universities; TOEFL
5 - Yes, I do see your point... Perhaps something like calculating taxes or bills would be plausible....
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Jan 19, 2015 / kibz95 - Jan 20, 2015
|Spending money on appearance: right or wrong? Discuss both sides
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 19, 2015 / ah_zafari - Jan 20, 2015
|I started my first job as a Graduate Engineer Trainee; SOP - Applying for Master's
3 - Your essay is quite strong and certainly presents the 4 major information requirements that led you to consider enrolling...
Writing Feedbackvella88 - Jan 19, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2015
|TOEFL: Television advertising directed toward children under the age of five should not be allowed.
6 - Hmm. I understand what you are trying to say... And don't worry about not replying, I understand your situation....
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Jan 18, 2015 / kibz95 - Jan 22, 2015
|Staying well-informed in this time and age is simple, but which information is true and which is not
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Jan 18, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2015
|Spend money on computers or teachers' wages? discuss both viewpoints
6 - Excellent work! You not only considered both sides of the issue, but you also successfully argued both sides in...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 19, 2015
|Should the government spend money on outer space projects?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 18, 2015
|In my view staying with the family for a longer time is better.
Writing Feedbackrohitkhadse - Jan 17, 2015 / rohitkhadse - Jan 18, 2015
|Should we wait for destiny to pave way for us or is it better to work hard instead?
2 - The comparison here is between destiny and working hard playing a role in the future or a person. There...
Writing FeedbackAreeba96 - Jan 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 17, 2015
|"Motivation will almost always beat mere talent."
Writing FeedbackBurki - Jan 17, 2015 / Burki - Jan 17, 2015
|I believe that there is no job or major or expert which is regarded as the best in society
2 - You have an incomplete introductory statement. Remember, you need to present the topic thesis, possible opinions, and your opinion...
Writing Feedbacknaghmeh_ms - Jan 17, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 17, 2015
|The best way to console the person is by patting him on a shoulder or silently hugging him
Writing FeedbackAcioncion - Jan 17, 2015 / Acioncion - Jan 17, 2015
|Socialization process. Who influences you more? Peers or parents and teachers?
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 16, 2015 / Acioncion - Jan 17, 2015
|Rational leader or mindless lunatic? Hero or a traitor? Louis Riel essay
2 - Interesting paper! There are few run-on words (no space in between) and issues with dates (e.g. October 22nd...
Writing FeedbackCesauto - Jan 16, 2015 / EF_Sheri - Jan 16, 2015
|What ways do you suggest to make ads effective? What are their good and bad effects on the society?
11 - In advertising, the term "effective ad" means both improved marketing and consumer reception. The better they market the product,...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 16, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 17, 2015
|Using animals as a tools. Animals' right regulation has generated a great deal of discussions.
3 - Dear EF_Sheri, Thank you very much for your correction. how about my flow sentence and my idea? because...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Jan 16, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Jan 20, 2015
|Telecommuting suits only to devoted workers, who know how to manage their time and personal life.
3 - Thank you for amazing suggestions, I appreciate. I am going to check it carefully following your advice....
Writing FeedbackAcioncion - Jan 16, 2015 / Acioncion - Jan 16, 2015
|Information war in my motherland, Ukraine. Small essay about mass media (302 words)
6 - OK I copied an example from the book "practical writing with reading" below: Do you realize that newly born...
Writing FeedbackAcioncion - Jan 15, 2015 / ah_zafari - Jan 17, 2015
|How do you show your appreciation to your family and friends-agree or disagree
4 - When a topic asks you to agree or disagree, you don't have to necessarily choose a specific side, provided...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Jan 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 15, 2015
|A large portion of country's budget should be diverted to health and preventive measures.
2 - Alleb, when you write an introductory statement, make sure to present the prompt in the first sentence by rephrasing...
Writing Feedbacktantadedanaan - Jan 13, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 15, 2015
|Some countries follow religious laws in its way of punishment such as Saudi Arabia and Iran.
Writing Feedbackfatine - Jan 13, 2015 / fatine - Jan 15, 2015
|IELTS : children consciousness about caring people; course about voluntary social service in school
2 - Some basics 1. Your writing's layout, put a space between your paragraphs. 2. Write the complete prompt including the...
Writing FeedbackFardhani Putri - Jan 13, 2015 / SHanafi - Jan 17, 2015
|GRE: Teaching should be both a pull and push, where praise is given when the student does right
Writing Feedbacksumdysan - Jan 12, 2015 / smilex0 - Jan 13, 2015
|Computer technology is the present world. It's shaping our futures at rates unprecedented in history
2 - As a result, its profound effects on our education system ... it is profound By all means, answer to...
Writing FeedbackSundus - Jan 11, 2015 / Fardhani Putri - Jan 13, 2015
|The apple campany's slogan: "Think Different" has become a motto of the new generation.
3 - @stretchthelimit Thank you for your evaluation. I just feel that 25 minutes is so short for an SAT essay...
Writing FeedbackCharlesD - Jan 10, 2015 / CharlesD - Jan 13, 2015
|What age group do you prefer to spend your time with? Your own age group or other ones?
2 - One of the significant influences that play a pivotal roles in a person's socialization process of a person ...
Writing Feedbackssaallaamm - Jan 10, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Jan 12, 2015
|I desire a farm house and natural atmosphere - "upside and downside of living in countryside"
Writing Feedbackfrazier - Jan 10, 2015 / frazier - Jan 10, 2015
|Does a country want its students to be mentally and physically ill? Sports and social activities.
2 - Since we know what prompt you are answering, you don't need to restate it. "...opinion by three...
Writing Feedbackfaezehch - Jan 9, 2015 / anonymous2014 - Jan 9, 2015
|Have you ever play 'Rock paper scissors' with your relatives when you were little?
Writing FeedbackLulu_827 - Jan 8, 2015 / Lulu_827 - Jan 20, 2015
|TOEFL ESSAY -WHAT CHANGE WILL 21ST CENTURAY BRING?
2 - The essay as a whole is fairly impressive but try changing the beginning of the second sentence. Instead of...
Writing FeedbackTrinity - Jan 8, 2015 / digvijaymore - Jan 9, 2015
|[IELTS Writing task 1] US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone
Writing Feedbackkamikazexoxo - Jan 8, 2015 / Trinity - Jan 8, 2015
|There have always been scandals in history from ancient to modern society. Are scandals useful?
2 - A very good essay might need some improving in the first para From then on very flawless kudos!...
Writing Feedbacktico82 - Jan 8, 2015 / huzefaa - Jan 9, 2015
|Do you believe that elderly people used to live in a better world? IELTS-task2
Writing Feedbackssaallaamm - Jan 8, 2015 / ssaallaamm - Jan 9, 2015
|Human being inherently tends to experience different things in their entire life. Changing job
NEW - Hey guys, after a long time I started preparing myself for the IELTS test again. Here is my first...
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|I had to choose between entering the scientific section or the literary section
Writing Feedbackabdulaziz966 - Jan 6, 2015 / naghmeh_ms - Jan 7, 2015
|The internet has caused a considerable discrepancy between modern life and past life.
2 - There are obvious capitalization errors in your paper. You need to learn to proof read your work and use...
Writing Feedbacknaghmeh_ms - Jan 6, 2015 / vangiespen - Jan 6, 2015
|Sixty nine percent of waste materials in Korea is being disposed of by means of recycling
4 - I would say Korea and Sweden do not practice the process of disposing unwanted resources through chemical treatment or...
Writing FeedbackLady Elle - Jan 5, 2015 / KrithikaK - Jan 5, 2015
|A number of facts as to why computers are considered more of a disadvantage than an advantage.
3 - might want to exceed the 250 word minimum you can do this by elaborating and broadening your scope, incorporating...
Writing FeedbackLady Elle - Jan 5, 2015 / lynn1997h - Jan 5, 2015
|Concern about judging criminals with the death penalty
3 - Thanks!...
Writing FeedbackBigger - Jan 5, 2015 / Bigger - Jan 6, 2015
|Mom vs. Mom: The differnce between employed mothers and stay-at-home mothers
2 - The first sentence should have plural nouns: homemakers and caregivers. In fact, 61% of the total people employed......
Writing Feedbackreilmikaylie1 - Jan 5, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Jan 12, 2015
|Whenever something becomes too much for me, my mother is there calming me
3 - As a whole, use stronger words and for the grammar and syntax stuff, say your essay out loud and...
Writing Feedbackmema - Jan 5, 2015 / lynn1997h - Jan 5, 2015
|The two illustrations show Coca-cola Company's percentage of sales in a pie graph
Writing FeedbackLady Elle - Jan 4, 2015 / Lady Elle - Jan 4, 2015
|Life without changes means life without emotions. Psychologists help is suggested.
3 - Keep in mind the spelling and that mistakes such as "depretion" when i assume you really mean "depression" can...
Writing Feedbacknaghmeh_ms - Jan 4, 2015 / lynn1997h - Jan 4, 2015
|A person develops different qualities and traits as he grows up from a child into an adult
4 - Thank you vincenm for your candid opinion. How can I improve my intro and conclusion? I learned from a...
Writing Feedbacksyedali1 - Jan 3, 2015 / syedali1 - Jan 4, 2015
|Waste Disposal Method, destroying dangerous waste products - Pie charts
4 - It is not stated which part of Korea is using that particular method of waste disposal, so I think...
Writing Feedbackviolethoang - Jan 2, 2015 / Lady Elle - Jan 5, 2015
|Why do you do what you do? The point of reading is something every already reader knows
Writing Feedbackcastor - Jan 2, 2015 / samkazmi - Jan 3, 2015
|Governments and individuals collective responsibility may be solution for the global warming.
2 - The greenhouse gases are consisted by various gases, but the most typical factor is Carbon Dioxide, which is mostly...
Writing Feedbackyen_vely - Jan 2, 2015 / stretchthelimit - Jan 2, 2015
|Further study is necessary - many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible.
2 - Change words in the essay like "I Think" to something like "I Know" to show that your firm on...
Writing Feedbackwangyu - Jan 1, 2015 / smunoz23 - Jan 1, 2015
|It is clear to be seen that NGOs, social groups and communities are ubiquitous in recent years
Writing Feedbackmanutd9111993 - Jan 1, 2015 / manutd9111993 - Jan 1, 2015
|Changes of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. IELTS Task 1
3 - Thank you Kevin for your compliment and the problems you pointed out also. I'll try harder next time :)...
Writing Feedbackmanutd9111993 - Jan 1, 2015 / manutd9111993 - Jan 1, 2015
|In the north of Colombia there are a small native people who live on the top of mountains
2 - The sentence has some grammar I suggest using this website called ginger for grammar correction it helped me...
Writing Feedbackjhon81 - Dec 30, 2014 / nada1998 - Dec 31, 2014
|Nationality of natural persons in relation to the succession of States. Country: Indonesia
3 - Thanks, you're right, now that i read it again i realise i should work on a conclusion that creates...
Writing FeedbackCamilabido - Dec 29, 2014 / Camilabido - Dec 30, 2014
|SPECIAL NEEDS KIDS DESERVE BETTER
2 - With the right accommodations they can have equal educational opportunity. (I think it's more accurate to say this instead...
Writing FeedbackLor2062005 - Dec 29, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2015
|Higher education is the surest ticket to a better career life. What is important in schools?
2 - great job of providing specific examples. A couple grammar issues in the first sentence of the last paragraph. From...
Writing FeedbackJadewan - Dec 28, 2014 / jricha - Dec 28, 2014
|Sugar; The new addiction. A change is needed to help us help ourselves in what we eat.
Writing FeedbackDanV - Dec 27, 2014 / keavdarapper - Dec 27, 2014
|Laser Fungal Therapy Essay for Research Project
2 - Insurances do not cover... It might be clearer to say 'Insurance policies do not.." But that is nitpicking; I...
Writing Feedbackstephspecht - Dec 27, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2015
|Anti-radiation scarf and poncho stanford intellectual vitality
2 - Well, this is a very interesting take on radiation and how it can affect the mindset of people. This...
Writing Feedbackskwangar - Dec 27, 2014 / vangiespen - Dec 28, 2014
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