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The child care centres can provide more prefessional care than ordinary family.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test other products

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Happiness is a feeling of pleasure or enjoyment. For this reason people see money as its source.

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"Grades" - immense educational pressure put on the little children in our South Asian societies

Writing FeedbackRiyasat - Mar 17, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 17, 2015
IELTS TASK2: there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine

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Modern lifestyles are increasingly stressful, therefore people in this world are faced by stress.

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IELTS TASK 2 : It is important to keep the circuses exhibition, without using rare animals.

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These days everyone seems to have more and more possessions (e.g. computers, cars, mobile phones, et

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Columbia and Yamhill - population in the state of Oregon by Country - IELTS writing

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'fresh ideas of creating new successful starts-up' - should we follow customs of a visited country?

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Australian boys and girls of age 5-14 leisure activities

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The number of population in the U.S. of Oregon - gradual rise in three different counties

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My Thrilling Birth Day Surprise in Royal Boutique - simple narrative essay

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The carbon cycle in our life - from fossil fuels to photosynthesis

Writing FeedbackZihni92 - Mar 13, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 13, 2015
The components of a thermos flask to maintain hot liquid (IELTS 1)

Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Mar 13, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 17, 2015
The process of pencil making from graphite and wood

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The process of the greenhouse effect in the earth' surface - too much gases accumulated

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The line graph compares and contrast data on the different percentage of unemployed women

Writing Feedbackilma - Mar 13, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 17, 2015
Children of helicopter parents are more likely to feel depressed and less satisfied with their lives

Writing FeedbackESSAYGENIUS - Mar 12, 2015 / ESSAYGENIUS - Mar 12, 2015
Whether to voice our opinions or not? Listening to your heart is of vital importance.

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In developed countries like America, France and Germany nearly everyone seems to own a car.

Writing FeedbackCE317 - Mar 11, 2015 / CE317 - Mar 13, 2015
IELTS Task 1 : Taxes burden citizens in some countries.

Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Mar 11, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 19, 2015
Forcing visitors to behave like host country would not bring anything new - no good changes for host

Writing Feedbackmaryla - Mar 10, 2015 / Freelanson - Mar 11, 2015
Even though the internet is not completely flawless, in general his impact is positive for us

Writing Feedbackjakelly - Mar 10, 2015 / MisterWandering - Mar 10, 2015
Initial steps have always been the most difficult and important in achieving something worthwhile.

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House of tramps, the owner unseen.

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 10, 2015 / EF_Carol - Mar 10, 2015
Trying to rephrase a paragraph with unusual grammar to get intended message across

Writing Feedbacksabooakhter - Mar 9, 2015 / sabooakhter - Mar 9, 2015
//IELTS-1// the table and charts below - destination and employment of UK graduates

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 9, 2015 / shintacandrade - Mar 10, 2015
'I could bare feel the scalding handprint on my cheek' - Descriptive essay - A rash action

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House is a good place to protect you, to relax yourself as well as give you more freedom.

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cultural identity lost because the emerge of internet. IELTS

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Riversdale University's Map in 1973 and in 2010 - IELTS Writing Task 1

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Changes in the proportion of online shopping to the film/music retail sector in New Zealand

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Firstly, when the rain falls, the dam is full for a period of time. How the rainwater is reused.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace

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Preventing crime is the viable benefit of using body scanner and CCTV - IELTS

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There have been growing concerns from many schools about the concentrate of students in class.

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Movement of population to cities becomes more popular in many countries for several reasons. IELTS

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In general, Social Sciences, Arts leads highly of the main fields of study than the other subjects.

Writing FeedbackKifti H Islami - Mar 6, 2015 / eddies - Mar 6, 2015
There is no doubt that most of the people consider health as a major part of their life

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Cultures .. one view of their dynamics; Pilgrims of Eastern origin

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"Engineering is an application of science to the purpose of life" said by Count Rumford

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On the whole, people need to be aware of the value of food-consumed.

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Children are tomorrow asset for parent and nation. IELTS essay

Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 4, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 5, 2015
It is often alleged that many teenagers want to reach their higher education after finishing school.

Writing Feedbackdavechau - Mar 4, 2015 / anhminh3105 - Mar 5, 2015
I intend to argue that the general impacts of international tourism have in fact been negative

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Comparison of the changes of three main exports in Southland - IELTS

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Trash bins at every nook and corner, more public toilets and regularly cleaned garbage piles

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Bad news in the media? Just to make money and to gain popularity.

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Security Cameras and Cellphone Tracking

Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Mar 4, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 4, 2015
IELTS Writing Task 1: Online Sales for retail sectors in New Zealand

Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Mar 4, 2015 / audley - Mar 4, 2015
People who committed crime, especially the young offenders, have the right to be educated

Writing Feedbackduomaxwel - Mar 3, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Mar 4, 2015
The cool night breeze whistled softly, blowing lightly through my hair

Writing Feedbackmaddy1579 - Mar 3, 2015 / dquinlan11 - Mar 7, 2015
Car ownership, public transport and environment protection - Ielts2

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 3, 2015 / lynzee22 - Mar 3, 2015
Ageing population worldwide in 2000 and predictions for 2050. IELTS-1

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 3, 2015 / audley - Mar 3, 2015
Sports unite peoples from different corners of the world. IELTS TASK 2.

Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 2, 2015 / SHanafi - Mar 2, 2015
History creates value and shapes our life. For this reason law is available to protect old buildings

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Electricity transfers from high voltage cables into transformer station - one of several stages

Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Mar 2, 2015 / autumn_waltz - Mar 3, 2015
IELTS - governments subsidize museums, theaters and other arts, and it concerns many people.

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltz - Mar 2, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 2, 2015
I do not agree to follow the same curriculum through all that period of time; GRE essay

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