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|Do students prefer traditional house or modern house?
2 - Good morning. "Although older people have gained a lot of knowledge and experience , the assertion that older...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|Some people trust their first impression about a person, while some do not.
2 - Thank you, Gloria. Can you help me figure out why 'gaining experiences' in the introduction paragraph is ok...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 9, 2008 / jerry - Sep 11, 2008
|Playing game is not only fun if I win - there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game
2 - "Some people think that a game cannot be fun without winning. Whenever I play soccer, it brings me...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 10, 2008
|Are real events, real people, and established facts the best for studying?
2 - You're welcome. ... real people, and established facts. ...books will provide me the ability to imagine, the motivation...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|Many people base on advertising to assess things. Getting know about a country.
2 - Let's see: "Many people use advertising as a base to assess things. To me, advertising is not reliable...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 15, 2008
|'Never, never give up' - students meeting obstacles
NEW - This is today essay. Opinion about the expression 'Never, never give up' "Every time I meet obstacles on...
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|Studying abroad: seeking better opportunities for students?
NEW - I have some questions. I was certainly effected I do not get why using 'effected' instead of 'affected'...
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|Studying through a computer or studying in school (what students prefer)
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|The Good Sides of the Internet Invention
NEW - Internet good sides. "For me, one of the best moments of the 20th century is the invention of...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|The Quality of the Decision: The Power of Thinking Without Thinking
2 - My own experience shows the reason why I want to make decisions slowly and cautiously. Decisions, when devoted enough...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 21, 2008
|Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice
2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|Children should learn household tasks to survive
2 - You're welcome. When it comes to the issue of whether or not children should be required to help...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|Should high schools let students learn what they choose?
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|Changing and staying the same in life. Which would you prefer?
2 - Good to hear! These are my thoughts: "Humans' life perceptions are diverse. Some people believe that changes...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|Under English Law, minors have limited capacity to make contracts.
2 - Greetings! I'm glad to help, welcome! the objective element focuses more on what has been supplied. This...
Writing Feedbackericchk - Feb 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 15, 2008
|Successful organization / Something what seems to be is not always the same as it actually is?
2 - Good evening. "...jobs and get promoted ." "...employees in this company begi n to ..." "...individualism...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 25, 2008
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Scoring: People Living in Debts to Buy Unimportant Things
3 - Nowadays, it is easier for people to lend a specific amount of money to purchase products that are not...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 21, 2015 / foxyh - May 21, 2015
|The levels of movie rentals and sales in VHS, DVD and Blu-ray formats
3 - Actually your essay is good, but a little bit listing Moving to a more detailed analysis,it is more...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 21, 2015 / faarasyad - May 23, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Simulation: Parents Spend Little Time with Children Nowadays
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 21, 2015 / Hettymsk - May 23, 2015
|Short essay - Is it better to stay on the safe side?
3 - Hi, first of all I really enjoy how you can manage to construct such flow and make the readers...
Writing Feedbackhaika - May 20, 2015 / Trias - May 21, 2015
|Learning how to be a good member in society through the (obligatory?) community service program
4 - Some people believe that it should be to become a compulsory part of high school curriculum so that student...
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - May 20, 2015 / Trias - May 21, 2015
|Is it better study domestic or abroad?
NEW - In the flat world today, besides economical factor has changed significantly, education has affected by globalization phenomenon. There are...
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|International market access in order to produce more goods and to generate solid profits for regions
4 - For instance, economical help from the United States to demerit regions in Indonesia has gradually reduced since = because...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 19, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|Living for today is better than living for tomorrow
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 19, 2015 / Naph - May 26, 2015
|Is it appropriate to use of animals for human benefits?
2 - Hy trias, these are your writing feedback from me: 1. Give example or scientific fact for each body...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 19, 2015 / MuhammadImho - May 20, 2015
|TV Programmes Watched in Australia - women prefer to watch reality shows more than game shows
NEW - The chart below show the number and genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 19, 2015 / — -
|People Get Into Dept Since They Afford Things They Do Not Need
3 - stacy..., a few points for para 1 & 2: Para 1: - Do not write "relate to...", but "satisfaction...
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - May 19, 2015 / eddies - May 19, 2015
|The annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films
3 - Moving to a more detailed analysis from the bar chart, it reveals that DVS sales type rose gradually at...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - May 19, 2015 / siddiqumar - May 19, 2015
|How often people bought or rented movies between 2002 and 2011 in a particular store
2 - Hi Siddiq, Please find my feedback on your overview paragraph below: The bar chart gives information concerning how...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 19, 2015 / Trias - May 19, 2015
|Getting into dept by buying goods which do not needed
2 - I hope this helps you. I also gave you some suggestions on how you can improve your writing. ...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - May 19, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 19, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Changes In The World Population Between 1900 and 2000
Writing FeedbackHettymsk - May 19, 2015 / Hettymsk - May 23, 2015
|Some effects of Internet addiction lead to consequences like health problems or relationships damage
Writing Feedbacknguyenvannam - May 18, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|Media are focusing more on the personal lives of celebrities.
3 - Dear justivy Thanks for your pints and your helpful advice. Can you give a grade to this essay...
Writing Feedbackm4soud - May 18, 2015 / m4soud - May 19, 2015
|City life and country life - I will stay in the city, although both places are good to live.
2 - I think you need to have indentations or a way for the reader to understand when you are trying...
Writing Feedbackhoangan - May 18, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 18, 2015
|As a form of transportations, cycling has its merits and demerits, however it improves our health.
3 - To begin with, cycling is a low cost means of traffic, the opening of the advantages of cycling ...
Writing Feedbackmijoan - May 18, 2015 / Trias - May 19, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 1 Simulation: World Population by Region, 1900 and 2000
6 - Para 2: - Sentence 3; write Europe including/ which was included/with Russia. - Sentence 4; Lastly (DELETE). For the...
Writing FeedbackTrias - May 18, 2015 / eddies - May 21, 2015
|It is up to us to decide which one is better - either work or travel before starting a university
Writing FeedbackKaraeng - May 18, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 18, 2015
|Estimate the essay "Single parent struggle". What advantages and disadvantages can you find?
Writing Feedbacksonya_mirka - May 17, 2015 / sonya_mirka - May 18, 2015
|The museum should be a fun and appealing place for its visitors - shall attract and entertain people
4 - Hello I am beginner in English, With the sensational effects and interesting features, they never fail to attract young...
Writing FeedbackMichaelLi - May 16, 2015 / Naph - May 17, 2015
|Inherent Truth - something that you do is more important than what you say to people
NEW - Do u agree or disagree with the following statement? Actions speak louder than words. The maxim actions speak...
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|Grades help motivate or discourage students to learn?
3 - Another point to consider is, some students have shameful... adapt to their friends I think this point is a...
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 16, 2015 / chuoi9 - May 18, 2015
|The preference of people changing from purchasing a house to renting one and benefits from it.
Writing FeedbackMichaelLi - May 16, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|'The lazy generation' - compare and contrast essay
4 - Kiaraaa123, thank you for your offer to help me with Spanish. How kind of you! I know more than...
Writing Feedbackkiaraaa123 - May 16, 2015 / ChristineB - May 17, 2015
|How to improve you skills in English?
4 - Mariam, Regarding the remarks I made, the punctuation on the "example" and the rest of the remarks I...
Writing Feedbackmariam soos - May 16, 2015 / justivy03 - May 18, 2015
|Students who take a break between the high school and universities are at disadvantage
4 - i have one suggestion for you Do not use contractions . the use contraction reflects lack of formality and...
Writing FeedbackparkcoolGuy - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|Freetime activities - trying to write an essay for my important examination
Writing Feedbacktulipgirl - May 15, 2015 / tulipgirl - May 15, 2015
|5 paragraph writing - travel and transportation
3 - When we were near Kanchanaburi that was a relief! why you used from (we)?? I think it is personal...
Writing Feedbackmayph - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 16, 2015
|A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Writing FeedbackNaph - May 15, 2015 / Naph - May 15, 2015
|IELTS: Strict punishments for driving offences - safety reasons?
4 - On the other hand, there are many other ways which can be implemented to improved road safety. Firstly, It...
Writing Feedbackzoha - May 15, 2015 / SHanafi - May 18, 2015
|Some people consider their pets as part of their families and treat them like their own babies
Writing FeedbackPhyuPhyu - May 14, 2015 / Hettymsk - May 24, 2015
|Three points why people these days are living longer.
4 - For example, Tuberculosis was one of the most formidable diseases that killed many victims in the past but today...
Writing Feedbackchuoi9 - May 14, 2015 / nguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
|Summary of the polemic essay "Single parent struggle"
Writing Feedbackstasy - May 13, 2015 / stasy - May 14, 2015
|English paper about NGOs - Nongovernmental Organizations
2 - - The general idealizedidea and framework of how NGOs were created... - use of punctuation marks, colon...
Writing Feedbackalsulaiti - May 13, 2015 / justivy03 - May 13, 2015
|Ghoulish House Description
4 - In addition to prior comments, I would like to remind about a few typos and punctuations here: Shattered glass...
Writing FeedbackErin W - May 12, 2015 / Trias - May 21, 2015
|Leaving home is common to University Students' nowadays and it serves several purposes to them.
Writing FeedbackSun Sokteang - May 12, 2015 / Sun Sokteang - May 12, 2015
|Solving Sustainable Electricity in California
Writing Feedbackvinhson87 - May 11, 2015 / vinhson87 - May 12, 2015
|There are a lot of challenges in order to reduce traffic accidents - how a strict punishment work?
2 - Second paragraph first line some people could be afraid of paying fines and disqualification because of driving offence,this is...
Writing FeedbackKellen - May 10, 2015 / Farhan393 - May 10, 2015
|Best change in my hometown? Establishing companies to make a lot of job vacancies and employ people.
Writing Feedbackminoosaba - May 10, 2015 / minoosaba - May 11, 2015
|'strike while the iron is hot' - Topic: "Is spanking a good way to discipline children?"
Writing Feedbacknvnhcmus - May 10, 2015 / nvnhcmus - May 10, 2015
|Is TV a good thing for keeping people informed and entertained?
3 - the length of the two paragraphs are not equal your state ideas are not clear enough. I think it...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - May 9, 2015 / hunhann - May 10, 2015
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