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|More or Less People? Why are environmental issues caused by population difficult to address?
2 - Since we are living in a planet with limited resource, population has been an important environmental concern for many...
Writing Feedbacklooperacorn - Feb 11, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 13, 2015
|Starting earlier, you will encounter more types of sentence structures, grammars and vocabulary
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 11, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 12, 2015
|GRE-The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority
2 - This essay is quite informative, and that is what i like about it. Notwithstanding, this is a GRE exam,...
Writing Feedbackdunguyen - Feb 11, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 11, 2015
|A typical day of the underground station, rush hours in London train station - IELTS task 1
2 - My humble thoughts: your essay is wanting in holistic views, particularly in your detection/generalization of trends. I suppose that...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 11, 2015 / dunguyen - Feb 11, 2015
|Budget - thought-provoking issue among scholars to bring about and to desire for.
3 - Thank you very much, indeed. I will take into account your insightful comments in my next writing. ...
Writing Feedbackeftekharizade - Feb 11, 2015 / eftekharizade - Feb 11, 2015
|IELTS Task 1: Coffee exports in 3 different nations.
2 - This is the first time you mention, so Indefinite article is needed: A 10-year period Semi-colons...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Feb 11, 2015 / eddies - Feb 11, 2015
|Coffee export in three different countries in South America - IELTS task 1
2 - Overall, what stands out from the graph examines that coffee exports experienced bothan upward and downward trends . On...
Writing FeedbackCuynomellen - Feb 11, 2015 / eddies - Feb 11, 2015
|One's success determines through rewarding career. People are choosing to change careers, why?
4 - Imad thank you for remind me, I almost forget for the form of comparative. :) Moleman Wow!! It...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 11, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 13, 2015
|A horizon communication these days speaks more than one language. Learning foreign language issue
2 - A horizon communication these days speaks more than one language. As the country's future asset, children are able to...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 11, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 11, 2015
|IELTS: Big outdoor public space is necessary for all cities and towns, agree or disagree?
3 - Your writing skills is far better than mine, but I still want to point out something that I reckon...
Writing Feedbackmoleman - Feb 11, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 12, 2015
|Pushed by eager mother to enter sports clubs because it builds 'character'. Competition or fun?
2 - Very interesting introduction, but there is an issue with the introductions you write. There are lots of details in...
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Feb 11, 2015 / ah_zafari - Feb 11, 2015
|Immigrants shouldn't be responsible for adjusting in their newly adopted country.
2 - Hello Mr. THiet, I may be too harsh in evaluating this essay, but I hope you don't feel offended...
Writing Feedbackthiet sun - Feb 10, 2015 / kibz95 - Feb 10, 2015
|We meet many people in the course of our lifetimes. Choose one who is most unforgettable and why.
2 - A good essay. I think the first paragraph is a bit of a drag and unnecessarily wordy. You can...
Writing FeedbackJenya1970 - Feb 10, 2015 / pbjc7991 - Feb 12, 2015
|Who should be responsible for the welfare of poor nations?
4 - Some thoughts as follows. caveats: I am not a native, let alone a IELTS rater. 1.Your interpretation of...
Writing Feedbacktopeayowole - Feb 10, 2015 / moleman - Feb 11, 2015
|With the proliferation of high-tech media, internet, several issues always confront young people
NEW - Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extend do you...
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|It is unlikely nowadays not to get influenced by the trends, including related to fashion as well.
2 - You have an abundance of wonderful ideas in your essay! But anyways, in the formal writing i would personally...
Writing Feedbacksambhavsh - Feb 10, 2015 / Rich Monte - Feb 10, 2015
|A/D: Who is a better leader, an old person or a young one?
8 - Ahmad, no, I did not fail to take Steve Jobs and Bill Gates into consideration when I wrote my...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Feb 9, 2015 / vangiespen - Feb 13, 2015
|Elements and proper locations for the installation of wind turbine (IELTS Task 1)
NEW - The diagram illustrates the construction of a wind turbine which is consist of 4 crucial elements while the second...
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|What cause of people life longer ? is that positive of negative development? (IELTS Task 2)
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 9, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 10, 2015
|Nowadays, the environment where people live affects them so much
3 - There are some weaknesses in your writing. You need to focus on your vocabulary. For pragmatic instance, in...
Writing FeedbackTillie - Feb 9, 2015 / Rich Monte - Feb 10, 2015
|Spend Money for City's Development - quality and a quantity of public service facilities
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Feb 9, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2015
|Start to develop the electric cars or solve the problem of transportation system?
3 - Hi, I thought your writing was pretty good, but your essay was not that convincing to me. I would...
Writing FeedbackImaduddinnst - Feb 9, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 9, 2015
|Directing people away from desire to have own vehicle will reduce the pollution; A/D?
NEW - The proliferation of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems...
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|Alternative energy cars become recent technology invention today.
2 - -'Pollution are the biggest contribute in global warming which are caused by private cars on the roads '...
Writing Feedbackymahanani - Feb 9, 2015 / somasalims - Feb 9, 2015
|IELTS-Writing Task2: Renewable Energy and Public Transportation as one of responsible to environment
3 - If you want to use an abbreviation, you have to write an explanation in the beginning then use it...
Writing FeedbackLiliy - Feb 9, 2015 / akhfan - Feb 9, 2015
|Writing Task 2 : Public transportation still has possibilities to pollute environment
4 - I find it a little bizarre to see no transition from the second paragraph to the third one. In...
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - Feb 9, 2015 / Rich Monte - Feb 11, 2015
|Choosing between public transportation or electric car, reduce the emissions of CO2
Writing Feedbacktphy - Feb 9, 2015 / ksu - Feb 15, 2015
|It is extremely arduous for globalization to completely eliminate our precious culture.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 8, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 8, 2015
|Players and supporters in particular, should be supportive and responsible for the sporting events
3 - "In recent years, lots of international sporting events have been organised by international organisation in order to raise patriotic...
Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Feb 8, 2015 / EF_Kevin - Feb 8, 2015
|It is not a surprise that local people are not interested in visiting historical sites
2 - I do not consider your reason to be a cogent one. I think, you should have mentioned that local...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Mcqueen - Feb 8, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 17, 2015
|In India, as in worldwide, the most famous organisation is 'Athithi Dev Bavo'
4 - Yes, it can be used. Multiple of examples for exact phrase "Crime is soaring" and of course "day...
Writing FeedbackSabby multani - Feb 8, 2015 / Opuntia - Feb 9, 2015
|Body Scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security
3 - Governments play a pivotal role [in enhancing the] to enhance safety and security of their citizens[, w]hich is why...
Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Feb 8, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 8, 2015
|The present way of preparing food has helped consumers to save time, effort and money.
Writing Feedbackajreyes - Feb 8, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 8, 2015
|Parents show us how to recognize the rights and the wrongs
Writing FeedbackTillie - Feb 8, 2015 / Tillie - Feb 8, 2015
|Both transportation stakeholders and commuters should participate in solving traffic problem
2 - You have very good points and examples indicated in your essay. For me what you need to improve is...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 7, 2015 / ajreyes - Feb 8, 2015
|Why people study? Three common reasons: for experience, to improve knowledge and to get a good job.
2 - You can replace your statement as below as I think it would be more appropriate First of all,...
Writing FeedbackTillie - Feb 7, 2015 / Jenya1970 - Feb 7, 2015
|Energy sources shortage and negative impact on the global climate - 21st century has begun
NEW - The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details...
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|Overall, transportation, housing, and food were the underlying utilities of all four countries.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 7, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 8, 2015
|Influences that can be caused by computers!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 7, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 8, 2015
|IELTS-Task 1- The Share of International Student in Canada
4 - Aligned what eddies suggest in your further post. Overall, the percentage of international graduates among universities...
Writing Feedbackreplikatika - Feb 7, 2015 / SHanafi - Feb 8, 2015
|Some people say that job satisfaction is more important than money when it comes to selecting career
2 - It would be meaningful if you provided a full prompt for us. Anyways, the reasons of why you consent...
Writing Feedbackden31006 - Feb 7, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 7, 2015
|Teenagers should not only watch the TV program, but also take responsibility to practice the sport
Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Feb 7, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 13, 2015
|The wind turbine installation method and the optimum choice location of the tower
NEW - Question: The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location. Summarize the information by...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Feb 7, 2015 / — -
|The line graph provides a breakdown information in terms of quadrillion units of energies
2 - Hi, you addressed the graph correctly, but parts of your report were pretty hard to follow. Talking about "the...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 6, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 7, 2015
|I still hear my grandmother yelling at me asking me to stop playing on the streets
4 - Personally you should add some specific details. You also should check the grammatical error after finishing your essay. For...
Writing Feedbackvidhyamouli - Feb 6, 2015 / Tillie - Feb 9, 2015
|Books have always been read by many individuals since they can provide you with abundant knowledge
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 6, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 8, 2015
|Art is a product of human expression and for this case government should promote it
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 6, 2015 / replikatika - Feb 7, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: The average age at which workers retire appears to vary widely around the world.
2 - Honestly, the introduction is hard to understand. -'More attention should be paid ' needs a noun, I think....
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 6, 2015 / somasalims - Feb 7, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: teaching method with a teacher and students in a classroom will not exist
2 - tends to create an informal learning process. is to incline the quality .is incline the quality. this sentence is...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 6, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 6, 2015
|A whole culture has grown up around the new possibilities of keeping in touch on the Web
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 6, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 11, 2015
|When possible, parents should sometimes have a trip to natural park on holiday with their children.
4 - -'children should visit some spectacular scenery over the world directly' is main sentence. -as means 'because', the sentence...
Writing Feedbacksomasalims - Feb 6, 2015 / somasalims - Feb 7, 2015
|A prominent task of universities is to enroll prospective students for further next. IELTS
5 - wow! thank you so much for all comments. It is really improve my writing. Fadlanmuzakki, thank you for your...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 6, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 11, 2015
|Professional jobs are undervalued, whilst actors or company bosses are paid huge money
3 - 1. Needs an article here 2. Write: People with different ... 3/5. This is called sentence fragments. You...
Writing FeedbackCuynomellen - Feb 6, 2015 / eddies - Feb 8, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: An international language is the language of problem solving.
3 - Tia, this is an impresive writing depicting a strong discussion between the benefits and drawbacks learning foreign language in...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Feb 6, 2015 / SHanafi - Feb 7, 2015
|The production will receive assistance to provide perfect products - manufacturing stages
2 - -'the production planning which production planning will accept packaging ' should be 'the production planning which will accept...
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Feb 6, 2015 / somasalims - Feb 7, 2015
|Iran and Israel were in war period, but they released their problems and want to part in World Cup
2 - Hi Cuynomellen, you have a good writing and it is well organized although I have found some grammatical errors...
Writing FeedbackCuynomellen - Feb 6, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 6, 2015
|People are unaware of their original culture and it can damage a number of identities in the world
4 - dear replikatika, I have checked the long man dictionary and cambridge dictionary more than twice to know how to...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Feb 6, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 7, 2015
|Three possible locations of the wind turbine; under the sea, on top of a hill or near a local house.
2 - Hy akhfan... that's nice essay. you success to construct your essay in order to be easy to read.. however,...
Writing Feedbackakhfan - Feb 6, 2015 / Mann_ms - Feb 6, 2015
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Internet is a wonderful tool for making new friends
2 - People will maintain their relationship can still keep in touchwith their friends without meeting face-to-face. My suggestion for...
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Feb 6, 2015 / Cuynomellen - Feb 6, 2015
|You don't have to work hard to be successful, just be lucky.
2 - Even though you were not given a format for your paper, you should have used the default MLA formatting...
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