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|[IELTS] Cheap flights should not be discouraged
4 - - zjxhz, that is exactly what I was pointing out to you. You must always present a clear point...
Writing Feedbackzjxhz - Oct 6, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 6, 2014
|Academic Writing IELTS about numbers of computer users - graph
Writing Feedbackbaj_roman - Oct 6, 2014 / oktaHrp - Oct 8, 2014
|A Revolutionary Mindset; cultural and political characteristics of revolutionary America
2 - The peoples of America have always been diverse. Our colonial settlers came from many different backgrounds, for various reasons,...
Writing Feedbackrichardjolly - Oct 6, 2014 / rubz_girl23 - Oct 7, 2014
|IELTS-Task 2: children should take formal training to become good parents
Writing Feedbacklourance - Oct 5, 2014 / lourance - Oct 6, 2014
|There are no such things as freedom and security without independence - importance in your life
2 - There are no such things as freedom and security without independence. It is simply impossible. You cannot live freely...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 5, 2014 / IHaile - Oct 5, 2014
|Our rights as people define who we are as individuals - SAT ESSAY; CENSORSHIP
2 - Our rights as people define who are we are as individuals. Our individual rights in society allow us to...
Writing Feedbackboston1002 - Oct 5, 2014 / IHaile - Oct 5, 2014
|As a student I always prepared my own food - it is a considerably more expedient choice
4 - Gbekil, the only advice I can give you is to keep reading English materials and watching English films...
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 5, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 5, 2014
|IELTS; having purpose of life and being helpful as the main factors to achieve happiness
4 - Hello ritairianti, Let me try to write an introductory paragraph which is in three aspects; an attention-grabbing...
Writing Feedbackritairianti - Oct 5, 2014 / tiaDS - Oct 6, 2014
|Do you want do everything by your own hand without expecting to rely on somebody? Work on your own!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 5, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 5, 2014
|All schools have got an aim to prepare their students to be a professional individual of the society
Writing FeedbackFuadAzeri - Oct 5, 2014 / FuadAzeri - Oct 5, 2014
|'At least try once' - An essay about mundane topics
Writing Feedbackcalvinluo1997 - Oct 4, 2014 / calvinluo1997 - Oct 23, 2014
|Marijuana - what it is to you? Rough Draft Compare and Contrast
3 - Greetings! Yes, it is a lot of information. However, it is imperative that it is this long so that...
Writing FeedbackBrandonBritts - Oct 4, 2014 / BrandonBritts - Oct 6, 2014
|Kobe vs Lebron? Lebron James is still the King of this basketball planet; Contrast essay
Writing FeedbackGilchrist2014 - Oct 4, 2014 / Gilchrist2014 - Oct 5, 2014
|Security vs freedom - living freely is much more important than security.
2 - Vns, while you offer a very good argument in support of your stand, you have failed to recognize the...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 4, 2014
|There are three main things that matter to me: God, family, and country. Stanford Essay
3 - Patriot, while you do present very good examples of things that matter to you, there is a big problem...
Writing Feedbackpatriot1776 - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 4, 2014
|I think, no one can't live these days without a mobile phone and a computer.
Writing Feedbackrokajo5 - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 4, 2014
|TOEFL: It is better to wait in patience than take action.
13 - Zhang, you understood what I meant precisely. In the TOEFL, you are under a time constraint of 30 minutes....
Writing FeedbackDiesel - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 25, 2014
|My Castle - it all started from one brick. This is the place I feel comfortable in.
Writing FeedbackKM97 - Oct 4, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 4, 2014
|TOEFL: Pets not only can be our best and helpful friends but they also bring happiness for us.
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - Oct 4, 2014 / maryailt - Oct 4, 2014
|Mahatma Gandhi, is the most important spiritual guide in contemporary world; important world leader
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - Oct 4, 2014 / maryailt - Oct 4, 2014
|Too much attention on small things!
4 - Vns, you can add more to this introduction so that you can strengthen your opinion on the matter....
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 3, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 3, 2014
|'For many years the city of Grandview has provided annual funding for the Grandview Symphony'; GRE
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Oct 3, 2014 / peyman_np - Oct 4, 2014
|Watching television together makes communication among friends and family stronger
5 - i will give you some patern : 1. introduction you should paraphrasing this issue, and write clearly with two...
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 3, 2014 / ritairianti - Oct 5, 2014
|I was only thirteen at the time but old enough to understand that Leukemia was cancerous; UC essay
4 - Wow! Can I just say that your introduction was so unexpected? I loved your essay. It really pulled me...
Writing FeedbackTeeddy - Oct 3, 2014 / eldubb - Oct 4, 2014
|What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by air?
Writing FeedbackKristy Nguyen - Oct 3, 2014 / Kristy Nguyen - Oct 4, 2014
|The value of plans. Toefl exam.
6 - you should also reorganize the overall structure of the article(as commentator said above), especially an outline at the start...
Writing FeedbackAdamtong - Oct 3, 2014 / buheborjgin - Oct 27, 2014
|The first and foremost consideration is to be able obtain a stable job, satisfaction would be next..
2 - - William, you forgot to introduce the topic statement prior to entering your full discussion. Without the topic...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Oct 3, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 3, 2014
|Response to an article "Struggle for perfection"
Writing FeedbackNoumanAhmad - Oct 3, 2014 / NoumanAhmad - Oct 3, 2014
|motives of people applying for work / forms of transport used for journey - IELTS Task 1
4 - Thanks you bros! I think that before writing two detailed paragraphs, I have mentioned an overall trend as an...
Writing Feedbackvincentfreeman - Oct 3, 2014 / vincentfreeman - Oct 3, 2014
|GRE issue: As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible?
Writing Feedbackbuheborjgin - Oct 2, 2014 / arunpoppat - Oct 29, 2014
|Naturtint vs. Tom's of Maine - Compare and Contrast 2 advertisements
Writing Feedbackbehendrix - Oct 2, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 5, 2014
|Ielts: Parents should be more involved with their children's upbringing.
8 - please... do not try to make my sentences correct if you are not sure!!!! Gbekil, yea,,,, you are...
Writing Feedbackhandsome78boy - Oct 2, 2014 / handsome78boy - Oct 7, 2014
|The content of the Internet controlled by a single powerful global agency?
Writing Feedbackchucnt - Oct 2, 2014 / chucnt - Oct 3, 2014
|Zoos may not act as the best interest of animals since they are profit earning entities.
3 - Thank you for your correction. I agree with your other comments but I think "whose" is used to...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Oct 2, 2014 / william731 - Oct 3, 2014
|"in the way to success, there is no feet of lazy person" luck/hard work=Success
3 - Read this out load slowly to yourself. a couple of small words could be added "the". Succeed instead of...
Writing Feedbackmeokhoang94 - Oct 2, 2014 / ksuydam54 - Oct 18, 2014
|"How have you contributed to your school" - HELP, Writer's block
2 - Daltos, when you are writing an essay geared towards a scholarship application, it is best to familiarize yourself with...
Writing FeedbackDaltos - Oct 2, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 2, 2014
|what is the true maker of success? provide evidence and citation
2 - This is a pretty powerful sentence and make me realize what you think is the most important factor...
Writing FeedbackTbontb - Oct 1, 2014 / Adamtong - Oct 2, 2014
|Angel from Heaven (Memoir)
2 - This is a very well thought out and developed essay. However the part about your taking the first Math...
Writing Feedbackhihi2000 - Oct 1, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 1, 2014
|Internet is the most considerable invention due to its simplicity of gaining new knowledge.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 1, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 1, 2014
|I BELIEVE IN PICTURES - they have power of repairing unrepairable hearts
6 - Redy, please allow me to edit your essay whenever possible to keep it short but interesting ok? Thanks :-)...
Writing Feedbackredy - Oct 1, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 2, 2014
|Thankfully my obstacle was a shared one and I had the support of my family to help me get through it
2 - Your introduction must be a little bit more vague! save some of your experiences and stories later for your...
Writing Feedbackrachgreene - Oct 1, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 1, 2014
|Modern Technology is creating a single world culture?
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Oct 1, 2014 / hamedmas - Oct 2, 2014
|IELTS writing task 2: Opinions about a four-year high school education proposal
5 - Oh, that really surprised me that my essay is high assessed like that. Thanks you very much guys!!! I...
Writing Feedbackvincentfreeman - Oct 1, 2014 / vincentfreeman - Oct 2, 2014
|IELTS: improving sports facilities can increase public health but other factors are also important
2 - Hi, fadlan 1. Avoid using "there" in your starting. It effects nothing to catch your examiner's attention....
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Oct 1, 2014 / SHanafi - Oct 1, 2014
|IELTS-Task2 -Should all the zoos be closed?
6 - Hello) I suppose that you use Simon's ebook(ex-examiner of Ielts). But I think you have imroved his ideas...
Writing Feedbackkatjawanna65 - Oct 1, 2014 / Abdurasul - Oct 10, 2014
|IELTS: The chief factor of someone to prosper is the goal of that person; talent isn't a must
Writing Feedbackhsamadii - Oct 1, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 1, 2014
|IELTS: Tests and examinations still present major problems, which can produce unrealistic results.
Writing Feedbackcloverie - Sep 30, 2014 / vincentfreeman - Sep 30, 2014
|Who am I? 'do my best and let my God do the rest' - homework task
Writing FeedbackIscha - Sep 30, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 1, 2014
|Separating Male and female ! Gender Segregation in Schools
3 - #By way of an illustration, I can envision a male who does not communicate any single female at school.Here...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Sep 30, 2014 / redy - Oct 1, 2014
|experience vs. taking advice
2 - First of all, you have to at least paraphrase the statement. Otherwise, it will either show the raters that...
Writing Feedbacksahar_hmd1363 - Sep 30, 2014 / Vns9x - Sep 30, 2014
|Discuss your academic goals and how American University would help you achieve them??
3 - Your essay is good, but there are a few things I'd recommend you revise; "It is what drives my...
Writing Feedbackrestinpizza - Sep 30, 2014 / hpharsh5 - Oct 1, 2014
|It's certainly true that happiness is an essential component of every human life - IELTS
Writing Feedbackbayratak - Sep 30, 2014 / bayratak - Oct 7, 2014
|Old Friends VS. New Friends
3 - you may wonder how they have maintained their friendship if it is the right thing to do? = if...
Writing FeedbackKasra1992 - Sep 30, 2014 / sahar_hmd1363 - Sep 30, 2014
|I believe the most important problems affecting our society today can be solved within our lifetime
4 - My grandmother always says to us change says to said In the first sentence, the punctuation is all...
Writing FeedbackAdamtong - Sep 30, 2014 / restinpizza - Sep 30, 2014
|'Never has food failed to attract people's eyes' - I prefer cooking at home; TOEFL essay
3 - The last but not the leastLast but not least , preparing food is an excellent activity to enhance the...
Writing Feedbacksanxiawu00 - Sep 30, 2014 / masih65 - Sep 30, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Public health and related measurements.
6 - I think you should not put your opinion in body paragraphs it is better to write it in conclusion...
Writing Feedbackvincentfreeman - Sep 29, 2014 / hsamadii - Oct 1, 2014
|IELTS: Young people are not fit for key roles until they are well-trained and mature enough
Writing Feedbackmarisameng - Sep 29, 2014 / marisameng - Sep 30, 2014
|the responsibility of government and new buildings' style
Writing Feedbacklastsky - Sep 29, 2014 / ritairianti - Sep 30, 2014
|Losing Faith in my Faith (College Essay)
3 - Wow, many thanks Kevin! This is my first attempt submitting my essay to a forum and I am pleased...
Writing Feedbackyounge223 - Sep 29, 2014 / younge223 - Sep 29, 2014
|IELTS In my opinion government help should be given to those who work on art that is less commercial
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