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|The people will eventually lose interest in going to Cinema. Agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackRaj44 - May 4, 2015 / Raj44 - May 4, 2015
|We lived in a world with hundreds of countries with different languages. Some of these can disappear
4 - Thank you for your actionable pieces of advice. I just started to write and I know I have lots...
Writing Feedbackrtech - May 4, 2015 / rtech - May 4, 2015
|Natural Monopoly and Its Provision
3 - I think you have gotten the wrong idea. Thailand natural monopoly is government owned or State-owned enterprises, which mean...
Writing FeedbackPann - May 4, 2015 / Pann - May 6, 2015
|Excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills
5 - Hi Vidya, It is my pleasure to help. Most of the time, reading through good textbooks that you...
Writing Feedbackvidya200675 - May 4, 2015 / Pann - May 6, 2015
|Students in developed countries spend their leisure time for working or travelling
2 - Before entering university, pupils in some states usually spend their leisure time for working in part-time job or travelling...
Writing Feedbackirhame - May 3, 2015 / Pann - May 4, 2015
|Some people suggest the non-essential use of aircraft like international travel should discourage
Writing Feedbackyeungwww - May 3, 2015 / yeungwww - May 4, 2015
|Essay on why the development of nuclear power should be halted"
Writing FeedbackRybarczyk - May 3, 2015 / justivy03 - May 3, 2015
|Universities concept about gender equality among their students.
4 - Therefore Universities are unable to set the gender equality in every subject, even it creates lots of advancement in...
Writing Feedbackhsustudent89 - May 2, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 7, 2015
|How to make English lessons more successful? The teacher point of view.
8 - I think that you should explain to your teacher that you received help with your English grammar and punctuation...
Writing Feedbackalmani - May 2, 2015 / ChristineB - May 8, 2015
|My development from childhood was a narrow & curvy course...
2 - I helped you with this essay by looking at each paragraph. Follow along in each paragraph as I suggest...
Writing Feedbackdombo88 - May 1, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 1, 2015
|University as an exclusive place for those who marked as an outstanding student
Writing Feedbackarizkis - May 1, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 1, 2015
|It is believed by most of people that work is the main part of their adult life
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - May 1, 2015 / Adhisti - May 3, 2015
|How much the number of older people in Sweden, USA and Japan is growing? Graph.
3 - I'm unsure if you have to mention that the line graph represents those 65 and over. There are a...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - May 1, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 4, 2015
|Water Consumption in Agricultural, Domestic, and Industrial Sector
3 - Thankyou Mr. Farhan for your corrections. I'm sorry for that wrong picture, I will be more carefull next time....
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - May 1, 2015 / Stacy Handayani - May 2, 2015
|Exerting consumers' interest to purchase over products by advertisements
2 - With regard to selected marketing of companies, advertisement helps companies to reach their targets in selling more the number...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - May 1, 2015 / Adhisti - May 1, 2015
|Should teenagers work or travel for a year between finishing and starting university studies?
2 - Your essay is a well-written one. So, I going to point out only some small mistakes. First of...
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - May 1, 2015 / Vns9x - May 1, 2015
|IELTS Task 1 : The village of Stokerford (Map)
2 - I hope you can make these changes to explain the diagram better. 1st paragraph: Change replace to replacement....
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 1, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 1, 2015
|IELTS Task 2: Animal testing becomes public debate
2 - Therefore, I strongly believe that both arguments have different perspectives in terms of animal testing. You don't really...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 1, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 3, 2015
|A memory of an old man
3 - Hello Lakia. I am not writing for any academic evaluation. I've found there's something in writing "correctly" that...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 1, 2015 / Rajiv - May 1, 2015
|TOEFL: A/G It is better to do work by machine than by hand.
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Apr 30, 2015 / ah_zafari - May 2, 2015
|Increasing wider horizons by working or travelling before learning at university
NEW - Good preparation before starting university studies is considered as an important activity for students. As such, lots of countries...
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|Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year. Agree or Disagree?
3 - Therefore, I personally believe that this approach would give significant impacts for students. Your intro needs a stronger...
Writing Feedbackintiaiqbal92 - Apr 30, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 14, 2015
|Is It Worth for Sport Players to Earn Great Deal More Money than People in Other Profession?
3 - Hello Stacy. I had a pleasant time reading your essay. Thank you for you efforts~ Your essay is very...
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - Apr 30, 2015 / kibz95 - Apr 30, 2015
|People in a host country should accept the diverse customs and behavior of the visitors
Writing Feedbackcldales - Apr 30, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 30, 2015
|University students should be mandated to classes - it improves their grades and disciplines them
NEW - Thank you in advance, I hope you have a pleasant time reading this and by all means, say anything...
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|The percentage of reasons for study and employer support based on different ages of people
NEW - The charts give information regarding the reasons for study according to age of students and the number of employer...
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|The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
Writing Feedbacksiddiqumar - Apr 30, 2015 / Firda Umairoh - Apr 30, 2015
|Is talent gotten since a person was born?
2 - Hello Amir, Your arguments, examples, and your personal opinions are quite lacking in this essay. I understand there is...
Writing Feedbackirhame - Apr 29, 2015 / kibz95 - Apr 30, 2015
|IELTS: Overweight and Diminish healthy caused by Overworking and Financial support.What is solution?
NEW - In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing....
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|Parents have best recognition about their children, they teach without connivance the basic things
3 - Parents teach their children without any connivance .Anyone knows that parents are the best supporter of their children. They...
Writing FeedbackGunner13 - Apr 29, 2015 / Windachan - Apr 29, 2015
|The view of a high payouts received by sports professionals and its perception by the society
NEW - Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think...
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|The fixed punishment won't be as effective as a shock therapy to prevent a criminal actions
NEW - Topic: Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that...
Writing FeedbackFirda Umairoh - Apr 29, 2015 / — -
|The responsibility of sharing wealth in rich countries
2 - The first reason justifying for my standpoint is the huge benefit offerd to recipient countries. CORRECTED: The first...
Writing Feedbackvmtct - Apr 29, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 3, 2015
|Fixed punishment is becoming debatable issue over recent years
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - Apr 29, 2015 / farhan110991 - Apr 29, 2015
|What should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment?
NEW - Hello Fellas, In this essay, I am dealing with Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource and Grammar. Please...
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|The proportion of boy and girl students at schools
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - Apr 28, 2015 / vmtct - Apr 28, 2015
|This illustrates how much of goods were distributed in the UK from 1974 to 2004
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - Apr 28, 2015 / eddies - Apr 28, 2015
|The high school students should work because it provides priceless experiences in work and life
3 - Hello Chirstine, Thank you for your post, being a contributor, I'm sure you are quite busy reading and editing...
Writing Feedbackkibz95 - Apr 28, 2015 / kibz95 - Apr 30, 2015
|Essay University of Les Roches Hotel management School, Characteristics of an efficient Manager.
3 - You ended your essay with a quote in lieu of a paragraph, and you have only two paragraphs in...
Writing Feedbacksylvia2626 - Apr 28, 2015 / EF_Carol - May 28, 2015
|Food We Consume on a daily basis
NEW - Food We Consume One fast food hamburger contains meat from up to one hundred different cows. Knowing this...
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|IELTS Task 2 Practice : Side Effect of Smoking Besides Health Issue
5 - Hy, @kikiki I would argue that the best solution for this isaction to substitute some cigarette industries with...
Writing FeedbackKikiki - Apr 28, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 29, 2015
|The bar chart shows the yearly visitors of National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum
2 - Hi Kikiki! Here are some mistakes that you should take notice of: This bar chart shows the yearly...
Writing FeedbackKikiki - Apr 27, 2015 / SalMon - Apr 28, 2015
|The information on post-graduate qualifications in Australia by different gender in 1999
4 - Hi, Miyako, Overall, your writing in your essay is good. However, I have a few suggestions for your writing....
Writing FeedbackMiyako - Apr 27, 2015 / intiaiqbal92 - May 7, 2015
|Characteristic and experience influence on a person life
2 - Rephrasing your 1st paragraph; Every person has their own character since birth, this character is what influence their...
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - Apr 27, 2015 / justivy03 - Apr 27, 2015
|The economical input of three main sectors in UK: Agriculture, Manufacturing, Business and Financial
NEW - The chart provides the information about the economical input of three national sectors in UK: Agriculture, Manufacturing, Business and...
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|The sport professionals are often very overpayed and this is not fair.
2 - Hi, @helenkeller It's true that nN owadays sports stars can earn incredibly high salaries. Although, there are some...
Writing Feedbackhelen keller - Apr 26, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 26, 2015
|Report on the main features of the electricity production
4 - yes sir, actually I have finished my writing in 20 minutes Best regards, fitria astuti danial....
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - Apr 26, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 29, 2015
|What influence people's personality more - born-characteristics or their experience?
3 - Some sentences show redundancy. I try to help you write a succinct introduction. For this prompt, let me...
Writing Feedbackthutyedaniel - Apr 26, 2015 / eddies - Apr 28, 2015
|The diagrams reveals two stage processes of the cement production
Writing Feedbackfarhan110991 - Apr 25, 2015 / Firda Umairoh - Apr 26, 2015
|Nowadays, congestion and pollution problems have become parts of a country.
Writing FeedbackAdhisti - Apr 25, 2015 / farhan110991 - Apr 29, 2015
|Writing task 2 : Traffic congestion and pollution on atmosphere
2 - HI, liliy..allow me to give suggestion for your writing. As a matter of fact, controlling the amount of...
Writing FeedbackLiliy - Apr 25, 2015 / Adhisti - Apr 25, 2015
|Eco-hybrid cars project to solve pollution and traffic problems.
2 - A closer look at the intro shows that this has lack of the relevant issue. Also, you failed to...
Writing FeedbackMuhammadImho - Apr 25, 2015 / eddies - Apr 29, 2015
|Increasing the petrol price as problem solving of traffic jam and pollution. Agree or disagree?
2 - Hello, I enjoyed your essay. I think you should work on your wording though. Many of your sentences are...
Writing FeedbackFirda Umairoh - Apr 25, 2015 / sujungchoi10 - Apr 25, 2015
|Finding the best way to solve huge traffic and air pollution problems (without vehicles taxation)
4 - Hi Ainun .. i am tremendously enthusiastic about your writing however some suggestion should be given here to lead...
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - Apr 25, 2015 / Liliy - Apr 25, 2015
|IELTS: Solving the traffic and pollution problems by increasing the petrol price - Agree/disagree?
NEW - Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent...
Writing FeedbackWindachan - Apr 25, 2015 / — -
|The number electricity production by fuel resource
2 - the second picture is describes that Australia had the highest of electricity unit by fuel source for Coal, the...
Writing FeedbackIqbalThemi - Apr 24, 2015 / xuMIN520 - Apr 24, 2015
|Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems...
2 - 1st paragraph: Delete the before famous. Change fascinated to fascinating lifestyles (you discuss more than one personality so lifestyle...
Writing FeedbackDhaliwal1 - Apr 24, 2015 / lcturn87 - Apr 24, 2015
|Foreign language might be an imitation of culture and fashion of another country
Writing FeedbackAmir1987 - Apr 24, 2015 / Liliy - Apr 29, 2015
|Public transport helps to protect the environment, save money and reduce traffic problems
Writing Feedbackhoas - Apr 24, 2015 / Firda Umairoh - Apr 25, 2015
|The Number of Passenger and Reached Dictance of Underground Railway Systems in Six Cities
2 - Peace be with you. some suggestions for your writing: The diagramtable shows information about the underground railway...
Writing FeedbackStacy Handayani - Apr 24, 2015 / AinunAlfatih - Apr 25, 2015
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