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|You have been given a gift of money. Which would you rather spend it on? (TOEFL Independent Writing)
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - Dec 13, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|The table below shows the average user engagement for four social networking sites and the pie chart
3 - @Hanip Abdul Hello. Welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive here will give you a...
Writing FeedbackHanip Abdul - Dec 13, 2019 / Maria - Dec 15, 2019
|IELTS - Writing task 1 IELTS Four social networking sites and their market share
3 - according to my study , i usuallys put overall part after introduction and it'd better when we describe...
Writing Feedbackyasabh - Dec 12, 2019 / windy - Dec 15, 2019
|User Engagement for Social Networking Sites
3 - @irsaqisthi Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! Here is my feedback on this writing. While I...
Writing Feedbackirsaqisthi - Dec 12, 2019 / Maria - Dec 14, 2019
|The comparison of user involvement for four different online social platforms
3 - @Maria Thanks a lot for your advises. I will take them all into account to improve my writing skill....
Writing FeedbackWaddahHamzah - Dec 12, 2019 / WaddahHamzah - Dec 22, 2019
|Teenagers' Preference for Fast Food Restaurants in Vietnam and Indonesia
3 - I dont need see any problem in the introduction. You did it well. However, it seems that some misconception...
Writing Feedbackirsaqisthi - Dec 11, 2019 / eddies - Dec 15, 2019
|The increase in the amount of waste production. Why is this happening?
Writing FeedbackXuan An - Dec 11, 2019 / Xuan An - Dec 12, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 1 - The rate of women's literacy and population growth in selected countries
2 - @Hanglmk Welcome here. Here is my feedback on your writing. Please don't hesitate to approach once more if you...
Writing FeedbackHanglmk - Dec 11, 2019 / Maria - Dec 12, 2019
|IELTS - Writing task 1 IELTS Oman and Spain Populations by its citizens' age
4 - Dear Mr. Yasin, I would like to give some feedbacks on your essay. 1. ... percentage of 62% 2....
Writing Feedbackyasabh - Dec 11, 2019 / irsaqisthi - Dec 12, 2019
|Visitors numbers to Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation
3 - Hey guys, I'll try to give you some feedback related to your writing. Your introduction covers all the...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Dec 11, 2019 / Hanip Abdul - Dec 13, 2019
|Writing Task 1 (Pie Charts describing about 3 most preferred FF Restaurants in Viet and Indo)
Writing FeedbackZaenal_Ipin_ES_I - Dec 11, 2019 / yasabh - Dec 12, 2019
|Writing Task 1 Pie Charts 3 Fast Food Restaurants in Vietnam and Indonesia over the 10-year period
2 - Task Achievement: > You are not allowed to add an irrelevant personal opinion. > The data is not about...
Writing FeedbackMahmud30 - Dec 11, 2019 / eddies - Dec 11, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Percentage of three known Fast Food Restaurants in two Asian countries
2 - Task Achievement > The introduction is good, but you fail to deliver the message clearly. You cannot start the...
Writing Feedbacksantrinabawi - Dec 11, 2019 / eddies - Dec 11, 2019
|The proportion of population by age in Oman and Spain
2 - Task Achievement: - You need to first include the picture, so this helps readers understand the graph and...
Writing Feedbackkanzanism - Dec 11, 2019 / eddies - Dec 11, 2019
|The proportion of Omani and Spaniard people by age
2 - Task Achievement: > you attempt to write the overview, but you fail to use this accurately. The differences in...
Writing FeedbackGhitamalia - Dec 11, 2019 / eddies - Dec 11, 2019
|Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?
4 - Dear Maika, I would like to give you some feedbacks, hoping that they could help improve your writing....
Writing Feedbackmaika0211 - Dec 11, 2019 / irsaqisthi - Dec 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - Are celebrities over-paid ?
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Dec 11, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Dec 21, 2019
|SOP for my application in German university in master in mechatronics and robotics program.
Writing FeedbackRushilkumar - Dec 10, 2019 / Rushilkumar - Dec 22, 2019
|Single career or several careers or ways of earning money and further studying
2 - @hungxd08 Hi, I'll give you feedback on this essay. I hope that this somehow helps you in your learning...
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - Dec 10, 2019 / Maria - Dec 12, 2019
|In the chart the percentage of people using multiple social networking sites; Ielts 2
4 - Hello there.. Let me give you some comments: Firstly, it is about your introduction. I found you...
Writing Feedbackbaohii2001 - Dec 9, 2019 / WaddahHamzah - Dec 13, 2019
|International travel is becoming cheaper, countries are open their doors to more and more tourists
2 - Hi, Please consider some my comments on your essay. 1. Firstly, I think you should not confirm that "This...
Writing FeedbackLinh Nguyen Mai - Dec 9, 2019 / hungxd08 - Dec 10, 2019
|Describe a fear you had to overcome. How did you overcome it? (TOEFL Independent Writing)
2 - @Sunrise011 Although i'm not really a Toefl contestant, I think your essay is pretty good with clear structure and...
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - Dec 9, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Dec 11, 2019
|What are the characteristics of a good coach? (TOEFL Independent Writing)
2 - @Sunrise011 Out of 15, I would give this essay an 8. It definitely is passable, however there were key...
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - Dec 9, 2019 / Maria - Dec 12, 2019
|Describe charts showing students' opinions about services in their university library-Task1 Ielts
Writing Feedbacktamtran - Dec 9, 2019 / tamtran - Dec 12, 2019
|Teachers and schools for child development - Ielts writing task 2 evaluation and opinion
3 - Dear Vicky, Overall, you have some grammatical and structural errors. However, I think the issue of your essay...
Writing Feedbackb791129 - Dec 9, 2019 / Sunrise011 - Dec 9, 2019
|In recent years, some kind of animals are running the risk of extinction - their name is on red list
2 - Hi there! I would like to give several suggestions: 1. The first reason is human's illegal hunting activities...
Writing FeedbackLeetequila - Dec 9, 2019 / TriceLiu - Dec 9, 2019
|What factors influence decisions which news content print in newspapers and which broadcast on TV?
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - Dec 9, 2019 / leha10122 - Dec 12, 2019
|Essay about having little leisure time and studying under a lot of pressure of youngster
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for your review. I hope i can edit these mistakes in the following essays...
Writing FeedbackHarry Nguyen - Dec 8, 2019 / Harry Nguyen - Dec 9, 2019
|Create a promotional brochure about a man-made wonder of Viet Nam
2 - @baotran114 Welcome to the forum. I hope my feedback helps you improve this brochure. Be extra cautious when...
Writing Feedbackbaotran114 - Dec 8, 2019 / Maria - Dec 9, 2019
|Should rich nations share their strength with others?
3 - Dear Maria, Thank you for your very valuable comments! I read my essay again and I really realise the...
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - Dec 8, 2019 / hungxd08 - Dec 9, 2019
|Is ability to relate to others enough to end up being successful ?
Writing Feedbackshahabs1992 - Dec 8, 2019 / shahabs1992 - Dec 9, 2019
|Freedom of Speech and the Internet
3 - @bettybetty17940 Welcome to the forum! This is my feedback - hopefully, you are able to learn something from it....
Writing Feedbackbettybetty17940 - Dec 7, 2019 / Maria - Dec 9, 2019
|The number of bee colonies and how much honey they produce
2 - @majid61 Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback of mine gives you insight on how to improve...
Writing Feedbackmajid61 - Dec 7, 2019 / Maria - Dec 9, 2019
|[MAP - task 1 IELTS] Map description about changes after the hydroelectric power dam was build
Writing Feedbackphamnhuphuong - Dec 6, 2019 / phamnhuphuong - Dec 7, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK2 - Free Subjects Decisions?
2 - @roswita116 Hi, thanks for coming to the forum! I'll be giving you feedback on this writing. First and...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 6, 2019 / Maria - Dec 9, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - coffee and bananas sales statistics in five countries
2 - Hellloooo there, let me help you with some feedback. Let's start with the opening paragraph. Here I see that...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 6, 2019 / eddies - Dec 6, 2019
|IELTS Writing 2: Compulsory unpaid community service for high school students
2 - @TriceLiu Hello, I would like to share my feedback to your writing. Firstly, You have a well written...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Dec 6, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 6, 2019
|Solving the pollution caused by plastic bag
2 - @Nguyenvananh Hi there. I would like to give you some feedbacks about your writing.😁😁 First of all, I...
Writing FeedbackNguyenvananh - Dec 6, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 6, 2019
|WRITING TASK 2: TRUTH AND LIE
2 - @thanhtu98 Hi there. I would like to give you some feedbacks about your writing.😁😁 As I can see...
Writing Feedbackthanhtu98 - Dec 6, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 6, 2019
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Rewarding outstanding employees by giving them extra money
Writing FeedbackUN27042000 - Dec 5, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Dec 11, 2019
|The life difficulties in a foreign country where you cannot speak your mother language
Writing Feedbacksue0504 - Dec 4, 2019 / tamtran - Dec 16, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Benefits and Risks of people living to 150
3 - Your essay is good, but I think you just use simple sentence and repeat some words. When you mention...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 4, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 6, 2019
|WRITING TASK 2: Colours impact on people
3 - @roswita116 thanks for your comments. I consider part 2 in my essay mentioning the influence of colour on health...
Writing Feedbackthaithu - Dec 4, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 6, 2019
|In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study
2 - @hoangrobin Hello, welcome to the forum! I hope that my feedback gives you an idea on how to improve...
Writing Feedbackhoangrobin - Dec 4, 2019 / Maria - Dec 6, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2: The freedom of the media
5 - I think your essay is quite good enough. However, I think it might be considered carefully as follow: 1.Some...
Writing Feedbackskeptical - Dec 4, 2019 / hungxd08 - Dec 8, 2019
|Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced.
Writing FeedbackYunSoo - Dec 3, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 4, 2019
|Decisions of children - parents? - IELTS TASK 2 essay, review
2 - @prachirai Hi, there. I would like to give you some feedback about your writing.😁😁 Your writing is well-structured...
Writing Feedbackprachirai - Dec 3, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 4, 2019
|Writing task 2 : More and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs
Writing FeedbackPTTu - Dec 3, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 4, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Advertising on some food should be banned as cigarettes or not?
3 - @Bastian thank you very much for your help, your correction is so helpful and understandable. I just wonder does...
Writing Feedbackthaithu - Dec 3, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 4, 2019
|Studying at university or college compared to get a job straight after school
2 - @thiannie I'm here to give feedback on your writing. Don't hesitate to approach once more if you have any...
Writing Feedbackthiannie - Dec 2, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Gaming skills are very beneficial and functional for being successful in your life.
2 - @bita92 Welcome to the forum! Don't hesitate to ask if you have any other questions after reading my feedback....
Writing Feedbackbita92 - Dec 1, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Both homes and schools have an equal meaning in shaping kids to become well-rounded citizens
Writing Feedbackphanhyeudoi1711 - Dec 1, 2019 / phanhyeudoi1711 - Dec 3, 2019
|Essay about whether human fight against climate change or finding new habitable planet?
Writing Feedbackd1a9t99 - Dec 1, 2019 / d1a9t99 - Dec 8, 2019
|Spending comparison among five countries - ielts task 1 writing
Writing Feedbackwindy - Dec 1, 2019 / windy - Dec 15, 2019
|IELTS GT 2 worldwide trend of vegetarianism which supposed to be beneficial to our health
6 - Thank you both @roswita116 & @eddies! Your comments do help a lot and yeah, writing introduction and conclusion...
Writing Feedbackplforielts - Dec 1, 2019 / plforielts - Dec 7, 2019
|IELTS GT WRITING TASK 1: You would like to do a PT job while you are studying in another country
Writing Feedbackplforielts - Dec 1, 2019 / plforielts - Dec 4, 2019
|Writing task 2: Testing on animals - experiments to develop new medicines
2 - Hi @phanvantai96qb! Since I am not an english-expert for IELTS, I will give my opinion about your essay...
Writing Feedbackphanvantai96qb - Dec 1, 2019 / izecsony5 - Dec 1, 2019
|ielts task 2 (agree or disagree that wealthy countries should help poor countries.............)
Writing Feedbacklaabobe - Dec 1, 2019 / izecsony5 - Dec 3, 2019
|IELTS Task 1 mixed with table and pie chart - people in Australia
2 - @dhcuber Hello, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive from me somewhat helps you in...
Writing Feedbackdhcuber - Nov 30, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|A summary of an article on The Guardian about phenomenon brain drain and its causes
2 - @HienRyan Hey, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive here becomes helpful for you. Don't...
Writing FeedbackHienRyan - Nov 29, 2019 / Maria - Nov 30, 2019
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