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|What is one important "easy answer" that we should resist? what dangerous misconceptions hold?
6 - it's an SAT essay thanks for correcting my mistakes and for analyzing my faults Actually I am an unternational...
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Aug 23, 2014 / Anouar - Aug 30, 2014
|'new and exciting sport should be welcomed' - IELTS: Essay on whether to ban dangerous sports
2 - Very good essay so far. Here are my grammar suggestions: "should let people do what they want yet...
Writing Feedbackthanhthanhdo10 - Aug 23, 2014 / yazoo - Aug 23, 2014
|IELTS: 'bring happiness to my nearest and dearest' - which salary would be better?
4 - I too agree with Pahan. You display good writing skills, good grammar, vocabulary knowledge, sentence structures etc. What you...
Writing Feedbackdiidoobiib - Aug 23, 2014 / dumi - Aug 24, 2014
|Studying major cities helps to understand the most important characteristics of a society -GRE Issue
3 - Thanks Binte! Now that I read again the prompt, I might have understood the statement. I should have focused...
Writing Feedbackdunguyen - Aug 23, 2014 / dunguyen - Aug 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: WOMEN AND MEN EXCLUDED FROM SPECIFIC JOBS ?
2 - leads to the distribution of both genders in some specific... --- This sentence got a little too long and...
Writing FeedbackShinigami97 - Aug 22, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Aug 23, 2014
|IELTS: Reading books has more benefits in development of imagination and language skills
4 - It would have been better if your approached this essay from a comparison point of view since you already...
Writing Feedbacktimexironman - Aug 22, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 2, 2014
|Toefl: people judge others by external appearance but is better also to consider the inner qualities
3 - Thank you Dear dumi.You helped me before a lot. I appreciate your concern. Actually I had a mistake...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 22, 2014 / hamedmas - Aug 25, 2014
|Contemporary life prevent people from developing into strong and independent individual - Gre Issue
Writing FeedbackNinad09 - Aug 22, 2014 / pinaksalvekar - Aug 25, 2014
|IELTS: public transportation and more flyovers as a solution for traffic congestion
2 - It is true that traffic congestion is now an increasingly serious problem that many major cities have to face...
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - Aug 22, 2014 / dumi - Aug 22, 2014
|TOEFL_inventors and science pioneers always try new things and take risks
2 - Throughout history, there have been many inventions and breakthroughs have inventedmade by brave persons. Well.... your sentences...
Writing Feedbackmasih65 - Aug 22, 2014 / dumi - Aug 22, 2014
|Learn variety of cultures, traditions by engaging with local people and visiting historical places
Writing Feedbacklatkhan - Aug 22, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Aug 23, 2014
|IELTS - dramatic increase in the number of Japanese people travelling abroad - Bar chart, Line Graph
5 - Thank Dumi, Eddies, and Pyon9x so much. I will try to understand and fix my mistakes now. Then I...
Writing Feedbackviolethoang - Aug 21, 2014 / violethoang - Aug 23, 2014
|Toefl: It should be mandatory for every company to substitute their old equipment with new ones.
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 21, 2014 / hamedmas - Aug 25, 2014
|New way of communication can lead to some undesirable results by preventing direct social contact
Writing Feedbackmacduck - Aug 21, 2014 / dumi - Aug 21, 2014
|Does a person's character determine that person's success in life ?
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Aug 20, 2014 / Anouar - Aug 21, 2014
|Bad memories leaves scars in the heart.
4 - .I agree that memories hinder one to learn past ans success in the future CORRECT IS I agree that...
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Aug 20, 2014 / sadia22 - Aug 23, 2014
|variety is the spice of life - making life worthwhile
4 - The topic is quite rich that's why, it needs more analyze.So I think you need to re-write your arguments...
Writing Feedbacksadia22 - Aug 20, 2014 / Anouar - Sep 8, 2014
|IELTS: Regulation regarding advertisements' unnecessary impact on people's lives
5 - It doesn't give any value to your conclusion. I am too keen using a conclusion signal. Probably you...
Writing Feedbackamalxavier - Aug 20, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 20, 2014
|GRE - Issue task - People should undertake risky action only after they consider its consequences.
5 - Thank you D! It really helps that you clearly mention what the problem is, and I also think the...
Writing FeedbackLauren5102 - Aug 20, 2014 / Lauren5102 - Aug 24, 2014
|IELTS: The earlier ages for learning the second language the better
5 - Nowadays, you can find every parents lookSing forward to plan teaching a foreign language for their children at early...
Writing Feedbackzovaa - Aug 20, 2014 / eddies - Aug 20, 2014
|Unlimited Golden Stars- MIT essay
Writing Feedbacktdshah1 - Aug 19, 2014 / Anouar - Aug 20, 2014
|IELTS school non academic subjects assist in physical development and learning important life skills
Writing Feedbackmvettri - Aug 19, 2014 / EF_Sheri - Aug 19, 2014
|IELTS: Gentle manners vs Material possessions.
7 - "In conclusion, I believe that the value of kindness outweighs any material possession and keeps being the most important...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Aug 19, 2014 / yazoo - Aug 29, 2014
|IELTS: 'opportunity to be healthier physically and mentally' - Children are given too much free time
Writing FeedbackSaadhin - Aug 19, 2014 / Anouar - Aug 23, 2014
|IELTS Essay Task 1: 'popularity peak took place in 1980' - Teenage vegeterians
5 - * based on my understanding.. In IELTS writing task, if you use overall, you don't need write...
Writing Feedbackmilamiller - Aug 19, 2014 / Mann_ms - Sep 19, 2014
|Virtual learning beneficials
4 - Let see how I can contribute to you :D Not only the Internet is in urgent need of communities...
Writing Feedbacksssenyoritaa - Aug 19, 2014 / dumi - Aug 20, 2014
|a Table about proportion of female & male genders in sports
Writing Feedbacksssenyoritaa - Aug 19, 2014 / eddies - Aug 20, 2014
|IELTS: higher education or workplace? Professional knowledge is the most decisive factor.
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - Aug 19, 2014 / Pyon9x - Aug 21, 2014
|SAT topic: Is knowledge a benefit or a budern?
3 - Knowledge used to stand a dispensable role in the society due to different levels of classes, and it is...
Writing Feedbackd_ooo70189 - Aug 18, 2014 / dumi - Aug 20, 2014
|GRE: Woven baskets were passed from Palea to Lithos not the vice versa? It's doubtful.
3 - Thank you so much for the reply!! I have never seen the list of logical fallacies before, just googled...
Writing Feedbackteresassssun - Aug 18, 2014 / teresassssun - Aug 19, 2014
|TOEFL: Next 20 years - transportation goes ahead and novel version of automobile will be produced.
4 - Is this you mean? There are many things individuals can do to reduce harmful emissions to our air,...
Writing Feedbackmarger - Aug 18, 2014 / eddies - Aug 20, 2014
|IELTS: Music has come to human kind as a valuable gift that is necessary for a better life
Writing Feedbackvmtct - Aug 18, 2014 / fikri - Aug 19, 2014
|TOEFL: the part-time job can let students experience the real adult life and know more about it
3 - I don't think this is a very good start ... The first sentence of your introduction, ideally a...
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Aug 18, 2014 / dumi - Aug 20, 2014
|Parents teach their children the most important and necessary things; they are the best teachers.
3 - You need to improve the presentation of this sentence. There's lots of redundancy I find there :( This...
Writing Feedbacknasrullah - Aug 17, 2014 / dumi - Aug 21, 2014
|TOEFL: The Face-to-Face communication makes it easy to understand emotion senses.
5 - AsWith the rapid development of technology, many communication tools makehave made it easyeasier for us to communicate with others.each...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 17, 2014 / dumi - Aug 21, 2014
|IELTS - The residents of Edmonton are especially keen on cars
7 - Firstly, it is clear that approximately half of all the people use cars, while around one-third preferred the light...
Writing FeedbackAlfred557 - Aug 17, 2014 / SAM2014 - Sep 22, 2014
|TOEFL: Some students live in their hometowns, but others in different cities - which do you like?
Writing Feedbackkathyt - Aug 17, 2014 / kathyt - Aug 25, 2014
|TOEFL, "Tell the truth" - People need to have some friends who are trustful.
3 - Hi ,Marger ! In the first paragraph " for instant, having a friendship relationship, " ,I think it...
Writing Feedbackmarger - Aug 17, 2014 / kathyt - Aug 17, 2014
|[IELTS] A discursive essay on visitors' attitude toward other countries's culture.
3 - I think you've done a good job argumenting from both sides, I agree with your view. "Foreigners...
Writing Feedbackthanhthanhdo10 - Aug 17, 2014 / Stevie - Aug 17, 2014
|What God thinks about it? - Why cosmetic surgery must be banned
2 - the negative effects <of >cosmetic surgery - In fact, cosmetic surgery is a short term, waste of money, and...
Writing Feedbackgerrard - Aug 17, 2014 / sssenyoritaa - Aug 19, 2014
|UK: significant increase in the using of debit cards and a steady rise in the using of credit cards
Writing FeedbackNaiman - Aug 17, 2014 / Naiman - Aug 20, 2014
|[IELTS] - Earlier Technologies vs Recent Technologies
Writing FeedbackJwala - Aug 16, 2014 / dumi - Aug 19, 2014
|IELTS: 'Women absolutely dominate in two fields' - male and female teachers
8 - This is not clearly referred.It is also not fair while the graph shows man's worker outnumber women in...
Writing Feedbackmilamiller - Aug 16, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 13, 2014
|"Captain America" - What motivates people to change themselves?
Writing FeedbackA106810421310 - Aug 15, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 15, 2014
|IELTS: World Wide Web has been very beneficial invention for humanity
3 - There are a lot of online shopping websites wherethat allow people canto purchase or buy anything from the comfort...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Aug 15, 2014 / dumi - Aug 19, 2014
|GRE essay: Many important discoveries or creations are accidental
Writing Feedbackasdsa111 - Aug 14, 2014 / dumi - Aug 26, 2014
|A lot of students from rural areas and poor families cannot go to school due to lack of money
3 - It's quite a long sentence which does't give a clear and attractive idea. My suggestion is: In some...
Writing Feedbackgarung1187 - Aug 14, 2014 / ningo - Sep 9, 2014
|In undermentioned countries foot/drinks/tobacco has recorded the highest percentage of expenditures
Writing Feedbackandys77a - Aug 14, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 2, 2014
|TOEFL: 'friendly and good at cooking person' - the important qualities of a good roommate.
2 - too much informal forms were used, therefore i recommend you should check for academic words regularly. Dont be worried,...
Writing Feedbacktoannguyen - Aug 13, 2014 / garung1187 - Aug 14, 2014
|'I am always exhilarated when doing my social work job' - the reason for leaving
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|'the real achievement is when we can help others' - Summarize your accomplishment
3 - Dear Gagan, About grammar and tenses I strongly agreed with you. Here my self correction, please give me...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 15, 2014
|TOEFL: respect and loyalty are the conspicuous qualities that all children should have
4 - you seem to lack examples for your ideas. besides, the consequences you mention are all assumptions, therefore, you should...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 13, 2014 / garung1187 - Aug 14, 2014
|ielts - The transformation from childhood into adulthood are every important in each person's life
Writing Feedbackngoctrang123 - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|IELTS: 'economic, diplomacy, and environmental' - most popular career choices for youth in Indonesia
4 - Here are some issues I reveal that you should pay particular attention to: 1. Spelling 2. Word form...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Aug 13, 2014 / eddies - Aug 17, 2014
|NUCLEAR TECHNOLOGY: The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace.
2 - Nuclear technology is a much debatedheatedissuetopic . Some people think that there are several benefits to use nuclear power...
Writing FeedbackDuong68 - Aug 13, 2014 / dumi - Aug 24, 2014
|The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the culture of these countries.Do you agree?
4 - Nevermind Zahra :). This is commonly occured for new member Would you kindly give us the prompt...
Writing Feedbackz_ansari - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|Scandals can only be solved by a combined effort of all the people of the society - GRE essay
2 - Overall, the essay's main point is clear. It needs some attention given to correcting grammar and a few typographical...
Writing FeedbackInfernuS - Aug 12, 2014 / EF_Sheri - Aug 13, 2014
|IELTS :Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people
Writing Feedbacklatkhan - Aug 12, 2014 / fikri - Aug 20, 2014
|Bill Gates as University Professor? - TOEFL Essay
2 - Successful entrepreneurs and sport stars can inspire the lives of many people. Well, I see you are...
Writing Feedbackluongminh97 - Aug 12, 2014 / dumi - Aug 23, 2014
|New restaurant that may be built in your neighborhood will disturb residents of this area
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