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|Illiteracy cause and effect essay
Writing Feedbackthongdat1608 - Oct 29, 2014 / arunpoppat - Oct 29, 2014
|FARMING: Agriculture plays a leading role in our country, Cambodia has abundance of free territories
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 28, 2014 / Charphil - Oct 28, 2014
|A society without school and education system is like a body without brain
7 - Hi Vns9x Firstly, Thank you for your time, I think my essay is not rich enough for using advanced...
Writing Feedbacksina_ns - Oct 28, 2014 / sina_ns - Oct 29, 2014
|Numerous people have a tendency to play at least 1 hour a day - Technologies
4 - Shon, I feel that your argument in this case is flaewed because you tried to relate the use of...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 28, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 29, 2014
|Success is not far-reaching for those who pursue their goals until they will achieve it
3 - Hamed, sorry about not having gotten back to you sooner. I have been a bit busy these days and...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Oct 27, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 30, 2014
|Nowadays, smoking is consider as a world wide phenomenon - should it be forbidden?
7 - Hello there . Hmmm , from what I've learned the body paragraph should start with a topic sentence...
Writing FeedbackNaeemah - Oct 27, 2014 / Naeemah - Oct 30, 2014
|IELTS: The pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect in the academic achievements
3 - (1)aspect to/from (2)students' academic attainment (3) As this sentence didn't support the topic well, I would say that...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 27, 2014 / eddies - Dec 21, 2014
|IELTS: More People Living by Themselves
6 - I think you are quite off topic. Since, they ask you the reasons of those current problems. Therefore, my...
Writing FeedbackRemansou - Oct 27, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 29, 2014
|Nicaragua has experienced a sharp increase in violence and ruthless crimes against woman
Writing Feedbackasdfkjsouplove2 - Oct 26, 2014 / asdfkjsouplove2 - Oct 28, 2014
|People should find what their talent is, to support what they do, to reach their goal in live
Writing FeedbackYULIS - Oct 26, 2014 / fp2014 - Oct 26, 2014
|some paraphrase for some articles about the internet and newspaper
NEW - source 1 Ross Dawson, who wrote the 'Living Networks' book which predicted the social networking revolution, thinks that newspapers...
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|IELTS - under suitable administration, tourism enhances local economic development
6 - While it seems that both of the ideas make sense, my view is that, by being managed properly, booming...
Writing FeedbackLen_hart - Oct 26, 2014 / zzwestmanzz - Oct 28, 2014
|Sentiments about the upcoming university!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 26, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 26, 2014
|IELTS Essay: The government should allocate more funds to public services instead of arts
3 - Many thanks for your worthy feedback. It is really appreciated. I am also concern about grammar and punctuation or...
Writing FeedbackRemansou - Oct 25, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 26, 2014
|Parents help their children to make decision
5 - There is no doubt that parents are the people who most care about their children in the world. Everything...
Writing FeedbackChppoin - Oct 25, 2014 / Chppoin - Oct 28, 2014
|IELTS WT1 Test 1 CAM 7 - National consumer expenditure 2002
NEW - Please mark my description below. I really need your help because of the next week IELTS exam. Thank you...
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|IELTS: people are now more conscious to gain more educational qualification
3 - Hi Katy, Thanks a lot. Actually it's from Cambridge-01, test-04. They never used to define precisely if that's an...
Writing Feedbackimon - Oct 25, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|Living in dormitory can immensely enhance your independency skills
2 - I know this is one of the approved forms when dealing with an introductory statement. However, you need...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 25, 2014 / eddies - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS: Summarizing a Bar Graph (Population of Asian Elephants)
2 - The graph illustrates the estimated maximum population of Asian elephants in nine countries in both 1997 and 2004 ...
Writing FeedbackJakurino - Oct 24, 2014 / eddies - Oct 25, 2014
|Others advices and personal experience should co-exist to assist person reach success
Writing Feedbackshabemahtab - Oct 24, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 25, 2014
|"My friend, Angel" An essay about how I thought of her from day one until now
Writing FeedbackCath21 - Oct 24, 2014 / Cath21 - Oct 27, 2014
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 24, 2014 / RawrKiwiz - Oct 24, 2014
|TOEFL - Doing homework every day, like the light of the sun, can furnish students with advantages
3 - Today'sModern society is much more complex, diverse and shift changeable than ever before, making every social membersa sailor driving...
Writing Feedbackace0dream - Oct 24, 2014 / VadimKlimenko - Nov 15, 2014
|IELTS - nowadays human activities are influenced by computer use; computers are more of a hindrance?
2 - This essay is good. However, this contains grammar issues affecting the flow of the sentences. A closer look at...
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 23, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
|People can easily achieve success unless they have two prominent aspects: talent and hard effort
3 - I think the term "prison sentence" is not usable here. Overall, your reasoning was good. But the...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 23, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|I love science because I'm curious. Engineering Essay Template.
8 - You can still talk about how your love for engineering developed. You just need to slide it down to...
Writing FeedbackAtom007 - Oct 23, 2014 / vangiespen - Oct 27, 2014
|IELTS: Decreasing Levels of Fresh Water
Writing FeedbackRemansou - Oct 23, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 31, 2014
|Our country had numerous wars and conflicts in the past. I have learned a lot from war's movies.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 23, 2014 / eugene_611925 - Oct 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1: American Spending Patterns between 1966 and 1996
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 23, 2014 / Vns9x - Oct 23, 2014
|Celebrities vs real problems
2 - Hello :) allow me to correct your writing (introduction) I think it still happening until now,...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 23, 2014 / maritsanur - Oct 23, 2014
|Good parenting with better schooling, when combined - children will grow into a gem to our society
Writing Feedbackshavaktm - Oct 23, 2014 / bivi1222 - Oct 30, 2014
|In personal live, we have some responsibilities towards other people (TOEFL)
5 - Moreover, sometimes by doing things helps the people learn about livelife . In this essay, the reasons for why...
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 22, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 25, 2014
|IELTS: Modern forms of communication increases the frequency and quality of interpersonal links
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 22, 2014 / imon - Oct 25, 2014
|Writing Task 1- process of chocolate-making and the percentage of allocation the cost
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. IELTS Writing Task 2
Writing FeedbackWiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014 / Wiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014
|Study without teacher? You should choose the right way which suits your learning.
Writing FeedbackKristy Nguyen - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|People smart choice should be supported - they have right to refuse a job proposal - IELTS
2 - In IELTS, I suggest that you'd better write "some people", instead of some, which seems incomplete thought. ...
Writing Feedbackboo2601 - Oct 22, 2014 / eddies - Oct 22, 2014
|Essay: Extra private lessons outside school hours helps do better at school. Disagree or agree?
Writing FeedbackVera Canderine - Oct 22, 2014 / Wiratmaja_Dicky - Oct 22, 2014
|IELTS - the level of education among women in the land experienced an upgrade
2 - The pie charts illustrate how educated women in someland attain their high levels of education between 1945 and...
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 22, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
|TOEFL: If a student needs extra help with his schoolwork, it is better to ask a friend for help
4 - In addition, tutor's helping dosen't make feeling problem. Friends may make a trouble each other when he or she...
Writing FeedbackEUNICE_06 - Oct 22, 2014 / Vns9x - Nov 3, 2014
|Title: there are many children in a family in the past. Which advantages or disadvantages outweigh.
3 - Hello... Allow me to rewrite; It seems a family with more children gain more benefits; however, I...
Writing Feedbackanthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|Qualification is still the fundamental determinant of an employee's competency of their jobs.(ielts)
2 - With the increased educational level of workforce, there are a/the ( depend on ur view) growing number of employers...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Oct 22, 2014 / anthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014
|It is believed by many that women should decide whether to have an offspring or not
Writing Feedbackimon - Oct 22, 2014 / imon - Oct 23, 2014
|"The biggest risk is not taking any risk." - TOEFL
Writing FeedbackCarolst - Oct 21, 2014 / alberic - Nov 16, 2014
|Robots will play a crucial role in 21 first century
2 - -replace "a lot of or lots of" by abundance of, many, a huge number , plenty of, the majority...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Oct 21, 2014 / anthonynguyen - Oct 22, 2014
|In the professional work life there is just one factor that motivates people - money
Writing Feedbackgbekil - Oct 21, 2014 / Anfalia - Oct 22, 2014
|Pet ownership can give merits and demerits for the animal who are involved and for the community
2 - You have good ideas to answer better. But you need to work on grammar and sentence structure. For example.......
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 21, 2014 / shavaktm - Oct 22, 2014
|People should choose their mindset to have a small family to live happier with their wife/husband
Writing FeedbackYULIS - Oct 21, 2014 / Mann_ms - Oct 21, 2014
|Compare and contrast- 2 war artist images. How do they reflect and convey the impact of WAR?
2 - In the prompt, I see 4 things the paper has to include. Compare, contrast, how do they reflect...
Writing FeedbackJakeCarter - Oct 21, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Oct 23, 2014
|[IELTS] International aid should be prioritised as foreigners are facing more serious problems
4 - I believe much should be use for uncountable things. if you use s after problem, it's better to...
Writing Feedbackzjxhz - Oct 21, 2014 / maritsanur - Oct 22, 2014
|Social networks (Facebook) are harmful: agree vs disagree.
3 - In conclusion, i once again reaffirmi think better use other sentences. my position that the social networks that are...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Oct 21, 2014 / YULIS - Oct 21, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Challenges and Strategies of People who Move to New Cities or New Country
4 - Avoid writing in first person such as "we", use words like "people" instead. Do not use abbreviations....
Writing Feedbackmaritsanur - Oct 21, 2014 / zjxhz - Oct 21, 2014
|School subjects will influence in student's future - Physical Education - IELTS TASK 2
2 - You need to include some scientific facts to support your arguments. By doing so, readers won't categorize this as...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Oct 20, 2014 / eddies - Oct 20, 2014
|Zebra mussel - integrated writing: zebra mussel - TOEFL
2 - I would rewrite the first paragraph to look like this: As can be seen in the reading passage,It...
Writing Feedbacknickyzhi - Oct 20, 2014 / astew5 - Oct 20, 2014
|Public should care together with government and all participants to solve problems of our planet
2 - Climate change has been hot issue discussion in the worldToday's issue is climate change . Government and members of...
Writing FeedbackMann_ms - Oct 20, 2014 / eddies - Oct 20, 2014
|futuristic city vs marvelous artifacts - historical building IELTS essay
4 - Well, this writing is good. However, this lacks specific examples for both para 3 and 4. As you can...
Writing Feedbackbteng011284 - Oct 20, 2014 / eddies - Oct 24, 2014
|Select a cultural phenomenon - do you see any danger in our society's dependence?
3 - I like your straightforward writing style. Now I want to suggest a way to make your essays leave...
Writing Feedbacklink2 - Oct 20, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Oct 20, 2014
|medical treatment ielts test question
7 - Some sectors believe that the budget for health should be emphasized increasing research and medical technolog should be...
Writing Feedbackbteng011284 - Oct 20, 2014 / Remansou - Oct 31, 2014
|HISTORIC BUILDINGS - symbol of the cities and piece of our own history
2 - Lastly, many people, who were very important in the history, lived in this historical places,destroying this kind of places...
Writing Feedbackbetit_betiti - Oct 20, 2014 / bteng011284 - Oct 20, 2014
|Relying on mobile phones may completely alienate us from the society and make us some trouble
2 - Saba, while you present good discussion points for your essay, there are parts that need to be adjusted for...
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