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|Mixed education provide added opportunity for either sex to develop interpersonal skills
NEW - Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that...
Writing Feedbackizhar - Aug 5, 2014 / — -
|Movies, television - entertainment and hobby that we can learn a lot from
2 - to the new modern television, which can be installed (i guess you mean the application or softwares for viewing...
Writing Feedbackafaghfarhadi - Aug 5, 2014 / izhar - Aug 5, 2014
|Money as a reward can be beneficial, but compliments and comfortable working environment are better
NEW - Topic: Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money....
Writing Feedbackmanh - Aug 5, 2014 / — -
|Advertising has too much influence on what people buy?
4 - Hence, the effect of advertising on the type of goods which people buy is undeniable => I thought this...
Writing Feedbackparand - Aug 5, 2014 / parand - Aug 7, 2014
|'I'm happy when I can solve difficult problems myself' - Studying alone or in groups?
2 - "All of those are a general purpose of student that they want to get success in their study. According...
Writing Feedbackwonnguyen - Aug 4, 2014 / cpuissant - Aug 4, 2014
|Ielts: why and how parents teach their kids the importance of money?
10 - Is this college essay? If it is, then you shouldn't set (4-paragraphs) structures for it because it will limit...
Writing Feedbackningo - Aug 4, 2014 / huyenluv - Aug 7, 2014
|TOEFL: Some people prefer to play team sports, while others prefer to play individual sports.
3 - In my opinion team sports give more benefits to a person in terms of personal development than individual kinds...
Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenko - Aug 4, 2014 / alberic - Nov 16, 2014
|IELTS Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies.
2 - Here is some general advice. Hope this helps; If you look at people taking GRE exams, then mostly...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Aug 4, 2014 / eddies - Aug 4, 2014
|'Globalization is like elephant' - how it affects the world?
Writing Feedbackizhar - Aug 4, 2014 / izhar - Aug 5, 2014
|Having a factory in the region is bad and good news
Writing FeedbackEyadBosy - Aug 3, 2014 / sayes - Aug 6, 2014
|Internet will help student only if he has a desire to study
Writing Feedbackrassul - Aug 3, 2014 / dumi - Aug 26, 2014
|[IELTS] 'advertising manipulates people' - Positives and Negatives of Ad's
Writing FeedbackJwala - Aug 3, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 5, 2014
|Technology has both advantage and disadvantage for creativity of children
5 - Same meaning, both words means less, I just wanna add (es) to the verb which is unfamiliar to me...
Writing Feedbackhosseinshafiee - Aug 3, 2014 / EyadBosy - Aug 3, 2014
|Prunty County must undertake the same kind of road improvement as the Butler County; GRE Argument
NEW - [b]Q. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain...
Writing FeedbackAmal098 - Aug 3, 2014 / — -
|GRE: Highway Safety in Prunty and Butler County - Argument Topic
NEW - Argument topic In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit form 55Mph...
Writing Feedbackpinaksalvekar - Aug 3, 2014 / — -
|IELTS: Intelligent students should be educated separately. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
4 - This introductory paragraph is too simple. You need some major changes. For this prompt, let's give a try; ...
Writing FeedbackSummer_J - Aug 3, 2014 / eddies - Aug 5, 2014
|[TOEFL] Every experience always gives us something to learn and keep for life
2 - I think you need to fine tune your approach on the introduction. You should have introduced the issue to...
Writing Feedbacksky2586 - Aug 2, 2014 / dumi - Aug 26, 2014
|TOEFL: 'new building construction hold the right to gain more money from government'
2 - If the price of housing growsincreases(more appropriate in the context) continuously, a comfortable place to live in will be...
Writing FeedbackStevenKuang - Aug 2, 2014 / niesaysi - Aug 2, 2014
|IELTS: In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parent
6 - Is it fine to mention immigration and having to learn new life/culture as an advantage? Or is it a...
Writing Feedbacklatkhan - Aug 1, 2014 / Monloi - Aug 9, 2014
|IELTS:Parents sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. Good or bad trend?
2 - I noticed that you change very often time scale of the ideas, which describe a person who studies abroad...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Aug 1, 2014 / VadimKlimenko - Aug 2, 2014
|Business is an right investment for future despite of the economic crisis
Writing Feedbackwonnguyen - Aug 1, 2014 / wonnguyen - Aug 1, 2014
|TOEFL: It is more important to use available land for farmland, housing, and industry.
2 - Well, we are not great experts, however, with our experience for all these years we can certainly help...
Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenko - Aug 1, 2014 / dumi - Aug 1, 2014
|The wide-spread use of labor-saving devices has only made our life much more hectic.
Writing FeedbackRevin - Aug 1, 2014 / sundin928 - Aug 3, 2014
|Whether each individual or government should be responsible for the healthy diet?
NEW - Please give me a look and your comments on this essay! Thanks all! :-* IELTS TASK 2: Some people...
Writing Feedbackningo - Aug 1, 2014 / — -
|Not only mother is giving her time and energy to nourish and raise children
3 - You should avoid using question to start an essay. The purpose is to paraphrase this topic fluently. ...
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Aug 1, 2014 / ningo - Aug 1, 2014
|IELTS - historic buildings are precious legacy to human development
2 - "development of modernization"? I really don't get your idea :( You need to open your essay with an...
Writing FeedbackMinnaliao - Jul 31, 2014 / dumi - Aug 1, 2014
|Studying in foreign university should be very helpful for everybody who does not afraid difficulties
Writing FeedbackNortT - Jul 31, 2014 / dumi - Aug 12, 2014
|TOEFL: children should be allowed to play computer games(the whole title is written in the message)
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 31, 2014 / VadimKlimenko - Aug 2, 2014
|Change of career and living place has more positive effect on the whole society and the individual
3 - MisterWandering: Your suggestions are very valuable. Thanks! The question is: People change their career and place of residence...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 30, 2014 / digitalidea - Jul 31, 2014
|Learning a new language process
4 - Learning a new language it is a difficult process. Recently found this language exchange website: languageforexchange It's especially for...
Writing Feedbackkbektas - Jul 30, 2014 / ANSAN - Aug 2, 2014
|Ielts: Is it necessary to teach children handwriting?
3 - here is my example,, Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what...
Writing Feedbackningo - Jul 30, 2014 / fikri - Jul 31, 2014
|IELTS Museums and art galleries should show artworks of the local culture
3 - THANKS Nathan, i rewrite it Today, Traditional arts and crafts are going through tough times and most of them...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 30, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 30, 2014
|IELTS - 'the chart also predicts the proportions in 2040' - quantity of the population aged 65
6 - You must write overview paragraph in writing task 1 because overview is important instead of conclusion. In this prompt,...
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Jul 30, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 8, 2014
|TOEFL: 'ancient people lived a natural life' - Now it's easier to maintain health
3 - However, some people even scholars are arguing about ifwhether modern people can maintain a good health easier compared to...
Writing FeedbackStevenKuang - Jul 30, 2014 / dumi - Jul 31, 2014
|The bar chart shows the amount of sales in silver goods in 000's of units for two companies nextyear
4 - Yes, you need to upload the image. Use the "Attach file(s)" feature in the Message Block to upload...
Writing FeedbackGulnar604 - Jul 30, 2014 / dumi - Aug 26, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Appropriate age of adulthood
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jul 29, 2014 / fikri - Jul 31, 2014
|'children in Gaza' - Pre-Toefl - Childhood is not always a happiest time of people's life
6 - Yes, I quite agree with Ahmad :) What he has suggested is the most appropriate approach because it helps...
Writing FeedbackSarah Gharavi - Jul 29, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 31, 2014
|IELTS: The contribution of agriculture, manufacturing and business sectors to the UK economy
7 - Between the intro and the body paras, insert an Overview which gives an overall idea to the reader :)...
Writing Feedbackmanutd9111993 - Jul 29, 2014 / dumi - Aug 23, 2014
|Ielts: Can environmental problems be solved by individuals?
Writing Feedbackningo - Jul 29, 2014 / eddies - Jul 29, 2014
|'In countries like Japan, the population is getting older' - aging population essay Ielts
Writing Feedbackrachelye - Jul 28, 2014 / — -
|'Travel is the thing, that makes you richer' - Semester at Sea Essay
Writing Feedbackoreillee - Jul 28, 2014 / Hiruni - Aug 1, 2014
|TOEFL - people are way more disparate at the exterior contrary to what they are inside
4 - I think you need to pay more attention to the approach. Your essay does not contain a good introduction...
Writing Feedbackshreyansh13 - Jul 28, 2014 / dumi - Aug 24, 2014
|IELTS: the importance of history - removing this course from school curriculum is unwise
Writing FeedbackNZsky - Jul 28, 2014 / eddies - Jul 30, 2014
|IELTS Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society
NEW - Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 28, 2014 / — -
|Effects of sexual abuse and injustice on the personal lives of countless females today
2 - You need to check on your first line structure. It should be something like this, "In this world, we...
Writing Feedbacklydiuta - Jul 28, 2014 / nathan2014 - Jul 30, 2014
|IELTS: Money as a members of staff reward for their exceptional contribution to the company
Writing FeedbackWillNgo - Jul 27, 2014 / eddies - Jul 28, 2014
|Fast Internet connection is a source of great entertainment
Writing Feedbackhoanghonn97 - Jul 27, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 28, 2014
|"THE MAKING OF PAPER UMBRELLAS" - IELTS WRITING TASK 1
2 - You introduce your paper fairly well although I would add more to it. Try to be more descriptive and...
Writing Feedbacknhungqnk - Jul 27, 2014 / lydiuta - Jul 28, 2014
|IELTS - Compulsory voluntary work is a contradiction, and not only in a literal way
5 - On one hand, the purpose of community service or any form of voluntary work is a question still upopen...
Writing FeedbackBurguete - Jul 27, 2014 / Pahan - Aug 23, 2014
|Some cultures value more the elderly people, while others paid more attention on young generation
5 - It is a little bit difficult to provide more meaningful feedbacks without seeing your full prompt. However, I guess...
Writing FeedbackGulnar604 - Jul 27, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 31, 2014
|Some subjects should be optional rather than compulsory
2 - Education has been viewed as one of the most essential elementsaspects of individual and social development.One topic now under...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 27, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS Should we invent a new language for people to use for international communication?
2 - Why do you talk about "English" in particular here? Your prompt is much broader and talk about the...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 26, 2014 / dumi - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS: learning a foreign language early has benefits for an individual but not for the culture
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Jul 26, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|It is very boring and monotonous to keep living in the place you were born until you die
3 - First and foremost, there may be more job opportunities available in another area.outside. For example, many people choose to...
Writing Feedbackmandana193 - Jul 26, 2014 / dumi - Jul 26, 2014
|IELTS: One of advertising's drawbacks - purchasing not necessary products
2 - Well, your essay has many issues and the most obvious one is that you have written everything in one...
Writing FeedbackJuliet Ngo - Jul 25, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS: The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 25, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 21, 2014
|Topic: Which better? Living in a city or living in the country? why (150 words)
2 - This should be split into two paras - Firstly and Secondly, should go into two separate paragraphs :)...
Writing FeedbackNamkeo - Jul 24, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|Should people be allowed to have cosmetic surgery before the age of 18?
5 - Therefore, I believe that there are in-depth discussion about the pros and cons of having surgery for teenagers....
Writing Feedbackhwabatte - Jul 24, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|TOEFL: If young children did not get in touch with technology, their creation would not develop
4 - Write a concluding signal, like: In conclusion,... This is important to show that you will end your essay....
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 24, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|Most important characteristic of a good teacher?
3 - You better include the full prompt in your post for us to get a better understanding as to what...
Writing Feedbackashkannaghib - Jul 24, 2014 / dumi - Jul 24, 2014
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