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|[IELTS Task 1] The line chart shows popularity of fast food among Australian young people
2 - The line chart below illustrates the kinds of fast food that Australian teenagers consume every year. ...
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|IELTS: Should we ban combat sports which depend on violence for their entertainment
4 - 322 words is too long. A shorter introduction would leave more time for the body. people have...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 4, 2014 / phuoc - Sep 4, 2014
|[IELTS Task 2] Pollution and damage of environment are resulted from a country developing.
6 - People's activities change the atmosphere and environmental condition. Many people (1) regard that in a non-globalized country, (2) a...
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|[GRE] ARGUE, changing radio station - memorandum from the manager of WWAC
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|Writing Task 1 - Ticket buying Chart Comparison
4 - First, this task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills and therefore you should present details in...
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|Awareness among people about a healthier lifestyle leads to the need to look for a specific food
2 - I like that you use transitional words such as "in addition", "in conclusion" to emphasize the structure of your...
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|Ielts - Advertisements have become part of our life and it is impossible to ban them
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|IELTS: What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
3 - Essay is clear and coherent. There are few grammatical errors which you might need to work on. Some of...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 3, 2014 / swathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014
|"leader is like the captain in a boat"; what is the most important qualities of a person who guides?
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Sep 3, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|"Transportation in Surabaya - my hometown" - essay for replacement test of IALF
Writing Feedbackbe juang - Sep 3, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 26, 2014
|ielts: private citizens, businesses and governments play equally roles in protecting the environment
2 - First and foremost, you must lengthen your introductory statement. It is too short and does not totally inform the...
Writing Feedbackfunny_sun89 - Sep 2, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|TOEFL: Type of temper and advantages of individual work as best arguments in favor of studying alone
8 - Agood TOEFL Writing essay need that you responded well to the task, relating the lecture to the reading including...
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|Experiences make people prepared for the future problems - valuable lessons
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|IELTS: Media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 2, 2014 / Xiaokai Jin - Sep 4, 2014
|All kinds of medical health expenditures should be borne by the government; do you agree or not .
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|Internet is just a tool based on different inventions such as the computer, electricity and language
5 - You begin your essay with expressing your opinion on the issue. It is better if you first introduced...
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|Increasing Crime And Solutions For Governments - IELTS task 2
3 - For one,First,unemployment is one of the reasons that can drive people to commit a range of both violent and...
Writing Feedbackjoe9 - Sep 1, 2014 / dumi - Sep 1, 2014
|IELTS: Strict regulations can effectively reduce the problem of overfishing by large corporations
Writing Feedbackmvettri - Sep 1, 2014 / Pahan - Sep 1, 2014
|IELTS: New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming to the lives of consumers.
2 - Security and quality are described as the large problems when using new latest (redundant) gadgets. Online crimesshoppers take...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 1, 2014 / niesaysi - Sep 1, 2014
|In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money..
3 - This sounds a bit stereotype beginning. You should make it more interesting for the reader :) It is...
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|"One more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live"|