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|Governments should support public transport - important factor of social welfare
4 - Anyway, your essay looks pretty short :) .... Had your prompt asked whether you agree on that...
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Women should work (paragraph)
7 - Well, it is nicer if you could break down this writing into paragraphs. To compose the best paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackycup - May 22, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|"death is inevitable - everybody dies" - Soma Mine Disaster
Writing Feedbackbora99 - May 22, 2014 / bora99 - May 23, 2014
|IELTS: WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / candy07 - May 25, 2014
|To be successful in studying, students should have a good method to learn effectively.
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Traditional skills and ways are always valuable and will last forever
4 - I like those arguements offered, but there are some grammar mistakes. i have got question, do we...
Writing Feedbacktiandteo - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 28, 2014
|Toefl Essay: House or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
4 - First, you need to present your essay in a more tidy manner. This is pretty difficult to read as...
Writing FeedbackSam123 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2- MACHINES - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE FOR HUMANS
6 - 1) Thesis statement is simply a statement expressing your opinion. It is always good to conclude your intro with...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] old and young workers
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|Funding public transport by government should be supported.
Writing Feedbackskyplex2014 - May 22, 2014 / SalMon - May 22, 2014
|IELTS - PRICE OF THE AIRPLANE TICKETS
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|iBT Essay: Finance sports at universities?
Writing Feedbackesmayli - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Introduction to Argumentative Essay on Homework
2 - I am an English teacher, and I bet homework IS important. It often happens that I explain a grammar...
Writing Feedbacktaymcg - May 22, 2014 / esmayli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Letter - Write a letter asking your friend to join you on a holiday
3 - was going...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 21, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Process (Tea Production)
7 - Well, I think you need to improve the approach you follow for this task. Here, it is important to...
Writing Feedbacknded - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|IELTS: Children can effectively learn from watching television. Agree/Disagree?
Writing Feedbacksoham2508 - May 21, 2014 / candy07 - May 22, 2014
|GRE Argument: Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity
2 - The first question that arises is,"whetherWas the inclusion of the course was the only change made?" Also, it...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / niesaysi - May 25, 2014
|GRE Argument: "Palean baskets" archeologists discovery
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / classified9988 - May 26, 2014
|Television has comprehensive good effects on society.
4 - Firstly, the arrival.. seems better since advent is less representative of a technology. I am concerned...
Writing Feedbackodon - May 21, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 - fast food graph and chart
Writing Feedbacksmeak - May 21, 2014 / MisterWandering - May 21, 2014
|IELTS;Some celebrities misguide young people& some guide them in right direction
Writing Feedbackleoking - May 21, 2014 / leoking - May 23, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : School expenditure in 3 particular year
3 - To here is not as a To-infinitive, but preposition. Omit 'reach'. From 28%... to 15% The number of...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Injuries and Incidents
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / SHanafi - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Satisfactory level on fitness membership
2 - ... Your intro needs better clarity; The table givesprovides information about the number of satisfactory levels ofon...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 21, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Hydro Electric process
5 - ... it is not accurate in this occasion. you may say the process begins when the sunlight hot...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / andial - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Process of making cement to produce a concrete brick
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|The convenience and security enjoy more by the people who live in apartments
Writing Feedbackdil77 - May 21, 2014 / odon - May 21, 2014
|Parents are the best teachers - they teach us at any time, with no any fee
2 - Firstly, one of the reasons parents are best teachers is because they are full time teachers... ....no...
Writing Feedbackxomarleal - May 20, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 20, 2014
|CBEST- argument(s) either for or against "Back to Basics."
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Should the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices?
3 - It would be better if you mention the purpose of your writing. If it is for a particular test,...
Writing Feedbackquocdai - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Have humans harmed the earth or Made it a better place?
2 - In this solar system earth is the only planet that supports life form. Earth is a 2.3 million...
Writing FeedbackDragon9090 - May 20, 2014 / xomarleal - May 20, 2014
|GRE Essay: Scandals are useful because they focus our attention
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|IELTS: Young people in the modern world
4 - Thank you Dumi! I really appreciate your comments ^^ I have a habit of writing too long, I trying...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 20, 2014 / SalMon - May 28, 2014
|IELTS: "Living a healthy lifestyle through eating"
Writing Feedbackbrianna - May 20, 2014 / brianna - May 21, 2014
|Some people claim that technology advancement is a sign of human progress
4 - What is this all about? Is this the essay topic? For what purpose you are writing this essay?...
Writing FeedbackAbassdarsa - May 20, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|TOEFL writing: Handmade objects are more beneficial than machine made ones
Writing Feedbackksr10 - May 19, 2014 / dumi - May 20, 2014
|Toefl: 'helpful bursaries' - Teenagers have jobs while they are still students.
4 - Can you add more details or words to explain why students have to get highest grades for future...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 19, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 20, 2014
|TOEFL: Why music is so important? It's indispensable part of people's life
Writing Feedbackluckyxuan - May 19, 2014 / Abdurasul - May 29, 2014
|Should children start learning foreign language as soon as they start school
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 19, 2014 / SalMon - May 19, 2014
|IELTS - International tourism leads to both - tension and understanding
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 19, 2014 / thiagocardoso - May 19, 2014
|"water car" - If I could invent something new
Writing Feedbackxomarleal - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 19, 2014
|IELTS Essay - The option to work or study from home is advantage or disadvantage
7 - Even your prompt is open for discussion, there is no harm you stating your own opinion in the...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|IELTS: only some of children's leisure activities should be educational
3 - Lemme give a try: Playing with friends brings great joy to children. For some people, they argue that children...
Writing Feedbackmohamedtheking - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|TOEFL writing; I'm against providing more money to professors
5 - Besides, the ultimate purpose is to change, to motivate students to be better. To improve education, spending more moneyallocating...
Writing FeedbackTiffany Lin - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 20, 2014
|IELTS: How to learn children more efficiently. Should they watch more tv?
2 - To begin with, classic teaching methods hashave been scientifically proven and utilized as the best mode ofto educate a...
Writing FeedbackAndy_Vo - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 19, 2014
|TOEFL: working three or five days a week? "killing two birds with one stone"
Writing FeedbackTiffany Lin - May 18, 2014 / Tiffany Lin - May 18, 2014
|What is the best age to start schooling?
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - May 18, 2014 / reza10977 - May 18, 2014
|Is Censorship Always a Bad Thing?
5 - One of the primary reasons for censorship is to protect children from any material that is immoral and harmful...
Writing FeedbackRtzn1234 - May 17, 2014 / dumi - May 17, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: UK telephone calls - number of mins
3 - Amount is used with uncountable nouns. In this case, you should use "number" instead. dramatically ...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - May 17, 2014 / MisterWandering - May 17, 2014
|IELTS - Reading books or Watching TV? 'Equal credits should be given'
7 - Your essay is so interesting to read since your pov is clean and very persuasive . because the faults...
Writing Feedbackzeable - May 16, 2014 / Pyon9x - May 17, 2014
|"The Decline of Manners" by Judy Martin
3 - In "The Decline of Manners," by Judy Martin, the author states that people of today are rudermuch more rude...
Writing FeedbackHaogicel - May 16, 2014 / dumi - May 18, 2014
|Non-academic subject should stay in school syllabus along with academic subjects
3 - Primarily, physical education should be mandatory to be included in school syllabus because it brings many benefits to the...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - May 16, 2014 / niesaysi - May 17, 2014
|Not like my expected club; 'Art club is the best club I've joined'
4 - I've always wanted to take up an artistic hobby, and I finally got the chance! There was new club...
Writing Feedbackyuarar - May 16, 2014 / Tiffany Lin - May 18, 2014
|IELTS: improve health by increasing sport facilities; 'regimen of nutrition'
Writing FeedbackDinhlan - May 16, 2014 / msarkar - May 18, 2014
|IELTS -Levels of youth crime are increasing
5 - Hi Candy, I highly appreciate your writing skill. Just one suggestion, try to finish the essay within 300...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 16, 2014 / msarkar - May 22, 2014
|TOEFL: Your job brings you more happiness that your social life does
5 - In your body paras, you should give reasons to justify your opinion on the issue and then support them...
Writing Feedbackma_shelley - May 16, 2014 / Pahan - May 16, 2014
|CBEST- Imagine yourself as a child... (personal experience essay)
4 - Feeling excited, I would follow her to explore those beautiful walking paths. We used to pretend...
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 16, 2014 / Pahan - May 17, 2014
|Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational
6 - Returning to previous research In the findings of the same research I cited in the previous paragraph,...
Writing Feedbackdil77 - May 15, 2014 / dumi - May 16, 2014
|Britain is the country with the highest amount spent on the six consumer goods.
4 - Yes, this is very important for us to provide you with meaningful feedbacks. Use the "Attach file (s)"...
Writing Feedbackmohamedtheking - May 15, 2014 / dumi - May 16, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: The best period to start learning languages?
2 - you're far better writer comparing to me :D your passage's structure is well-organized and the words used are flexible,...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 15, 2014 / Pyon9x - May 15, 2014
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