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|[IELTS] Increased taxation on petrol and diesel fuel to discourage private cars?
12 - ok thanks :)...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 7, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|IELTS: the graph show the number of passenger railway journeys
4 - You need to upload the graph for the reader to have a better understanding about what it presents...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|Ielts - fast food is good or bad?
10 - read sample essays as many as possible as you will learn how ielts essay should written. Government...
Writing FeedbackHelpmeet - Jun 6, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|parents were busier in the past - nowadays more of them are involved in their children's education
8 - First, I have a small admin request from you. You should have had a more meaningful title in the...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS - To encourage old people using mobile phones and the internet
3 - small mistakes may decrease your score,,be more careful,, can better our life it should be can make our...
Writing Feedbackyirunli - Jun 6, 2014 / fikri - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS: Customs and behaviours followed by tourists or host should welcome.
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|some people believe that college student should consider only their own talents
4 - Given this evidence, both group opinions are right, which students should consider parameters when choosing field of study....
Writing Feedbacktgholian - Jun 5, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|Community service in high school has many benefits
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jun 5, 2014 / Vihuynh - Jun 6, 2014
|IELTS pie chart and table - agricultural crisis
Writing Feedbacktinubalde - Jun 5, 2014 / lewyne - Jun 9, 2014
|Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compare with the past
3 - Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compared with the past. People live in digital- ageda digital world today...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Chart - contribution of selected categories in total spending of five countries
3 - Second part of first paragraph is not a sentence. Respectively includes more than one factor....
Writing FeedbackHung Arsenal - Jun 5, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 11, 2014
|What are the reasons behind lack of facilities &services for disabled population?
3 - We see many people with physical and mental disabilities and live in pathetic conditions. In fact, the recent statistical...
Writing FeedbackRUSHABH - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] Children's engagement in paid work. Right or wrong?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|IELTS : Salary is the most important consideration when choosing a job
5 - Ok... let me help you with your intro; Along with the increasing physical demands of human lifein today's...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best
Writing Feedbackabinh - Jun 4, 2014 / jjsteven - Jul 12, 2014
|There are more benefits to travel in your own country than travelling in foreign
Writing Feedbackdurai_ielts - Jun 4, 2014 / ah_zafari - Jun 8, 2014
|IELTS 2 : Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries
2 - Undoubtedly, the house is a primary need that provides us shelter to protect ourselves from hot sun and...
Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jul 2, 2014
|IELTS: I highly recommend authorities to raise the age to leave school to 18
7 - contribute to high quality or contribute in producing high quality I always suggest others to have...
Writing Feedbackbangvuthe - Jun 4, 2014 / eddies - Jul 27, 2014
|If people have opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right awayI
5 - .... well, I have a problem with this sentence. I agree that secure job is not necessarily be...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 4, 2014 / Pahan - Jun 6, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Share expenditure for selected categories in four countries
9 - Dear Ahmad, Thanks for your detail correction. I really appreciate for advice. Tinubalde, thanks for a...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 4, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 8, 2014
|TOEFL: 'career preparation' - reasons why people attend to schools
6 - a subject and verb agreement. Write: These universities play | The university plays write: a library...
Writing Feedbackbrisky - Jun 4, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|Ielts: Teacher is the best option for children's education in some aspects.
Writing Feedbackganggang - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|Ielts: "International Day" - Letter to the principal
2 - I am so happy to hear the news that a great event "International Day" is going to holdbe held...
Writing Feedbackganggang - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jun 4, 2014
|IELTS: Increased life expectancy has many implications on society and individual
3 - Very good start :) However, increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as...
Writing Feedbackrims - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Some children take sports seriously while others not. Give opinion
3 - ... Well, it is always better to conclude your introduction with a statement that clearly expresses your opinion...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 5, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Universities provide students with the additional skills
Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 5, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : government involvement in people life syle
4 - Sticking "No Smoking" campaign in public area, for instance, is one of the accepted regulations made by government which...
Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 3, 2014 / niesaysi - Jun 5, 2014
|'food concession' - Give recommendation base on information of graphs
Writing Feedbackshinbe24793 - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jul 4, 2014
|IELTS: THE ADVERSE OPINION OF SCHOOL LEAVERS
3 - Thank you pinkpoet for your correction I am using the format "Firstly, ... Secondly,..." so I think...
Writing FeedbackAnh Nguyen 265 - Jun 3, 2014 / Anh Nguyen 265 - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Channel one news viewing figures
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 3, 2014 / andial - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS Writing: Number of phone services in US - line graph essay
3 - By contrast , consumers of residential services dropped slightly to just under $700. I think you have followed the...
Writing FeedbackoktaHrp - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|[IELTS] University education restriction. Just for best students? Agree or not?
2 - If you want to write a balanced answer for an "agree or disagree" question, it's important to get the...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 3, 2014 / fikri - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS - If Police should carry guns or not?
8 - It is very common that in various countries the police are carryingcarryguns when they are on patrol in many...
Writing Feedbackyirunli - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|There has a lot of changes in the town or city where you are living
4 - Quang binh is a poor areatownship (or village .... you need to specify) in the North Central Coast. In...
Writing Feedbacknam120600218 - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS sports and games are devised to spend the leisure time; patriotic emotions
4 - Peeking back at the history of mankind, sports and games are devised to spend the leisure time of the...
Writing Feedbacknarjisfatima - Jun 2, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|One of the interesting differences in culture between America and Vietnam
2 - great job... the only thing wrong with this comparison essay is that you did not state any similarities at...
Writing FeedbackTranAnh - Jun 2, 2014 / pinkpoet - Jun 2, 2014
|My pets - chicks; Yun Tai Mountain attractions
Writing Feedbacka35817126as - Jun 2, 2014 / dumi - Jun 3, 2014
|[IELTS] Prevention is better than cure. Agree or not? 'materialistic diversion'
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 2, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS Letter - Write to a friend inviting him/her to watch a movie
Writing Feedbackrims - Jun 2, 2014 / Est2k - Jun 4, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Children are raised by grandparents. How family is affected?
7 - my eyes are really out after having finished checking the essay above. So can I get my essay checked?...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jun 2, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 18, 2014
|IELTS: Pizza, fish and chips consumed by Australian Teenagers
5 - Sorry Tia, it has nothing to do with the article.:-) I mean 'first period' here is not obvious...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 1, 2014 / andial - Jun 3, 2014
|IELTS : Languages' extinction, discuss both views
3 - yeah , i like something kinda short and concise but i dont know why everytime i write essays, i...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 1, 2014 / thanhphongct1 - Jun 1, 2014
|IELTS: The zoo deserves maintenance and public respect
13 - as means of...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 1, 2014 / yirunli - Jun 6, 2014
|IELTS: Learning a foreign language at elementary school brings lots of benefits
6 - Since you expressed your opinion supporting the statement, it is better to continue justifying your opinion rather than...
Writing Feedbackharry137181143 - Jun 1, 2014 / dumi - Jun 4, 2014
|TOEFL integrated task, personality called universal risk taking
3 - I think your essay is good to read. In my experience, sometimes, you can only hear the example...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 31, 2014 / okdeerpass - Jun 1, 2014
|IELTS - ACADEMIC - INTERNET vs CLASSROOM FOR LEARNING LANGUAGES
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 31, 2014 / harry137181143 - Jun 1, 2014
|old and new generation; role of young and elder people in the society
3 - I think you should not give an example in the very first line of the introduction paragraph. Thank you....
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - May 30, 2014 / Humza33 - Jun 8, 2014
|IELTS- CAPITAL PUNISHMENT; 51% countries have polished death penalty
5 - Personally, I think itthere is no evidence about theto support that it helps reducereduction of crime rates due to...
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - May 30, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS; Letter to a friend - he agreed to look after your house and pet
Writing FeedbackJoyce68 - May 30, 2014 / fikri - Jun 10, 2014
|What is one thing you will do to improve your community?
Writing Feedbackjm06633 - May 30, 2014 / jm06633 - Jun 8, 2014
|IELTS: young school leavers have a negative attitude towards learning
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - May 30, 2014 / thanhphongct1 - Jun 1, 2014
|[IELTS] THE MAINTENANCE OF TRADITIONAL SKILLS AND WAYS OF LIFE?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 30, 2014 / thanhphongct1 - May 31, 2014
|IELTS - Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you're looking for
Writing Feedbackrims - May 29, 2014 / SalMon - May 29, 2014
|A caste less society is the need of the hour-IGNOU
2 - Hey dear, On the fourth paragraph, Instead of 'this further increases caste divide" rather it is " this will...
Writing FeedbackGrasshopper - May 29, 2014 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|CBEST - Technology to modern life is advantageous.
2 - You put your points across and backed it up with instances which is great...But some changes should be made......
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 29, 2014 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|IELTS : Vegetarianism - why some people are choosing to become vegetarian?
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - May 29, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS: Do young people have much greater influence nowadays than it was?
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - May 29, 2014 / fikri - Jun 10, 2014
|[IELTS] FUTURE INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY: POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 29, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 6, 2014
|pros and cons when children were learned foreign language in primary shool
4 - This sentence shows faulty reference of a pronoun. This part show a problem with a subject-verb...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - May 29, 2014 / eddies - May 31, 2014
|Combustion of Food to Find Stored Energy-Mini Evaluation
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