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|IELTS: some people think the government should spend more money on science than art. Do you agree ?
4 - (the) amount of is followed by uncountable noun (the) number of followed by plural noun excellent...
Writing Feedbacksky1997 - Jul 21, 2014 / eddies - Aug 22, 2014
|IELTS Easy for poor people to get access to university education
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: Too much freedom for children affected their studies
2 - I like yoru approach towards the intorduction. However, I wish you removed the last line as it is...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|An increasing amount of students have negative attitude of learning. Why is this happening?
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Jul 21, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 22, 2014
|Nowadays, there is an ever increasing amount of noise in our everyday lives. Reasons and solutions
3 - I guess you have written this essay for IELTS or TOEFL preparation. It is good if you mention that...
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Extinction of some languages will make life easier through improving the efficiency and employment
6 - Some minority languages are dying out due to rapid population growth. People without thelittle language skills...
Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 20, 2014 / eddies - Aug 18, 2014
|Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
3 - Hello Divya, Your writing is impressive and especially in introduction paragraph which depicts that you have great writing skill....
Writing FeedbackDIVYA RAJKUMAR - Jul 20, 2014 / tiaDS - Jul 21, 2014
|keep equal number of man and woman to show the respect for both genders
Writing Feedbacksky1997 - Jul 20, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 20, 2014
|Toefl essay: advertisements whose target is young children should be banned
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 20, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|IELTS: spending more money on promoting healthy lifestyle or treatment
NEW - Some people think it is more important for government to spend more money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order...
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|Toefl writing is my weakness, hope you can help me, the question is written in the message.
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 19, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: In which areas people made important progress?
6 - Today,the role of English as a global language is indispensable.Some people are of the pointview that we can implementintroduce...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 19, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|IELTS: Effects of technology to communication - dangers for a society
7 - In the past, the method of communication was pretty straightforward. .... good start :) If you want to...
Writing Feedbackbmomongan - Jul 19, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable
3 - level of living. health care standards. On the other hand, the development of technology is brings some...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014 / heythere11 - Jul 20, 2014
|TOEFL essay, living in big cities or living in small towns; the Article
Writing FeedbackBasilMostafa - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|Crime in urban areas of America - rough draft
2 - teachers affects a studentsstudent's achievement. Without proper education, the possibility of being able to earn a decent income...
Writing Feedbackameyer149 - Jul 18, 2014 / Hiruni - Jul 26, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY; companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform
2 - Hi, devaraj This is called shopping listing unfortunately, it indicates laziness. As far as I read the...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 18, 2014 / SHanafi - Jul 20, 2014
|Writing task 2: studying overseas can be difficult at first, but gaining experience make it worth it
7 - Your prompt is directly asking you about the opinion you hold on this issue. So, it is better...
Writing FeedbackTranAnh - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|TOEFL: An effective leader tries to make others feel they are part of the decision-making process.
Writing Feedbackjyong101 - Jul 18, 2014 / jyong101 - Jul 20, 2014
|[IELTS] 'Long-term positive effects of culture' - should tourist obey local customs and behaviors?
6 - You have an excellent writing structure, excellent writing skill, perfect accuracy of collocation (lexical resources). As usual, I really...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jul 18, 2014 / tiaDS - Jul 21, 2014
|TOEFL: extraordinarily cautious is important since rough work is intolerable
Writing FeedbackAndreawqh - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: bar chart - average retirement age among seven countries in 2004 and 2008
5 - be careful when you are using commas in your sentences, i observed so many comma mistakes in your report...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014 / handsome7boy - Aug 9, 2014
|Fast food is cheap and convenient therefore has positive impact on human eating habits
3 - Good introduction ... You have good writing skills :) I wish you shortened this sentence. Your point...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jul 17, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|The chart shows vast difference in the level of skilled vocational diploma
Writing Feedbackpranesh - Jul 17, 2014 / pranesh - Jul 20, 2014
|I believe that society has been helped by the invention of the Internet
6 - is it ielts essay? please include the type of essay beside the topic that you have written above....
Writing Feedbackpntncar - Jul 17, 2014 / fikri - Jul 25, 2014
|Technological improvement has always two sides, benefits and drawbacks
5 - Some vocabularies and sentences interrupt the flow. You need a concluding signal. This is strictly necessary, you know....
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Jul 17, 2014 / eddies - Jul 20, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY; Movies and computer games containing violence are very popular.
NEW - QUESTION: Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect...
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|"I AM NOT A MERE TEACHER" - creative essay
3 - thanks for correcting me on the digressions. n a cat means continuous assessment test... it's quite common in my...
Writing Feedbackdchege711 - Jul 17, 2014 / dchege711 - Jul 23, 2014
|Fixed punishments for crimes may improve the efficiency, decrease the crime rate
Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 16, 2014 / stephy7658 - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: How British people spending their money on fast foods? Chart
Writing Feedbackgns5958 - Jul 16, 2014 / iamchop - Jul 17, 2014
|IELTS: we should not ignore the traditional food; fast foods need be supervised
5 - .... that too has some grammar issues. These are few sentences I suggest ; There is a growing...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 16, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|Making money or traveling before entering university is valuable for students
2 - At present, it is commonlyoften recommended that young people graduate from high school should to go out to work...
Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 16, 2014 / dumi - Jul 17, 2014
|IELTS The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 15, 2014 / MisterWandering - Jul 16, 2014
|IELTS; working and travelling a year before university is a good idea
Writing Feedbackskyman - Jul 15, 2014 / dumi - Jul 16, 2014
|What should a country do: run/ carry out the policy of isolating from the world or engaging others?
3 - I will present my thoughts in the order of your essay's content. Don't be wordy (from my viewpoint, I...
Writing Feedbackthoomr - Jul 15, 2014 / dchege711 - Jul 16, 2014
|I definitely agree - pressure of school and parental pressure should be reduced
3 - Don't write lengthy sentences to open your essay. Begin your essay with a more catchy, interesting and meaningful...
Writing Feedbackatmnbnnr - Jul 15, 2014 / dumi - Jul 16, 2014
|IELTS - learning languages at an early age bracket benefits more than deteriorates.
4 - Sure :) This my suggestion for your introduction; Literacy on foreign languages is a great advantage in the modern...
Writing Feedbackerocdrah - Jul 15, 2014 / dumi - Jul 16, 2014
|IELTS; School teachers used to be the source of information
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 15, 2014 / digitalidea - Jul 15, 2014
|Video games are harmless fun. Disagree or Agree?
4 - I think the expression 'etc' is neither very appropriate in academic writings, nor be counted as a word, so...
Writing FeedbackMinhMinh - Jul 15, 2014 / erocdrah - Jul 15, 2014
|IELTS 2: CONSIDERING DISADVANTAGES OF TOURISM
Writing Feedbackeirehc - Jul 15, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 8, 2014
|PUBLIC LIBRARIES SHOULD NOT BE MAINTAINED
NEW - TOPIC: PUBLIC LIBRARIES SHOULD NOT BE MAINTAINED ANYMORE SINCE WE ALREADY HAVE COMPUTER TECHNOLOGY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU...
Writing Feedbackeirehc - Jul 15, 2014 / — -
|TEXT Messages - novelty for us
Writing FeedbackLobocor - Jul 14, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 17, 2014
|IELTS 2 Working hoursare toolong and people don't have time for family
Writing FeedbackNatalia1988 - Jul 14, 2014 / dumi - Jul 15, 2014
|SAT : Is the world changing for the better ?
2 - I think you should try to arrange the thoughts on your paragraph. Try writing 1 thought per paragraph. The...
Writing Feedbackamanyeid - Jul 14, 2014 / eirehc - Jul 15, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Chocolate production sequences
3 - Where is the diagram? It is important to upload the diagram if you wish to earn more meaningful comments....
Writing FeedbackNatalia1988 - Jul 14, 2014 / dumi - Jul 15, 2014
|[IELTS] The two main materials of making cement are limestone and clay
3 - in my opinion there are 2 kinds of template: the first one is as you mentioned; the 2nd contain...
Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jul 14, 2014 / xizon7777 - Jul 14, 2014
|Short Description on Myself
Writing FeedbackLuqman Nul Haki - Jul 13, 2014 / dumi - Jul 15, 2014
|IELTS Task 2. Tax on Private Schools Should Not Be Paid
NEW - Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state...
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|GRE Issue "The best way to understand the character of a society..."
2 - Hi! I think you should make your stand clearer on the introduction and most importantly in conclusion. Instead of...
Writing FeedbackTila Tequila - Jul 13, 2014 / eirehc - Jul 15, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: permit of women to run career in army must be supported
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 12, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|IELTS Task 2 : Old home Cares: Who should be responsible ? family or Governmnet
3 - Thank you eddies and dummy . I have made changes according to you suggestions . Kindly take a look...
Writing Feedbackharis86 - Jul 12, 2014 / haris86 - Jul 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 2. Less Homework Means Less Stress for Children
3 - Halo Friends, In my personal point of view, no need to worry too much concerning this particular task...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 12, 2014 / andial - Jul 13, 2014
|People should be aware of health risks - dramatic increase in fast food consuming
4 - What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is it for IELTS, TOEFL? Mention the purpose in the title...
Writing FeedbackHaiha - Jul 12, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Two bars: motivations to study and workers' support
4 - I like the approach you have followed for this task - Intro, Overview, Detailed paras. Let's look at the...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 11, 2014 / dumi - Jul 13, 2014
|[IELTS task2] Job for a few years between school and university
7 - If you look at all the prompts of IELTS task 2 more closely in Cambridge IELTS Student's Book,...
Writing FeedbackNatalia1988 - Jul 11, 2014 / eddies - Jul 14, 2014
|Success in life is a product of one's constant effort and dedication
3 - success is really within us, if we'll persevere in doing something and we are passionate, the success is just...
Writing Feedbackjjsteven - Jul 11, 2014 / charlene1699 - Jul 12, 2014
|[IELTS task2]: some people argue that fashion items cost too much money.
6 - I suggest you to have a more meaningful sentence to open your essay. This should hook your reader...
Writing FeedbackNatalia1988 - Jul 11, 2014 / dumi - Jul 14, 2014
|[IELTS] Competition or co-operation? - 'shaking hands or being up in arms'
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jul 10, 2014 / dumi - Jul 10, 2014
|"Another First Date" - my narrative essay
2 - I am in the bathroom getting ready for, yet another "first date." At this point, I do not have...
Writing FeedbackLuna2014 - Jul 9, 2014 / niesaysi - Jul 19, 2014
|It is important to respect authority but only if it not violate your own freedom
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