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|IELTS - Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you're looking for
Writing Feedbackrims - May 29, 2014 / SalMon - May 29, 2014
|A caste less society is the need of the hour-IGNOU
2 - Hey dear, On the fourth paragraph, Instead of 'this further increases caste divide" rather it is " this will...
Writing FeedbackGrasshopper - May 29, 2014 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|CBEST - Technology to modern life is advantageous.
2 - You put your points across and backed it up with instances which is great...But some changes should be made......
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 29, 2014 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|IELTS : Vegetarianism - why some people are choosing to become vegetarian?
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - May 29, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS: Do young people have much greater influence nowadays than it was?
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - May 29, 2014 / fikri - Jun 10, 2014
|[IELTS] FUTURE INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY: POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 29, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 6, 2014
|pros and cons when children were learned foreign language in primary shool
4 - This sentence shows faulty reference of a pronoun. This part show a problem with a subject-verb...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - May 29, 2014 / eddies - May 31, 2014
|Combustion of Food to Find Stored Energy-Mini Evaluation
Writing Feedbackclassified9988 - May 29, 2014 / classified9988 - May 31, 2014
|Knowledge gained from books or from practical experience; compare and contrast
Writing Feedbackmoney123 - May 28, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 23, 2014
|Ielts: job inquiry - guide tourists in you town for a travel company
Writing Feedbackganggang - May 28, 2014 / fikri - Jun 12, 2014
|Media plays a huge role in bringing to the sight of people the latest news
3 - Media plays an inevitable role in bringing to the sight ofeducating people with the latest news on various topics....
Writing FeedbackRoar - May 28, 2014 / dumi - Jun 7, 2014
|SAT essay sample - how important is to look beyond superficial appearances?
Writing Feedbackmonmomo04 - May 28, 2014 / monmomo04 - Jun 18, 2014
|IELTS - Zoos are cruel or useful?
6 - it seems extremely unbalanced, try to make it balance by giving more details in the third paragraph,...
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 28, 2014 / fikri - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS: ACADEMIC- LINE GRAPH- TOURISTS IN FIVE COUNTRIES
3 - Hi tiaDS Thanks for your revert You are right . I should have compared the countries at least US...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 28, 2014 / candy07 - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Introductions; living in modern world/ world poverty/ traffic problem
6 - If you organize the order other way, I feel it would be more interesting; Some people find these...
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - May 27, 2014 / dumi - Jun 5, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: The number of visitors to three London museums.
8 - Overview should actually present the general information or the main trends of the graph which may come...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 27, 2014 / andial - Jun 3, 2014
|GRE: Adam's Realty firm is considerably superior to the Fitch's Realty firm
2 - The ten year period can help a company establish --> to establish its business, increase its productivity and thus,...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 27, 2014 / Hung Arsenal - May 29, 2014
|GRE Argument: A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys..
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 27, 2014 / christy6789 - May 30, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: increased sport facilities vs other measures. Discuss both views.
3 - According to some people, increased number of sports facilities can be the best way to reduce the number of...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 27, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|TOEFL: keep your old friends or make new friends? I've ever had just few friends
3 - Well, you need to improve a lot on your approach for this introduction. I have provided an approach for...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 27, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|IELTS - Tourism: good or bad? - it's a modern form of colonialism
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 27, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 7, 2014
|ACADEMIC TASK 1- COMPARISON OF PIE CHARTS (leisure activities in U.S.A)
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 27, 2014 / candy07 - May 27, 2014
|Parents - the main factor effect personality on person; Fatherhood vs motherhood
4 - Well I understand most of your ideas. However you need to practice writing quite hard :) you need to...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - May 27, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 1, 2014
|Smoking should be made prohibited in public places : IELTS
Writing Feedbackdil77 - May 27, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|IELTS: People have different views about who is responsible for raising chilrden
6 - please, give space to show the differences between each paragraphs also, you need to explain more by giving...
Writing Feedbackfreesoul123 - May 27, 2014 / fikri - Jun 12, 2014
|Task 1 : Line graph essay of expenditure on phone services in America
4 - .... "average yearly the consumer pending"? This phrase spoils your intro.... Also, mention the period in more details...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 26, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|Park in Bangkok -Should the government build the park in the middle of the city?
3 - Instead of using same word frequently. it is highly better to use referencing such as it, they , or...
Writing Feedbackbrightxxz - May 26, 2014 / andial - May 30, 2014
|ielts: the reason why sports competions has replaced war
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 26, 2014 / fikri - Jun 12, 2014
|IELTS: working in team enhances the students' efficiency in the study process
Writing Feedbackstronglee - May 26, 2014 / rims - Jun 2, 2014
|Youth Drug Abuse topic - Causes - effects and possible recommendations
Writing FeedbackHung Arsenal - May 26, 2014 / KMeghji - May 27, 2014
|IELTS: Doing same things vs Making change - Which is good?
Writing FeedbackDinhlan - May 25, 2014 / dumi - Jun 12, 2014
|ielts: different causes of car accidents and some solutions
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|to acquire some certain skills, people usually need to be trained by education
Writing FeedbackHang Le - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|IELTS - The gender issue for getting education needs
Writing Feedbackagienugroho - May 25, 2014 / Henie - Jun 19, 2014
|Toefl: Teachers should attend courses - knowledge should be up to date
3 - You write very well - good grammar, vocabulary, ideas etc. However, I wonder whether it is wise to spend...
Writing Feedbackzhanghankun - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|IELTS: Academic - Sales of two companies
6 - click: takeielts.britishcouncil (dot) org/sites/default/files/IELTS_task_1_Writing_band_descriptors.pdf An overview is not the individual details, but the 'whole picture'....
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 25, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|Story about why the dog 'Jaw' was sold by the owner
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Rejecting job opportunities - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE?
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 24, 2014 / yirunli - May 29, 2014
|Shopping is beyond buying goods. It is social interaction with other people.
4 - I know you write well. However, you'd better always try to include the prompt. To give relevant and...
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 24, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|Freedom of speech is mother of democracy
Writing FeedbackPsardana - May 24, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Essay on OVERPOPULATION topic; 'starvation of millions'
NEW - Together with environmental related problems, population explosion has drawn a great attention of the public these days. It's believed...
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|The use of electronic mail (e-mail) makes people become better writers.
Writing Feedbackodon - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Parent should acquisite skills of listening and taking care of their children
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 23, 2014 / SalMon - May 29, 2014
|IELTS - EFFECT OF CELEBRITIES ON YOUTH
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 23, 2014 / bakhadeer - May 24, 2014
|IELTS - parents should teach children / or school is the place?
5 - It is good to conclude your intro with a statement expressing your view on the issue (although your...
Writing FeedbackRSD - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|TOEFL integrated task, altruism in humans and animals
3 - It is a well-written essay, I liked it :) Here are some comments: Your intro par clearly introduces the...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 23, 2014 / esmayli - May 23, 2014
|Governments should support public transport - important factor of social welfare
4 - Anyway, your essay looks pretty short :) .... Had your prompt asked whether you agree on that...
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Women should work (paragraph)
7 - Well, it is nicer if you could break down this writing into paragraphs. To compose the best paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackycup - May 22, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|"death is inevitable - everybody dies" - Soma Mine Disaster
Writing Feedbackbora99 - May 22, 2014 / bora99 - May 23, 2014
|IELTS: WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / candy07 - May 25, 2014
|To be successful in studying, students should have a good method to learn effectively.
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Traditional skills and ways are always valuable and will last forever
4 - I like those arguements offered, but there are some grammar mistakes. i have got question, do we...
Writing Feedbacktiandteo - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 28, 2014
|Toefl Essay: House or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
4 - First, you need to present your essay in a more tidy manner. This is pretty difficult to read as...
Writing FeedbackSam123 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2- MACHINES - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE FOR HUMANS
6 - 1) Thesis statement is simply a statement expressing your opinion. It is always good to conclude your intro with...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] old and young workers
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|Funding public transport by government should be supported.
Writing Feedbackskyplex2014 - May 22, 2014 / SalMon - May 22, 2014
|IELTS - PRICE OF THE AIRPLANE TICKETS
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|iBT Essay: Finance sports at universities?
Writing Feedbackesmayli - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Introduction to Argumentative Essay on Homework
2 - I am an English teacher, and I bet homework IS important. It often happens that I explain a grammar...
Writing Feedbacktaymcg - May 22, 2014 / esmayli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Letter - Write a letter asking your friend to join you on a holiday
3 - was going...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 21, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
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