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|Public transportation is a great way to travel
4 - A writer needs to keep in mind that the intro is often what a reader remembers best. Your intro...
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|Practice Essay for CLEP College Comp - Are Scandals Useful
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|Fixed punishment or flexible one?
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|Person with Humor - Humor is an important trait
4 - First, you should have mentioned what had been the purpose of writing this essay. It is an important aspect...
Writing Feedbackyparekh - Apr 15, 2014 / dumi - Apr 16, 2014
|Biographical sketch on experiences or events with significant effect on you- BYU
Writing Feedbacksjaqj04 - Apr 15, 2014 / sjaqj04 - Apr 18, 2014
|IELTS: 'everal reasons rates as adults' decision to study' - A REPORT FOR A UNIVERSITY LECTURER.
6 - This is good, but shows complexity. Let me give a try: A subject's preference breaks a record...
Writing Feedbackaryaayra - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - Apr 17, 2014
|IELTS-GT: Our Dependency on computers, & computer's use in future.
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Apr 15, 2014 / dumi - Apr 16, 2014
|parents go abroad for work with their family.
8 - Bad grammar in Correlative Conjunctions. To learn more, visit this link: grammarly..../handbook/grammar/conjunctions/4/correlative-conjunctions/ When you write...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - Apr 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Male graduate from Cullum university
9 - Yes, I agree with MisterWandering. It is always better to reflect on the number of redundant expressions people constantly...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - Apr 17, 2014
|IELTS TASK1; the number of Canadian university based on sex
7 - As per the basic rule, a paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. You...
Writing FeedbackNhasir Rahmatia - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - Apr 16, 2014
|Toefl- The qualities of a good neighbor - should be sociable and helpful
6 - Ok, so the idea is good but some sentences arent written in a right form so here's the correction:...
Writing FeedbackJaanu - Apr 15, 2014 / Itsyasmeens - Apr 25, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. University graduates, Canada, 1992-2007
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Apr 15, 2014 / SHanafi - Apr 15, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : TRIP TO WORK IN HOUSTON, TEXAS
5 - For me, probably, that way of organizing body paragraphs is very common in writing. However, let us not...
Writing Feedbackaryaayra - Apr 15, 2014 / niesaysi - Apr 28, 2014
|IELTS task 1: Callum University graduates - numbers of male students
8 - Single graphs Introduction: Here you should state what the graph shows short body paragraph: state the most important piece...
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: with increasing use of computers, letters writing will disappear
Writing Feedbackalexwater - Apr 14, 2014 / dumi - Apr 21, 2014
|IELTS-International tourism should respect local cultures; 'Chinese restaurants'
Writing Feedbackilovemilch - Apr 14, 2014 / eddies - Apr 20, 2014
|IELTS: Canadian students graduated; 3 pharagraphs
6 - Your total words is 160+, i think you could simplified some sentences such as even though more...
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 14, 2014 / Big B - Apr 19, 2014
|higher price of petrol vs traffic and pollution; 'odd-even traffic restrictions'
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Apr 14, 2014 / enikolova - Apr 16, 2014
|Human cloning should remain banned.
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|Parents are the best teachers; 'they play vital role on children's education'
8 - I agree with eddies on the use of articles. They're slightly...awkward, I would say, just by looking at where...
Writing FeedbackBRonnie - Apr 14, 2014 / iamnicholas1 - Apr 16, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Stagnation in Health and fitness
Writing Feedbackzjxhz - Apr 14, 2014 / zjxhz - Apr 15, 2014
|International student from an emerging market economy; course essay
8 - Serg, Duminda's suggestion is a very good one. You should dedicate one paragraph to each of these questions....
Writing FeedbackSerg007 - Apr 14, 2014 / pdcohen - Apr 16, 2014
|'computers & gadgets' - Modern forms of communicate with people
7 - In conclusion, based on the above reasoning, I believe that modern forms of communications have made our lives...
Writing FeedbackApsari - Apr 14, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Modern forms of communication; 'electronic letter'
Writing Feedbackaryaayra - Apr 14, 2014 / aryaayra - Apr 15, 2014
|TOEFL) have phones and internet made our personal relationships decreased?
6 - A writer needs to keep in mind that the intro is often what a reader remembers best. Your intro...
Writing Feedbacksetsam - Apr 13, 2014 / eddies - Apr 14, 2014
|TALKS IELTS 1: The map of Pellington city - new shopping mall
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 13, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 19, 2014
|[ESSAY] How people's food choices are a reflection of large values they hold?
Writing FeedbackSP88 - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|Classification essay on music; "When the Music's Over"
2 - Music is used for entertainmentto entertain us and it can effectaffect us emotionally, and even impact our physical...
Writing FeedbackOrangeeskies - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|About My Times of Life - 'I had a nice childhood'
Writing FeedbackStwhWindresides - Apr 13, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; Hawaiian island chain in the center of Pacific Ocean
Writing Feedbackupinipin - Apr 13, 2014 / ernhy - Apr 18, 2014
|IELTS: The map of Pellington city; new hypermart, near Hampford town.
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS: The map of Brandfield city - new shopping mall
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 13, 2014 / eddies - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 - plan to build new supermarket in the city of Garlsdon.
7 - Thanks to Google, here is information regarding Maps in IELTS: Generally there are two types of maps in...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 13, 2014 / eddies - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS 1;comparisons where relevant to bulid new mall in the city of Brandfield .
3 - I have noticed that you have the habit of using "both" and "two" together. Since they both have...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: The map below is of the town of Garlsdon.
6 - I am googling now. This is information about maps in IELTS. Generally there are two types of maps in...
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 13, 2014 / eddies - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2; More people want to buy famous brands. Give reason and opinion
Writing FeedbackBig B - Apr 13, 2014 / eddies - Apr 14, 2014
|Ielts task 2: Benefits and drawbacks of having several careers.
3 - In our culturelanguage there is a proverb "For a person, even 70 crafts isare not enough" .......
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 13, 2014 / dumi - Apr 13, 2014
|Ielts task 2: Who is responsible for helping to poorer nations.
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 13, 2014 / Abdurasul - Apr 14, 2014
|Teaching in group along with specialised education according to abilities
Writing Feedbackclairpure - Apr 13, 2014 / fikri - Apr 27, 2014
|A Touching Story; a dog that I found when I was 10 years old
6 - Possibly write down a list of emotions you felt after finding the dog. The list may help you realize...
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - Apr 12, 2014 / Orangeeskies - Apr 13, 2014
|Soul of American: Integrity and Ethics Essay.
Writing Feedbackkserc - Apr 12, 2014 / englishlover - Apr 12, 2014
|The problem of deforestation, my opinion about it.
5 - Hello! Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad to hear that my essay is good enough:) Yes, it is...
Writing Feedbacklaziiza - Apr 12, 2014 / laziiza - Apr 13, 2014
|Task - Are Macro-sports events good in easing international tensions?
5 - I suggest you to leave a blank line between your paragraphs to present your essay better and impress the...
Writing FeedbackThomas1948 - Apr 12, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|The possibility of choosing the physical characteristics of a child!
Writing Feedbackkdr98 - Apr 12, 2014 / kikiliyik - Apr 13, 2014
|People who achieved incredible success in their life seem not to encounter a failure.
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 12, 2014 / Shokhusrav - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; The map about Garlsdon City.
4 - You need to improve on your structure and I hope you follow dumi's approach. This should come...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 12, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 13, 2014
|IETS Task 1 : Propotion of Canadian graduates by gender
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 12, 2014 / SHanafi - Apr 12, 2014
|What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching TV? IELTS
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Apr 12, 2014 / Abdurasul - Apr 13, 2014
|Such a surprised day! Yesterday's weather was hard. It was changeable.
3 - Thank you so much. Actually, this is a record about my daily life. Thanks for correcting my mistakes turn...
Writing FeedbackStwhWindresides - Apr 11, 2014 / StwhWindresides - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTS: mobile phone; "Iron man" / "Weichat" - destroy social interactions?
8 - A small tip working with an essay's layout: Developing the classical five paragraph essay or more will send you...
Writing Feedbackxingshigang - Apr 11, 2014 / eddies - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Changes in one city spending patterns in 1966.
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 11, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTSTask1: Music choice VS Pop parade music
7 - Hi Pahan, I think if the statements which are connected with but , you should use coma before...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 11, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 12, 2014
|IELTS task II Learning by Gadgets than books.
9 - Yes, time is a very important aspect when you deal with IELTS and TOEFL tasks. With regard to word...
Writing FeedbackApsari - Apr 11, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 14, 2014
|GREAs people rely on technology to solve problems, our ability turns upside down
3 - Thank you for your kind help and advice. Your suggestions are helpful as you have pointed out the weakness...
Writing Feedbacksntinn - Apr 10, 2014 / sntinn - Apr 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; region and by gender for the year 2000.
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 10, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; Cinema attendance in the UK
Writing Feedbackupinipin - Apr 10, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - Apr 13, 2014
|progress is always precarious; every step toward it brings suffering, sacrifices
6 - Let me also give some help here :D Well, if you particularly struggle with the hook, straightaway start with...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - Apr 10, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Estimated world illiteracy
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Apr 10, 2014 / bakhadeer - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS: Question about the influence of the media coverage of celebrities
8 - Well, the structures that I and Pahan have already suggested to you in our previous comments are the best...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 10, 2014 / dumi - Apr 11, 2014
|IELTS: born with certain talents or not?; professional football player
3 - .... well, this statement has an issue... :( .... "people can acquire any fields"? That part does not...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Apr 10, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 10, 2014
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