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|'bored of being a social nobody' - more money for student's social activities?
4 - thanks for your help! can you give me some suggestions of how to solve this problem? i have already...
Writing Feedbackzcb56123 - Jun 13, 2014 / zcb56123 - Jun 14, 2014
|[IELTS] Problems and solutions for regional unbalance?
14 - Well... this is your hook which attracts your reader and provides a great entrance to your essay. So,...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 13, 2014 / dumi - Jul 10, 2014
|IELTS writing 2 : Solutions to low-cost airlines' enviromental damage
3 - In recent times, travelling by plane , air has become more affordable thanks to the dramatical decrease in airlines...
Writing FeedbackPyon9x - Jun 13, 2014 / dumi - Jul 2, 2014
|'follow the rules of the nature' - changes are essential for improving our lives
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 12, 2014 / fikri - Jun 13, 2014
|Extended Definition Descriptive Essay for English Course (Subject - Family)
Writing FeedbackAutorock - Jun 12, 2014 / reza10977 - Jun 12, 2014
|Advantages of Having a Part-Time Job While Studying at the University
Writing FeedbackCa2014 - Jun 12, 2014 / Ca2014 - Jun 13, 2014
|Why arranged marriage is bad idea? Descriptive paragraph
2 - arrangedArranged marriage is a bad idea simply because it does not gain the acceptance from both parties who are...
Writing Feedbacksonyta - Jun 12, 2014 / dumi - Jun 18, 2014
|Cheerleading Is a Sport - 7th grade essay worth 20% of my grade
2 - Ayeshah, when you write a debate paper, you cannot just write the reasons that justify your claim. You must...
Writing Feedbackcassiecat - Jun 12, 2014 / Holt - Apr 2, 2017
|Toefl: 'our useful friends' - pets deserve to be treated like family members
3 - Thank you very much dumi! Regarding the introduction, I am trying to follow your precious suggestions.. that's why I...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - Jun 12, 2014 / AngelaB - Jun 12, 2014
|Good grades, so what? How it is important for the future?
2 - i see the title "Good grades, so what? How it is important for the future?", meaning i should talk...
Writing Feedbackjiasyuen - Jun 12, 2014 / nitex - Jun 13, 2014
|[IELTS] Technology supports working from home
5 - Hello Eddies, This is my new conclusion and I really need your suggestion. Thank you so much....
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 12, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 12, 2014
|People are able to work or study from home, no need to travel to work or college
NEW - In some countries, with the widespread use of the internet, people are able to work or study from home,...
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|Kuya - my second family - He loves to call himself "pogi"
2 - ...
Writing FeedbackAal - Jun 11, 2014 / AngelaB - Jun 12, 2014
|Do you agree or disagree? People should read only real books.
5 - I m very thankfull. But i couldn't understand anyway what you mean by saying i repeat myself. Can you...
Writing Feedbackilaha - Jun 11, 2014 / ilaha - Jul 3, 2014
|[IELTS] The two approaches to life: change or unchange? Personal preference?
5 - yeah I know, but if I'm comparing based on two criterias, then they must be used in the paragraph...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 11, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 12, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY: Computers - What things will they be used for in the future?
Writing Feedbackrockybir - Jun 11, 2014 / eddies - Jul 15, 2014
|4 types of landfill waste in Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Senia and Vatania
Writing FeedbackHang Le - Jun 11, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work"
Writing FeedbackKatyDao - Jun 10, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Modern values; social status and material possessions
8 - It is obvious that our values and preferences change over flowingwith time. In the past- values such like honour...
Writing FeedbackAxed - Jun 10, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS: The three-column figure illustrates a survey of 1000 teenagers
Writing Feedbacklindaqueen - Jun 10, 2014 / lindaqueen - Jun 10, 2014
|A day to spend the way you wish
Writing Feedbackmodakindia - Jun 10, 2014 / modakindia - Jun 13, 2014
|[IELTS] Technology helps student learn more information and learn more quickly?
7 - In education, it is believed that technology helpsthe students improve their scholastic performances. From my viewpoint, the richness as...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 2, 2014
|Always prefer prevention from the every first stage of any health problem
2 - Presently, people do not take the problem seriously until it to a harmful stage. For example, the awareness...
Writing FeedbackHumza33 - Jun 9, 2014 / ibk - Jun 10, 2014
|IELTS: Office and technology / young people working - introduction paragraph
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|The major aspects of a society can be studied by studying only the main cities
Writing Feedbackparneet70 - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS: How to teachers' gender are taking part in the six different school
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 9, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 10, 2014
|Number of languages in the world and its impact on global safety
4 - You should have mentioned the purpose of writing this essay, for example - IELTS, TOEFL etc., in the title...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|IELTS: Steps in the hiring process
5 - Sorry it's biased not unbiased. I'll try to research regarding the use of personal pronouns in IELTS but I...
Writing Feedbacklewyne - Jun 9, 2014 / tinubalde - Jun 10, 2014
|IELTS : Police force carries guns - significant impact for level of violence
6 - I recommend you next time pay attention to big mistakes and help suggest as much as possible, this is...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 9, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|"Courage, my friends" - Tommy Douglas stands out as one of the greatest Canadian
2 - In fact, Canada is known for its successful Medicare system. Statistic showconfirm Canadians are among the healthiest people...
Writing Feedbackayesha10833 - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 27, 2014
|GRE-118: views we share vs views contradict our own and learning from it
2 - Why are you having three parts for the introduction. You should have had all these sentences in on para...
Writing Feedbackbuonarroti - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jul 18, 2014
|When I was 8 years old, I learnt how to play a guitar and sing popular songs
3 - Thank you, Ahmad, for your contributions! Answering your question, it was the first time I entered this site,...
Writing FeedbackRicardo - Jun 8, 2014 / Ricardo - Jun 9, 2014
|Is the economic development more important than protecting the environment?
Writing FeedbackTranAnh - Jun 8, 2014 / TranAnh - Jun 9, 2014
|TOEFL IBt Integrated task - decreasing number of sea otter (western coast of US)
2 - However, the lecturer rebuts the author's reasons and asserts that attacks by predators is the most important reasons for...
Writing Feedbackmasih65 - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Online learning or real school? Provide your opinion.
5 - Online learning is good for self-motivated students only; otherwise, they are better off sticking to regular class room and...
Writing Feedbacklewyne - Jun 8, 2014 / Rich Monte - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Working/Traveling between finishing school and starting university?
8 - May be there are some students who do not enjoy any leisure and look forward to completing their...
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] A large factory built near community. Pros and cons? Your position?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 8, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 22, 2014
|GRE- Technology and human ability to think.
2 - Although the above statement is quite extreme but both facets of technology have to be taken into consideration. Technology...
Writing Feedbackhimanshimathur - Jun 8, 2014 / Vihuynh - Jun 9, 2014
|Ielts - Fast food popularity- Positive or Negative?
3 - it's not an essay. The structure of an essay must have introduction by 1 paragraph, body by 2-3...
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Jun 7, 2014 / TranAnh - Jun 8, 2014
|Nuclear weapons, boon or curse ?
6 - Dear Madam, I am really grateful to you for reviewing and correcting bits and parts of my essays !...
Writing FeedbackRevin - Jun 7, 2014 / Revin - Jun 11, 2014
|[IELTS] Increased taxation on petrol and diesel fuel to discourage private cars?
12 - ok thanks :)...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 7, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|IELTS: the graph show the number of passenger railway journeys
4 - You need to upload the graph for the reader to have a better understanding about what it presents...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|Ielts - fast food is good or bad?
10 - read sample essays as many as possible as you will learn how ielts essay should written. Government...
Writing FeedbackHelpmeet - Jun 6, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|parents were busier in the past - nowadays more of them are involved in their children's education
8 - First, I have a small admin request from you. You should have had a more meaningful title in the...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS - To encourage old people using mobile phones and the internet
3 - small mistakes may decrease your score,,be more careful,, can better our life it should be can make our...
Writing Feedbackyirunli - Jun 6, 2014 / fikri - Jun 7, 2014
|IELTS: Customs and behaviours followed by tourists or host should welcome.
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|some people believe that college student should consider only their own talents
4 - Given this evidence, both group opinions are right, which students should consider parameters when choosing field of study....
Writing Feedbacktgholian - Jun 5, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|Community service in high school has many benefits
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jun 5, 2014 / Vihuynh - Jun 6, 2014
|IELTS pie chart and table - agricultural crisis
Writing Feedbacktinubalde - Jun 5, 2014 / lewyne - Jun 9, 2014
|Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compare with the past
3 - Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compared with the past. People live in digital- ageda digital world today...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Chart - contribution of selected categories in total spending of five countries
3 - Second part of first paragraph is not a sentence. Respectively includes more than one factor....
Writing FeedbackHung Arsenal - Jun 5, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 11, 2014
|What are the reasons behind lack of facilities &services for disabled population?
3 - We see many people with physical and mental disabilities and live in pathetic conditions. In fact, the recent statistical...
Writing FeedbackRUSHABH - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] Children's engagement in paid work. Right or wrong?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|IELTS : Salary is the most important consideration when choosing a job
5 - Ok... let me help you with your intro; Along with the increasing physical demands of human lifein today's...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best
Writing Feedbackabinh - Jun 4, 2014 / jjsteven - Jul 12, 2014
|There are more benefits to travel in your own country than travelling in foreign
Writing Feedbackdurai_ielts - Jun 4, 2014 / ah_zafari - Jun 8, 2014
|IELTS 2 : Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries
2 - Undoubtedly, the house is a primary need that provides us shelter to protect ourselves from hot sun and...
Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jul 2, 2014
|IELTS: I highly recommend authorities to raise the age to leave school to 18
7 - contribute to high quality or contribute in producing high quality I always suggest others to have...
Writing Feedbackbangvuthe - Jun 4, 2014 / eddies - Jul 27, 2014
|If people have opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right awayI
5 - .... well, I have a problem with this sentence. I agree that secure job is not necessarily be...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 4, 2014 / Pahan - Jun 6, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Share expenditure for selected categories in four countries
9 - Dear Ahmad, Thanks for your detail correction. I really appreciate for advice. Tinubalde, thanks for a...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 4, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 8, 2014
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