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|TOEFL ESSAY - Short stories are preferred more than movies,explain your position.
7 - Reading stories were( are )good means of amusement in primitive days Great emphasis! :) Please undo it. I'm sure...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 12, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS: Water Cycle from the ocean to air and to the Earth surface
7 - Hi, all. As my effort to improve my ability, I write this prompt repetitively. I am glad that you...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 11, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 25, 2014
|TOEFL : business research or agriculture research. What do you recommend for your country?
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 11, 2014 / max2014 - Mar 12, 2014
|parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
7 - 1. When you write your essay, the first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of...
Writing Feedbackprii - Mar 11, 2014 / eddies - Apr 5, 2014
|IELTS - Crime in UK; percentage of criminality of British people in different age/gender
11 - Use these phrases to avoid repetition of words in your visual writing: The number of = the figure for...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 11, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|IELTS- How should the value of a person be evaluated?
3 - First, I have an admin request. You need to have a more meaningful topic in the Subject field when...
Writing Feedbackthuongph170292 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS - HAPPINESS; Why it is difficult to define and What factors contribute to achieving?
3 - The actual reason is that different people perceive happiness differently. These perceptions may have been shaped by their...
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Priority: The happiness of the majority vs the rights of individuals?
3 - A vast amountMany of people believe that the happiness of the majority is more important, while others claim that...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|TOEFL: 'reach the zenith' Some people prefer to work for a large company.
3 - Thanks for the appraise. Could you be more specific? Are you saying both of my reasons are incomplete or...
Writing Feedbackbestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014 / bestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014
|"Pohela Falgun" - The custom of my country that I like most and will encourage to follow TOEFL essay
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 14, 2014
|Today, man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow, machine will be master and man wil
6 - You write very well. However, this does not follow the style that you are required to present at...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 11, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 11, 2014
|An email to the hotel asking for a favor
2 - I have a reservation at your hotel as follows, Name: XXXXXXXXXXX Telephone: XXXX-XXXXXX Expiration dateValid till: XXXXXXXXX My husband...
Writing Feedbackmaych - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Young people are much aware about issues than previous generations.
3 - Your introduction seems to be ok! But you haven't written: Hook - An interesting statement to catch the reader's...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 11, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|The twenty-first century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
2 - First, it is good to mention the purpose of this writing. Is this for IELTS or TOEFL? Others can...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Topic: My favorite three ways of communications.
5 - .... transformed life to what? You need to specify! Secondly, the Internet has been instrumental in transforming our...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|My father wanted doctor profession for me; subject without opportunity to study
5 - i think your second reason is not strong enough. You already took your higher education on Management despite protest...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS; Who's responsible for one's health? The individual or society?
Writing Feedbackrairaichan0323 - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|'the figure fluctuated between 1920 and 1940' - Birth Rates in China and the USA
3 - Thank you I'll analyse it, but I wrote this essay according to "Introduction, Overview, Details, Details" stucture which was...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 10, 2014 / JasS - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS; Who should pay tuition fees for adults who are interested in university studies?
5 - Well, I don't see this as a strong reason to justify your position - government should sponsor adult...
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|Priority: Industrial skills vs Education?
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 10, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|Television dominates the free time for too many people& prevent from socializing?
Writing Feedbackshezad - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Too many subjects or specialize in one, which is better?
3 - I agree with Pahan. Try to maintain a proper alignment with what your prompt suggests. :) .......
Writing Feedbackmia_01 - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|Driving education course before being licensed can reduce the number of traffic accidents.
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 10, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS - Negative effects of Globalization
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 10, 2014 / Gichki - Mar 10, 2014
|Toefl essay: part time job for teenage students
5 - When we talk about student, we generally mean a boy or a girl who study in school or college....
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 10, 2014 / hakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS, Society will produce happy people if there's little gap between rich and the poor
4 - Well, it is not clear that how maintaining the justice would help reduce the gap between rich people...
Writing Feedbackagi - Mar 9, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|Reasons one should start (or not start) college right after high school..ESSAY
2 - First, you need to open your essays in the right forum. This should have been opened in the Writing...
Writing Feedbackgennabug - Mar 9, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|Attend college support people to go through their bitter or sweet student life
6 - Hey there. Your ideas are good but i suggest that you write 3 separate paragraphs about 'Some people want...
Writing Feedbackcharllote0825 - Mar 9, 2014 / hakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Findland Telephone calls
10 - a few words: As per the basic rule, a paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 9, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|Struggling for writting and speaking skills in English.
4 - Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. I would try my best to built such beautiful sentence structure...
Writing Feedbackkwkent94 - Mar 9, 2014 / kwkent94 - Mar 9, 2014
|'it is not permanent'; enjoy your money when you earn or save for your future
6 - Write "I think", instead of according to which is used when saying what people, organizations, and reports have...
Writing FeedbackJaanu - Mar 9, 2014 / eddies - Apr 19, 2014
|IELTS Let students still have some challenges in art-based subjects, but not give mark on their work
Writing FeedbackMica1988 - Mar 8, 2014 / Mica1988 - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 1: International migration in UK
Writing FeedbackTrangNTV - Mar 8, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 9, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : increasing the number of sport facilities in order to improve public health
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Mar 8, 2014 / Mowonight - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Problems that overpopulation causes and suggest solution.
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 8, 2014 / ahqaf - Mar 12, 2014
|IELTS Task 2. As children become adults their social behavior changes in some ways.
4 - Well, it is not actually about the length of your paras. It is about the contents. In your body...
Writing Feedbacklarkkk - Mar 8, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 9, 2014
|if you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor? toefl essay
4 - Well, I think you have covered all these things in your essay. I find this is very well written....
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 8, 2014 / dumi - Mar 9, 2014
|Essay For Toefl: taking risk vs careful planning
7 - This preposition can be used when saying what people, organizations, and reports have said, not quoted from your...
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 8, 2014 / eddies - Mar 26, 2014
|IELTS Writing: Qualities for Becoming Successful Can't Learn At A University?
6 - in this part, you should state what mean being successful and what qualities associated with success. then link...
Writing Feedbackieltsfighter - Mar 7, 2014 / agi - Mar 9, 2014
|IELTS Task I : Flowchart process of academic writing
6 - Thank you, Tuan. You correct the grammar and syntax wholly. I found in the dictionary, and i consider ...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 7, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS task 1: How a thermos flask works.
4 - Next part is called vacuum flask THAT IS OR WHICH IS divided into two parts: This part is divided...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 18, 2014
|SAT ; Suspect honesty and motives of people?
2 - Well, you start with expressing your opinion. However, in my view, it is good to open your essay...
Writing FeedbackThePariah - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The traditional skills and ways of life die out.
4 - Well, this sounds like an example and not a reason that you use to justify a particular opinion....
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|The governors decision - the students should take part in competitive team sports
4 - Thak you...
Writing Feedbackissey1455 - Mar 7, 2014 / issey1455 - Mar 8, 2014
|IELTS task 2: Good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life.
4 - .... This is not an effective hook . I find it's pretty too long and contain some inappropriate...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 1: The total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The rise of overweight children in developed countries
3 - Well, have you been able to complete this task within 30 mins? Your essay looks pretty lengthy. Especially your...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS: Solving the issues of growing traffic and pollution - Increase petrol price?
6 - Hi, i am preparing IELTS as well, my teacher said that answer the question is very important for IELTS...
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Mar 7, 2014 / oneclbb - Apr 10, 2014
|compare and contrast your fashion style with that of someone you know
3 - Here is I found on the net that should be followed as an organizational structure for your compare and...
Writing Feedbackmina karimi - Mar 7, 2014 / eddies - Apr 26, 2014
|IELTS task 1: The continuous movement of water on, above & below the surface of the Earth
7 - You are welcome, Eddy :) And also, congratulations on your IELTS score! You deserve it every bit :-D...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 1: International students graduating from universities in Canada
2 - The bar chart compares international graduates in percentage terms from universities in seven regions in Canada in two...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 8, 2014
|One national cirriculum is forcing students to study materials they dont want to
5 - Well, I think should have not opened your essay with a statement expressing your opinion. You need to tell...
Writing Feedbacksudeepdai - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 18, 2014
|'find a method' - Children begin learning foreign language at primary school
NEW - Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign language at secondary school, however some educationalist recommended that it's better to introduced...
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|Eassy For Toefl: computer for students vs books for library
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 7, 2014 / sntinn - Mar 27, 2014
|Should government spend money on highways or public transportation?
4 - about speaking section i m also in perplex. i could not find any suitable site to practice speaking where...
Writing FeedbackEslam8787 - Mar 6, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 7, 2014
|Persuasive essay on banning schoolies forever
Writing Feedbackirasa_lafi - Mar 6, 2014 / irasa_lafi - Mar 30, 2014
|Effects of the gold rush to Australia. 1850's Gold Rush changed the country face
4 - the gold is getting pulled up is the subject and the verb is the immigrants following. Does it make...
Writing Feedbacksabstar - Mar 6, 2014 / sabstar - Mar 17, 2014
|Does Internet Censorship damage a free society?
2 - I think that a discussion about sites like Piratebay would be interesting. UK blocked the site, while other countries...
Writing FeedbackMikeyyy - Mar 6, 2014 / Leelee1960 - Mar 9, 2014
|"Where I see myself in ten years" but written in third person essay.
3 - Many people thingthink about their future and the things theydream about their desiresto achieve . A student may want...
Writing FeedbackEms27 - Mar 6, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Private car ownership has grown, led to traffic congestion
Writing FeedbackKenNgo - Mar 6, 2014 / KenNgo - Mar 7, 2014
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