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|Toefl essay - Media invading public figures privacy.
3 - News that can be defined as" north east west south" provides happening of all these four zones of the...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 21, 2014 / dumi - Mar 25, 2014
|TASK 1. the table shows the consumer durables owned in Britain from 1972-1983
5 - I think this linking part (as well as) here is inappropriate. Here is the example of the use:...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 21, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|Can money bring happiness ? why or why not ?
Writing FeedbackSpecialK - Mar 21, 2014 / Linh Hoang - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS: age percentage of people in Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050
Writing Feedbackpuman - Mar 21, 2014 / puman - Mar 28, 2014
|If I am to travel 40 miles distance, I would choose the train
Writing Feedbackoktavianna - Mar 21, 2014 / tiaDS - Mar 31, 2014
|IELTS: Most significant invention of the last 30years - Internet
6 - ---> This statement leaves me in the state of assumption. I can understand that Internet helps us to...
Writing FeedbackNhasir Rahmatia - Mar 21, 2014 / Arun0506 - Mar 23, 2014
|policies to deter negative effects; Urbanization is an important ongoing process
Writing Feedbackmonshri1979 - Mar 21, 2014 / monshri1979 - Apr 2, 2014
|IELTS 2 - Retirement homes or Living with families? Which way is better for the elderly?
12 - Thank you all for your time and suggestions. I certainly appreciate it. Well, I'd like to suggest you...
Writing Feedbackconviction - Mar 20, 2014 / conviction - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS Task II : Idea of going overseas for university study. To What extend do you agree ?
2 - First, you need to comply with the forum rules; You should open all IELTS essays in Writing Feedback forum....
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 20, 2014 / dumi - Mar 21, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Fitness membership among male and female (rewrite)
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 20, 2014
|Is homeschooling preferable to traditional school education?
Writing Feedbackrespina - Mar 20, 2014 / respina - Mar 21, 2014
|task 1. visits abroad made by UK residents from 1994 to 1998 by purpose and destination
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 20, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 20, 2014
|Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. toefl
3 - ... this sentence needs better presentation. It doesn't flow well :( Other than learning a new...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 20, 2014 / dumi - Mar 21, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 (Line Chart) - Goods Transported by Four Modes of Transport.
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 20, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 20, 2014
|IELTS: best way to improve public health; lack of exercise
7 - Did you miss "this" between "that" and "should"??? I think you should not use some meaningless...
Writing Feedbackpuman - Mar 20, 2014 / zztrieuman - Mar 30, 2014
|IELTS-GT (Task-1): You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work
7 - Thanks pahan...
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 20, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 (Diagrama) - The Process of Cement and Concrete Production.
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 20, 2014 / puman - Mar 20, 2014
|Conclusion for compare/ contrast essay - solar energy and wind energy.
2 - Although both solar power and wind power are never-ending and create absolutely no pollution, they differ in some aspects...
Writing Feedbackfei114 - Mar 20, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 21, 2014
|I stole my friend's money; learn from my makes mistakes!!
4 - My mistake ishad been that I stolestolen money from my friend,i hasI learnedlearn from my mistake and i try...
Writing Feedbackthjchlachjeu - Mar 19, 2014 / dumi - Mar 20, 2014
|Boston Leadership Institute (spelling and grammar)
Writing FeedbackWoodstock - Mar 19, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 21, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 2 question. 'Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant..'
Writing Feedbackaddictivemate - Mar 19, 2014 / eddies - Mar 21, 2014
|Celebrities benefits obtained through their popularity largely outweigh the issues tackled by them
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 19, 2014 / dumi - Mar 20, 2014
|The chart shows the leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 19, 2014 / JasS - Mar 20, 2014
|IELTS writing task 2. Visitors should follow local behavior or not ?
7 - Thank you dumi. You are right, I need to improve my clarity, since the examiner is not a thought-reader......
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Mar 19, 2014 / Mowonight - Mar 21, 2014
|IELTS TASK I : US Crude Oil Imports (15 countries)
6 - ...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 19, 2014 / SHanafi - Jun 4, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Reasons for studying history and the effect of not studying history
Writing Feedbackcrystal941 - Mar 19, 2014 / dumi - Mar 20, 2014
|IELTS: Intended instruction hours in public institution
3 - IELTS Task 1 : Intended instruction hours in public institution (re-write - ITALY) The chart compares the number...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 19, 2014 / SHanafi - May 21, 2014
|Keep Senior Citizens Away From Cars
3 - This tradition was passed down from generation to generation in my family. However, (little did I know that) behind...
Writing FeedbackMr_Jaggers - Mar 19, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|Toefl essay - AGREE OR DISAGREE - ONE LONG VACATION OR SEVERAL LONG VACATION.
6 - It's like this; QUESTION; Where did you go? (past tense) Where do you go? (present tense) ANSWER; I...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 18, 2014 / dumi - Mar 20, 2014
|Do you think that studying abroad is advantages ?
Writing Feedbackheram - Mar 18, 2014 / eddies - Mar 19, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 - Total UK School Spendings!
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 18, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|Travels broaden the mind - Advantage and disadvantage of travelling
Writing Feedbackciasteczkoik - Mar 18, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|It's better to enjoy your money save it for the future? Family-Fixed Income
Writing Feedbackaisha2014 - Mar 18, 2014 / eddies - Mar 31, 2014
|Ielts: The population growth! each period of time had different leaders
5 - Hi, Abdurasul I wanna suggest you in a simple thing. To me, better you separate each paragraph. It is...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 18, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 19, 2014
|IELTS; Fish and Meat consumption in European country between 1979 and 2004
5 - The graph illustrates the different needs for fish and somekindsthree types of meat in a European country between 1979...
Writing Feedbackthuylinh - Mar 18, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 31, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; Country Food/ Drinks/ Tobacco/ Clothing/ Footwear/ Leisure/ Education
5 - The table illustrates the need for different items in 5 countries in 2002. In general, the percentage of national...
Writing Feedbackthuylinh - Mar 18, 2014 / thuylinh - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS: Should whistle blowers be immune from punishment?
Writing Feedbackkai_tabz - Mar 18, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 18, 2014
|Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the the number
5 - Others makekeep themselves busy on sports like playing basketball or even volleyball to engage onin healthy physical activities and...
Writing Feedbackieltspinoy - Mar 18, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Developing on Chorleywood Village
4 - hi, eddies . Can I say that you mean tenses consistency usage (continuous and past simple). When...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 18, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2014
|Toefl - Differences between parents' generation and our generation.
7 - Yes, that's correct. It helps you tell facts to the reader without wasting his time which the reader...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 17, 2014 / dumi - Mar 19, 2014
|toefl essay: large company vs small company - which one is better?
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 17, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - transport and car use in Edmonton
3 - Follow dumi's suggestion for this task, :) This task is to assess your report writing skills and...
Writing Feedbackphuong8593 - Mar 17, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 20, 2014
|Celebrity/ famous film star/ sports personality - 'opt for entertainment field'
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 17, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 18, 2014
|In modern times, how to maintain the balance of the competition and cooperation is a serious problem
2 - Logon to EF On the new screen that opens up, under the LOGO "EssayForum", Find and select your essay...
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS TASK1; The consequence of a survey of grown up person education
5 - I feel that this sentence is not necessary. Although it is shown in the prompt that the charts...
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 16, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 17, 2014
|IELTS; 'every student either male or female should be given equal opportunity'
12 - purse- pusue Anyway, I can see the argument here and it does make sense. :) I am totally agreed...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 16, 2014 / ieltspinoy - Mar 18, 2014
|"Many holidaymakers would rather stay in a hotel room. Others prefer a campsite." (Essay)
Writing FeedbackGustav02 - Mar 16, 2014 / Gustav02 - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS task 1: median costs of houses and units in four cities in Australia over a 16 year
3 - Overall, I think you write very well and really need not to worry about this task. However, you need...
Writing Feedbackandial - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL - studying art and music will develop one's mind
4 - It can bring to everybody all pleasant views from all over the world without the need of expensive travelling....
Writing Feedbackborisbonev - Mar 16, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 17, 2014
|International Graduates, Canadian Universities, 2001-2006
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|IELTS - GT (task-1) You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 16, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 16, 2014
|The officials of Canadian universities have high variety in allow international students to graduate
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|COMPUTERS Vs TEACHERS; What would happen in the future?
3 - I requested you to follow some forum rules in your other thread and hope you'd pay attention to them...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS; The ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined
15 - Topic: Many people believe that the ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined...
Writing Feedbackkobehstan - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 27, 2014
|Liberty and Functioning Democracy: What is Liberty? How Practical is it in a Functioning D
Writing Feedbacko5vx - Mar 15, 2014 / theresaypil - Mar 22, 2014
|Essay on the extent to which living in a city in the 21st century is stressful
5 - Living in a city is totally different from living in the countryside. ...You have not yet told...
Writing Feedbackmadona - Mar 15, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|TOEFL "a coin has two sides" Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Writing Feedbackramshah - Mar 15, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 17, 2014
|expenditure on fast food by income groups and consumption of fast food (1970-1990)
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 15, 2014
|task-2 General ielts- Industrial pollution is increasing all around the world.
6 - Hey, Use of comma,semi-colon, period is required at many places in your essay. Always read your essay a...
Writing Feedbackamu1988 - Mar 15, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Factors influence job performance
5 - The bar chart compares the affecting factors on job performance in number of the 2 aged groups. Overall,...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 15, 2014 / SHanafi - May 21, 2014
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