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|IELTS - 'slight difference'; The illiteracy rates around the world
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Aug 10, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 17, 2013
|[TOEFL] Environmental protection V.S Economic developments
3 - They are both important because they are vital to human'sour future and welfare. However, since resources are...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 10, 2013 / dumi - Aug 12, 2013
|IELTS ; Some people are born with talents while others are not!
4 - While there is some truth in saying that talents can be trained, certain fields such as music and...
Writing Feedbackashupatel67 - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 12, 2013
|IELTS: How to encourage people to use public transport?
3 - ... well.... I think this is not a fare statement. In many countries, even developed countries in the...
Writing Feedbackposdream - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 10, 2013
|'the life itself'; PARENTS Vs TEACHERS ; Reasons & Examples
5 - .... this is an incomplete sentence. This is alright for your speaking task, but in writing you need...
Writing Feedbackfaheddarmoch - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 16, 2013
|IELTS Task 2-Some people think that travel helps gaining knowledge
Writing Feedbackbobinv - Aug 9, 2013 / MisterWandering - Aug 11, 2013
|IELTS: tourism as source of revenue, disadvantages should not be overlooked.
5 - Okkk.... here's my attempt to do what you are asking :) Tourism, without any doubt, is an important...
Writing Feedbackjflo - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 10, 2013
|IELTS: Non academic subjects should be removed from syllabus - Agree or Disagree?
4 - .... The point here is that syllabus should aim not only developing students' knowledge in various subjects, but...
Writing Feedbackwxhwdf - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 10, 2013
|Should sports and art be removed from curriculum?
Writing Feedbackhunghung1234 - Aug 9, 2013 / givemebrave - Aug 13, 2013
|TOEFL; Gender differences and how they apply on jobs they do?
2 - Well ... you are preparing for TOEFL independent writing task which requires you to write an essay with certain...
Writing Feedbacksepideh_dodaran - Aug 9, 2013 / dumi - Aug 9, 2013
|Studying in a group has a lot of advantages that can promote learning process
4 - ... give more focus to your reason; First, group study provides the opportunity to benefit from each others'...
Writing Feedbackmoonname - Aug 9, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 16, 2013
|IELTS: CLIMATE CHANGE ISSUE - Not enough political action!
Writing Feedbackjflo - Aug 9, 2013 / jflo - Aug 12, 2013
|Fast food Vs Home-Cooked Food; 'mode of preparation and natural ways of cooking'
6 - Thanks so much @gmad06...yes i am for IELTS, thanks for your contribution...i am hoping to improve too. my...
Writing Feedbackposdream - Aug 9, 2013 / posdream - Aug 11, 2013
|IELTS; Gender Vs Career - Why some jobs are done by men and others by women/
5 - ...try to align this more with your topic; From the past to now, we have witnessed the differences...
Writing Feedbackntdang92 - Aug 8, 2013 / dumi - Aug 11, 2013
|IELTS_ Why little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out?
3 - ... I'm going to change the order a bit; The most serious issues that cause the extinction of...
Writing FeedbackIbrahim_Xian - Aug 8, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 10, 2013
|TOEFL; Some people treat their pets as members of their family. Is it good or not?
4 - .... Well.... this is certainly true for some people but not for everybody because there are people who...
Writing Feedbackholylua - Aug 8, 2013 / dumi - Aug 10, 2013
|'knowing own culture' - Should all students study the same curriculum?
5 - Consider a country like in india where in the state decides the curriculum untilup to the 12th standard. ...
Writing Feedbackjinx - Aug 8, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 14, 2013
|TOEFL / How teachers can make the subject interesting to students( new)!
Writing Feedbacksepideh_dodaran - Aug 8, 2013 / sepideh_dodaran - Aug 8, 2013
|[TOEFL] Parents can help their children's life by asking them to take a job or not
7 - Maybe you can revise "We live in a world where controversial issues are often simply taken it for...
Writing Feedbackjoyhu - Aug 8, 2013 / fuqiangang - Aug 13, 2013
|IELTS Task 2-The rising levels of congestion and air pollution
5 - ... Try to give more emphasis to the core measure; Furthermore, discouraging people to use their personal vehicles...
Writing Feedbackbobinv - Aug 8, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 10, 2013
|IELTS; Governments can ensure all its people are educated by providing free education
Writing Feedbackposdream - Aug 8, 2013 / sepideh_dodaran - Aug 9, 2013
|IELTS; Will traditional skills and way of life die with technological advancement? No
Writing Feedbackcongchop - Aug 8, 2013 / congchop - Aug 8, 2013
|IELTS - Too much noise in public places; Causes and Measures
5 - ...Education institutes...we say "educational institutes. Also you can not look down upon behaviour...you can "shun" it. ...Teach d...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Aug 8, 2013 / posdream - Aug 10, 2013
|IELTS; Flour consumption in six countries
Writing Feedbacktkp - Aug 7, 2013 / dumi - Aug 8, 2013
|IELTS:Development of transportation has enabled people to travel conveniently
Writing Feedbacksilknguyen - Aug 7, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 12, 2013
|GRE:Development of technology should improve our ability to think for ourselves
Writing Feedbackmilanbuffon - Aug 7, 2013 / milanbuffon - Aug 18, 2013
|TOEFL- How teachers can make the subject interesting to students!
3 - There are many ways of teaching. Some people believe that strictly and carefully presenting theories in the class is...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 7, 2013 / dumi - Aug 7, 2013
|Ielts Task 1 : % Change in price of houses - Bar graph
4 - My opinions. The introdution. You should not use again too much phrases apprearing in the picture. The...
Writing FeedbackSukhi - Aug 7, 2013 / xucoi - Aug 9, 2013
|American students should be required to learn a second language; CLEP exam
4 - Well, learning a second language helps a student to broaden his perspectives and that has a great value...
Writing Feedbackallikath - Aug 6, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 14, 2013
|IELTS ; Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial skills?
Writing Feedbackzoha - Aug 6, 2013 / dumi - Aug 7, 2013
|IELTS:TASK 2 - topic - studying at university/college or getting a job straight
2 - I think you should try using other transitional phrases, such as furthermore, moreover, in addition, in contrast, however., etc...
Writing FeedbackTobi - Aug 6, 2013 / jflo - Aug 10, 2013
|The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
Writing Feedbackmrabbas - Aug 6, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 6, 2013
|IELTS: Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country.
Writing Feedbackme4mbd - Aug 6, 2013 / me4mbd - Aug 10, 2013
|IELTS Task 1 - The pie charts below give information about world population ....
Writing FeedbackEnid - Aug 6, 2013 / dumi - Aug 10, 2013
|IELTS:should we discourage non-essential flights to reduce environmental problems.
5 - Environmental problems involve such complex combinations of factors that no single solution can solve them completely. ...
Writing FeedbackIbrahim_Xian - Aug 6, 2013 / alice0209 - Aug 10, 2013
|ILETS: Should children be never educated at home? 'Coaching a little angel'
Writing Feedbackzoha - Aug 6, 2013 / zoha - Aug 7, 2013
|Critical Question Essay on Harrison Bergeron by Karl Vonnegut
Writing FeedbackWK95 - Aug 5, 2013 / vantang1199 - Aug 13, 2013
|IELTS: TASK 2 - different attempts on introduction writing
Writing FeedbackTobi - Aug 5, 2013 / silknguyen - Aug 5, 2013
|IELTS: TASK 1 question - electricity usage in England
2 - you need a conclusion in the end of your essay, otherwise , you will lost marks from not doing...
Writing FeedbackTobi - Aug 5, 2013 / Ibrahim_Xian - Aug 5, 2013
|Travel helps to increase understanding between countries
2 - You say you need to prepare for IELTS. If so, you need to pay attention very seriously to your...
Writing FeedbackEdna - Aug 5, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 5, 2013
|[TOEFL] Should we require our young children to learn music and art...
2 - .... Parent means mother or father. Parents mean both mother and father. So it should be; All parents...
Writing Feedbackalice0209 - Aug 5, 2013 / dumi - Aug 5, 2013
|IELTS:should students who majored in education or medicine work in rural areas first
Writing FeedbackIbrahim_Xian - Aug 5, 2013 / Ibrahim_Xian - Aug 5, 2013
|Major cities help understand characteristics of that society?
Writing Feedbacksoran942 - Aug 5, 2013 / dumi - Aug 9, 2013
|DOES THE INTERNET PROMOTE DEEP READING & CRITICAL ENGAGEMENT; "The Shallows"
Writing Feedbackmubaracus - Aug 5, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 14, 2013
|IELTS: Task 1, line graph that shows unemployment rates in US & Japan.
3 - Thanks Ibrahim_Xian for the feedback. next time I will try to improve my mistakes that is mentioned by you....
Writing FeedbackWarlock - Aug 5, 2013 / Warlock - Aug 5, 2013
|Write the short opening chapter to a novel called A Summer Romance.
Writing FeedbackAjia11 - Aug 4, 2013 / dumi - Aug 17, 2013
|'Multitasking teenagers' - ACT Essay Review
4 - ... fully agree sounds better. As dumi suggested, I too feel you need to introduce the topic before...
Writing FeedbackACTPREP - Aug 4, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 20, 2013
|IELTS:apprehensive mind; learning a foreign language at primary/secondary school
6 - Thank you dumi for that point you mentioned. About conclusion I have a question. would you please...
Writing Feedbackmahgh123 - Aug 4, 2013 / mahgh123 - Aug 6, 2013
|Child Abuse and my Future; How I learned to become a man!
7 - Red: Really appreciate the effort, especially at what time it is! Blue: I really try to put passion,...
Writing FeedbackIvykid96 - Aug 4, 2013 / Ivykid96 - Aug 19, 2013
|IELTS_writing: should people exploit animals for human purposes?
4 - First, I wish to request you to post your IELTS essays into Writing Feedback forum which is dedicated for...
Writing FeedbackIbrahim_Xian - Aug 4, 2013 / dumi - Aug 4, 2013
|IELTS: Is change good for people or not?
Writing Feedbacksukhjit - Aug 4, 2013 / Ibrahim_Xian - Aug 5, 2013
|Can Human nature produce crimes?
Writing Feedbacksilknguyen - Aug 3, 2013 / silknguyen - Aug 5, 2013
|Epilepsy versus Seizures
Writing FeedbackSmartypants101 - Aug 3, 2013 / dumi - Aug 15, 2013
|The advertisements consist of all the shining information about the product
2 - I guess you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL. It's a good practice to include your task in the...
Writing Feedbacksevenauz - Aug 3, 2013 / dumi - Aug 3, 2013
|SCIENTIFIC MYSTERIES; Vaccines and autism
Writing FeedbackHannahbananaess - Aug 3, 2013 / dumi - Aug 15, 2013
|Visiting museums during travel; to become familiar with other cultures & history
4 - ote=ramshah]They may think that in their limited time of residencestay in a foreign land, visiting museums is better and...
Writing Feedbackramshah - Aug 3, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 4, 2013
|IELTS-task2: The increase in weight but decrease in health
Writing Feedbackkhanhlinhpham - Aug 3, 2013 / dumi - Aug 3, 2013
|SPORTING CHAMPIONS ARE MOTIVATED BY DESIRE OR MONEY!
3 - Any champion wants to excel his performance. ... tell it was the love for the sport that motivated...
Writing Feedbacka_mesripour - Aug 3, 2013 / Pahan - Aug 4, 2013
|Cinema is coming to an end or not?
3 - ...very good point :) .... I'm going to change the order a bit; The exciting atmosphere that the...
Writing FeedbackNguyenanh - Aug 3, 2013 / dumi - Aug 3, 2013
|Learning a foreign language early bring additional tension & stress to children
3 - Thank you so much for the detailed analysis and feedback. I will check the other essays and follow the...
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