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|Advantages of living in the dormitory rooms and apartment buildings - COMPARISON
3 - --> Moreover, the dorm buildings are usually close to the class buildings and departments; therefore, students do...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 26, 2013 / April April - May 26, 2013
|The excessive usage of social networkings
3 - There are many more social networks, in fact EF is also one of them. However, Facebook and Twitter...
Writing Feedbackanggittas - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|I plan to retire when I am no longer in healthy ;Retirement / Answers 4 questions
Writing Feedbackfsolano94 - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 7, 2013
|IELTS: Importance of studying History in school.
3 - thanx Habib. I really appreciate ur time and effort. But there are few corrections. Do not put comma after...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 25, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 26, 2013
|college and university should be available for all students or only to good students
4 - Nowadays, many people look forward to receiving a degree from university or college to acquire more in depth...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|"The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries"; Rich men have no fault
Writing Feedbackkingmaker - May 25, 2013 / dumi - May 25, 2013
|Today, new media is springing out and bringing convenience to everyday life
2 - ... another way of expressing this ; As a result of rapid globalization, media industry keeps flourishing stronger...
Writing Feedbackfrancy - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Happiness of working that one can achieve is the best in this world
Writing Feedbackninasalimi - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|TOEFL Students are more interested in politics today than those in the past.
4 - ...need to improve :( In this advance society, politics too have become very complicated and they, either directly...
Writing FeedbackIvy_Missing - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|"If at first you don't succeed, try and try again" - TOEFL essay
9 - Things you might consider to take your essay to the next level: 1.) Include personal experience relevant to...
Writing Feedbackdesertrose - May 24, 2013 / amorphous1 - Jun 8, 2013
|IELTS - good changes can be brought in life without major difficulties.
6 - thank u o much. i really appreciate ur opinion but please can ye explain how to gather the ideas...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 24, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your own
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 24, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|IELTS: profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 24, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 25, 2013
|GRE: Mason City residents & Water sports - Argumentive Essay
3 - Residents of Mason city constantly complain forabout the quality of river water and the river's smell but that doesdo...
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|GRE Issue Task; More technology for problem solving results in less ability to think?
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Dips - May 24, 2013
|Shorris's studies show the reader that a change is possible in any community
2 - overcome the division? .... interrogation means questioning, inquiring etc. and mostly used in criminology. Is...
Writing FeedbackFreenchy - May 24, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|Ielts: What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic are they?
2 - ... some parts that I highlighted sound a bit irrelevant - specially " worker's occupation" and "modern societies".......
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|The Mass Media Control; Differents Risks and Points of View
4 - Thanks a lot for your help, both of you. I've managed to correct the mistakes that kridUessay found, but...
Writing FeedbackFco_94 - May 23, 2013 / Fco_94 - May 24, 2013
|People are now more interested in using seafood and some products from seafoods than ever before
3 - No one can deny that many ocean species have become endangered due to human over-fishing across the...
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|Living in the countryside better in Vietnam
Writing Feedbacklele1987 - May 22, 2013 / lele1987 - May 23, 2013
|TOEFL: I think that there are still a lot of different types of movies
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|Many childhood experiences leave a lifelong impression
Writing Feedbacknorthernbell - May 22, 2013 / northernbell - May 29, 2013
|Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks.....
Writing Feedbacksanilt237 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Share the Dorm or Choose my own Roommate
5 - You seem to have a fair understanding about the essay structure. However, you need to include specific examples in...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 22, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|Reliance on Technology to solve problem will deteriorate humans ability to think
4 - ... exactly :) .... this is a well written introduction... The only point I notice is that you...
Writing Feedbackmavericksid - May 22, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|IELTS: The development of a coastal village
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / Helio - May 24, 2013
|TOEFL :Which do u prefer living in an apartment or living in a dorm?
Writing FeedbackMax Payne - May 21, 2013 / LAB 328 - May 22, 2013
|"Made in China"; Fake products produced in China
Writing FeedbackFiorella Li - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; In our society child's education have never been a simple task
9 - never need comma Some people argue that, children should be taught to be avaluevaluablemembemembers in their...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 27, 2013
|How does rapid economic development affect a country?
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - May 22, 2013
|Marriage older is more advantageous than marrying at young age!
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Which is more advantages? Marrying young or older?
2 - .... is that so? I thought people now tend to postpone marriage compared to older generations. ...
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; How to reduce traffic in cities? Should it be by reducing the need for travel?
4 - This is much better than what you've written first. I'm sure Pahan too would agree. However, even this...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|University education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / chrisredfii - Jun 13, 2013
|Which one do you prefer? A student-based class or a lectured-based class.
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS :Creativity needs freedom and so do the creative artists; Do you agree?
2 - ... In this sentence, I don't find any relevance to your topic. That's a bit dangerous because everything...
Writing FeedbackSecilia - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|Why do crime rates increase? How to arrest this issue?
Writing Feedbackartlife - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
|IELTS, the reasons for increasing rubbish, and provide the measures for governments.
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 21, 2013 / April April - May 27, 2013
|The advantages and disadvantages of study in other country
Writing Feedbackanup80 - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|Increasing price of petrol would not help controlling traffic
Writing FeedbackRavLlika - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|In my opinion, daily homework is necessary; Reasons & Examples
Writing FeedbackSapodils - May 20, 2013 / Sapodils - May 21, 2013
|What Should People Do To Become Healthier?
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - May 20, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|'less stress'; Games are as important for adults as they are for children.
Writing Feedbackgp2013 - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|A person's passion and dream cannot be bought by money
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|IELTS; Students from rural areas find difficult to receive higher education
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 22, 2013
|Teacher should relate well with students than having an excellent knowledge.
5 - Put away the thesaurus and rewrite this using words you already know (no matter how simple). Then I'll be...
Writing Feedbackjunisha rai - May 19, 2013 / jkjeremy - May 24, 2013
|Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together
3 - ....when you say "communication gap" it has a much broader meaning than talking about communication between people. Here...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|IETLTS; High School programs should include Community Service as a compulsory part
2 - I would argue that it should be made compulsory due to several reasons. First, community service...
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 19, 2013
|IELTS Task1; percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900 and 2000
3 - This adds no value. You'd better present this Writing task 1with more formal tone. Avoid personal opinions...
Writing Feedbackrushil1995 - May 19, 2013 / eddies - May 21, 2014
|The most important traits required to achieve mastery.
Writing Feedbackpattrycja - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 19, 2013
|TOEFL : which on do you prefer? serious movies or amusing movies
Writing FeedbackS0heil - May 19, 2013 / S0heil - May 20, 2013
|IELTS; Changing jobs and living places - Good or Bad?
5 - Well.... your prompt does not ask for reasons for changing jobs...it asks you whether it's a positive or negative...
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|IELTS ; My opinion on using fertilizer and machinery for producing food
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 18, 2013 / Nancy Quan - May 19, 2013
|Report on the likely effects of Global warming on the capital city of my country
Writing Feedbackxucoi - May 18, 2013 / xucoi - May 26, 2013
|Life itself is a big recipe- COURAGE; Concept Essay/ Grand Canyon U
Writing FeedbackJeremyofAL - May 18, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|BARCELONA BEACH (Lake Erie) - observation essay
2 - sanchez On this warm spring day I have decided to visit the beach though the season is not quite...
Writing Feedbacksanchez - May 18, 2013 / JeremyofAL - May 18, 2013
|"Pain is not a pleasant feeling" ; Analyzing the concept "PAIN"
6 - Mt thoughts here were breaking down the essay into first physical pain followed by emotional pain and then going...
Writing Feedbackcarolyn - May 18, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|TOEFL;If I am to change something in my hometown,it is to provide more bicycle roads
4 - I would focus on sentence structure. This will help in the flow of your paper. It will help the...
Writing Feedbackflooppy - May 18, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|IELTS; Certain professionals are not paid well for their services; Do you agree?
2 - .... this has happened and still continue to happen. So write it in present tense; It is true...
Writing Feedbackerni - May 18, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|Cracking Down The Laws of Bullying by Pandora Campbell
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