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|IELTS : REWARDING EMPLOYEES WITH CASH INCETIVES -GOOD or BAD?
4 - Yes... IELTS and TOEFL needs lots of practicing. By doing so, you can improve your vocabulary, grammar and...
Writing Feedbackdieplinh131 - Jul 2, 2013 / dumi - Jul 3, 2013
|What are the negative effects of overpopulation?
5 - First, overpopulation may increase the demand for infrastructure in an alarming degree. As the population grows...
Writing Feedbackminhdang - Jul 2, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 4, 2013
|IELTS; Paid work for children is good or bad? Discuss
10 - avoid using "thing" ==> try to use higher words: " skills, abilities" life experiences Your thoughts...
Writing Feedbackpiggiepolly - Jul 2, 2013 / ningo - Jul 4, 2013
|IELTS-Fixed Punishment for each type of crime?or Consider circumstances & motivation?
5 - your grammar is good with various sentence structures. but what is the type of this essay? discussion or argument?...
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jul 2, 2013 / bein - Jul 3, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Should driving be taught at school?
10 - hi pahan and dumi...thanks for the feedback.. it is my pleasure..yes I think that would be a...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jul 1, 2013 / gmad06 - Jul 8, 2013
|Not only families and schools job, but also the whole society, to solve students behavioral problems
2 - one reason is the education from students' families, especially their parents you can write this as only family...
Writing Feedbackpiggiepolly - Jul 1, 2013 / orxan88 - Jul 2, 2013
|Can a child be taught talents or he is born with talents?
5 - I think your essay is too short. You should give more details, examples, rather than just use reasoning to...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jul 1, 2013 / caozeyuan - Jul 8, 2013
|Parents should send their children to school and let them live happily
Writing Feedbackkuz7204 - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 2, 2013
|TOEFL:How should people spend money? Personal Enjoyment or Fulfilling Duties?
3 - This essay should focus on the consequences of people "spend[ing] too much time on personal enjoyment." In other...
Writing Feedbacksubinjp - Jul 1, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jul 1, 2013
|IELTS : The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of ads
3 - First, you need to select "Writing Feedback" Forum for IELTS essays and make sure you open new threads in...
Writing Feedbackuhanna - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 1, 2013
|IETLS; Discuss your views on - Born talents Vs Acquiring talents
Writing Feedbacknereide - Jul 1, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jul 2, 2013
|IELTS; Number of Heart cases of in England during four decades(1960 to 1990)
4 - The graph illustrates the statistics of people who suffered from heart diseases from the year 1960 to 1990....
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jul 1, 2013 / dumi - Jul 2, 2013
|IELTS essay - How can young people be made responsible drivers?
Writing Feedbackkuz7204 - Jul 1, 2013 / gmad06 - Jul 1, 2013
|Older generations consumed healthy food compared to what is consumed by people today.
2 - First, I have two requests ; Post this type of essays into "Writing Feedback" forum. Then also give a...
Writing Feedbackj0937065063 - Jun 30, 2013 / dumi - Jul 1, 2013
|IELTS Task 1: The number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992
Writing Feedbackthtm - Jun 30, 2013 / bein - Jul 3, 2013
|'growing concern'; Work or travel for a year beween high school and university
Writing Feedbackhungly0610 - Jun 30, 2013 / huyenanh1508 - Jul 4, 2013
|Universities should require every student-take a variety of courses outside-course
Writing FeedbackGREASPI - Jun 30, 2013 / GREASPI - Jul 1, 2013
|Children who grew up with hardships are better prepared to deal with problems; Agree?
2 - I wish you wrote this in two sentences; Personally I agree with this statement. However, I also...
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; Letter to a friend - request to look after my sick dog Pooh
3 - huyenanh1508 If there wasn't you, I wouldn't know who to ask for help. this just does not sound...
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 29, 2013 / kyh8252 - Jun 30, 2013
|Do you agree or disagree ? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country.
10 - Compared to other issues, it means almost nothing. Don't sweat it unless you're doing it for a sneaky...
Writing FeedbackFardin - Jun 29, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jul 5, 2013
|My sister, my roommate - MY COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY
2 - My sister and i usually argue about somthing whereas my sister I wonder how she can talk consecutive over...
Writing Feedbackchauuyenbinh - Jun 29, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS- begin language learning from elementary school compared to secondary school
3 - Learning a foreign language is becoming increasingly essential in the modern globalized world. ... teaching what?...
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 29, 2013 / dumi - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; Should there be a law to get every child immunized?
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 28, 2013 / sydney5555 - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS Task II. people choose to live alone or with friends rather with their family
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 28, 2013 / dumi - Jul 4, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Main reasons for migration to and from the UK
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 28, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS; Is CHANGE good or bad? / People's preferences
3 - ...I guess your prompt asks you about your stand on this. To which side you belong? Those like to...
Writing Feedbackbluesoly - Jun 28, 2013 / dumi - Jun 28, 2013
|Some people enjoy reading novels and short stories. Others like watching movies. ?
6 - ... Well... I find there are more than one sentences here; I spend my leisure time reading books....
Writing FeedbackNaveen 54 - Jun 28, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 5, 2013
|Ielts: Opinion on animal experimentation; Should continue!
4 - Thanks for your advice! When I was writing this essay, I couldn't think of any other way of paraphrasing...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 27, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jul 4, 2013
|What's more influencial on child's development? Family influence or Other factors?
Writing Feedbackleotimothy - Jun 27, 2013 / leotimothy - Jun 28, 2013
|Global water scarcity - a Global concern
2 - we will be concerned about the next generation . our lives on earth depends on water so everyone should...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 27, 2013
|Watching too much TV and violent images - essay
8 - .... watching what? .... Also, this has some grammar issues too. Watching TV too often can have many...
Writing Feedbackchauuyenbinh - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 7, 2013
|goverment has a plan to plant trees , dose this have affect on ecosystem and water ?
2 - Each organism of the ecosystem has heavy dependence on other living beings and vice verse contributing to...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ; MOBILE PHONES - Essential or Unnecessary?
4 - It seems you are new to this forum. Please select the forum "writing feedback" for your essays written on...
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|Universities should provide both knowledge and skills needed in the workplace
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 27, 2013 / venise - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS task 1: The highest qualification attained by sex...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|Imported fruits &vegetables can affect the home grown vegetable market
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS- Task 1.The number of houses sold of UK in 2000
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 27, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 30, 2013
|How overpopulation can affect society?/ Negative effects of overpopulation
Writing Feedbackhuynhquang - Jun 26, 2013 / minhdang - Jul 4, 2013
|Percentage of clear differences between the national consumer expenditure of five various countries
3 - ... you are supposed to write a report. So, it's important to stay away from verbose. Simply say;...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jul 7, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Graphic describing; Differences of an island
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 26, 2013 / huyenanh1508 - Jun 27, 2013
|TOURISM and its IMPACT on our society
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 26, 2013 / sydney5555 - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; 'benefits of technology' What older people can learn from young people?
3 - .... Wish you broke this up to two sentences; With the advent of new technologies, our generation has...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IETLS TASK 2; More money should be spend on education and sports?
4 - First, you need to give a meaningful topic for your essays when you open a new thread. That helps...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; GDP Growth for 3 different countries
3 - 6.5% and 6.4%...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:who should take care of the elderly,family or professionals?
4 - Receiving this compliment from a renowned forumer like you made me the most proud student here..thanks.. tell you...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 25, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; Internet Usage in Taiwan during 3 years from 1998
6 - First, make sure that you upload the chart using the feature "Attach file(s)". It's always better for you to...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 25, 2013 / dumi - Jul 7, 2013
|Reaching at the pinnacle of success requires dedication and determination
3 - I find this statement absolutely accurate as it is in consonance to the famous saying "hard work is the...
Writing Feedbacksamrooney - Jun 25, 2013 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2015
|Underground railway systems in the field of opening date, total length of route and annual ridership
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jul 7, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to inform a friend about his accomodation
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 24, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 26, 2013
|Ielts: Libraries should not waste their money on hi-tech media. Agree or disagree?
6 - Thanks for your suggestion! If I didn't sum up my ideas in the conclusion, should I give some recommendations...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 25, 2013
|Nations should pass laws in order to preserve nature; GRE/ Analyze an issue
6 - ... actually, this is better termed as "echo tourism" which is based on supporting conservation efforts of tourism....
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 24, 2013 / dumi - Jul 8, 2013
|IELTs---competition is much more importance than cooperation in school. do you agree?
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|TOEFL: Studying at home or at traditional school?
3 - Hi MisterWandering, I made a few revisions and here's what this sentence means. However, students can...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: International travel brings more benefits than its de-merits
5 - .... You need to attend to grammar, but with practice you'll be alright. Follow the corrections suggested by...
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 23, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Imprisonment levels in 5 countries
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Eaqual number of male & female students in universities
5 - ....yes... shinichi75 has a very valid point. It appears that you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL and...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Select 3 effective media and write about their effectiveness
3 - .... The media is a "catch-all" term which caters to any type of activity whether it involves current...
Writing Feedbackwinny239 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|THE DIVINE MAGIC WAND; Beliefs and thoughts
4 - I would put a comma after "direction" and combine the sentences. Then I would start the other sentence...
Writing Feedbacktemptprovidence - Jun 23, 2013 / carolyn - Jul 3, 2013
|RACE! What is race? What does your race mean?
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|Cyber-bullying occurs when one party harasses another on-line
2 - For the most part I like this. If only there were fewer instances of the words "cyber" and "bullying,"...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
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