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|What's more influencial on child's development? Family influence or Other factors?
Writing Feedbackleotimothy - Jun 27, 2013 / leotimothy - Jun 28, 2013
|Global water scarcity - a Global concern
2 - we will be concerned about the next generation . our lives on earth depends on water so everyone should...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / sally12390 - Jun 27, 2013
|Watching too much TV and violent images - essay
8 - .... watching what? .... Also, this has some grammar issues too. Watching TV too often can have many...
Writing Feedbackchauuyenbinh - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jul 7, 2013
|goverment has a plan to plant trees , dose this have affect on ecosystem and water ?
2 - Each organism of the ecosystem has heavy dependence on other living beings and vice verse contributing to...
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS ; MOBILE PHONES - Essential or Unnecessary?
4 - It seems you are new to this forum. Please select the forum "writing feedback" for your essays written on...
Writing Feedbacksally12390 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|Universities should provide both knowledge and skills needed in the workplace
Writing Feedbackvenise - Jun 27, 2013 / venise - Jun 29, 2013
|IELTS task 1: The highest qualification attained by sex...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|Imported fruits &vegetables can affect the home grown vegetable market
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 27, 2013 / dumi - Jun 27, 2013
|IELTS- Task 1.The number of houses sold of UK in 2000
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 27, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 30, 2013
|How overpopulation can affect society?/ Negative effects of overpopulation
Writing Feedbackhuynhquang - Jun 26, 2013 / minhdang - Jul 4, 2013
|Percentage of clear differences between the national consumer expenditure of five various countries
3 - ... you are supposed to write a report. So, it's important to stay away from verbose. Simply say;...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jul 7, 2013
|IELTS ESSAY- Graphic describing; Differences of an island
Writing Feedbackhuyenanh1508 - Jun 26, 2013 / huyenanh1508 - Jun 27, 2013
|TOURISM and its IMPACT on our society
Writing Feedbackrozha - Jun 26, 2013 / sydney5555 - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; 'benefits of technology' What older people can learn from young people?
3 - .... Wish you broke this up to two sentences; With the advent of new technologies, our generation has...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IETLS TASK 2; More money should be spend on education and sports?
4 - First, you need to give a meaningful topic for your essays when you open a new thread. That helps...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / dumi - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; GDP Growth for 3 different countries
3 - 6.5% and 6.4%...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 26, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:who should take care of the elderly,family or professionals?
4 - Receiving this compliment from a renowned forumer like you made me the most proud student here..thanks.. tell you...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 25, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 26, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1; Internet Usage in Taiwan during 3 years from 1998
6 - First, make sure that you upload the chart using the feature "Attach file(s)". It's always better for you to...
Writing Feedbackhaje9alshoo8 - Jun 25, 2013 / dumi - Jul 7, 2013
|Reaching at the pinnacle of success requires dedication and determination
3 - I find this statement absolutely accurate as it is in consonance to the famous saying "hard work is the...
Writing Feedbacksamrooney - Jun 25, 2013 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2015
|Underground railway systems in the field of opening date, total length of route and annual ridership
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jul 7, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to inform a friend about his accomodation
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 24, 2013 / IntheClouds - Jun 26, 2013
|Ielts: Libraries should not waste their money on hi-tech media. Agree or disagree?
6 - Thanks for your suggestion! If I didn't sum up my ideas in the conclusion, should I give some recommendations...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 25, 2013
|Nations should pass laws in order to preserve nature; GRE/ Analyze an issue
6 - ... actually, this is better termed as "echo tourism" which is based on supporting conservation efforts of tourism....
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 24, 2013 / dumi - Jul 8, 2013
|IELTs---competition is much more importance than cooperation in school. do you agree?
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|TOEFL: Studying at home or at traditional school?
3 - Hi MisterWandering, I made a few revisions and here's what this sentence means. However, students can...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: International travel brings more benefits than its de-merits
5 - .... You need to attend to grammar, but with practice you'll be alright. Follow the corrections suggested by...
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 23, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Imprisonment levels in 5 countries
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Eaqual number of male & female students in universities
5 - ....yes... shinichi75 has a very valid point. It appears that you are preparing for IELTS or TOEFL and...
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Select 3 effective media and write about their effectiveness
3 - .... The media is a "catch-all" term which caters to any type of activity whether it involves current...
Writing Feedbackwinny239 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|THE DIVINE MAGIC WAND; Beliefs and thoughts
4 - I would put a comma after "direction" and combine the sentences. Then I would start the other sentence...
Writing Feedbacktemptprovidence - Jun 23, 2013 / carolyn - Jul 3, 2013
|RACE! What is race? What does your race mean?
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|Cyber-bullying occurs when one party harasses another on-line
2 - For the most part I like this. If only there were fewer instances of the words "cyber" and "bullying,"...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|GRE: Analyze an arguement; Wearing a helmet while bicycling
4 - No---in this case you're just telling me what the assumption is. You haven't yet commented on why...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 23, 2013
|Technological advancement hamper the development of a country's traditional skills?
Writing FeedbackAslanbek - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|MY THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING HAS NEVER BEEN FUN, FAST OR EASY; Reflective essay
3 - Good writing.... your essay challenges your claim of having no confidence in writing...Lol :D I too notice the often...
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS, To some people, studying HISTORY has very little value; what is your view?
10 - This goes in the introduction. . Which difficulties? Pick ONE and write a paragraph about it....
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 28, 2013
|IELTS; Consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc)owned inBritain
4 - The rate of people using this item fluctuated between 93% to 98% during the period Refrigerator...
Writing Feedbacklytetdi - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house?
6 - I think you can get a better structure for this essay if you could share some insights also on...
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 21, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: business and financial grew noticeably and become the most advanced area
3 - -> ... the UK in the twentieth century -> business and financial services grew/developed the most...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion?
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 21, 2013 / kvant - Jun 21, 2013
|Reason why you want to buy carbon filter comforter mask
3 - ...it's good if you can improve clarity of this line; [i]The industrial enviroments are often polluted by noise,...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|Books and experience - rate my essay for TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbacklucky_boy - Jun 20, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 20, 2013
|Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum
7 - Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are...
Writing Feedbackrohan4819 - Jun 20, 2013 / chiphan38 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter for wrong information on a product's AD
3 - Yes, this has some grammar errors that have been already highlighted by others and the fixes have been...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS; Leisure time is for improving mind or resting mind?
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 19, 2013 / ellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013
|What's more important? Roads or public transport?
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 19, 2013 / Mabossani - Jun 19, 2013
|My trip to a nice and unusual village!
2 - ..."gO to new places" is implied by the word "traveling".... so itsounds redundant. I love to travel because...
Writing Feedbackvahidbm - Jun 19, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; CHANGE or ROUTINE LIFESTYLE? Which one is better?
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 19, 2013 / dido272000 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Reward or punishment for a good behavior?
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Gender equality should be exercised in universities?
3 - .... Good opening. However, I feel they need fair treatment irrespective of which era they live in. There...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 18, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status
Writing Feedbackmsmwarren - Jun 18, 2013 / sherry manson - Jul 4, 2013
|I'll move; my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 18, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Why attend Universities or Colleges? Specific reasons and examples
5 - I think you should change this sentence a bit: I believe that career preparation is the main reason...
Writing Feedbacksalmah1997 - Jun 18, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Grade this GRE issue essay task out of 6.. feel free to point out any mistake
6 - This can be true. However, if I don't know my multiplication tables, should I be teaching arithmetic (let...
Writing FeedbackNilanjana - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 18, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:learning to play a music instrument is a waste of time
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|GRE Analytic Writing; Should student study the same National Curriculum ?
4 - Don't make a list of points in your introduction. High school teachers (and teachers of all kinds) are wrong...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|'censorhip'; Creative artists should have freedom to express their views
3 - .... It's not just last decades... Even in ancient times, the artists used to talk to their people...
Writing Feedbackdragosp - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS; Business letter explaining the reasons why I want to be away from work
5 - It is not required but it is good to have at least two sentences in your first paragraph. You...
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|TOEFL; Integrated writing task - Team Work is the best way to handle a new project
5 - First, the reading passage claims that a team exerts a greater power than that of an individual in...
Writing Feedbacksinafrm1365 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 29, 2013
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