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|Who is responsible for Medical Services ?
6 - Hi, Lorica, First, I would like to highlight that you IELTs essay is not long enough(only 240 words),...
Writing FeedbackLorica - Apr 19, 2013 / christyzhongs - Apr 20, 2013
|Role of teachers with appearance of computers.
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Report - production of colored paper clips.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend?
Writing Feedbackgyal - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 19, 2013
|Should the government invest in early childhood education or higher education
Writing FeedbackJoyceessay - Apr 19, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people
Writing FeedbackCaroline777 - Apr 18, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|Uniforms are the way to go! School uniforms are a better option for students
3 - thankyouu!!...
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|Impacts that affect on advertising is always the (only) thing which companies concentrate on
Writing FeedbackPond - Apr 18, 2013 / Pond - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS: Increase of Illiteracy rate causes and effects on society
10 - Great ideas, I'll surely take care of the minor mistakes. These days I am trying to complete my...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 18, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS; How to stay healthy in your country? Reasons & Answeres
6 - :) Well, I think your prompt needs you to discuss what people should do to stay healthy in your...
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 18, 2013 / dumi - Apr 21, 2013
|IELTS- It's important to address root causes in order to reduce criminal activities!
3 - On the other side of the argument, punishment needs to be balanced with the crime committed by...
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|The crease on my mom's forhead ; Motivation
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|Impacts of modern medical science on society.
2 - .... you have grammar issues here. Also you idea is not presented very clearly. This is my suggestion;...
Writing FeedbackMilad Mac - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|It is true that the past stays in the past; Past or future
Writing Feedbackgular - Apr 17, 2013 / gular - Apr 18, 2013
|In many countries schools leave severe problems with student behavior.
2 - .... discipline and behavioral programs are two things, so they need to be treated as plural. ...
Writing FeedbackAidanaMyrzakhan - Apr 17, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Impact of computer usage on children.
8 - Great and thanks again. Thanks eileenalien, your suggestions are equally important to me. Cheers!!...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 17, 2013 / shaddy - Apr 18, 2013
|IELTS Essay: Suggestions for the densely populated countries.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 16, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Solve the environmental problems by increasing the fuel prize. Agree or disagree.
2 - ... The idea here sounds good. You can say higher fuel prices cause higher level of inflation. Inflation...
Writing Feedbackessaytest - Apr 16, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 16, 2013
|The Future of America: The One Change Needed Above All
Writing Feedbackmaxmartinez - Apr 15, 2013 / Sunny he - Apr 20, 2013
|Neighbors are the people who live near us. What are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Writing Feedbacksnwr jamal - Apr 15, 2013 / snwr jamal - Apr 19, 2013
|'understanding intercultural communication'; culture shock
Writing Feedbackhoai - Apr 15, 2013 / ningo - Apr 19, 2013
|Subject: Factors contributing to JOB SATISFACTION/ How realistic they are?
5 - ... Wish you presented this in a more simpler manner; In modern society, people spend more time at...
Writing FeedbackvickieZ - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|IELTS; How should schools select their students?
3 - As essaytest comments, here there is a slight confusion about whether you are answering what your prompt suggests....
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|Homework is Harmful! - Why?
Writing FeedbackFajriyah - Apr 14, 2013 / Pahan - Apr 19, 2013
|IELTS; Can price hikes on fuel solve environmental problems?
Writing Feedbackshaddy - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely.
4 - I would strongly suggest you to follow the four para structure for this task. That's the best way...
Writing FeedbackSuzy Naguib - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|IELTSl; Refugee programs/process should be allowed?
Writing FeedbackRedtape - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Drawbacks of technology in our modern world? *Short <400 words!
Writing Feedbackballerinia - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL, Communicating via e-mail and voice mail vs Telephone and face-to face
3 - .... This sentence does not have any grammatical issues. However, I prefer if you introduced the topic theme...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 17, 2013
|'many good degrees in Japan'; family background have more influence than teacher
2 - Begin your essay with a more catchy line; Who influence the young person's learning more? Parents or the...
Writing Feedbacklinhmonoforever - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|TOEFL iBT: Integrated Essay, The win-win negotiating
4 - okay... then thats certainly a mistake in my observation. and thats obvious because i myself have no good strength...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / temptprovidence - Apr 15, 2013
|TOEFL: Students should apply for admission for their first choice or several schools?
3 - Thank you about your opinion! However, I do have some doubts. I am studying BARRON's Toefl ibt and they...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL iBT: Integrated Essay, The origin of dreams, Freud vs biochemical approach
3 - Thank you for your advice! I completely understand your position about integrated essays so I asked about grammar and...
Writing FeedbackMisius - Apr 13, 2013 / Misius - Apr 13, 2013
|Sapodila, was the name given to me when I was born; Essay on myself
Writing FeedbackSapodils - Apr 13, 2013 / Sapodils - Apr 13, 2013
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Bar chart (various flavours of food)
4 - That's just fine.... Those are good key words you can use in report writing. In this task try to...
Writing Feedbackdannydo - Apr 13, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|Will the Internet will bring people of the world closer together?
Writing Feedbackjohnsultanov - Apr 12, 2013 / johnsultanov - Apr 14, 2013
|"Every thing is alive because of water"; Clean Water ESSAY
Writing Feedbackabdullahtrading - Apr 12, 2013 / temptprovidence - Apr 14, 2013
|Reasons for why people attending colleges or universities?
2 - ... This introduction is a bit too short. Introduce your topic with a better entrance to your essay....
Writing FeedbackPATEL RAJ - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|IELTS-writing a short essay to express why moves to a new house and how's that place.
Writing Feedbackstormynick - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel before university
Writing Feedbackmsmwarren - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|Describe the heart lung machine -IELTS
6 - No, It isnt. It's not scientific word. I think that word used to describe unoxygenated blood is appropriate....
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Apr 12, 2013 / xucoi - Apr 14, 2013
|The rising levels of congestion and air pollution
2 - This affects negatively on quality of life that people lead. Therefore, governments should take necessary measures to control...
Writing Feedbackassetbai - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|If I have enough money what would I do? Purchase either a house or a business? TOEFL
Writing Feedbackstudent12345 - Apr 12, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|TOEFL: Television has more bad than good in respect of bonds with family and friends
2 - What are these indirect experiences? Better specify. Good introduction! Thus,Therefore they cannot make appointment or go out with...
Writing Feedbackgospellover - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|IELTS General Writing task 1; Letter to John - making arrangements
2 - You are writing to a relative, a known party, and therefore you should show more intimacy in your...
Writing Feedbackirfanafsar - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|Participating in games teaches many lessons for life
Writing FeedbackJamieK - Apr 11, 2013 / JamieK - Apr 12, 2013
|IELTS-Wealthy nations have an obligation to provide food and education to the poorer?
4 - This should be your introductory paragraph. Don't leave the first line separate. Well ... why you...
Writing FeedbackAntonR - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL:Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends?
Writing Feedbackxuyue - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|GRE argument: Super Screen Movie Production Company
3 - ... Your prompt does not tell that the production of Super Screen movies had been lowered. As I...
Writing Feedbackhjq1990 - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|IETLS; Social media and its impact on my life
3 - .... it is not clear what you mean by "work and societal outcomes".... you better specify that. ...
Writing Feedbacktestessay - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 14, 2013
|You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program
NEW - You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of...
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|IELTS; Letter to the course lecturer informing my inability to continue the course
Writing Feedbackabhigeorge - Apr 11, 2013 / Dreamer84 - Apr 12, 2013
|Co-ed education versus single sex education; Which is better?
Writing Feedbackxu yu cheng - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Do you agree that the internet has transformed lives and economies?
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - Apr 11, 2013 / maruko_a2609 - Apr 22, 2013
|Do you prefer traditional house or live in apartment?
4 - ... this is not a very catchy sentence to open an essay. The sentence would be more effective...
Writing Feedbacksaeed_s_1368 - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 12, 2013
|Everyone has the right to education irrespective of gender difference
2 - Hi You should include your prompt in your post so that others can give you more relevant feed backs....
Writing Feedbacktestessay - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 13, 2013
|TOEFL: What do you want for your major? Specific reasons & Examples
Writing Feedbackgospellover - Apr 11, 2013 / gospellover - Apr 11, 2013
|The advertising and the need of society, IELTS
Writing Feedbackhomsai - Apr 10, 2013 / homsai - Apr 11, 2013
|TOEFL IBT: Why people want to move to big cities to settle down?
Writing Feedbackluonghao - Apr 10, 2013 / luonghao - Mar 25, 2014
|Albert Einstein and Thomas Edison; Compare & Contrast
2 - Science and technology has contributed immensely to the development of human society. Well.... you are to compare...
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