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|IELTS; Water Cycle/ Life cycle of butterfly/ Letter /Process fo digital photography
3 - For each idea below, continue the sentence or write a follow-on sentence using your own ideas to express Result...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 30, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 31, 2013
|TOEFL: (Dis/Agree) Establish a large shopping center in our community or not?
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|IELTS ....Fast Food is becoming more popular?
Writing FeedbackNewUser - May 30, 2013 / NewUser - Jun 4, 2013
|Difference between Two Close friends
Writing Feedbackkieulinhbs - May 29, 2013 / JangGemini - Jun 30, 2013
|IELTS; Write a complain letter to manager about mobile phone is not working
Writing Feedbackmraheel - May 29, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 14, 2013
|IELTS: Arranged and love marriages. Discuss both views.
2 - To begin with, one of the biggest advantages of love marriage is that it freesexempt the parents from their...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 29, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|Marketing assistant position - IELTS Letter check Request
4 - I don't think you need to add the last sentence as it makes you sound desperate (anxious part), besides...
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - May 29, 2013 / dragonking88 - May 31, 2013
|Psychological Effects of War on Soldiers
4 - Didgeridoo You might not be a grad student or a professor but you pointed out the mistakes and made...
Writing Feedbackrtyler - May 28, 2013 / rtyler - May 29, 2013
|STOP BULLYING - Argumentive Essay
5 - Yes, it's only you can delete your posts. Since you have already got comments from others including moderators,...
Writing FeedbackAlexRomero - May 28, 2013 / dumi - Jun 15, 2013
|Assignment: Is it best to determine how wise people are by how happy they are?
3 - Really? That encourages me so much xD Thank you thank you!! I thought no one would fix it for...
Writing FeedbackJangGemini - May 28, 2013 / JangGemini - May 29, 2013
|Governments money for artsists; 'Artists have been seen as talented people'
7 - Hi, lilythuy2289. Investing too much resources on artists will have a negative impact on the development of...
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - May 28, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - May 30, 2013
|IELTS: Nature of Holidays is changing, do you agree or disagree
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 28, 2013 / shaddy - May 29, 2013
|Factors which influence a good movie ( your opinions )
Writing Feedbacklilythuy2289 - May 27, 2013 / shaddy - May 29, 2013
|ARGUMENT ESSAY ON IMPORTANCE OF COMMUNITY SERVICE AMONG STUDENTS AT PLEASANTVILLE
NEW - Q- Several charitable organizations in Pleasant-ville provide opportunities for teenagers to engage in community service. Write a response...
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|GRE; Blogosphere & Social media Vs Quality of political discoure in the US
2 - You did raise some really nice points in your essay and acknowledged both sides of the the argument. However,...
Writing Feedbacktaanyakhare2312 - May 27, 2013 / shadman19922 - Jun 9, 2013
|IELTS ; Letter to Football Team-mate to inform why I leave the team
5 - I hope this letter finds you in good spirit and health. The purpose of this letter is to bring...
Writing Feedbacksophisticated - May 27, 2013 / nicktheB - May 28, 2013
|Computer Addiction (Causes/Effect/Solution )
4 - ... technology has literary influenced everybody's life and therefore you can keep this very general .......
Writing Feedbackyasser - May 27, 2013 / dumi - May 27, 2013
|Ielts: % of Australian men and women with 5-levels of post-school qualifications
2 - Your chart seem to direct in introduction. The horizontal bar chart differentiates Australian men and women on post...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 27, 2013 / sophisticated - May 28, 2013
|TOEFL; Some people think that family has more influence on the young adult
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 27, 2013 / April April - May 28, 2013
|IELTS : Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Reasons and actions.
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 27, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 29, 2013
|A story about desert survival; Creative writing
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|Lord Arragorn has returned short story.
2 - It is an engaging read, but it gets kind of confusing after the narrator gets hacked and shot. I...
Writing Feedbackchessman567 - May 26, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 26, 2013
|IELTS - Report an island before and after construction
Writing Feedbackseabird88 - May 26, 2013 / shaddy - May 28, 2013
|Advantages of living in the dormitory rooms and apartment buildings - COMPARISON
3 - --> Moreover, the dorm buildings are usually close to the class buildings and departments; therefore, students do...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 26, 2013 / April April - May 26, 2013
|The excessive usage of social networkings
3 - There are many more social networks, in fact EF is also one of them. However, Facebook and Twitter...
Writing Feedbackanggittas - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|I plan to retire when I am no longer in healthy ;Retirement / Answers 4 questions
Writing Feedbackfsolano94 - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 7, 2013
|IELTS: Importance of studying History in school.
3 - thanx Habib. I really appreciate ur time and effort. But there are few corrections. Do not put comma after...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 25, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 26, 2013
|college and university should be available for all students or only to good students
4 - Nowadays, many people look forward to receiving a degree from university or college to acquire more in depth...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 25, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|"The words like Justice only exist in dictionaries"; Rich men have no fault
Writing Feedbackkingmaker - May 25, 2013 / dumi - May 25, 2013
|Today, new media is springing out and bringing convenience to everyday life
2 - ... another way of expressing this ; As a result of rapid globalization, media industry keeps flourishing stronger...
Writing Feedbackfrancy - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|Happiness of working that one can achieve is the best in this world
Writing Feedbackninasalimi - May 25, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|TOEFL Students are more interested in politics today than those in the past.
4 - ...need to improve :( In this advance society, politics too have become very complicated and they, either directly...
Writing FeedbackIvy_Missing - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|"If at first you don't succeed, try and try again" - TOEFL essay
9 - Things you might consider to take your essay to the next level: 1.) Include personal experience relevant to...
Writing Feedbackdesertrose - May 24, 2013 / amorphous1 - Jun 8, 2013
|IELTS - good changes can be brought in life without major difficulties.
6 - thank u o much. i really appreciate ur opinion but please can ye explain how to gather the ideas...
Writing FeedbackShumaila86 - May 24, 2013 / Shumaila86 - May 25, 2013
|Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your own
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 24, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|IELTS: profits from natural resources make people ignore to preserve natural world
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 24, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 25, 2013
|GRE: Mason City residents & Water sports - Argumentive Essay
3 - Residents of Mason city constantly complain forabout the quality of river water and the river's smell but that doesdo...
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|GRE Issue Task; More technology for problem solving results in less ability to think?
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Dips - May 24, 2013
|Shorris's studies show the reader that a change is possible in any community
2 - overcome the division? .... interrogation means questioning, inquiring etc. and mostly used in criminology. Is...
Writing FeedbackFreenchy - May 24, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|Ielts: What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic are they?
2 - ... some parts that I highlighted sound a bit irrelevant - specially " worker's occupation" and "modern societies".......
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|The Mass Media Control; Differents Risks and Points of View
4 - Thanks a lot for your help, both of you. I've managed to correct the mistakes that kridUessay found, but...
Writing FeedbackFco_94 - May 23, 2013 / Fco_94 - May 24, 2013
|People are now more interested in using seafood and some products from seafoods than ever before
3 - No one can deny that many ocean species have become endangered due to human over-fishing across the...
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|Living in the countryside better in Vietnam
Writing Feedbacklele1987 - May 22, 2013 / lele1987 - May 23, 2013
|TOEFL: I think that there are still a lot of different types of movies
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|Many childhood experiences leave a lifelong impression
Writing Feedbacknorthernbell - May 22, 2013 / northernbell - May 29, 2013
|Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks.....
Writing Feedbacksanilt237 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Share the Dorm or Choose my own Roommate
5 - You seem to have a fair understanding about the essay structure. However, you need to include specific examples in...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 22, 2013 / dumi - Jun 12, 2013
|Reliance on Technology to solve problem will deteriorate humans ability to think
4 - ... exactly :) .... this is a well written introduction... The only point I notice is that you...
Writing Feedbackmavericksid - May 22, 2013 / Pahan - May 25, 2013
|IELTS: The development of a coastal village
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / Helio - May 24, 2013
|TOEFL :Which do u prefer living in an apartment or living in a dorm?
Writing FeedbackMax Payne - May 21, 2013 / LAB 328 - May 22, 2013
|"Made in China"; Fake products produced in China
Writing FeedbackFiorella Li - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; In our society child's education have never been a simple task
9 - never need comma Some people argue that, children should be taught to be avaluevaluablemembemembers in their...
Writing Feedbacknguyenngoc - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 27, 2013
|How does rapid economic development affect a country?
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - May 22, 2013
|Marriage older is more advantageous than marrying at young age!
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Which is more advantages? Marrying young or older?
2 - .... is that so? I thought people now tend to postpone marriage compared to older generations. ...
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; How to reduce traffic in cities? Should it be by reducing the need for travel?
4 - This is much better than what you've written first. I'm sure Pahan too would agree. However, even this...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|University education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / chrisredfii - Jun 13, 2013
|Which one do you prefer? A student-based class or a lectured-based class.
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS :Creativity needs freedom and so do the creative artists; Do you agree?
2 - ... In this sentence, I don't find any relevance to your topic. That's a bit dangerous because everything...
Writing FeedbackSecilia - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|Why do crime rates increase? How to arrest this issue?
Writing Feedbackartlife - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
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