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|How Television impact communication among friends and family?
Writing FeedbackDhan - May 8, 2013 / ningo - May 8, 2013
|CANADIAN History: Defining Moment on D-Day in WW2.
2 - The strategic planners in the military had assigned a major task to Canada; to take control over "Juno"...
Writing Feedbackashleepreiss - May 8, 2013 / dumi - May 14, 2013
|Problems created by widespread use of the Internet
3 - ... this line sounds too crowded with too many key words. It is pretty lengthy too ... Clarity...
Writing Feedbackvspherei - May 8, 2013 / dumi - May 8, 2013
|Men vs women are not equally suited for many tasks
Writing Feedbackmaheshbabu - May 8, 2013 / shaddy - May 15, 2013
|Advantage and disadvantage of 3D printing technology(argumentative, research essay)
Writing FeedbackSnowWolf - May 8, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Why should we prefer English language over other language?
Writing Feedbacksharmajali - May 8, 2013 / sharmajali - May 10, 2013
|It's a good idea to allow students take a long break in order to work or travel
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 8, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|IELTS, Education at home VS formal education - Which is better?
4 - You need to be careful about time management. This task you need to perform within a limited time...
Writing Feedbacknada english - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Assignment:Euthanasia should be legalized for a number of reasons.What's your opinion
3 - Thanks for your advice! Can you give me the other expressions for words and phrases which you think are...
Writing Feedbackningo - May 7, 2013 / ningo - May 8, 2013
|TOEFL ; DIFFICULTIES of learning a NEW LANGUAGE
8 - ....there are lots of difficulties .... Your introduction sounds better without this because this should reflect...
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Why Smoking should be Illegal? Opening paragraph
Writing Feedbackhannabanana - May 7, 2013 / shaddy - May 15, 2013
|Toefl - Classmates are more influential than parents on a child's success in school
Writing FeedbackCamilaTobar95 - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|TOEFL - People are now able to overcome long distances in a short amount of time
3 - First, people are now able to travel very long distances within short time and this has brought in...
Writing FeedbackRedFire - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 7, 2013
|'my grandfather has diabetes' Young people enjoy more than older people?
Writing FeedbackVinusha - May 7, 2013 / EF_Jasmine - Mar 13, 2015
|IELTS; Advantages and disadvantages of students working or travelling during gap year
Writing FeedbackNazma - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 13, 2013
|IELTS- Using gap year for travel or working is good or bad?
7 - .... not grammatically incorrect. However, it sounds a bit crowded with too many words; Nowadays, the gap year...
Writing Feedbackbomiyo - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 10, 2013
|TOEFL Essay: "Haste makes waste" do you agree with the statement or not ?
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 7, 2013 / LAB 328 - May 7, 2013
|Should voluntary plastic surgery be banned?
Writing FeedbackRichardshu - May 7, 2013 / Richardshu - May 9, 2013
|IELTS, Children should receive formal education from four years
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 7, 2013
|Some people think change is good, other not. Explain both points.
Writing Feedbacksharmajali - May 7, 2013 / sharmajali - May 8, 2013
|TOEFL:Economic growth Vs Environmental Concerns - Which is more important for a Gvt?
3 - 1. capital letters after full stop. 2. some people even government officials - it should be either one of...
Writing FeedbackFlora1991 - May 6, 2013 / sharmajali - May 7, 2013
|Is life better when lived in a small town?
Writing Feedbackamcdaniel - May 6, 2013 / dumi - May 7, 2013
|IELTS Task 1; alteration in types of travel in England from 1985 to 2000
NEW - topic : The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000....
Writing Feedbackboooza - May 6, 2013 / — -
|Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communites.TOEFL ESSAY
Writing Feedbacktynguyen - May 6, 2013 / malhamed - May 15, 2013
|TOEFL - NEIGHBORS DEPEND ON EACH OTHER LESS TODAY
3 - You can write well. It is only you don't follow a good essay structure. Dumi has given you the...
Writing Feedbackpulp - May 6, 2013 / Pahan - May 14, 2013
|TOEFL; Should we be completely honest with the friends?
6 - Well .... post this essay again in the same thread with each sentence starting with a capital letter. That's...
Writing FeedbackFlora1991 - May 6, 2013 / dumi - May 7, 2013
|Narrate how did you overcome the challenges to achieve your goal(s) in life
6 - I appreciate your revision. You have changed it more concise. Would it be more appropriate if I am...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - May 6, 2013 / niesaysi - May 20, 2013
|TOEFL; A person's job's has more effects on his happiness
Writing Feedbackpulp - May 6, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|Model Minority vindicating the American dream
NEW - The topic I am discussing is this: "...[D]iscuss the manner in which the model minority stereotype "vindicates the American...
Writing Feedbackhthiara - May 5, 2013 / — -
|My first story: Waking up in the Darkness
Writing Feedbackdgc90 - May 5, 2013 / dgc90 - May 5, 2013
|IELTS WRITING: the population is a mix of people from different cultures and ethic
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 5, 2013 / sharmajali - May 8, 2013
|TOEFL: Living with families for a longer time
6 - 1.Well structure essay, with a introduction, body and conclusion. 2. But some where i found you repetitive, which you...
Writing FeedbackGodiva - May 5, 2013 / sharmajali - May 8, 2013
|IELTS WRITING :Countries are becoming similar, what are causes, and effects ?
6 - products as KFC,Ford, which (are able to find) in most contries like American,England,China and so on I think...
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 4, 2013 / nada english - May 7, 2013
|IELTS:Should the government spend money on poor population or hi-tech research?
4 - I think you could make the begining of eassy better. Something like " whether should the money be spent...
Writing Feedbackveronicafy - May 4, 2013 / Godiva - May 5, 2013
|IELTS TASK 2:Whether without satisfying career, the life is meaningless?
4 - Thank you!!!!!!! To varonicafy: I'll look for the charity career and self-affirmation. And, good luck! Your IELTS~ :D To...
Writing Feedbackeileenalien - May 4, 2013 / eileenalien - May 6, 2013
|Child labor - Advantages vs disadvantages
2 - In the first sentence, you said:" The employment, in recent years, has been changing and becoming more sensitive". In...
Writing FeedbackXuan Dung - May 4, 2013 / bloodkid - May 4, 2013
|'not the best way'; steep prices of petrol solve traffic and pollution problems
4 - I appreciate your encouragement that makes me fell fulfilled. And thank you for correcting my errors and continuously...
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 4, 2013 / homsai - May 5, 2013
|Power of advertising determines high sales of products
3 - How are customers influenced towards certain products? If possible you can talk about media portrayal of what to like...
Writing FeedbackRajji - May 3, 2013 / hthiara - May 4, 2013
|Young people face more problems than adults. Do you agree? [IGCSE]
Writing Feedbackmina_3006 - May 3, 2013 / mina_3006 - May 3, 2013
|SAT: Are there situations where it is more ethical not to follow established rules?
4 - kridUessay I'd say start with an anecdote, about a situation where one man/ idea was more important than...
Writing FeedbackkridUessay - May 3, 2013 / manjot - May 3, 2013
|People are living longer now - medicine is more advanced
2 - Hi! First, your thesis statement is a bit unclear and confusing to readers. I think you should clarify the...
Writing Feedbacksuncult - May 2, 2013 / BioCat - Jan 19, 2015
|Clothes make the man? -CLEP essay
2 - When you dress nice together with your good looks, you would certainly be treated better with more respect...
Writing Feedbackmusicmajor - May 2, 2013 / dumi - May 2, 2013
|Write about the benefits of having good friends (Qualifying English Test)
Writing Feedbackkevinj888 - May 2, 2013 / kevinj888 - May 2, 2013
|"Honesty is the best policy"; Is it good to tell the truth always?
Writing Feedbackthegypsygirl - May 2, 2013 / Yourz_Truly - May 2, 2013
|"Can't Wait to Play The Lottery"; College Assignment
NEW - This is my college english final that is due at 8 tomorrow morning! If you could please help me...
Writing FeedbackFalconerrr - May 2, 2013 / — -
|FAMILY Vs WORK; What is more important?
Writing Feedbackwolf4bunny - May 1, 2013 / wolf4bunny - May 1, 2013
|IELTS : Boarding schools are getting more popular in some countries. Good or bad?
Writing Feedbackiatropathos - May 1, 2013 / iatropathos - May 3, 2013
|Will modern technology, such as the internet ever replace the book as the main source
Writing FeedbackAs is - May 1, 2013 / As is - May 2, 2013
|IELTS wirting: Children should begin formal education at four years old
Writing Feedbackwarmhub - Apr 30, 2013 / warmhub - May 2, 2013
|IELTS: class attendance and vacation length
2 - Hi Malmhed, It's always good that you have one essay in each post. Then you have better chances for...
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Apr 30, 2013 / dumi - Apr 30, 2013
|SAT; Should people act as individuals or copy others' ideas?
4 - I know.... that's why I wanted to draw your attention on it. Sometimes you get carried away with...
Writing Feedbacktheblackpearl - Apr 30, 2013 / dumi - May 1, 2013
|IELTS - crimes committed by young people in major cities R&G
Writing Feedbackveronicafy - Apr 30, 2013 / veronicafy - Apr 30, 2013
|TOEFL ibT: What do you want most in a friend? Intelligent, humor, reliable?
Writing FeedbackRedFire - Apr 30, 2013 / RedFire - Apr 30, 2013
|Topic: Genetically modified (GM) crops should be encouraged to develop.
Writing Feedbackningo - Apr 29, 2013 / ningo - Apr 30, 2013
|Is there a BEST AGE to marry? ; TOEFL IBT
Writing Feedbackgeorgekozma - Apr 29, 2013 / alexclark512 - Apr 30, 2013
|IELTS WRITING: university students should study a full range of subjects or specific
NEW - Topic : It is argued that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific...
Writing Feedbackhahong - Apr 29, 2013 / — -
|New experiences,Career preparation,Knowledge; Reasons why people attend college
2 - Education is the base that helps people to have a better life and find means to contribute towards...
Writing Feedbackchickiki27 - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|My Favorite Super hero is Ayatollah Khomeini
Writing Feedbackabedkh - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|In twenty years, student will do all of their school work on a computer
2 - Educators debate whether students should be allowed to do all their school work using computers or not. ...
Writing Feedbackhjlary dang - Apr 29, 2013 / dumi - Apr 29, 2013
|IELTS Exam writting : Child should spend more time in play or school project ?
7 - I was not aware of these errors ... thanks to everyone ! And another question is what will be...
Writing Feedbackoliveoil_s - Apr 29, 2013 / oliveoil_s - May 2, 2013
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