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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: children are becoming overweight and unhealthy
4 - @longbango Hi there. Welcome to the forum. If you find this feedback helpful, I hope you come back for...
Writing Feedbacklongbango - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|IELTS Task1: Money Spent and Consumption of Fast Food in Britian
2 - @Rae Zhang Hello. Welcome here. I hope you're doing well in your learning journey. If you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackRae Zhang - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors the city
Writing FeedbackQuoccuong - Aug 16, 2019 / coke - Aug 19, 2019
|IELTS Task1: the number of visitors and result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were
3 - Thank you so much Maria! Your suggestion is really helpful for me. Can you also give me some comment...
Writing Feedbackanggietw - Aug 16, 2019 / anggietw - Aug 18, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1 (GENERAL) You are studying for a qualification, and you need some time off work
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's nice to see people constantly coming back to the forum. I hope you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|The report about ten nations dominating the world in the rice industry in thousands of tons
Writing FeedbackHannah Trang - Aug 16, 2019 / Hannah Trang - Aug 18, 2019
|Essay task 1 : the change in percentage of people joinning in seven sports in an European country
2 - @ronaldocr9803 Hi. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback helpful. If you do, you can come...
Writing Feedbackronaldocr9803 - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|ESSAY ABOUT INVESTING TO FAST-TRAIN OR PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION
2 - Hi, your writing is enjoyable to read but some suggestions are as follows: 1. A few grammatical corrections:...
Writing FeedbackGotoIelts - Aug 16, 2019 / TriceLiu - Aug 16, 2019
|Some people believe that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
7 - ... believe that tourists should ... and don't do wrong things. ( replace it by a more academic phrase...
Writing FeedbackKerlion - Aug 15, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 23, 2019
|WRITING IELTS TASK 1: The process of milk production
4 - @zigzagboy001 Hi. Seeing as you already received feedback that's quite technical, I hope to focus more on a general...
Writing Feedbackzigzagboy001 - Aug 15, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|Families who send their children to private school shouldn't pay taxes that support education system
5 - You should try avoiding using in conclusion as a way to close your essay out you want to have...
Writing FeedbackTrinhca - Aug 14, 2019 / colt2002 - Aug 17, 2019
|Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news
Writing Feedbackluuly24052002 - Aug 14, 2019 / Trinh Duy Hung - Aug 14, 2019
|The climate changing - even more crucial than species extinction?
4 - With the advent of technology, environmental problems affecting the earth inadequately. One of these troubles is the loss of...
Writing Feedbackf22542727 - Aug 14, 2019 / KAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019
|(150 words) support the argument that secondary school students shouldn't play too much
2 - ... students are had not better not to waste their time ... There are tons of some undeniable...
Writing Feedbackieltsforbest - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
2 - In this globalization era, it can be seen that the number of students choosing to ... countries who study...
Writing Feedbackflinny_soll - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's great to see how enthusiastic you have been with all of this. I hope you find...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful
2 - You wrote the essay very good and also used uncommon words, such as triumphant, vehemently espouse, etc. I...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1(GENERAL) an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes
2 - @KAURNAVI Hi. Thanks for returning here! I hope to provide you with writing feedback for your essay. The...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|UK school spending - How to describe a pie chart in Ielts 8 writing task 1 ?
Writing FeedbackKaren Chick TY - Aug 13, 2019 / Karen Chick TY - Aug 19, 2019
|Job satisfaction. Is it possible to achieve this by all employees?
2 - @min0822 Hi there. Welcome back here to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Food waste is one of the biggest problems facing mankind today
2 - @Anthony VuNguyen Hello. Here to give you feedback on this essay. I hope you find this helpful and keep...
Writing FeedbackAnthony VuNguyen - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|What does matter more: teaching domestic or international history?
3 - @vulong79 Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, I welcome you to the forum! I hope you find...
Writing Feedbackvulong79 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS2- READING BOOKS VS COMPUTER & TV
2 - I think you should focus more on why you agree that reading is better for children. The second paragraph...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 13, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 13, 2019
|The pictures illustrate how Meadowside Village and its neighbouring town Fonton have developed
Writing Feedbackmoon812 - Aug 13, 2019 / moon812 - Aug 14, 2019
|Task 2: Internet problems and needed solutions like more rigorous regulations
3 - @Maria Thank you for spending time with my essays and giving me feedbacks! I really appreciate it...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Aug 13, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Aug 14, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2- global warming - cause and solution
Writing FeedbackTienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019 / Tienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019
|More physical education lessons in schools to control the obesity
Writing Feedbackhusimplicity - Aug 12, 2019 / husimplicity - Aug 13, 2019
|Writing IELTS TASK 1: World Meat Production, 1950-1990
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 14, 2019
|Solving traffic problems by taxing people who possess a car
2 - For the intro, you should: first, paraphrase the question. for example: Governments raise private car taxes and use the...
Writing Feedbacknguyenduc - Aug 12, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more
Writing FeedbackA Jhaveri - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|Causes and Results of Rising Global Population
2 - @jocelyn wang Hello. I hope you're learning from the feedback you're gathering here. I'm here to provide you with...
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Vocational training. There is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers.
2 - Hi Chaule, I suppose the topic is vocational traning not vacational training. There are some spelling mistakes and...
Writing Feedbackchaule_17897 - Aug 11, 2019 / jocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019
|IELTS task 1: sales of fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas
3 - Try to post the picture on your article next time~ In your introduction, try to rephrase the sentence...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|Ielts 10 test 1 Australian household energy use - charts work
2 - 1.You can paraphase the question at the beginning of the essay 2. ... other appliance also account for ......
Writing Feedbackcarolwong625 - Aug 11, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 11, 2019
|The amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 included road, water, rail, pipeline
Writing Feedbacktienphuoc287 - Aug 11, 2019 / tienphuoc287 - Aug 12, 2019
|You can buy everything from internet nowadays. Online shopping phenomenon.
2 - @angelvyle Hi there. Welcome! I'll provide you with writing feedback here on your essay. Firstly, I highly recommend...
Writing Feedbackangelvyle - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 11, 2019
|The number of queries collected by the Tourist Information Office over six months - IELTS1
Writing Feedbackhohatrang2002 - Aug 10, 2019 / hohatrang2002 - Aug 11, 2019
|Global climate change: individuals and government role
2 - @Winter Hello. It's nice to see you again here! I'm here once more to provide you with writing feedback....
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 10, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|An essay about discussing when it's better for children to learn a new language.
2 - @JackieMahamn Hi there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I'm happy to see you here again! Keep being an...
Writing FeedbackJackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS2- problem/solution essay: Not enough students choose science subjects in universities
3 - @s410377088 Hi there. Welcome back to the forum. I hope you find the feedback you see here to be...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|Essay about duty in environmental problem
2 - Well, it's well written but I think I'll challenge your topic by saying that individuals have a vital role...
Writing FeedbackRachel1809 - Aug 8, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 8, 2019
|Books and experience are fundamental tools to gain knowledge
3 - @hhhaye Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackhhhaye - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity
2 - @amira11545 Hi there. Thanks for being back here! I'm here to give feedback on this essay. I hope you...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|A rising trend nowadays that urban residents live in small families instead of large families
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 8, 2019 / renzito - Sep 26, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 1: Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place now
2 - @thuithuidangiu Hello there. You're welcome in advance! Just reach out to us if you have any other concerns or...
Writing Feedbackthuithuidangiu - Aug 8, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children.
2 - I actually just have some feedbacks to your writing. - Introduction paragraph: + " better" should go after "it",...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Aug 8, 2019 / JackieMahamn - Aug 9, 2019
|WRITING TASK 1: AUSTRALIAN EXPORTATION STATISTICS
2 - @ngotrancamtu There are some things I show you below, please give a feedback to me if you think I...
Writing Feedbackngotrancamtu - Aug 7, 2019 / phmixu27 - Aug 7, 2019
|More and more children no longer have creative thinking - is it because of technology development?
Writing Feedbackweiweiyan - Aug 7, 2019 / Maskeb - Aug 7, 2019
|Effects of detailed crime descriptions
2 - @Winter Hello ! hope you find comment helpful: The overall structure is clear. Just little suggestion here. Undeniably, crime...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 7, 2019 / htc - Aug 9, 2019
|Task 2: Example 17: Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. Agree or not?
3 - Hi, I think you already made an amazing essay. However, I'm gonna help you correct some minor errors Besides,...
Writing FeedbackHuy hoang - Aug 6, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 6, 2019
|The graph: million tonnes of gods transported by road, water, rail and pipeline in the given country
3 - @phmixu27 This is my first time to practice IELTS writing test. My grammar is awful. Thanks a lot for...
Writing Feedbackmeat0509 - Aug 6, 2019 / meat0509 - Aug 8, 2019
|IELTS essay Task 2: Criteria for successful country
2 - @qromj19 Hello there, Here are my suggestions for you: 1. "Some of them are health, education and..." In...
Writing Feedbackqromj19 - Aug 5, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 8, 2019
|Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies do
2 - Hi, I'm here to try my best to give you feedback on this essay. However, it's just my personal...
Writing FeedbackJasmine283 - Aug 5, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 5, 2019
|People and technology - advantages disadvantages of internet
Writing Feedbackwannaimprove - Aug 5, 2019 / suong1510 - Aug 8, 2019
|Toefl Writing - What does it mean to be a good neighbor?
2 - @pitheson Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback...
Writing Feedbackpitheson - Aug 5, 2019 / Maria - Aug 9, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Professionals and non-professionals are equal and should get paid equally?
Writing FeedbackToan dep trai - Aug 5, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 6, 2019
|ielt writing task 2 History and Technology as two different subjects at school
NEW - Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world,...
Writing Feedbacktranvidieu - Aug 4, 2019 / — -
|Art and music in today's modern societies.
2 - @conmasieuquay_4, Good essay with few grammatical errors like scientific-related science-related jobs and irrelevant words like thanks to some...
Writing Feedbackconmasieuquay_4 - Aug 3, 2019 / qromj19 - Aug 5, 2019
|Some people have been prominent in music and sport since they were born
Writing Feedbackthaolinhnguyen - Aug 3, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 7, 2019
|Railway transportation will improve traffic congestion and reduce air pollution problem
Writing Feedbackhtc - Aug 3, 2019 / htc - Aug 9, 2019
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