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|'my father has a pet shop'; teenagers have jobs while they are still students.
4 - I provided my comments about this paragraph in another essay of yours. You need to follow the recommended...
Writing Feedbackimaginative - Mar 25, 2013 / dumi - Mar 25, 2013
|IETLS; Machine Translation Vs Human Translation
5 - .... StressedWriter has a point. You are expected to introduce your topic to the reader in the introduction....
Writing Feedbackefish - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Mar 25, 2013
|IELTS - Strict Punishment for driving offences is a must to curtail traffic accidents
Writing FeedbackMeekay - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Learning a foreign language from early age- students show multitasking abilities
4 - Well.... I am sorry, I do not have any idea about how they rate your writing. However, for sure,...
Writing FeedbackDon kattode - Mar 24, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|The Absolutely True Diary of Part Time Indian School Book Essay [Year 9, Australia]
Writing FeedbackEddie Han - Mar 23, 2013 / Eddie Han - Apr 24, 2013
|The impact of overpopulation; Pros & Cons
4 - Thanks for your comments. You're right I made several mistakes. But I typed the words in phone.Some of my...
Writing Feedbackshohruhbek - Mar 23, 2013 / shohruhbek - Apr 4, 2013
|IELTS - Attending a live performance; On a live show people are more involved!
2 - i'm also preparing for the IELTS. I really learn something from your essay. Your essay is fluent with proper...
Writing FeedbackCottonWood - Mar 23, 2013 / eileenalien - Mar 23, 2013
|IELTS- People resist changes in their lives/ problems they can cause & solutions
Writing Feedbackeileenalien - Mar 23, 2013 / Pahan - Mar 23, 2013
|Solving environmental issues is not the sole responsibility of one Int Org
2 - .... They are two sentences. .... I notice many spelling mistakes in your essay.... Pay attention...
Writing FeedbackDon kattode - Mar 23, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|Fiction stories are more fun than watching moveis? Agree or not?
2 - "disagree" comes with "with" motion pictures are a source of tranquility and relaxation for people in...
Writing Feedbackharmeet_sunny09 - Mar 23, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 23, 2013
|'numbers gone up' - Japanese tourists travelling abroad; IELTS - Charts
2 - This is fine. But generally, you begin with explaining the overall trends and then expand on to more...
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Mar 23, 2013 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|IELTS; Offenders should be sent to prison or not?
5 - Alright.... you need to separate your paragraphs clearly. As a hint, I'd advise you to have one blank line...
Writing FeedbackDon kattode - Mar 22, 2013 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|[IELTS - Task 1]; French Dialects - report writing
2 - You should have uploaded the graphs. Make sure you do so in your next post so that others can...
Writing Feedbacktrungbeo_8 - Mar 22, 2013 / dumi - Mar 22, 2013
|IELTS task 2 "Face-to-face communication as opposed to ther means"
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 22, 2013 / Meekay - Mar 25, 2013
|IELTS Task 2 'Reading books only containing real established facts'
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 22, 2013 / mhss - Mar 25, 2013
|IELTS: causes and solution of work-related stress
3 - problem needs to be addressed/ problems need to be addressed a chronic disease/ chronic diseases...
Writing Feedbackannyali93 - Mar 22, 2013 / dumi - Mar 23, 2013
|IELTS: conflict with parents a necessary part of growing up?
3 - thank you :)...
Writing Feedbackannyali93 - Mar 22, 2013 / annyali93 - Mar 22, 2013
|IELTS:'parenting class' for parents of undisciplined children.
Writing Feedbackannyali93 - Mar 21, 2013 / Pahan - Mar 23, 2013
|Rihanna stands as the envy of nearly every single person in entertainment industry
2 - Brilliant - I adore your religious logic analyse capability soooooooooooo much. However i am not fully persuaded by your...
Writing Feedbackcrystal77 - Mar 21, 2013 / eileenalien - Mar 23, 2013
|IELTS- What's more enjoyable? - Attending a live performance or Watching them on TV?
4 - mhss Hi mhss! I think that the main mistake you made is you didn't answer the question. The question...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 21, 2013 / CottonWood - Mar 23, 2013
|IELTS task 2 Distant learning as opposed to conventional way of learning
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 21, 2013 / annyali93 - Mar 21, 2013
|" The Best Things in Life are Free" ; Yes, this is very true!
Writing Feedbackazurek14 - Mar 20, 2013 / azurek14 - Mar 22, 2013
|In my opinion, parents are the best teachers! personal approach
4 - Since mother gavegives birth to the childrenher child,sproutedand nurture her baby until the child becomes a young personand...
Writing Feedbackjose_sinaga - Mar 20, 2013 / dumi - Mar 25, 2013
|Who is right or who is wrong? Business law in Singapore (essay 2000 words)
2 - i guess it is ben... because he can justify for every accusation... where you have given no justification for...
Writing Feedbackfanken - Mar 20, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 22, 2013
|Start work Early Morning or Work till late night? IELTS
Writing Feedbackgyal - Mar 20, 2013 / aria8111 - Apr 10, 2013
|IELTS;Who should be responsible for our old people?
Writing FeedbackSnowTran - Mar 19, 2013 / noman715 - Mar 20, 2013
|ielts:why school students feel just much stress and its effects
2 - ... This needs improvement in its presentation; Along with the development of human society, there came a new...
Writing Feedbackpinocchio - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|IELTS: distance learning course vs traditional face-to-face course
Writing Feedbackannyali93 - Mar 19, 2013 / annyali93 - Mar 21, 2013
|Why do I study English? For different reasons
Writing FeedbackEungnaru - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|He tried to be somebody that he is not; GRAMMAR CHECK
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|IELTS; Death Penalty makes our lives more secure & decrease the crimes of violence
2 - Over the past few decades, the capital punishment which was used to punish people in medieval time, has...
Writing FeedbackAzizat - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 19, 2013
|IELTS: Break before collage is good for students!
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Mar 18, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 23, 2013
|[IELTS] Which ways globalization affects the world? Discuss.
2 - As everybody knows, globalization is an international process that brings the countries together through economic, technological and educational...
Writing Feedbackferventer - Mar 18, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1 JAPANESE INVOLVED IN OVERSEAS TRAVEL
3 - Hi mhss, gyal is right. Why dont you upload the graph? Then you'd receive more relevant feed backs. As...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 18, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|Advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity; Laos, Mekong river
Writing Feedbacktvisva - Mar 17, 2013 / tvisva - Mar 18, 2013
|[IELTS] Housing shortage is the responsibility of the only government
2 - Hi, I can see you have excellent writing skills. So, I practically don't see any issue with your grammar,...
Writing Feedbackwater28190 - Mar 17, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS; 'our hectic schedule'; The need of music - Traditional Vs International
3 - You have some serious issues with punctuation, please revise the essay before submitting it. When it comes the content...
Writing Feedbackmariyuz - Mar 17, 2013 / Vns9x - Jan 29, 2015
|IELTS; Computer and Internet usage in the Arab World (Charts)
4 - Firstly, your essay seems to be not long enough (150 words required). I think I will love it more...
Writing Feedbackch143 - Mar 17, 2013 / water28190 - Mar 17, 2013
|Success in life usually requires planning and preparation - (English 12 Assignment)
Writing Feedbackrolo800 - Mar 17, 2013 / abcdefgh - Mar 23, 2013
|(IELTS) topics-A PSYCHEDELIC MOON PIERCED
Writing Feedbacksumit gadhiya - Mar 17, 2013 / azurek14 - Mar 20, 2013
|[IELTS] the best choice is spreading myself in the bed or doing nothing to take a rest; Leisure time
Writing Feedbackwater28190 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|TOEFL; 'A man 's manner is a mirror that reflects his virtues' - people to be polite to others
4 - although I seem to understand what you want to say here, it still seems a little unclear. Today,...
Writing Feedbacklittlekid 986 - Mar 16, 2013 / Pahan - Mar 30, 2013
|Execution of criminals; Capital punishment is necessary to control violence
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Mar 16, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 17, 2013
|IELTS: spread of multinational companies is good or bad? Good
6 - Yes... it's a very good approach to practice with time. Never mind even if you are a little short...
Writing Feedbacksoso12_34 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS; Loosing Traditional Values is no matter?
Writing Feedbacktoantva509 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|IELTS: Music - as long as it doesn't hurt you, can improve your balance, mentally and physically
3 - nika_mt Sorry, but you should follow the IELTS structure and try to solve the main issue :Is the traditional...
Writing Feedbacknika_mt - Mar 16, 2013 / toantva509 - Mar 16, 2013
|TOEFL; Reasons why travelers visit Museums?To know about CULTURE, TRADITION & HISTORY
Writing FeedbackCamilaTobar95 - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|Women's Place in Society; Are they still discriminated?
Writing Feedbackningo - Mar 15, 2013 / Amina amat arra - Mar 24, 2013
|toefl test The place you choose to live has a greater effect on you overall hapiness
Writing Feedbacklittlekid 986 - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|THE LEVEL OF IMPRISONMENT in UK, Australia, NZ, US and Canada (IELTS GRAPH)
3 - Hi, I find your structure slightly deviate from the recommended one. Following is a link which gives you the...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|Her sweater had always been her cloak of protection;Short Story thoughts and opinions
2 - Good short story. I can get a clear idea of the picture you are trying to illustrate. However, some...
Writing Feedbackcpdphilippe - Mar 14, 2013 / coljin - Mar 14, 2013
|Should students concentrate more on the subjects they like?
7 - Very impressive argument you have discussed. I think you can give more examples to each body paragraph to make...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Mar 14, 2013 / Alizia - Mar 15, 2013
|People are not allowed to smoke in many public places? Good rule or bad rule?
Writing Feedbacktsungu - Mar 14, 2013 / tsungu - Mar 14, 2013
|TOEFL; A HOUSE OR A BUSINESS? Both
7 - (HI DUMI THIS IS MY MESSAGE FOR MALHAMAD ABOUT BREACK BEFORE COLLEGE IAM LOOKING FORWARD TO KNOW YOUR OPINION...
Writing Feedbackabcdefgh - Mar 13, 2013 / abcdefgh - Mar 23, 2013
|TOEFL; How the Internet has helped with my studies?
Writing Feedbackisiagho - Mar 13, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 18, 2013
|Should students be allowed to have cell phones in secondary and high schools?
4 - Be specific! What are they? What is the connection between this sentence and your topic sentence?...
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / Alizia - Mar 15, 2013
|Different cultures and ethnic groups live together in one country; GOOD or BAD?
3 - ... I think you better specify what those reasons are. Sounds vague otherwise. This situation creates...
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / dumi - Mar 14, 2013
|Governments or children should be responsible for old people ?
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / Huong nisha - Apr 9, 2013
|GMAT AWA ; Common notion, workers are genreally apathetic about mgmt issues is false
4 - Hello, Several issues here. First of all, way too many grammatical issues here to get a top score...
Writing Feedbackabhradeephaldar - Mar 13, 2013 / admission2012 - Mar 13, 2013
|How can governments and individuals reduce the rate of accidents? IETLS
Writing FeedbackBazarov - Mar 13, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
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