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|People are both alike and different in many ways; COMPARE & CONTRAST - two friends
Writing FeedbackBasketballg - Oct 29, 2013 / dumi - Oct 30, 2013
|Now, the developing countries are not in the same row as that of developed one
7 - equipment is an uncountable noun. so, it is not correct using plural form write as 'medical equipment'...
Writing FeedbackNandu - Oct 29, 2013 / beula - Nov 9, 2013
|Write a rough draft that examines a particular relationship and its significance; explain
Writing Feedbackwilliamp - Oct 29, 2013 / Sarath Kumar - Oct 31, 2013
|'Children tend to imitate parents behavior'; Children - good members of society
Writing Feedbackbehrooz_00133 - Oct 29, 2013 / dumi - Nov 2, 2013
|IELTS; Popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising;To what extent you agree?
NEW - Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of the advertising and not the real needs...
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|Diamonds are unflinchingly hard; Students and Stress
2 - Inside the brick walls, around the lines of lockers, between the rows of desks and within the minds of...
Writing Feedbackestumph - Oct 28, 2013 / Kalena54 - Oct 30, 2013
|TOEFL ; Who is the Best Teacher ?
4 - ... student's ----> one student students' ------> many students He or she should devote his/her time in understanding...
Writing Feedbackclaudiaatalah - Oct 28, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 31, 2013
|IELTS: Which should be the ones to teach children into good citizens? Parents or Schools?
Writing Feedbackstream_xu - Oct 28, 2013 / stream_xu - Nov 3, 2013
|TOEFL: Whether countries have moral obligation to help each other or not ?
Writing Feedbackthwadu - Oct 28, 2013 / thwadu - Nov 13, 2013
|IELTS: Are our zoos cruel to wild animals?
4 - Your IELTS Score depends on how accurately you used grammar and vocabulary. Though you need a variety of sentence...
Writing Feedbacklonghoho - Oct 28, 2013 / JethroJosh - Nov 2, 2013
|Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Watching television is bad
4 - Ok, here the reason you give is that TV makes people unsociable. Then you should tell them how...
Writing Feedbackumanga - Oct 27, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 31, 2013
|IELTS Human's dependence in the modern world - about coherence, academic style
Writing Feedbackgabbie - Oct 27, 2013 / gabbie - Nov 5, 2013
|ielts essay : water should be always free. governments should ban bottled water.
4 - hi, I noticed several grammatical errors which made your sentences misleading. try to review your work by paragraphs to...
Writing Feedbackbeula - Oct 27, 2013 / gmad06 - Oct 27, 2013
|IELTS; Is money the main motivator for employees ? To what extent you agree with that?
3 - Good advice from Pahan :) This is not a typical agree/disagree topic. However, you can still use this format...
Writing FeedbackAllii - Oct 27, 2013 / dumi - Oct 28, 2013
|Education is only accessible to privileged members of our society ? MUIS SCHOLARSHIP
2 - The study of commerce has always been my preferred choice of study and my strong transcripts only reinforces my...
Writing Feedbackyuzeee2 - Oct 27, 2013 / fahadbd - Oct 30, 2013
|TOEFL: Best ways of reducing stress: listening to music, exercise, meditation
Writing Feedbacksomething - Oct 27, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 27, 2013
|[GRE] USAGE OF MOPEDS IN BALMER ISLAND - Response
Writing Feedbackjoyhu - Oct 27, 2013 / dumi - Oct 29, 2013
|IELTS:Who should be responsible for cleaning pollution? Private Individuals or Government?
Writing Feedbackpijiuwdw - Oct 27, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 27, 2013
|[ IELTS Task 2] the standard of living in country benefits cities rather than rural areas
8 - Let's take your first sentence; Why has it sparked a major dispute? Also as JethroJosh points out,...
Writing Feedbackgabbie - Oct 27, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 28, 2013
|Maintaining status quo can cause personal and professional stagnation of a person's development
5 - Thank you!...
Writing FeedbackAnnaAnna - Oct 26, 2013 / AnnaAnna - Oct 31, 2013
|[toefl task] Is the purpose of television to educate, not to entertain?
5 - After 8-hour working or study, people are so exhausted that they may be reluctant to spend time on...
Writing Feedbackaster0224 - Oct 26, 2013 / dumi - Oct 27, 2013
|[TOEFL] : Governments should spend money on space exploration or for basic needs of people
5 - Your second sentence in the introduction is more meaningful and depict the same meaning. I feel that the...
Writing Feedbacksomething - Oct 26, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 27, 2013
|Young People Are Much More Aware of and Concerned About Issues Like the Environment, Pover
4 - Overall, your essay needs lots of improvement with regard to clarity of your sentences. They don't convey the idea...
Writing Feedbackyas 2013 - Oct 26, 2013 / dumi - Oct 28, 2013
|Recalling an Experience; NARRATIVE ESSAY
3 - First, I have a request; You need to provide a more meaningful topic for your thread which is a...
Writing FeedbackPICHIRO - Oct 25, 2013 / dumi - Oct 26, 2013
|"Why people attend college?" To fulfill their dreams!
Writing Feedbacksky2586 - Oct 25, 2013 / sky2586 - Oct 28, 2013
|Me and Myself; Need help with Grammar!
Writing Feedbackfarhanwsd - Oct 25, 2013 / hongphuc - Nov 3, 2013
|Love and friendship - the best things in life are free.
3 - "each people" is wrong. People means a collection of men/women and therefore it is a plural word. So...
Writing Feedbackcarmspinto - Oct 25, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 27, 2013
|Destiny and Character; "Your moments of decisions affect your Destiny"
Writing FeedbackSaqib - Oct 25, 2013 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|Community service can give a sense of fullment to students
4 - By working in unpiad community services, students will be able to acknowledge the way in which people communicating...
Writing Feedbacklynn731 - Oct 25, 2013 / hongphuc - Nov 3, 2013
|Why study?; 'improve understanding, practical knowledge and career planning'
Writing Feedbackphuongdunglotus - Oct 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 27, 2013
|IELTS:Motorized flight is the greatest invention in the modern world; Agree or Disagree?
3 - First of all, the frequent air travels have detrimental effects on the environment due to the emission of the...
Writing Feedbacklslt - Oct 24, 2013 / dumi - Oct 26, 2013
|'broaden horizons'; it is better to begin learning foreign language early
5 - I think this is the best way to practice because these tasks you need to finish within the allocated...
Writing Feedbackravenet - Oct 24, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 24, 2013
|'depends on the age'; should teachers assign homework for students every day?
6 - establish a rule proposing that teachers should not assign homework for their pupils students need...
Writing Feedbackaster0224 - Oct 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 24, 2013
|IELTS; Some prefer changes in life while others refuse to change
2 - Some people think change in their lives is unnecessary, because they would like to keepmaintain a regular lifestyleslifestyle. ...
Writing FeedbackJerry0123 - Oct 24, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 24, 2013
|The gap between the rich and the poor; Introduction to essay on socio-economic inequality
Writing FeedbackJane321 - Oct 24, 2013 / dumi - Oct 24, 2013
|The best teacher is one who is very knowledgeable about the subject matter
4 - it should be Knowledgable you have met the problem of repeating words "knowledgeable teachers" and "can't...
Writing Feedbacksofianc - Oct 23, 2013 / Shinigami97 - Nov 3, 2013
|Have you ever been in a crowded and dirty place? ;descriptive essay
4 - That is my introduction so i tried not to be specific in that paragraph. My teacher told me to...
Writing Feedbackboy3005 - Oct 23, 2013 / boy3005 - Oct 23, 2013
|TOEFL;universities require students to studymany subjects or specialize in one subject
Writing Feedbackpppanta - Oct 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 23, 2013
|Some people think that private schools should be banned.
Writing Feedbackvmtct - Oct 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 23, 2013
|IELTS -Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think
12 - Dear Dumi, Thank you for your all explanation and I just now read in Oxford dictionary that make...
Writing Feedbackravenet - Oct 23, 2013 / ravenet - Oct 24, 2013
|Perhaps food satisfies both the taste buds and the heart
Writing Feedbackthisistram - Oct 23, 2013 / dumi - Oct 23, 2013
|English Informative essay about what people don't know of petroleum engineering.
2 - Many people perceive petroleum engineering is merely something to do with petroleum being converted into gasoline. ...
Writing Feedbackber - Oct 22, 2013 / dumi - Oct 23, 2013
|Process Analysis Essay-How to change a tire (Proofread, suggestions, improvement)
Writing Feedbackjorgearmando18 - Oct 22, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 22, 2013
|IELTS: More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing people...
Writing FeedbackGulala - Oct 22, 2013 / MisterWandering - Oct 22, 2013
|Governments &Companies should share their scientific discoveries
2 - It's always better you mention the purpose of your writing in the title. For example, IELTS, TOEFL etc. Then...
Writing FeedbackRichardGe - Oct 22, 2013 / dumi - Oct 22, 2013
|TOEFL; The internet provides a lot of valuable information. However,others disagree
Writing Feedbackpppanta - Oct 22, 2013 / dumi - Oct 27, 2013
|IELTS:In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries th
5 - I thinks your introduction to the essay is somehow too long. your examples should be mentioned in the body,...
Writing Feedbacksoheylvahabzade - Oct 21, 2013 / vmtct - Oct 24, 2013
|COMPARE/CONTRAST essay about my mother&sister
4 - Overall though is it a good essay.... I'm going to edit it and make changes and post it again...
Writing FeedbackCollege girl 13 - Oct 21, 2013 / College girl 13 - Oct 22, 2013
|"I believe in our universe, everything we see and believe, is nothing more than a dream"
2 - I believe our universe , everything in the universe, we see and believe , is nothing more thanbut a...
Writing FeedbackDelainaMichelle - Oct 21, 2013 / fahadbd - Oct 26, 2013
|major cities are essential sources of information about the culture of a country
5 - First sentence : Major cities are heart of a country. It would be better : Major cities are the...
Writing Feedbacknilka61 - Oct 21, 2013 / SalehMamdouh198 - Nov 20, 2013
|What changes your perception in order to be a better communicator
4 - In high school, I also got involved with Physics Olympiad Team. ... what do you mean by science-based...
Writing Feedbackkevinj888 - Oct 21, 2013 / dumi - Oct 22, 2013
|IELTS: Ads result in high sales of well-received consumer goods. Agree or disagree?
4 - Yes.... you should not narrow down the scope of your topic. ...which outweigh advertisements. ... here...
Writing Feedbackstream_xu - Oct 21, 2013 / dumi - Oct 22, 2013
|IELTS : IN MANY COUNTRIES TODAY INSUFFICIENT RESPECT GIVEN TO OLD PEOPLE >...
Writing FeedbackShaan123 - Oct 21, 2013 / ravenet - Oct 24, 2013
|what are benefits of shopping online.
Writing Feedbackbixanh - Oct 21, 2013 / bixanh - Oct 21, 2013
|GRE; Welfare of the nation and the desire of corporations to maximize profits
3 - Personally I think you need a stronger thesis statement in the introductory paragraph. It is ambiguous which side you...
Writing Feedbacksnowcones - Oct 21, 2013 / dunguyen - Sep 12, 2014
|"Cartesian Duality";Term Paper for Core Humanities
2 - Mary Shelley believes humans are naturally innocent at birth and also are born as a blank slate or as...
Writing FeedbackFranky 1994 - Oct 20, 2013 / fahadbd - Oct 26, 2013
|UNIFORM TO WEAR OR NOT TO WEAR?
6 - What I found worked best under a graduation gown. Is a dress you wont necessarily be able to see....
Writing Feedback98_IIG - Oct 20, 2013 / siamesefox - Feb 27, 2014
|Truth is most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent
2 - - The debate about whether telling the truth is an important factor in any kind of relationship has...
Writing Feedbackm64 - Oct 20, 2013 / vangiespen - Sep 12, 2014
|Timing, distances, and social relations, forcing separation of extended family
5 - I think you can start your introduction by: " Families are divided in two kinds: extended family and nuclear...
Writing Feedbacklegend777 - Oct 20, 2013 / phuongnam95 - Nov 10, 2013
|TOEFL: 'analogous concern and money' - financial support for sports and social activities
6 - TOEFL Independent writing task expects you to provide specific examples to back the reasons that you present to...
Writing Feedbacknasiim - Oct 20, 2013 / Pahan - Oct 22, 2013
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