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|ielts:why school students feel just much stress and its effects
2 - ... This needs improvement in its presentation; Along with the development of human society, there came a new...
Writing Feedbackpinocchio - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|IELTS: distance learning course vs traditional face-to-face course
Writing Feedbackannyali93 - Mar 19, 2013 / annyali93 - Mar 21, 2013
|Why do I study English? For different reasons
Writing FeedbackEungnaru - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|He tried to be somebody that he is not; GRAMMAR CHECK
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|IELTS; Death Penalty makes our lives more secure & decrease the crimes of violence
2 - Over the past few decades, the capital punishment which was used to punish people in medieval time, has...
Writing FeedbackAzizat - Mar 19, 2013 / dumi - Mar 19, 2013
|IELTS: Break before collage is good for students!
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Mar 18, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 23, 2013
|[IELTS] Which ways globalization affects the world? Discuss.
2 - As everybody knows, globalization is an international process that brings the countries together through economic, technological and educational...
Writing Feedbackferventer - Mar 18, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS TASK 1 JAPANESE INVOLVED IN OVERSEAS TRAVEL
3 - Hi mhss, gyal is right. Why dont you upload the graph? Then you'd receive more relevant feed backs. As...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 18, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|Advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity; Laos, Mekong river
Writing Feedbacktvisva - Mar 17, 2013 / tvisva - Mar 18, 2013
|[IELTS] Housing shortage is the responsibility of the only government
2 - Hi, I can see you have excellent writing skills. So, I practically don't see any issue with your grammar,...
Writing Feedbackwater28190 - Mar 17, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS; 'our hectic schedule'; The need of music - Traditional Vs International
3 - You have some serious issues with punctuation, please revise the essay before submitting it. When it comes the content...
Writing Feedbackmariyuz - Mar 17, 2013 / Vns9x - Jan 29, 2015
|IELTS; Computer and Internet usage in the Arab World (Charts)
4 - Firstly, your essay seems to be not long enough (150 words required). I think I will love it more...
Writing Feedbackch143 - Mar 17, 2013 / water28190 - Mar 17, 2013
|Success in life usually requires planning and preparation - (English 12 Assignment)
Writing Feedbackrolo800 - Mar 17, 2013 / abcdefgh - Mar 23, 2013
|(IELTS) topics-A PSYCHEDELIC MOON PIERCED
Writing Feedbacksumit gadhiya - Mar 17, 2013 / azurek14 - Mar 20, 2013
|[IELTS] the best choice is spreading myself in the bed or doing nothing to take a rest; Leisure time
Writing Feedbackwater28190 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|TOEFL; 'A man 's manner is a mirror that reflects his virtues' - people to be polite to others
4 - although I seem to understand what you want to say here, it still seems a little unclear. Today,...
Writing Feedbacklittlekid 986 - Mar 16, 2013 / Pahan - Mar 30, 2013
|Execution of criminals; Capital punishment is necessary to control violence
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Mar 16, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 17, 2013
|IELTS: spread of multinational companies is good or bad? Good
6 - Yes... it's a very good approach to practice with time. Never mind even if you are a little short...
Writing Feedbacksoso12_34 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 18, 2013
|IELTS; Loosing Traditional Values is no matter?
Writing Feedbacktoantva509 - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|IELTS: Music - as long as it doesn't hurt you, can improve your balance, mentally and physically
3 - nika_mt Sorry, but you should follow the IELTS structure and try to solve the main issue :Is the traditional...
Writing Feedbacknika_mt - Mar 16, 2013 / toantva509 - Mar 16, 2013
|TOEFL; Reasons why travelers visit Museums?To know about CULTURE, TRADITION & HISTORY
Writing FeedbackCamilaTobar95 - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|Women's Place in Society; Are they still discriminated?
Writing Feedbackningo - Mar 15, 2013 / Amina amat arra - Mar 24, 2013
|toefl test The place you choose to live has a greater effect on you overall hapiness
Writing Feedbacklittlekid 986 - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
|THE LEVEL OF IMPRISONMENT in UK, Australia, NZ, US and Canada (IELTS GRAPH)
3 - Hi, I find your structure slightly deviate from the recommended one. Following is a link which gives you the...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Mar 15, 2013 / dumi - Mar 24, 2013
|Her sweater had always been her cloak of protection;Short Story thoughts and opinions
2 - Good short story. I can get a clear idea of the picture you are trying to illustrate. However, some...
Writing Feedbackcpdphilippe - Mar 14, 2013 / coljin - Mar 14, 2013
|Should students concentrate more on the subjects they like?
7 - Very impressive argument you have discussed. I think you can give more examples to each body paragraph to make...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Mar 14, 2013 / Alizia - Mar 15, 2013
|People are not allowed to smoke in many public places? Good rule or bad rule?
Writing Feedbacktsungu - Mar 14, 2013 / tsungu - Mar 14, 2013
|TOEFL; A HOUSE OR A BUSINESS? Both
7 - (HI DUMI THIS IS MY MESSAGE FOR MALHAMAD ABOUT BREACK BEFORE COLLEGE IAM LOOKING FORWARD TO KNOW YOUR OPINION...
Writing Feedbackabcdefgh - Mar 13, 2013 / abcdefgh - Mar 23, 2013
|TOEFL; How the Internet has helped with my studies?
Writing Feedbackisiagho - Mar 13, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 18, 2013
|Should students be allowed to have cell phones in secondary and high schools?
4 - Be specific! What are they? What is the connection between this sentence and your topic sentence?...
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / Alizia - Mar 15, 2013
|Different cultures and ethnic groups live together in one country; GOOD or BAD?
3 - ... I think you better specify what those reasons are. Sounds vague otherwise. This situation creates...
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / dumi - Mar 14, 2013
|Governments or children should be responsible for old people ?
Writing FeedbackHuong nisha - Mar 13, 2013 / Huong nisha - Apr 9, 2013
|GMAT AWA ; Common notion, workers are genreally apathetic about mgmt issues is false
4 - Hello, Several issues here. First of all, way too many grammatical issues here to get a top score...
Writing Feedbackabhradeephaldar - Mar 13, 2013 / admission2012 - Mar 13, 2013
|How can governments and individuals reduce the rate of accidents? IETLS
Writing FeedbackBazarov - Mar 13, 2013 / dumi - Mar 20, 2013
|"What are your feelings about the High School Proficiency Exam (HSPE) Why?" Essay
Writing FeedbackStressedWriter - Mar 13, 2013 / StressedWriter - Mar 16, 2013
|Be grateful to the people!; My life LESSON
Writing Feedbackjamesjustice - Mar 12, 2013 / dumi - Mar 12, 2013
|IELTS; ENGLISH has become a universal language for communication
Writing Feedbacksannywu - Mar 12, 2013 / sannywu - Mar 13, 2013
|Raising age limit for driving license would help reduce traffic accidents
3 - thank you very much. i follow this stucture, but i can not use my ideas effectively and i always...
Writing FeedbackBazarov - Mar 12, 2013 / Bazarov - Mar 13, 2013
|BYOD (Bring Your Own Device) and Its Benefits
2 - Um, you're stating that employees bring their devices to work for corporate espionage... First of all your sentance...
Writing FeedbackJonesyBrown - Mar 12, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|Extra credit & retests destroy students academic accountability? argumentative essay.
2 - The thing about arguments is, that most often they are only personal opinions. You're doing more than participating in...
Writing Feedbackash123 - Mar 11, 2013 / formenthos - Mar 12, 2013
|IELTS - Technology and traditions are incompatible
4 - This whole para sounds out of topic. You need to align your writing with the topic which talks...
Writing FeedbackAlexChow - Mar 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 2, 2013
|Toefl essay: Work at home Vs work in office
2 - This sentence is too long... When you avoid lengthy statements, you can arrange your flow more effectively; Some...
Writing FeedbackQingye - Mar 11, 2013 / dumi - Mar 12, 2013
|IELTS: Task 1 - two charts on aspects of adult education
Writing Feedbackqqshka - Mar 11, 2013 / dumi - Mar 12, 2013
|We knew that we wanted to be together
3 - Ever since I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a lawyer.[Maybe whoever's writing this can explain why?]Then I...
Writing Feedbackstephaniearella - Mar 11, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 11, 2013
|What are some ways to study for a test? There are several ways!
Writing FeedbackLeeana - Mar 11, 2013 / prettyboy_bn123 - Mar 12, 2013
|toefl essay; What do you want most in a friend? humor, intelligence, trust, modest
Writing Feedbackabcdefgh - Mar 11, 2013 / dumi - Mar 14, 2013
|TOEFL: eating more vegetables, less junk food and sweet, improve your health
Writing FeedbackOcean Weng - Mar 11, 2013 / Qingye - Mar 11, 2013
|WOMEN ARE THE STRONGER SEX; Persuasive Writing
Writing Feedbackbabysnoops00 - Mar 10, 2013 / babysnoops00 - Mar 12, 2013
|Uniform? What's the need in it? Does it help our education? No; Persuasive Essay
2 - For example, netted tights, a pretty pink cardigan and even some Doc Martens, well explain our passion...
Writing Feedbackmelissamagee - Mar 10, 2013 / dumi - Mar 11, 2013
|Classes and libraries always deserves much more financial support - two key elements for the quality
3 - Your introduction follows the right structure, but you need to pay attention to grammar and vocabulary. Try to...
Writing FeedbackAseaDai - Mar 10, 2013 / dumi - Mar 10, 2013
|Advertisement isn't the main reason which makes comsumers buy products unneccessarily
Writing Feedbackjaymeehuynh - Mar 10, 2013 / AlexChow - Mar 11, 2013
|GRE; Reliance on technology destroys the problem solving skills of people?
2 - hour is not toooo long for this... and you will certainly improve over time you essay was pretty...
Writing FeedbackWolff88 - Mar 9, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 10, 2013
|IELTS ; I believe that capital punishment is important to arrest the level of crimes
Writing Feedbacknazguul17 - Mar 9, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 10, 2013
|IELTS, Shopping as hobby positive or negative development. Explain with reasons
Writing Feedbackbanjo - Mar 9, 2013 / dumi - Mar 9, 2013
|Cheap Air travel gives ordinary people a chance, but adds to environmental problems
Writing Feedbackwendylo78 - Mar 8, 2013 / dumi - Mar 9, 2013
|"keep your hands to yourself"; SAT ( keep things private?)
2 - .... this comparison is somewhat confusing... first part talks of young children and the second part does not...
Writing Feedbackemily54 - Mar 8, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|A cultural experience that has given me the greatest satisfaction
Writing FeedbackRaghvi - Mar 8, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|TOEFL; We must admit young people in the past were more innocent
Writing Feedbacklittlekid 986 - Mar 7, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|IELTS; Home schooling Vs Learning at schools - Which is better?
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - Mar 7, 2013 / malhamed - Mar 9, 2013
|IELTS task2 - job they love or job with high salary
5 - Yes... you need to have minimum 250 words for this task and this essay is slightly below that. However,...
Writing Feedbackyaya411156 - Mar 7, 2013 / dumi - Mar 11, 2013
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