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|TOEFL; I would purchase a house instead of a business if I have enough money!
2 - In this task, they expect you to introduce your topic in the introduction. So, don't answer to the...
Writing Feedbackfarbodsalahi - Mar 1, 2013 / dumi - Mar 9, 2013
|(IELTS graph)The difference in the percentage of expense for seven items:30yrs period
2 - it will be remarkable rise.. not raise... and such petty mistakes only.. otherwise a good one......
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Mar 1, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 1, 2013
|IELTS; SPACE VS MALNUTRITION- Which is more important?
5 - Thanks Dumi....
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 1, 2013 / mhss - Mar 3, 2013
|Old men live with young people or in the clubs? discuss.
3 - Thank for your feedback. My writing is for IELTS, but I actually follow your structure you suggested....
Writing Feedbacktoantva509 - Mar 1, 2013 / toantva509 - Mar 3, 2013
|To find a better job the T2 qualified people are moving to more wealthy countries - IELTS
5 - This is a well written essay. Never crossed the world limit. Strong points and connecting words and punctuation. Well...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Mar 1, 2013 / banjo - Mar 9, 2013
|Money should be spent on space centers or poor and needy people?Views
2 - What issue has become controversial? this sentence is incomplete. You need to first introduce the topic to the...
Writing Feedbackmehak sharma - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 1, 2013
|IELTS- Should children engage in some kind of paid work? Yes, it has lots of pluses
Writing Feedbackmhss - Feb 28, 2013 / mhss - Mar 1, 2013
|IELTS qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies
3 - Sure :) but, you should post your IELTS essays under "Writing Feedback" forum (select this forum) Also you...
Writing Feedbackmhss - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 1, 2013
|I suppose that parents are really best teachers!
4 - First, parents are the first teachers in our lives. ... now give examples; They are the people who...
Writing Feedbacktranthucbkv - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|Overpopulation of urban areas has lead to numerous problems.
2 - ... I suggest; The main reason is that every individual adds trash to the environment through his...
Writing FeedbackLilu Nguyen - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 8, 2013
|IELTS Many people think that international travel will decrease in the future.
6 - I don't think everyone does travel, especially the people in developing countries. You need to be careful in...
Writing Feedbacknavarannan - Feb 28, 2013 / dumi - Mar 1, 2013
|Flowers are something I feel; One thing to represent human race
Writing Feedbackjennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013 / Holt - Mar 25, 2017
|transport vehicles/information processing/more tools, materials - that's why life today is easier
4 - Based on improvement in transport vehicle, I think today life is so comfortable than before. One reason why...
Writing Feedbacksilent1818 - Feb 28, 2013 / jennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013
|TRAVELLING ABROAD & REASON FOR TRAVEL (IELTS TASK1)
4 - Hai Orxan.. in 1998 this figure totalled 3.639====| in 1998 this figure reached the peak 3.957.. good...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Feb 28, 2013 / christyj - Mar 1, 2013
|(ielts graph)The trends in consumption of fast foods in U.K
2 - Hi, Tence need to be "past" You can reduce the word count by, The given graphs illustrate the...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 28, 2013 / mhss - Feb 28, 2013
|Retirement should be in early age or late 70s?
Writing Feedbackmehak sharma - Feb 28, 2013 / mehak sharma - Feb 28, 2013
|(ielts graph) The computer and internet use per 1000 inhabitants in the Arab word.
3 - Hi, It is better to mention the type of the graph ..bar,pie,line... It is expected to be sound nice...
Writing Feedbackchristyj - Feb 28, 2013 / mhss - Feb 28, 2013
|Corporal punishment good or bad
6 - There are a lot of grammatical errors and many of the sentences do not start correctly. I think you...
Writing Feedbackmehak sharma - Feb 27, 2013 / jennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013
|IELTS GT Writing Task 2: Problems the country face in next ten years
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Feb 27, 2013 / christyj - Feb 27, 2013
|TOEFL ; What is better - More vocation time or More Salary?
Writing FeedbackGodiva - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Feb 27, 2013
|TOEFL ESSAY: should professors doing more research or educating students more?
Writing Feedbacksongjianzhi - Feb 27, 2013 / songjianzhi - Feb 28, 2013
|IELTS money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout world are starving
Writing Feedbackmhss - Feb 27, 2013 / mhss - Feb 28, 2013
|(ielts graph) leisure time in a typical week spend by male and female
4 - Hai Dumi, Wu and Desilva.. thanks for your great corrections.. it was really valuable about the grammar corrections....)....
Writing Feedbackchristyj - Feb 27, 2013 / christyj - Mar 3, 2013
|IELTS essay 2 Achieving good health and fitness through physically demanding sports
Writing Feedbackmhss - Feb 27, 2013 / dumi - Mar 4, 2013
|TOEFL; Knowledge without Experience is not fruitful!
4 - "get" is not something you use with knowledge. Try However, acquiring knowledge without any experience does not lead...
Writing Feedbackfarbodsalahi - Feb 26, 2013 / Pahan - Mar 4, 2013
|Keep Calm and Skate On; Sammamish Skate Park & amazing moments
Writing Feedbackgrahambo7 - Feb 26, 2013 / songjianzhi - Feb 27, 2013
|TOEFL; Does the ease of cooking improve life?
Writing Feedbackfarbodsalahi - Feb 26, 2013 / dumi - Feb 26, 2013
|(IELTS graph)Average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 26, 2013 / dumi - Feb 26, 2013
|"a memory from my armed past" ; Enormous peaks of Himalayas
5 - please i need to know my mistakes... it seems its a pretty long one... i want corrections for i...
Writing Feedbacktemptprovidence - Feb 26, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 3, 2013
|IELTS Task2 Types of music albums purchased by people in Britain
Writing FeedbackIZKK - Feb 26, 2013 / IZKK - Mar 2, 2013
|Vaule of Money & Hardwork: work experience
Writing Feedbackstinna11 - Feb 26, 2013 / dumi - Mar 7, 2013
|TOEFL;Reviewing the PAST is important to solve the problem of the present future
Writing FeedbackGodiva - Feb 26, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 26, 2013
|My Moms' Most Significant Memory; Narrative on a significant memory
Writing Feedbackacharrell - Feb 25, 2013 / acharrell - Feb 25, 2013
|IELTS -TASK1- Changes in means of transport in England during fifteen years
4 - Good editing by gudxo :) This is very good.... You follow the right structure.... The most obvious...
Writing Feedbackphanebandeira - Feb 25, 2013 / dumi - Feb 28, 2013
|MONEY for is meant for living happily - COMFORTABLE living is more important!
Writing Feedbacksharuc - Feb 25, 2013 / dumi - Feb 28, 2013
|With no doubt, Experience is the best teacher
4 - There is nothing wrong with this sentence in terms of grammar or vocabulary. However, it is good that...
Writing Feedbackfarbodsalahi - Feb 25, 2013 / dumi - Feb 28, 2013
|Women should not marry in their teen years
Writing Feedbackcarito15 - Feb 25, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 26, 2013
|Students having part-time jobs during their study in college has many negatives!
4 - I'm really thankful for your replies. In fact, my teacher asked me to write an introduction and paragraph for...
Writing Feedbackningo - Feb 25, 2013 / ningo - Mar 4, 2013
|What is more important? Making large amounts of money or living a comfortable life?
5 - hai Lui.. :...importance of money.. :...difficult to built... Not everybody teaveling for telaxation....! But must enough time to...
Writing Feedbacklcpan913 - Feb 25, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 25, 2013
|Achilles in the Trojan War; Three character traits of Achilles of MOVIE TROY
Writing Feedbackalyssa0123 - Feb 24, 2013 / AseaDai - Mar 10, 2013
|IELTS - Influence of parents is fading; 'unable to render enough time'
Writing Feedbacksharuc - Feb 24, 2013 / dumi - Feb 25, 2013
|IELTS Task1 Letter "You have just arrived in the city "
2 - ... You need to apply the appropriate tone for this letter... The prompt says that a friend (newly...
Writing Feedbackbeyondmtk - Feb 24, 2013 / dumi - Feb 24, 2013
|(IELTS graph)the hours of leisure time/yr spend by people in Someland.
3 - .... here the most important information is the difference (100hrslyr), but it does not come clearly with...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 24, 2013 / dumi - Mar 2, 2013
|TOEFL:Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
Writing FeedbackGrace7 - Feb 24, 2013 / navarannan - Mar 1, 2013
|(IELTS graph)Japanese tourists &Australia's share of Japanese tourist market
NEW - The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of...
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|(IELTS graph) Death rates and Medical funds for Someland in 1990
Writing Feedbackchristyj - Feb 24, 2013 / christyj - Mar 3, 2013
|IELTS GT Writing Task 2: To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Writing Feedbackpeterc - Feb 23, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 24, 2013
|A school is where people learn and study; ESSAY ON "MY SCHOOL"
3 - "learn"and "study" both mean more or less the same. Also school does much more than helping providing education....
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - Feb 23, 2013 / dumi - Feb 25, 2013
|Brain Drain is a dangerous phenomenon that prevails in our society
4 - Your paragraphs are unbelievably short. You need to work on the start and body of the essay more....
Writing Feedbackmokyfreind - Feb 23, 2013 / Pahan - Feb 24, 2013
|(IELTS graph) The education levels of women in Someland.
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 23, 2013 / joythblessy - Feb 23, 2013
|IELTS - Should students be encourge to evaluate or even criticize their teachers?
4 - Some believe that students should be obedient and respectful towards their teachers while others feel that it not...
Writing FeedbackAlexChow - Feb 22, 2013 / dumi - Feb 23, 2013
|(IELTS graph)The average hours of unpaid work per week
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Feb 22, 2013 / joythblessy - Mar 3, 2013
|Influence of neighborhood on the growth of children
Writing Feedbacknigerimage - Feb 22, 2013 / nigerimage - Feb 26, 2013
|IELTSďźTechnology has influenced the way people interact with each other!
Writing Feedbackkimilonely - Feb 22, 2013 / lcpan913 - Feb 23, 2013
|Teachers need to motivate their students to ask everything they don't understand
Writing Feedbacksamalik - Feb 22, 2013 / lcpan913 - Feb 25, 2013
|human should esteem and value their pets like family members
5 - Great job! There were a few errors, but overall the argument was clear and concise...Keep up the good work!!!!...
Writing Feedbacklcpan913 - Feb 22, 2013 / android21 - Feb 22, 2013
|"Breathe, relax, enjoy life, explore, and worry not" ; What matters and why?
11 - @ android21 - If you want, you may close your threads because you have enough likes for that....
Writing Feedbackandroid21 - Feb 21, 2013 / dumi - Feb 25, 2013
|IELTS- Report on Graphical Presentation ; Quantities of goods transported in the UK
2 - In case I haven't given this reference for you to get help with this task writing. This is pretty...
Writing Feedbackwilliam731 - Feb 21, 2013 / dumi - Feb 21, 2013
|Argumentative essay on cell phones and driving.
Writing Feedbackevadfa - Feb 21, 2013 / dumi - Feb 21, 2013
|IELTS: the opposite trend; THE UNEMPLOYMENT RATES IN THE US AND JAPAN
NEW - Need your advice about my report!!!!! Task 1: Line Graph - Unemployment in US and Japan THE GRAPH...
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